Title: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 07, 2008, 10:19:27 pm My friend Pollygirl and I have started co-writing another :speedy: & :polly: fanfic, titled 'Speedy&Polly-A Match Made in Heaven'. This story is for all those who support the relationship between Speedy and Polly, and who agree that they deserve to be together. It's NOT for Guido lovers, or those who despise Speedy. Guido is going to finally get what he deserves for all his mean pranks that he's played on Speedy, and Speedy will get the tough, beautiful she-cat of his dreams as his wife. That said, on with Chapter 1:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Summary: After the destruction of the comet, Princess Vi throws a massive victory ball to thank the Samurai Pizza Cats and Good Bird for saving the city. In the meantime, Speedy is worried that he’s ruined his chance to be with Polly, the cat he loves with all his heart. Can some advice from Uncle Irving give him the confidence he needs? Will Speedy and Polly finally be together? Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. This story is NOT for those who hate Speedy, or who think that Speedy doesn’t belong with Polly. Also, Guido will be getting SERIOUS payback for all the mean pranks he played on Speedy in the show. Chapter One: Speedy’s Confession The Royal Palace was filled with tinkling lights and brightly colored decorations for the Victory Ball that Princess Vi had ordered in celebration of the Comet’s destruction. Almost everyone in Little Tokyo was there, enjoying the finest food supplied by the Royal Caterers, dancing to the best music by the Royal Musicians in their special box at the front of the Golden Dance Room, and just being thankful that they COULD be able to do this! All around the Palace was happiness, thankfulness, and pure joy…all except for one small place, near the corner of the grand room. Almost hidden in a small overstuffed chair was one lone Cat- ironically the one who should have been enjoying the festivities the most seeing as how it was all basically for him! If it weren’t for him and a reformed henchman who had now become his friend, Little Tokyo would no doubt have been blasted into rubble! He of all the citizens should have been the one right in the middle of the enjoyment, basking in the victory…but he just couldn’t be. In fact, he could barely concentrate on anything…..anything except one single thought that had hounded him ever since the party started. “Why did I make that stupid joke?” he thought. “Why couldn’t I just tell her how I feel?” He finally looked up at the happiness all around him…but he was unable to take his eyes off the amazingly lovely Cat that was in a corner talking to her friend. There she stood, in what was without a doubt an amazingly gorgeous new dress. The top was bright red . It was knee length and the skirt was a matching white. Her short red hair was held in place with a matching white ribbon. He sighed, she was so beautiful….and he had no doubt ruined any chance he thought he might have had with her by blurting out that dumb ‘Make me a pizza’ joke! God, why had he done that! Because he had grown nervous at the sight of the huge crowd watching them, that’s why! What he wanted to tell her was personal and private…but how private could they possibly be when practically all of Little Tokyo was staring at both of them?! He couldn’t say such a special thing in front of so many like it was just a show, so he tried to think of something, anything else to say…and the only thing that came out was that pizza joke…and he saw how irritated it had made her! “God, why was I so stupid?!” he thought. “What if she hates me now…what if she thinks I’m too goofy to be bothered with…what if she’s still mad at me?” He looked down. “I was so stupid…so stupid..” Even Guido got annoyed with him for his joke until he had explained to him his reason. He jumped when he felt a hand on his shoulder…until he found it belonged to his Uncle Irving. “Well, nephew, here you are! What are you doing hidden over here, we’ve all been looking for ya! It’s YOUR party, ya know! Thought you’d be right in the middle of the place along with your friend Good Bird basking in your victory!” he laughed at his joke until he saw Speedy’s face. “Hey…anything wrong?” Speedy sighed. “Oh…nothing, Uncle Irving..” Irving tightened his grip on his nephew’s shoulder. “Come on, Speedy, I know you too well, and I know that with you..’oh, nothing’, always means, ‘oh, something.’ Come on, buddy, you can tell me, I’m your Uncle! You know you can tell me anything at all. Come on, Buddy. What’s wrong?” Speedy sighed. “You ever say something that just came out of your mouth and it turned out to be so dumb that you wish that you’d never opened your mouth at all?” “Oh, of course I did. That I think happens to everyone!” Irving looked at him. “What happened, nephew?” Speedy looked down. Irving gently nudged him. Speedy sighed. “I blew it, Uncle Irving. I had a chance…I had a chance to tell…I..” “Put a sword in his hand there’s no stopping him, but he can’t tell his old uncle what’s bothering him! I…I..“ Irving immediately got what Speedy was saying. “I..I.. Speedy, are you in love?” Speedy nodded. “Oh…THAT’S what’s bothering ya!” He smiled smugly. “So…who’s the lucky girl?” Speedy turned his head toward Polly. “Uncle Irving…I don’t know why it took me so long to see this, I mean we’ve been together since we were kittens..” “How well I remember,” he smiled. “You were both so cute!” “Yeah, and I always thought of her as just my best friend…but now…Uncle...I can’t stop thinking about her! I feel so funny also when I do. I mean, all this time I thought I loved Lucille…but she never made me feel like this whenever I thought of her…and I never stuttered or forgot my words whenever I spoke! Nowadays whenever I see Polly…she’s so beautiful and so amazing I can hardly breathe! It was Polly the whole time…I’ve been in love with Polly all along! And only now I know!!” Irving nodded. “Love is funny that way. Comes at ya when ya least expect it.” “Yeah…and I blew it! I had the chance to tell her..and I couldn’t..not with so many people looking at us! And I ended up cracking a dumb joke!” “So, go tell her now!” “Huh?” “She’s right over there, Speedy! There’s your opportunity! Go get it! Take her somewhere private, and tell her how you feel! Let it all out!” “I can’t do that..” “Why not? She just might feel the same way about you and she might be scared!” “After I made that lousy joke that was so atrocious even Guido beat me up over it?! What if she hates me now or she thinks I’m a goof?” “Oh no, you said it yourself she’s known you since you were Kittens! She’s used to your humor..I think you get it from your mother!” Irving smiled. “She’s used to your jokes. So you can be goofy, if she loves you it won’t matter!” “But what if she doesn’t, I’m gonna look like a fool!” “At least you’ll know, than you can stop torturing yourself wondering ‘what if’. At least you’ll have an answer. Speedy, you remember what your Dad always said, right? ‘If ya want something, you can’t waste time wondering ‘what if I can’t get it,’ you just gotta make the effort to try’. well, nephew, there’s your effort…go try!” He smiled. “ya know, when I was your age, I was afraid to ask your Aunt Lydia out on a date myself, but finally I asked her and…see what happened?!” Speedy gazed at Polly. “Go on. I’ll take care of Guido if I see him. Go on, nephew. Take the opportunity..and good luck!” Speedy took a deep breath, straightened out his suit, ran his fingers through his hair, and made his way to Polly. Twice he almost backed away, but he glanced at his Uncle, who silently urged him on. Finally, he made it to Polly and tapped her on the shoulder. “Hi, Polly,” he said. Polly turned around. “Speedy!” she said. “where have you been all night? I’ve hardly seen you!” Speedy paused. She didn’t SOUND mad. She didn’t SOUND like she hated him. He gazed upon her, into her lovely blue eyes..God she was even lovelier than she had looked to him when he came back from destroying the comet. For a moment he was at a loss for words. “No, I’m NOT going to screw this up again!” he thought. “Uh…that’s a really pretty dress you’re wearing, Polly. Is that new?” “Yeah,” Polly said. “I went shopping with Lucille this afternoon.” “It’s really pretty..” Speedy said. The musicians just then launched into a slow, romantic song, and Irving sidled up to his nephew. “Ya know, nephew, didn’t you tell me once you loved this song?” “Uh..heh, yeah..” “Oh, Polly loves it, too!” Lucille said. “Yeah,” Irving said, winking at Lucille. “Ya know, you 2 should dance together!” he gently nudged Speedy toward Polly. “Go on.” Speedy hesitated…but then walked over to Polly and took one of her hands and carefully wrapped his arm around her waist. Polly blushed as they swayed to the music. Speedy tenderly gazed into Polly’s eyes. “You…you look so beautiful, Polly..” he whispered. “You look really handsome as well, Speedy,” Polly said, running her hand through his hair. “You should go helmetless more often.” “Polly…I have something I have to tell ya…” “Yeah?” “Polly…I want to be alone with you,” Speedy whispered into her ear. “Let’s go into the courtyard,” Polly said. “No one’s there right now.” Speedy danced her out the back door into the empty courtyard. It was big and silent, except for the occasional whinny of Vi’s horses. The ground was made up of bright white cobblestones in a circular pattern and it was shaded by all kinds of trees that were hanging over pure ivory benches. Right in the middle of it stood a huge ornate fountain that spouted water straight up and it trickled in a graceful arch. Speedy stopped dancing when they reached the edge of the fountain and cleared his throat, taking her hands. “Polly…there’s something I need to say to you.. “ He gestured to the farthest bench. The bench was pretty far away from the animals and was partially hidden by a huge weeping willow tree that shadowed it almost completely. The only bit of light came from the moon directly overhead. when Polly had sat down on it Speedy looked around once more to make sure they were alone, then sat down next to her and took her hands. “Polly…before I tell you anything else...I need to say I’m sorry. “ “For what?” “For that stupid ‘make me a pizza’ joke I did last night. Polly…that joke was terrible and I know I shouldn’t have done it. It’s just that…well, I wanted to tell you something…I needed to tell ya something….something important…but it was private and personal. That’s why I wanted to talk to ya after work, when we could be alone. Then, after the comet, I thought we were alone, and I could tell you then…but when I looked up everyone was looking at us… and I got nervous cause this was so personal. I tried to say something else…ANYTHING else to get them to stop looking...but all that came out was that terrible joke! Guido of course didn’t help by jumping all over me…” “Oh…Guido, “ Polly raised her arm in disgust. “He can just be a real pain sometimes!” “I know…and I’m sorry if you got annoyed by that joke.” Polly looked directly at Speedy. “Now that we’re alone,” Polly began. “Can you say it now?” Speedy glanced around to make sure they were alone, then took a deep breath. “Polly, first I need to apologize for something else. All those times when I was chasing after Lucille and wasting time trying to woo her instead of delivering pizzas like I should. But I want you to know that’s not gonna happen anymore. I mean all this time you thought I as a goof…you’re right, I am a goof.” “Oh, Speedy, I didn’t really mean it..you’re not a goof ALL the time…” “No. but when I’m out delivering, that’s not gonna happen anymore. Lucille and I…we broke up.” ‘Oh, I’m sorry..” “I’m not,” Speedy said. “I couldn’t continue to see her. It wouldn’t be right or fair to either one of us.” He stopped to stroke her hand. “I mean, you can’t continue to woo someone…when you find out that you’re in love with someone else, can you?” Polly shook her head. She moved her hand up to the shoulder of his suit. ‘You’re wearing the suit I gave you,” she said softly. “Yeah, it’s a great suit,” Speedy said eagerly. “Fits like a glove and it feels great. Thank you for it.” “You’re welcome,” Polly said. “But, that’s not what you wanted to say, was it?” Speedy laughed a bit. “Polly, this should come as no real surprise…but I’m really no good at this kind of stuff…” “What kind of stuff?” “You…me…us..” Speedy stammered. “Oh, God, I’m blowing it again!!! Why can’t I just SAY it?!” he thought. “Polly…I don’t know why I’m having trouble…well, I’ve never said anything like this before to anyone.” “It might be easier if you say it very fast.” Speedy nodded. He looked on the ground and stroked her hand. “Polly, the whole reason I broke up with Lucille is that…..I realized I never really loved her. I only thought I did…but I don’t. All this time and all these feelings I thought I had for Lucille, weren’t for her at all. I discovered this a few weeks ago. Polly….what I felt was really...Polly Esther….I love you!” He finally let go and blurted out everything that was in his heart and soul. “Polly, I’m in love with you and I’ve been in love with you for years. I just thought I felt so strongly for you cause you’re my best friend, but now I know you’re more than that. Polly, I always thought you were so incredible, you’re so strong and brave, compassionate and good hearted. I know a lot of people are scared of ya cause of your temper, but your heart is so big and golden and it makes you look so lovely. Polly, I realize it now that all that time I thought I cared for Lucille, Lucille is a lot like every other girl here, but you’re not! You’re one-of-a-kind, an original, and I know now that’s what I love and why I love you. You’re yourself and that’s what I admire. Polly, I love you, I always have and I always will.” He sighed. “Oh, man, who am I trying to kid? Polly, I love you, but I’m doing it all wrong, and you probably think I’m a bigger goof than before. I don’t blame you if ya wanna laugh at me, I’m just a stupid clown who can’t even say THIS right! I don’t… someone like you with someone like me?! Oh what was I thinking!!” he stood up. “I don’t blame ya if ya wanna laugh, but please do it after I’m gone. I’m just gonna go grab something to eat, at least I got this off my chest..I’ll just..” he turned to walk away, but as he took a few steps, suddenly a voice stopped him in his tracks, saying something he just couldn’t believe. “I love you too, Speedy!” Speedy stopped with his foot halfway up. Maybe he had imagined it. was he dreaming? Life couldn’t be this perfect..could it? Slowly he turned around and saw Polly still sitting on the bench, holding one arm out to him. He looked into her eyes, so soft and blue…and glowing with love! Speedy couldn’t believe it and made his way back to her to hear her say it again. “I love you too, Speedy!” Speedy took her hand and helped her up. “Polly…” “I love you, Speedy…and I always have. I never really knew it either until I almost lost you in that Comet. Only then did I realize that the happiest moments in my life were spent with you! Yeah, you can be goofy at times, but you make me smile when you are…and I wouldn’t trade you or your goofiness for anything or anyone else in the whole world! You’re not a goof all the time, Speedy. You’re also honest, kind, daring, brave, you never put yourself first, you always think of Tokyo and constantly risk your life to make sure it’s alright…anyone would be lucky to have you! when I thought you’d died I felt like my heart was ripped out of my chest, and I knew it wasn’t just cause I thought I lost my best friend..it was because I thought I lost the one I love. All this time I got mad for you goofing around with Lucille, now I know, I was jealous, cause I carried this love for so long and didn’t even know it! Speedy, you’re one of a kind too. You’re an original, and you’re all I want!” Speedy put his hands on her shoulders and gazed into her eyes. “This has to be a dream, it has to be! But if it really is, I’m gonna make sure I do this before I wake up.” He looked into her eyes and did what he had wanted to do for a long time. He leaned over and kissed her. At first it was tender, than it grew deeper and more meaningful as he slid his arms around her and pulled her closer. She wrapped her arms around his neck and buried it in his hair, kissing him again and again in the silent darkness. The energy that pulsated around them was unbelievable! He never felt anything like this for Lucille! True, her kisses were nice and sweet, but Polly’s were unlike anything he had ever felt before! He felt like he was floating on air, like the whole world vanished and they were alone floating on their own special cloud. Finally they came up for air, and he knew he couldn’t be dreaming! “Polly…Kitten,” he said softly, kissing her forehead. “Oh, Speedy..I need to apologize, too,” Polly said. “All those times…when I yelled at you or when I threw things at you, or called you names like imbecile…I never meant any of that, it’s this damn temper I have! I try and I try but I…it’s so hard to control it, and I’m so sorry!!” “I might be leader, but I don’t think I’ll ever understand why you and I were at each other’s throats a lot.” Polly gazed thoughtfully at his well-built chest and handsome eyes. “Who knows,” she said, looking into his eyes. “Maybe it was destiny.” For a moment, Speedy looked at the lovely form of Polly in his arms and a slow smile crept along his face. “I’ll show you destiny!” he promised, sweeping Polly into his arms and kissing her with a deep passion, running his hands over her back and burying them in her hair, finally lifting her into his arms. “Speedy,” she gasped, before he covered her mouth with more kisses. “I love you, Polly,” Speedy gasped. “I’ve always loved you.” “I love you, too,” Polly said, surprised at how easy it was to say. After a while she heard the band play an anthem and reluctantly pulled away from Speedy as he put her down. “Oh, Speedy, I think that’s the song that Vi said was gonna be played when it’s time for her to give us our honors. We better go..” she started to go…but froze in her tracks. She glanced at the direction of the Palace…then back to where Speedy was. She looked back at the Palace, then back at Speedy. Her eyes glanced at him, how he looked against the soft darkness, illuminated by the faint moonlight and shaded by the trees. Suddenly his blue suit could have been a tuxedo. He looked so handsome, it took her breath away. Her heart ached with wanting him. “Oh…hell with it, let them wait!!” Polly smiled and ran into Speedy’s arms and kissed him with all the love in her heart. For the longest time they were unaware of anything, any time…any place, just each other as Speedy swept Polly into his arms again. In a small corner behind some bushes Irving hid and watched this lovely scene in front of him with his wife, Lydia, and Lucille. “Hey, ya know what? We’re in the wrong line of work! we should be matchmakers!’ Lucille laughed as she stared at this lovely scene before her. Other girls might feel funny seeing their old boyfriend in the arms of her best friend so soon after he dumped her, but she knew deep down this was how it should be. A tiny part of her would always love Speedy, but she knew she couldn’t give him what Polly could, excitement and adventure! Polly loved him and he loved her and they belonged together. She silently released him and smiled. “Be happy!” Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on January 07, 2008, 10:42:35 pm Don't you think it's time to move on and start writing DIFFERENT stuff? This is like reading the same thing over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over....
Get the point? Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on January 07, 2008, 10:51:11 pm Because vve don't VVANT to!
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 07, 2008, 11:06:40 pm I said if you don't like this kind of stuff, then you DON'T have to read it! We wrote this story for those who LIKE the relationship between Speedy and Polly.
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: TGLucario475 on January 08, 2008, 01:48:44 pm Don't you think it's time to move on and start writing DIFFERENT stuff? This is like reading the same thing over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over.... Get the point? i think i fell....OVER with laughter with that post.....thank you.....DW (^_^) well TBH, i they want to write a fan-fict, thats fine, as its a free World, expect in countries like North Korea etc etc Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on January 08, 2008, 06:18:40 pm Don't you think it's time to move on and start writing DIFFERENT stuff? This is like reading the same thing over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over.... Get the point? i think i fell....OVER with laughter with that post.....thank you.....DW (^_^) well TBH, i they want to write a fan-fict, thats fine, as its a free World, expect in countries like North Korea etc etc Haha, true enough. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 10, 2008, 07:16:34 pm Here's Chapter 2 of the story.
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Summary: Speedy and Polly officially begin going steady, as Speedy takes her out for a date to Rikugien Park, complete with a picnic lunch to top it off. He gives her his Samurai Pin, which symbolizes the fact that they are now an official couple. Guido gives Speedy a bit of a hard time, but Polly is quick to come to her boyfriend’s defense. Meanwhile, Cheese and Jerry try to brew up a new plan of attack, but Jerry’s big mouth sets Cheese off. Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all related characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Two: Going Steady The sun rose up over Little Tokyo, signaling the start of a brand new day. The whole city was in a festive mood, since Princess Vi had declared this week to be ‘Pizza Cat Appreciation Week’, in recognition of their services to the city, especially defeating Seymour Cheese, and destroying the huge comet. As the Pizza Cats started preparing themselves for the new day, Speedy was glad that the restaurant would be closed today. It would give him time to ask Polly out on a date, and he had a very special place in mind, that place being none other than Rikugien Park, the largest park in the immediate area. It had a wonderful series of hiking trails, picnic areas, and even a lake for swimming. Polly came down and greeted him with a small kiss on the nose. She said, “Good morning, Speedy…how’s my charming samurai this morning?” Speedy smiled, and replied, “Never better, Kitten.” Guido came down a few moments later, humming a tune to himself. As she was cooking breakfast, Francine quipped, “Just don’t start singing, Guido…you might get arrested for disturbing the peace.” Guido replied, “Haha, Francine.” He took his plate, and headed for one of the tables. Speedy headed out to grab a plate for himself, and he also grabbed Polly’s breakfast. As he passed by Guido, he said, “Morning, Guido.” Guido replied, “Morning, Speedy…you’re in a good mood this morning.” Speedy replied, “Yeah…I’m in love with the prettiest female cat in Little Tokyo…how could I not be happy?” Guido thought nothing of it, and went back to his meal. Speedy walked into the living room, and he set the plates bearing his and Polly’s breakfast down on the coffee table, and then he flipped on the TV. Polly snuggled up next to him, and he said, “Polly, after breakfast is cleaned up, would you like to go for a walk in the park, and maybe have a picnic together?” Polly smiled, and asked, “Speedy…are you…asking me out…on a date?” Speedy replied, “Yeah…I guess I am…so how ‘bout it, Polly…will ya go with me?” Polly threw her arms around him, and replied, “Of course I will! Speedy…I love you!” He kissed her, and replied, “I love you too, Polly.” As Speedy headed out to wash their empty dishes, he failed to notice that Guido had stuck his foot out. Speedy tripped, and wound up crashing into the floor, face first. Guido said, “Whoops…ya know, Speedy…you really ought to be more careful…you could end up hurtin’ yourself.” Speedy groaned in pain, and the crash had alerted Polly. When she saw Speedy lying on the floor, with Guido standing nearby, she immediately put the pieces together, and growled out, “GUIDO…GET…OVER…HERE…NOW!!!” Guido gulped, knowing that he’d been caught red-handed. He said, “Uh…hey Polly…hehe…it’s a…lovely day…isn’t it?” She shouted, “DON’T TRY AND SWEET-TALK ME, BUSTER!!! WHY IS SPEEDY LYING ON THE GROUND, LOOKING LIKE A TRUCK HIT HIM?!” Guido replied, “Gee…I don’t know…I guess he tripped on something. You know how clumsy the little shrimp is…” Francine replied, “He tripped all right…OVER YOUR FOOT!!!” Polly’s eyes narrowed, and she immediately belted Guido right in the face, sending him flying into the wall. She went to Speedy’s side, and said, “Speedy…are you okay?” He sat up, and said, “Nothing a kiss can’t cure, Kitten.” Polly smiled, and then she gently kissed Speedy on the forehead. After that, he went in to prepare their picnic lunch, while Francine and Polly shot angry glares at Guido. Prisoners’ Island… Cheese and Jerry had been on Prisoners’ Island now, for only a few days, and Cheese was already getting incensed. His temper was worse now, than it had ever been before. Jerry Atrick, his advisor, was trying to come up with a plan for revenge against the Pizza Cats, but every time he presented one to Cheese, he ended up getting angry and exploding. Jerry was just about out of possibilities, when he suddenly thought of a robot that he’d seen on one of the cartoon shows that the Ninja Crows liked to watch. Jerry strode over to where his boss was sitting, and said, “Seymour…I think I’ve got an idea for a robot that will finally allow us to not only take over Little Tokyo, but get revenge on the Samurai Pizza Cats all at the same time.” Cheese replied, “I’m listening, Jerry.” Clearing his throat, Jerry said, “Well…I was thinking about creating a robot that could dish out a massive amount of firepower. You see…the Ninja Crows have all been gawking at this cartoon show known as Gundam 0080, and one of the robots in that show, the Kampfer, is packed to the gills with weapons. It carries a pair of 40mm shotguns, explosive chain mine whips, a pair of 60mm head-mounted machine guns, 250mm bazookas, a net launcher, a pair of beam swords, and it can also move at incredibly high speeds.” Jerry showed Cheese a picture, and the rodent replied, “I like it, Jerry…I like it a lot. Get the Ninja Crows on it, right away.” Jerry replied, “Of course Cheesy.” As he walked away, he muttered, “If it wasn’t for your stupidity, we wouldn’t be here in the first place…oops…” Cheese screamed, “ARE YOU CALLING ME STUPID?!!!” Jerry replied, “Oh calm down, will you? I’ve got a headache already, and your screaming isn’t helping any…not to mention your breath…uh-oh…I’m a dead bird…” Cheese screamed, “ARE YOU SAYING MY BREATH SMELLS LIKE A SEWER?! I DON’T SEE ANY DENTISTS GIVING YOU A FRESHEST BREATH EVER AWARD!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and Jerry went flying into the water. Back in Little Tokyo… Speedy had finally finished packing up the picnic lunch for his first-ever date with Polly, and he got himself ready to go. Guido said, “Hey, Speedy…I didn’t know Yogi Bear lived in Rikugien Park. Where are ya goin’ with the food?” Speedy replied, “None of your business, Guido. Now, if you’ll excuse me…I’m heading out for a bit.” He then turned to Francine, and said, “Hey Fran…Polly and I are headin’ out for a little bit. We’ll be back later.” Francine smiled, and replied, “Have a good time!” Once Speedy and Polly were gone, Guido headed into the living room to watch TV, while Francine started up one of the games that she had on her laptop. Rikugien Park… Just after the clock struck noon, Speedy and Polly walked hand-in-hand into the park. Speedy said, “Polly, thanks for comin’ out with me, and for coming to help me when Guido tripped me.” Polly pulled Speedy close, and replied, “Speedy, I love you…and if he EVER does anything like that again, he’s going to be in SEVERE need of aspirin after I get done with him. Nobody is gonna get away with hurting the one I love.” Speedy kissed her cheek, and then they both found a nice, quiet place to spread out their blanket. Once they had that done, Speedy sat down next to Polly, looked her straight in the eyes, and asked, “Polly…I’d like to know one thing…will you accept this, my Samurai pin, as a symbol of our official status as boyfriend and girlfriend?” Polly took the pin in her hand, and she quickly fastened it to the front of her red and white sundress. She replied, “Speedy, I think I’ve officially become pinned…by my love for you.” Speedy pulled Polly close, and he kissed her lips softly, until they both needed air. The two of them soon began enjoying their picnic, which consisted of some rice balls with a light paprika and soy-sauce flavoring, beef teriyaki, and some Nikuman buns, along with Polly’s favorite pizza. Speedy had cooked up two small Pepperoni and Sausage pizzas, with the zesty four-cheese blend that Polly loved so much. Of course, he’d also brought along a bottle of Pepsi for both of them. They sat and ate their lunch together, and then they spent the next two hours walking along the park’s hiking trails, and they ended their trip with a swim in the lake, followed by some ice cream for the walk home, which Speedy was all too happy to pay for. He looked over at the lovely female cat walking beside him, and thought to himself, ‘Uncle Irving was right…she really is the one that I belong with…I love you, Polly Esther!” Polly thought to herself, ‘He may be a bit on the goofy side, but he’s also brave, honest, kind, and charming…and he’s the only cat I’ll ever love…I’ll always love you, and only you, Speedy Cerviche.” Together, the two cats, now officially a steady couple, headed back home. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: KyoZaber on January 12, 2008, 07:21:45 pm I promise I'll read this and write my further thoughts.
You two keep up the work please. Don't be discouraged. And Street? Please write more than that if you're going to criticize. Don't just say "It sucks just because it sucks." It would be like me deleting your account just because I felt like it. Stupid, and unwarranted. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on January 12, 2008, 10:38:44 pm Thank you so so much for that. VVe can't tell you just hovv much vve appreciate your kind vvords and vve do hope YOU like the story!
Just an old fashioned romance, hope ya think it's good. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 12, 2008, 10:55:22 pm Thanks for the backup, Kyo...I appreciate it, just like Pollygirl does.
Here's the third chapter. I'll be putting up the next one tomorrow. Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Three: Notes of Love Speedy and Polly entered the Pizza Parlor hand-in-hand happily, looking at one another with pure love and happiness and in a world of their own. Francine looked up here she was talking to Guido, Good Bird and Carla. “Hey, you to, how was your date?” Speedy and Polly glanced each other and smiled. “Shall we tell them?” “Tell us what?” Good Bird asked. “Yeah, what’s up?” Carla asked. Polly smiled, “Great news,” she stuck out the part of her dress in which Speedy’s pin shone in the sunlight. “I got pinned!!” Carla screeched and ran to hug Polly. “Oh, Polly…does this mean..”” Speedy grinned, came up from behind Polly and wrapped his arms around her waist. “It means that as of this moment, Polly and I are going steady!!” Polly smiled and kissed his cheek. “Congratulations,” Good Bird said. “wha…wha…but…you’re going steady? You’re…already?!” Francine said, shocked. “Yep,” Speedy said proudly. “And I am officially the luckiest Cat in all of Little Tokyo!” Polly blushed. “But..you guys just went out on one date!” “And we’e expecting a lot more!” Polly said happily. “What is wrong with this picture?” Guido said to himself. “Guys, look…not that I’m not happy for you or anything like that..I mean of course I am…but you guys just went out on only one date and all of a sudden you’re steady? I mean, aren’t you two kinda rushing it?” “Francine,” Polly said. “If that comet taught us anything at all, it’s that life’s way too short to beat around the bush.” “Don’t I know it,” Speedy said. “When your life is flashing before your eyes at fifty images a minute, ya kinda know not to take too much for granted! Just like my Uncle Irving said to me, when you know something is right,” he tightened his grip on Polly’s shoulder. “You never let it go.” Polly put her hand in his. “Besides,” Polly said. “Speedy and I have known each other practically our whole lives!” “How long have you guys known each other?” Good Bird asked. “Since third grade,” Speedy said. “Wow, that long?” Carla asked. “Yep,” Speedy smiled. “Remember when we met each other, Kitten?” “Of course I do. It was my first day of school in Tokyo. My family had just moved from Kyoto. I was the new kid and after school these three bullies surrounded me and started harassing me. They wouldn’t let me through, wouldn’t let me go. Finally, one pushed me into a mud puddle and ripped my new dress.” “I was coming out of school on the other side and I saw that,” Speedy continued. “ I saw what was going on and knew I had to do something, I yelled at them to leave her alone, but they came after me. I just started Samurai Training so I was able to beat them good. They ran away and I introduced myself to Polly and helped her up.” “I couldn’t decide weather to be scared of him or hope he’d become my best friend,” Polly admitted. “And then Polly hugged me thank you, I couldn’t help but notice how strong she was,” Speedy said, wincing a bit. “I knew she could make a great Samurai if she just had the right training. The next day I asked her parents if she could take Samurai Training with me.” Speedy smiled and hugged Polly close to him. “And the rest, as they say, is history!” He reached over and kissed her lips. “Oh, that’s so romantic!” Carla sighed. “Give me a break,” Guido muttered. “You guys, come ON! A while ago you two were always fighting, never seeing eye to eye on anything…now all of a sudden you’re going steady?! I mean, he can‘t even recite poetry!” “Maybe not, Guido,” Speedy admitted, “But I can talk to her from the bottom of my heart and tell her exactly how I feel about her. When I look at her and tell her how much she means to me, every word is true.” Polly beamed and lowered her eyes, wrapping one arm around his shoulders. “Kiss me, you Romeo!” Speedy pulled her into a tender kiss. Two weeks later… Polly came downstairs into the kitchen of the Pizza Parlor, with the biggest smile on her face that anyone had ever seen her wear. “Good morning!” she sang out happily. “Good morning to you!” Francine answered. “You’re in a happy mood today! Dare I ask how your date last night went?” Polly sighed and sank into a chair. “Oh, Francine, it was so wonderful! I had the best time last night. Speedy was such a gentleman! He was sweet, tender, affectionate…” “With who?” Guido couldn’t resist saying. Polly shot him a dirty look. “With me! No, I had the time of my life!” “Where did he take you this time?” Guido asked. “We went to that brand new restaurant downtown. He made special reservations ahead of time. We were shown to our own private table, it was hidden away, in a dark corner. The only light seemed to come from one candle right in the middle of our table!” “Why would you want to eat almost in the pitch dark?” Francine asked, until a look from Polly told her. “Dumb thing, I said a dumb thing, didn’t I?” “Anyway, there we were, alone. Just the two of us. He took my hand..and he stroked it so tenderly…he brought it up to his lips and kissed it…gazed right into my eyes…” Polly stood up. “Oh, but I can’t tell you anymore..I’m too shy!” she giggled and went into the kitchen to prepare ingredients. Speedy came into the kitchen just then. “Hiya, Kitten!” “Hi, Pussycat,” she replied as Speedy kissed her. He fingered his Samurai pin that Polly always wore near her heart. “Had a good time last night,” Polly said. “I did too,” Speedy said as he went to prepare breakfast for them. A little while later the phone began to ring and Francine answered it. “Samurai Pizza Cats, Pizza’s our middle name! OK, coming right up! Polly, 2 large sausage pizzas with extra cheese to be delivered to the Bulldogs!” “You got it,” Polly said, immediately getting started. when it as ready Speedy reached over to take it. “To the Bulldog’s, right?” “You got it.” “OK, be right back,” Speedy gave her a peck on the lips and touched her hand tenderly. “I love you.” “I love you,” Polly called out as he left. She looked down as she realized something was in her hand. A note had been tenderly put into it. She unfolded it as fast as she could and began to read it. Dear Polly, I think you’re the most beautiful girl in all of Little Tokyo, and you’re the nicest, sweetest girl I know. These last few weeks have been the best ones of my whole life. I love every minute, every second of our time together. Just the fact that I’m going steady with you has made me glad just to be alive, and every morning I look forward to seeing your lovely face! I mean this with all my heart, I love you and only you forever, and I can honestly say you’re the only girl I’m dreaming of! I wish I could think of a better form of words to tell you, but I’m not a poet like Guido. All I can say is I love you with all my heart, Polly esther. Love forever, Speedy. Polly felt herself melting at these lovely words and her heart skipping a few beats. So what if it wasn’t too flowery? It was written by the one she loved so much with his whole heart! She hugged it to her bosom happily, reading it again and again with a dreamy look on her face. She didn’t even hear the phone when it started to ring, or Francine’s voice calling her until Fran came and touched her shoulder. “POLLY! earth to Polly! earth to Polly! Come in, Polly!” “Huh?” she asked. “What do you mean, huh? Didn’t you hear the phone? Customers are waiting, and what are you reading?” Guido tried to read the note over her shoulder, Polly snatched it away. “Mind your own business, Guido!” she snapped. “Geez, Pol, that’s a letter!!!” “I know, and it’s mine!” “Sneaking it to ya in the middle of work and everything!” “Well, could you put that letter away for now, we got people waiting.” Polly nodded and slipped the letter into her apron pocket before going out to greet some customers. Speedy made his way back down the street after delivering his pizzas, singing happily, feeling like he was floating on top of the world. “Oh, I’m a Pizza Cat and I’m OK, make dough at night and bake by day!” He went on faster, thinking only of his Polly and wishing to go back to her. He saw a flower stand nearby and stopped as the vender turned around. “Oh, good morning, Speedy!” “Good morning, John.” “Isn’t it though? So, what can I do for you?” “I’d like to purchase some flowers for my girlfriend,” his eyes lit up and a huge smile crossed his face at the word ‘girlfriend.’ Calling Polly his girlfriend felt good…it felt RIGHT. “Girlfriend, huh? Must be someone very special.” “Oh yes, she is! I can honestly say she’s the best thing that‘s ever happened to me!” “Well in that case, she should have the best arrangement! what are her favorite colors?” “Pink and red.” “Well, how about these bright red roses and pink gardenias? And we can throw in some white daisies for good measure.” “Great! That looks lovely.” A little while later Speedy came into the restaurant. “Polly?” He called. “Oh, Polly?” “In here, Speedy!” Polly called out. Speedy smiled, handed his payment to Francine, and went to the back where Polly was and swept her into his arms, twirling her around. She giggled and he pecked her lips. He tenderly presented her with the flowers. “For the most wonderful girl in all of Tokyo!” Polly gasped when she saw the flowers. “Oh, Speedy, thank you, I love them!” she gave him a long kiss. “I got your letter.” “Ya did? Heh..did ya..ya know, like it?” “I loved it. Those were the sweetest things anyone’s ever said to me!” “Even though it wasn’t really poetic?” “Oh I don’t care about that! Those are the loveliest words I’ve ever read. I know I’ll never throw it away.” She threw her arms around him and they kissed so deeply they forgot anyone else as there. “So, where do ya wanna go tonight?” “Hmm…I think I’d like to go skydiving!” Speedy smiled. “Skydiving? That’s different!” he grinned. “If that’s what ya want, we’ll do it!” Speedy swept her in his arms and lifted her up, kissing her all the while. “Hey, Romeo and Juliet!” Francince called out. “Much as I hate interrupting, we still got a restaurant to operate! Speedy, I need you to run this pizza over to Al Dente.” “OK,” he gave Polly another kiss goodbye. “See ya later! I love you.” “Later! I love you,” as Polly went back to her ovens, she noticed another note in her hand. Dear Polly, I know I’m no good at poetry, so I’ll just say this from the bottom of my heart: I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you. In case it’s not that obvious...I love you!!! All my love forever, Speedy. Polly blushed bright red as she melted all over again and slipped the note into her apron pocket. Speedy made his way down the street, thinking of Polly and their date that night. No one else he knew would even suggest skydiving as a date! But that’s what made Polly so appealing- her unpredictability! He knew Lucille would never have wanted to do anything like that, she would be too scared! But Polly…she never ceased to amaze and surprise him, and every day with her was an adventure! “Polly makes me so happy!!” He thought. “I never want anyone else!” He raced on, making sure his delivery was on time and looking forward to what was going to be a very special night. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: KyoZaber on January 19, 2008, 02:33:27 am :Chapter 1 Comments:
Not too bad for a start. I really like the idea of a dance as it puts the castle to some actual use. In some ways you did bend SPC history a little bit. At the end of SPC the comet was said to have wrecked the town a decent amount. If you'd both followed that, then the party would either be being held in the remains of the castle, or out in a park. It's not a bad thing though for fans to lightly re-write events. Also, if you were to place this a little further from the end of the series, then I'd buy it even more that they were in the newly built full-fledged palace. Another nit-picky detail is Polly's outfit. You have to remember that this it Little Tokyo. I'd almost figure that she would be more prone to wear a kimono to a party like this. Now, since this is Polly, it is possible that she may not want to wear a kimono. Again, it's nothing huge, but just one of my 2 cents. :) I'm glad that Lucille is glad, but I'd almost expect a few more tears to be coming out of her eyes. It's up to every fan to gauge what Lucille's feelings of Speedy truely were through the series. The more I look back on her... The more I can't help but wonder if she only thought of Speedy as a good friend who happened to bring her gifts and do stuff with her. If anything, perhaps a classic Lucille moment would've been nice at the end of the chapter. She wouldn't have to blow anything up... but maybe some fireworks of joy for Polly and Speedy, just as the two kissed, would have been warranted. ;) In the end here's how I'd rate Chapter 1... It's a little out of tune in places to be a hard-core SPC Episode, however it's a good foundation that a SPC Episode could be built upon and worked out of. While some of the details are a little off, at it's core this story has potential. I look forward to reading Chapter 2 within the next few days. :) (Yes I am slow at reading... but you've got to savor life more. If you speed through stuff, you'll miss the best parts.) Keep up the work you two. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on January 19, 2008, 04:01:56 am :Also, if you were to place this a little further from the end of the series, then I'd buy it even more that they were in the newly built full-fledged palace. VVell, vve never said exactly vvhen this took place. Just assume the Palace vvas rebuilt. :) :Now, since this is Polly, it is possible that she may not want to wear a kimono. Again, it's nothing huge, but just one of my 2 cents. :) Polly? A Kimono? Come ON!!! :D :I'm glad that Lucille is glad, but I'd almost expect a few more tears to be coming out of her eyes. OOps, our bad! :It's up to every fan to gauge what Lucille's feelings of Speedy truely were through the series. The more I look back on her... The more I can't help but wonder if she only thought of Speedy as a good friend who happened to bring her gifts and do stuff with her. That's hovv vve savv her. VVe alvvays thought she did care more for Guido anyvvay. :In the end here's how I'd rate Chapter 1... It's a little out of tune in places to be a hard-core SPC Episode If you man no Cheese, he's comin, he's comin!!! :I look forward to reading Chapter 2 within the next few days. :) But ya liked it? Did ya really like it? Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 20, 2008, 01:22:28 am Here's Chapter 4:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Four: Speedy and Polly’s Skydiving Date Speedy had just gotten off the phone with the owner of the Slipstream Club, Little Tokyo’s skydiving adventure group. He’d agreed to take Speedy and Polly up on his plane, so that they could have the thrill of their lives. Polly walked in, and Speedy turned to face her. She pulled him close, and asked, “Are we all set to go, my charming Samurai?” Speedy smiled, and replied, “You bet we are, Kitten. We’ll be landing just as the moon comes up, and then I’ll take you out to dinner, before finally coming back here.” Polly kissed Speedy on the cheek, and replied, “Oh Speedy…I love you so much!” Speedy kissed her on the nose, and said, “I love you too, Pollyanna!” The two of them said their good-byes to Guido, Francine, and Good Bird, before heading out the door. Once they arrived at the small airport owned by the Slipstream Club, Speedy and Polly signed the insurance forms, and then they were both given a complete physical exam, before being measured for their jumpsuits. Once they’d both been fitted, their instructor came out to meet them. He said, “Ahhh…so you’re the famous Speedy Cerviche…the one who took out that monster comet a couple of weeks ago. It’s an honor to have you along for the ride, Speedy.” Blushing, Speedy replied, “Thanks a bunch, Mr. Kanazawa. My girlfriend and I, we’ve really been looking forward to this.” Mr. Kanazawa replied, “Nothing’s too good for the heroes of this city, and I must say, you picked a REAL winner there…she’s absolutely beautiful!” Speedy replied, “She certainly is. I love her, with all my heart and soul.” Mr. Kanazawa replied, “Just one more thing, what’s her name?” Polly replied, “It’s Polly…Polly Esther, to be exact. Of course, I’ll soon be Mrs. Polly Esther Cerviche, which I can’t wait for!” Mr. Kanazawa smiled, before leading the two of them to his plane. He ran through the pre-flight checks, and then took off. Speedy and Polly both double-checked their equipment, until they reached their jump altitude of 13,000 feet. Mr. Kanazawa said, “Okay…listen up: Once you two jump, you’ll be in freefall for a short time, until around 3,000 feet. Once you see that on the altitude gauge on your jumpsuit, pull the red handle on your harness, and deploy your chute. Once you’ve opened up, stay close to each other, and once you get near the ground, aim for a soft area, like an open field. After you land, pop the green smoke flare, which will be my signal to come and meet you. Got it?” Speedy and Polly both gave him the thumbs-up, and then he slid open the aircraft’s side door. He tapped Speedy on the shoulder first, and Speedy hopped out. Polly followed seconds later, and quickly came up alongside Speedy. After a minute of freefall, they noticed that it was time to yank the ‘chute, and they both pulled the release handle. Their ‘chutes unfolded, and the two of them glided to a safe landing, coming back to earth inside a field of Lunar Flowers. Speedy popped his green smoke flare, after he’d made sure that both he and Polly were all right. Mr. Kanazawa met them a few minutes later, and he said, “That was the BEST jump I’ve ever seen by first-timers! I’ve got to be getting back now, but if you ever want to do it again, just call me up. Have fun on your date now!” Mr. Kanazawa took off, and Speedy looked into Polly’s blue eyes, which were gleaming in the moonlight. He said, “Polly…I’ve never met anyone else, that can make me feel the way you do. You’re not only beautiful and kind, but you’ve also got a great personality, you’re brave, loyal, strong, and you’re always there for me. I’m so glad I met you, Polly…I want to stay with you, forever.” Polly’s eyes filled with tears of joy, and she replied, “Speedy…I love you so much…honestly, I never meant to call you all those names I’ve used in the past, not to mention the times I’ve hit you. This temper of mine…I just can’t control it at times, but being with you…I feel so good when we’re together. Speedy, you are the only cat that I will ever love.” Speedy and Polly both kissed, long and deep, until they needed to come up for air. When they broke apart, Speedy saw that they were standing in a field of Lunar Flowers, so he decided to pick some for Polly. Once he’d gathered up enough to make a bouquet, he walked back over to Polly, and said, “Some lovely flowers, for a VERY lovely kitten!” Polly smelled them, and said, “Oh Speedy…they’re lovely!” He replied, “Not anywhere near as lovely as you are, my sweet Pollyanna.” She blushed, and then she kissed him on the nose, before they both headed off to the restaurant that Speedy had made reservations at. Prisoners’ Island… Cheese was lounging on a beach chair and munching on Sushi, as he watched the Ninja Crows working on the robot. Jerry walked over, and Cheese asked, “How’s the work coming along, Jerry?” Jerry replied, “I’ve got half the Ninja Crows working on getting enough metal to make the armor, while the rest of them put together the weapons. This robot isn’t exactly a light job, you know.” Cheese replied, “Never mind that. Just tell me how much longer it’s going to be.” Jerry answered, “A couple of weeks at least, Cheesy…that is, if the Ninja Crows can keep up their pace.” Cheese replied, “Wonderful! Those Pizza Cats are finally going to pay dearly for ruining my plans! HAHAHAHA!!!” Jerry replied, “I wonder…are you incurably deranged, or is it only temporary…oops…” Cheese screamed, “THAT WASN’T FUNNY, JERRY!!!” Jerry frantically waved his hands in front of him, and said, “N-no…of course not, Cheesy.” Cheese calmed himself down, until he overheard some of the Ninja Crows making jokes about him behind his back. One of them said, “As dumb as he is, I’d be surprised if he could rule a sandbox, let alone a city!” Another one said, “Yeah…I hear that he’s so stupid, he blows up Pop Tarts in the microwave.” A third one said, “He’s such a moron, it takes him an hour to make Minute Rice…uh…oh…” The Ninja Crows all turned around, and saw Cheese standing there, his face going red as a tomato. Jerry said, “You idiots! He’s going to blast us all to kingdom come, thanks to your stupidity…even if what you said is true…oh no…” Cheese screamed, “ALL OF THIS AGGRAVATION ISN’T DOING MY BLOOD PRESSURE ANY GOOD…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and Jerry said, “I need to find a new line of work, before he kills me…ugh…” He fell over, and Cheese said, “I’m going to have my revenge on those Pizza Cats…right after I finish my nap…ugh..” Cheese fell face-first into the sand, and the island was once again quiet. Back in Little Tokyo… Speedy and Polly returned from their date, and walked hand-in-hand up to the restaurant. Guido saw them coming, and said, “Oh boy…look at you two…I mean, just a couple weeks ago, Polly…you called him goofy, you’ve beaten him up so many times, you’ve thrown things at him, and now, you’re going out with him? WHAT DO YOU SEE IN HIM?!” Polly replied, “Simple…he’s kind, honest, sweet, caring, and he’s the one I love. Got it?” Guido shook his head, before he headed back inside. Polly went out back to freshen up, and Speedy decided to sit down and wait for her. Guido, however, had other plans. He yanked the stool out from under Speedy, causing him to fall over, face-first. Guido said, “Gee…sorry Speedy…I guess I didn’t see you there.” Francine said, “Uhm…Guido…you DO have your health insurance paid up, right?” Guido replied, “Yeah. Why?” Francine replied, “Uhm…I’m gonna go out back, and uh…empty the dishwasher.” Guido turned around, and came face to face with a VERY angry Polly. Guido gulped, and said, “Oh no…I’m a dead cat…” Good Bird said, “I’d like to help ya out, but I just remembered that Carla and I were gonna watch a movie tonight. See ya!” Good Bird flew off, and Guido yelped out, “Mother…”, before Polly smashed him in the head with a frying pan. She then walked over to Speedy, who was still down on the ground, moaning in pain. She said, “What’s the matter, pussycat…can I get you anything?” He sat up, and replied, “An icepack would be nice, and could you help me sit down?” She carried him into the living room, pausing long enough to give Guido an evil look. Once she’d set him down on the sofa, she grabbed an icepack, took off his helmet, and then she handed him the icepack, which he placed on his forehead. She asked, “Can I get you anything else?” He replied, “Yeah…a soda…please…” Polly grabbed a bottle of Pepsi for him, and popped it open. She then asked, “Anything else?” He replied, “Yes…a kiss from my Pollyanna…” Polly smiled, and she then knelt down onto the carpet, and kissed Speedy’s forehead. He wrapped an arm around her shoulders, and she melted against him. Meanwhile, Guido had just gotten to his feet, when Francine grabbed him by the wrist. She said, “Guido, outside…NOW!!! We’re going to have a talk, and DON’T YOU give my any lip!” Once she’d taken him outside, Francine said, “Guido Anchovy, you should be ashamed of yourself. Speedy’s gone out of his way to be your friend, and you repay him by playing the meanest pranks that you can think of…you call him names, you hurt him, and you just basically treat him like dirt. Let’s start with those names that you’re so fond of… ‘Neo-Fascist Feline’… ‘Couldn’t pound the fuzz off a pussy willow’…not to mention you always butting into his life, like when he was trying to talk to Polly after he and Good Bird got back from killing that comet. You made him so nervous, that he blurted out that stupid ‘Make me a Pizza’ joke, which ticked Polly off, and then YOU kicked him in the head! Guido, you disgust me! You know he’s sensitive about his height, and yet you LOVE insulting him about it. You call him weak, when you know perfectly well that he’s not. He’s whalloped you with a tree before, after you insulted him in front of Lucille, and he’s the only one between you three that can match Good Bird’s swordsmanship skills. When he was still Bad Bird…that one time he got that super armor…Speedy almost DIED to keep you safe, after Bad Bird’s sword wrecked your umbrella. He’s saved you repeatedly, and how do you repay him? You hurt him, belittle him, and just basically make his life miserable! You’re lucky he hasn’t told Lucille about all the rotten things you’ve done to him, because he’s a real good friend of hers, Guido. Think how she’d feel. Also, he could go inform Al Dente, and he’d probably strip you of your Samurai status. Who knows…he might even go tell Princess Vi, and she’d either send you to Prisoners’ Island, or order you to commit Hira-Kiri. Is THAT what you WANT, Guido Anchovy?” Guido gulped, and said, “Gods…I…oh man…what have I done?” Francine said, “I don’t want to see you for the rest of the night, Guido. I think you’d best go up to your room, and think long and hard about our conversation tonight. When you’re ready…come down and apologize CONVINCINGLY to them, and hope to God that they both forgive you. Remember, Guido…I’m giving you a chance to do what’s right…don’t mess it up!” Guido ran inside, and locked himself in his bedroom. He felt absolutely horrible about how he’d treated Speedy, and he knew that he needed to find a way to make it up to him, that is…if Speedy and Polly would forgive him. Francine walked into the living room, where Polly was now sitting next to Speedy on the sofa, lightly rubbing his shoulders, while he rested his head against her chest. Polly said, “Hey Francine…what’s with Guido?” Francine replied, “I just chewed him out royally, and pretty much said that he’d better quit bullying Speedy around, unless he wants to end up hearing about it from Al or Princess Vi, not to mention poor Lucille.” Speedy replied, “Thanks for sticking up for me there, Francine…and you too, kitten!” Francine replied, “Hey, what are friends for? I’d love to stick around, but I’m gonna head up to bed now. Goodnight, you two…and make sure you turn off the lights!” Polly giggled, and she then turned the lights off. She then joined Speedy on the sofa again, and since it was a rather wide one, she curled up next to him, and they were both fast asleep in minutes. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 20, 2008, 12:00:03 pm Thank you for the review, and I'm sorry if it's a bit repetitive.
Here's chapter 5: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the associated characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Five: Guido’s Apology Guido stayed huddled on the bed in his room, replaying the conversation he had had with Francine over and over in his head. ‘You should get down on your knees and thank God in Heaven Speedy has NOT reported you to Al Dente or Princess Vi! For some reason, he values you. I only wish you valued him as much!’ “But I do!” He said to himself. Geez, he and Speedy had been buddies since 6th grade! They always fooled around with each other! Speedy knew he as only playing….didn’t he? Guido thought back to all the times he had known Speedy. No, he didn’t do anything wrong! Sure, he had competed with Speedy over deliveries and for Lucille…but that was only friendly banter…wasn’t it? Did Speedy know that? Lucille had really liked him, it wasn’t his fault if Speedy didn’t listen…right? Is wasn’t…right? What did he do that was so terrible? He had just tried to deliver pizzas to the girl his heart belonged to….even though Speedy was assigned to do it. Every single time. Many times calling him names in the process. Many other scenes flashed in his mind. The time he had bashed Speedy with a rock just to get his pizza for Lucille, the time he had pulled a stool out from under Speedy when Polly’s flute was accidentally given away, the time he and Speedy tried to get a part in Vi’s movie to impress Lucille, and he had made fun of Speedy’s height.. Knowing he was sensitive about it. When he had actually attacked Speedy and tried to get his golden ticket for himself…OK, where did THAT come from? Stealing wasn’t friendly banter at all….he was a SAMURAI for crying out loud! What as he doing trying to steal?!?! Especially from Speedy! Speedy. His best friend. Who never did anything to him...he never started anything! Guido started it all! He never would have uprooted that tree and swung it at Guido if he had only butt out of his delivery! He never would have called him ugly if Guido didn’t call him short and say no one would want his picture!!! It was all Guido! Why did he even butt in when Speedy was trying to talk to Polly? Why didn’t he just butt out? Polly could have handled it herself, it wasn’t any of his business! Speedy was right..so right. Guido was a buttinski! He tried to put himself in Speedy’s shoes. He tried to imagine his so-called best friend showing up when he was trying to do his job, trying to one-up him, trying to infringe on the girl he had a crush on, calling him all kinds of names , pulling pranks like pulling out bar stools, stealing his things….oh man. Guido stood up and slowly walked across the room, coming to a stop in front of his mirror. “You…are a creep!” he said to his reflection. “What are you doing being a Samurai?! You’re not worthy of this uniform! You’re LUCKY Speedy never reported you!” He rested his hands on the dresser and lowered his head, sighing. He owed Speedy. He owed him big time! The next morning… “So, where do ya wanna go tonight?” Speedy asked early the next morning. “It’s your turn to choose, Speedy,” Polly said. “Hurry up you guys, the restaurant is gonna open soon,“ Francine said. Speedy looked over an open paper, “This looks good,” he said. “A carnival is opening up tonight. How’s that, Kitten?” “Sounds like fun!” Guido came down the stairs just then, with his head bowed, and his eyes filled with shame. He finally looked up as Francine came toward them. “Ok, guys, now that you’ve made up your minds, excuse me while I open up the restaurant…” “Wait, Fran,” Guido said. “Before ya do that, I got something I need to say..” Francine stopped what she as doing and backed up a bit. Guido faced Speedy and Polly. “Will both of you please sit down?” Speedy and Polly looked at each other, and sat down on a nearby booth, as Guido stood up, folded his arms, and cleared his throat. “A terrible mistake has been made….and I’m the one that made it. Speedy..Polly…Francine and I had a long talk..and I did a lot of thinking afterwards. I know that in the past I’ve hardly ever been nice to you…either one of you.” He turned to Speedy. “Speedy..I think I owe you the biggest apology of all. Speedy, I know that even though I’ve called you my best friend in the past, I realize that…the complete opposite is true. I’ve been just about the worst friend anyone could ask for. All this time I’ve been nothing but horrible to you. I’ve been cocky, a know-it-all, self-centered, cruel..” he turned to Francine. “Feel free to stop me anytime you wanna, Fran.” “No, no, you’re doing fine!” Francine cracked. “Anyway, Speedy, I treated you the worst, so I think I owe you the biggest apology. Speedy, I’ve been doing a lot of thinking about the real reason I did all the things I did to you in the past, and I realize that the reason I treated you so horribly is that..I was jealous of you. I was jealous of the fact that ever since I’ve known you you were always doing things much faster or better than me. Speedy, you’re the best in all you do. Of all the Samurai I’ve ever known, you’re the best swordsman I’ve ever seen. You can hold your own better than anyone! You’re the only one I’ve seen who could fight Good Bird when he was still bad. Speedy, your Leadership is amazing, and there’s no one better than you in anything. Look at you, you can even make a commitment to somone…that’s always so hard for me! Speedy, all those insults I’ve thrown at you in the past, all the times I butted in on you when you’re making pizza deliveries, or insulting you, or playing pranks on you for no good reason at all…or even trying to horn in on your relationship with Polly…I’m ashamed of that now. Now, let me tell ya what I see when I see you now. I see someone amazing. Someone who has more patience than anyone I’ve ever known. Francine was right, and I should be grateful forever that you never reported me to Al Dente. “I’d never do that to you, Guido!” Speedy said “You’re a valuable member of this team, and we all need you.” Guido’s eyes filled with tears of shame and gratefulness. “Speedy, I know I called you short, but you’re a much bigger Cat than I can ever be! Speedy, from the bottom of my heart, I’m sorry for everything I ever did. I am truly, honestly sorry, and if we can start over, I promise I’ll never do it again.” He turned to Polly. “Polly, I owe you an apology too. I’ve been pretty awful to you, too. I said horrible things to you, but I never meant any of them. Polly, you’re not ugly at all, and I don’t know why I called you that. you’re a very lovely girl, and no one deserves you more than Speedy. I guess I was a bit chauvinistic in my thoughts, thinking that you couldn’t really be pretty and a fighter, but you’ve proven that you can. Polly, I know I’ve butted in on your relationship with Speedy, including having everyone look at you and Speedy when he got back from destroying the comet which caused him to be nervous and make that joke. And I didn’t help by kicking him in the head afterwards. Polly, I’m sorry for butting in and for making you mad, and for calling you names. Speedy, Polly, I’m truly sorry for everything I’ve done to both of you.” He knelt down in front of both of them. “From the bottom of my heart and down on my knees, I’m honestly sorry. I hope you can both find it in your hearts to please forgive me.” Speedy slowly stood up. “Guido, stand up. Guido…that was a touching speech you just gave. But you didn’t have to give it. I forgive you, Guido, and I always have. I know that you’re a good fighter and a valuable member of our team. But, you should have just talked to me and let me know how you felt. Guido, you’re an amazing fighter as well, don’t think you’re not!” Speedy smiled. “And you’ve proven just now that you’re a true friend.” “Yeah, it takes a big person to admit when he’s wrong,” Polly said. “I forgive you too, Guido…as long as you never, ever do anything like that again.” “I never will, I promise!” Speedy stuck out his hand. “Guido, you’re my friend, and I’ll always forgive you no matter what. But next time just talk to me and tell me these things.” He shook Guido’s hand. “I forgive you.” Guido pulled into a hug. “Thank you.” Polly hugged him too. A little while later, the restaurant was as busy as usual, and the Cats were filling orders left and right. The phone rang just then, and Francine answered. “Samurai Pizza Cats, Pizza’s our middle name. You got it, we’ll be right there!” She hung up. “Speedy?” “Yep?” She set the pizza down in front of him. “A sausage and extra cheese pizza for Lucille and make sure it gets there hot!” “You got it.” Out of habit Guido started to reach for the pizza but thought better of it. When Speedy took the pizza, he glanced at Guido and then back at the boxes. Finally he went to him. “Hey, Guido?” “Yeah?” He held out the box. “Why don’t you take the pizza to Lucille.” Guido looked surprised. “Me?” “Sure! After all,” he winked at Polly. “I got no reason to go over there anymore! Go ahead, take it. Give her our best.” “I will,” Guido said, starting off. “Oh wait, wait!” Speedy took a rose from a vase on the counter and put it on top of the box. “There, perfect touch.” “Hey, thanks, buddy!” He shook Speedy’s hand. “Ya know, Speedy, people might say you’re short, but you’re the biggest Cat I know.” “Hey, Guido?” Polly asked, “see if Lucille wants to go to the carnival with us tonight. We can double date!” Later, at the carnival... Polly licked the last bits of sticky pink substance from her paper cone and tossed it in the trash. ‘That’s the first time I’ve had cotton candy in eons!” she smiled “Who says carnivals are only for kids?” “Not me, that’s for sure!” Speedy said happily. Guido grinned at them and put his arm around Lucille. “What’s next, my sweet? Another ride on the ferris wheel?” “No way,” Speedy said, slipping his hand into Polly’s “We already did that! We’ll never have time to see everything if we keep going back on the same things.” Polly beamed. It was great to be laughing and joking around with her boyfriend and two of her good friends, as if the jealousy and petty arguments of the previous months had never existed. “So, what’s next?” “I think it’s your turn to choose, Lucille,” Guido said. “Hmm..” Lucille said, looking around. “Oh, look over there! A Singing Contest! Come on, Polly, let’s go sign up!!” “I’m right behind you, Lucille!” Polly said. “Yeah, you two sign up, and we’ll go find seats in the front row so we can cheer the loudest!” Speedy said. Polly kissed him and they ran over. As they made their way over a couple of obvious drunks called out “Hey, who’s the shrimp over there?” Guido was the first one to turn around, thankful Speedy and Polly were already too far away to hear. “What as that, Ya jerk?” “Who ya calling a jerk, cowboy?” “I’m calling you a jerk, you got something ya wanna say to my friend, you say it in front of me first, got it?!” One of the drunks stumbled over. “Hey, it ain’t his fault he’s so tiny a bug can’t find him, but ya think he could afford some elevator shoes…” before he could finish, Guido slammed him into the mud. “You do NOT talk about him like that! If it weren’t for him, you’d all be dead now, so you show him some respect!” Another drunk lunged toward Guido, who ducked and Guido used his umbrella to knock him far and away. Lucille ran to Guido and hugged him. “Oh, Guido…you were magnificent!” She kissed his cheek. “Oh, Lucille, that was nothing..” “No, Guido…that was wonderful! You are so courageous, so brave, so caring! Oh, Guido, that’s why I so love being with you. You never think of yourself, you always put others first…” Guido looked down. “Not always, Lucille…” “Oh, but yes, always. No one is more loving, more caring than you! You’re so thoughtful and always willing to help, and you are so unselfish…” Guido looked into Lucille’s eyes as, shame again overtook him. “Lucille,” he began, taking her hands and looking at her, “I have a confession to make…” Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on January 20, 2008, 04:39:01 pm I don't mind a good romance, and this is good as romances go. Sure, I feel that some of it's a bit unrealistic, but that isn't always a bad thing. Oh, and some of it does seem a bit repetitive at times. Harmonex: idealist and realist rolled into one. VVell vvalking talking Samurai Cats aren't exactly realistic either! But vvait, you have to explain that, vvhat parts aren't realistic? VVhat, you don't think Guido vvould have a turnaround? Is it the skydiving that's unrealistic? VVhat, you've been skydiving before? That's not hovv it goes? VVhat parts aren't realistic, pray tell? Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: KyoZaber on January 20, 2008, 05:47:05 pm VVell, vve never said exactly vvhen this took place. Just assume the Palace vvas rebuilt. :) Fair enough. :) Polly? A Kimono? Come ON!!! :D She wore what looked like a kimono (and probably was a kimono) in the "Samurai Charm School" episode where she went to the Big Cheese's Modeling school. Granted, you could argue that she doesn't like to wear one. Again, this is just more personal preference. ... That... and I think gals in Kimonos look very lovely. If you man no Cheese, he's comin, he's comin!!! I wasn't too worried about no Big Cheese. I mainly was saying that the 1st chapter didn't really feel like a full-fledged SPC episode. It was though showing good promise. (And admittedly, it was just Chapter 1. Thus insinuating more parts of a story. ;) ) But ya liked it? Did ya really like it? I liked it well enough. :) I don't hate it, but yet I don't love it. I'm willing though to keep reading it and keep giving my views on it. I do want to see how you both write this and end this story. It is very interesting. Just remember that my comments are just that... Comments. This is you 2's story, and you both'll write it how you both see fit. All because I do or don't like something doesn't mean a hill of beans. If anything, I'm trying to structure all my comments to be is a little food for thought. ;) Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on January 20, 2008, 07:50:24 pm Keeping in mind that I have only read the first two chapters, but "I love you." gets thrown around so much in what I've read. Uh...heh, heh..in that case....ya might vvanna skip chapter three entirely and move on to chapter 4. But, I'm vvarning ya, if ya like Guido...be prepared, he gets it here! I wasn't too worried about no Big Cheese. I mainly was saying that the 1st chapter didn't really feel like a full-fledged SPC episode. It was though showing good promise. (And admittedly, it was just Chapter 1. Thus insinuating more parts of a story. ;) ) exactly, and this IS chapter 1. Big Cheese VVILL be back...more vengeful and more STUPID than ever! :) Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 20, 2008, 10:21:18 pm He most certainly will, and Guido has now reached the point where he's realized that he's really messed up, and he begins the process of making up for his misdeeds.
With that said, here's the next chapter: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters associated with the series. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Songs for this Chapter: Speedy: ‘Vestige’-T.M. Revolution Guido: ‘Loving You Is Paradise’-Firehouse Polly: ‘Fields of Hope’-Rie Tanaka Lucille: ‘Cloud 9’-Maaya Sakamoto Chapter Six: Confessions at the Carnival As Lucille waited for him to talk, Guido was seriously worried: He’d be confessing a long list of mean, cruel pranks that he’d played on Speedy, along with the names that he’d called his fellow Samurai, and he hoped that she’d forgive him, after he told her about his conversation with Francine, and his resulting epiphany. He cleared his throat, and said, “Lucille…I, uh…really haven’t always been very nice to Speedy. In fact…I’ve been outright cruel to him at times. I’ve called him names like ‘Shorty’, ‘Neo-Fascist Feline’, and ‘Couldn’t pound the fuzz off a pussy willow’, I’ve horned in on his privacy, I’ve stolen stuff from him, specifically a golden ticket, back during that ‘Golden Cluck’ caper of Cheese’s, I’ve pulled stools out from under him, and I even butted in on him, as he was about to confess his feelings for Polly, after he and Good Bird got back from taking out that monster comet. You see, Lucille…I’ve done some really horrible stuff to him…and I got a royal chewing-out by Francine last night, not to mention the fact that Polly almost made a wall ornament out of me with her fist. After my talk with Francine, I realized that I’d done all this horrible stuff to Speedy for one reason alone…I was jealous. He’s so much better at swordsmanship, he’s stronger, even able to match or beat Good Bird, which not even Polly AND I could ever do together, he was the first one of us to start going steady, and he’s taken it all with a grain of salt, except for the one time he belted me with a tree. They both forgave me, Lucille…but the thing is…I don’t know if I can forgive myself…I don’t even know if I can go on with being a Samurai…” Guido broke down, and Lucille was absolutely shocked…she’d always thought that Speedy and Guido were so close…and yet, Guido had just confessed to doing so many horrible things to him. Lucille teared up, and unleashed a barrage of her missiles, which, fortunately for the carnival, exploded overhead. She walked over to Guido, and said, “Guido…it took a lot of courage to admit that you were wrong…and from what you said…I believe in my heart that Speedy and Polly have both truly forgiven you…and I do too. Please…next time…talk about your feelings with them, or come and talk to me. I’m always here if you need a friend, Guido.” Lucille then pulled Guido into a warm hug, and he couldn’t help but pull her into a hug of his own. He said, “Lucille…thank you so much…you’ve renewed not only my faith in myself, but also my courage to continue serving as a samurai. There’s one other thing I’ve been wanting to tell you, for a long time now.” Lucille asked, “What is it, Guido?” He sat down with her on a bench, and said, “Lucille, I know that, in the past, I’ve been quite the Cassanova-type, but there’s only one girl in all of Little Tokyo…make that the world…that I’ve ever really felt as though I could be truly happy with.” Lucille leaned closer to him, and asked, “Who’s the lucky girl, Guido…is it someone I know?” Guido looked deep into the pretty female ram’s brown eyes, and replied, “Yes Lucille…it’s you. I love you, and I have ever since I first met you.” Lucille’s eyes brimmed with tears of joy, and she launched her missiles again. She threw her arms around Guido, and said, “Oh Guido…I love you too!” He leaned down and kissed her gently, before handing her a small box. She opened it, and saw a gleaming pin inside, just like the one Speedy had given to Polly. She said, “Guido…does this mean…what I think it does?” He replied, “Yes, Lucille…I’d like to ask you if you’d be willing to become my girlfriend, as of now.” Lucille answered his question by kissing him, before she finally replied, “You can take that as a yes, Guido! Now then…let’s go meet the others.” Guido smiled, and hooked his arm around hers. They’d only taken a few steps, however, when the two drunks that Guido had taken out earlier came out to block their way. The taller of the two said, “Okay, hotshot…you got lucky last time…it’s our turn now…unless you let us have some fun with the little lady there.” Guido’s eyes narrowed, and he said, “Don’t you DARE lay a hand on Lucille, or I’ll PERSONALLY kick your sorry butts down to Princess Vi myself. I’m givin’ you two losers ONE chance…back off…or there’s gonna be trouble.” The goon said, “No way…I owe you for shovin’ me in the mud. YOU’RE DEAD MEAT!!!” He rushed Guido, only to have the umbrella-wielding samurai sidestep, and then level him with a powerful blow to the stomach from his umbrella. The other goon tried sneaking up behind Guido, only to have someone else tap him on the shoulder. He turned around, and saw Speedy standing there, with Polly just off to the side. Speedy said, “You leave my buddy alone, ya drunken slob, or I’m gonna make ya wish you’d stayed drinkin’ apple juice!” The idiot replied, “Buzz off, shorty. This is between me and Romeo over here.” Speedy replied, “Wrong, buddy…you mess with my friends, you mess with me.” Polly stepped forward, and said, “That goes double for me, and you REALLY don’t want to see me angry!” The idiot replied, “Hah…what’re you gonna do, slap me upside the head? I’m not in the habit of being afraid of Girl Scouts, so why don’t you run home and work on your merit badges?” Polly growled, and Speedy said, “Oh boy…now you’ve done it!” Polly shouted, “NOBODY CALLS ME A GIRL SCOUT AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!!! I’M GONNA USE YOUR GUTS FOR GARTERS, YOU DRUNKEN PIG!!!” Polly grabbed the goon’s wrist, wrenched his arm back, and then she kicked him clear across the fairground, all the way to the front doorstep of the Royal Palace. Guido followed suit with the other idiot, and when Princess Vi got her hands on them, along with the note that Guido had attached to one of them, she sent them both to Prisoners’ Island. Once that was cleared up, they all headed up to where the Karaoke Contest was being held. After they’d all entered their names, along with the songs that they would be singing, they waited patiently for their names to be called. Eventually, the judge called out, “OUR NEXT CONTESTANT…AND ONE OF THIS CITY’S GREAT HEROES…LET’S HEAR IT FOR SPEEDY CERVICHE!!!” Speedy walked up onto the stage, and the roar of the crowd was incredible. Speedy, however, could still hear the sweet voice of his lovely Polly, as she called out, “YOU CAN DO IT, SPEEDY!!!” He cleared his throat, and then he took the microphone, upon which, the crowd went silent. He said, “Good evening, and thank you for the applause…especially my lovely red-haired kitten, Polly. The song I’ll be performing for you tonight is called ‘Vestige’, by T.M. Revolution.” Speedy took a bottle of water from the ice-filled chest on the stage, downed a quick sip, and then he began singing. ‘Broken by the power of a clenched fist Desires and blood flow in the palm of my hand Endless wings and chains suit me well Their weight keeps me from going anywhere With young eyes that have only seen loss People think of stars that they won't be returning to Making our respective lights Bloom with our lives Life is what transports us Radiantly cut into everyone Are gentle vestiges of scars Even if it all ends, and I cry, I'll make my own relief In order to forget about everything...? Tomorrow falls from the sky like a feather Even though I wake up from a painful illusion If being hurt in delirium Is how I say "I'm alive" Then you are the undisappearing truth Left behind, here Are radiant and fleeting vestiges of us Making our respective lights Bloom with our lives Life is what transports us Radiantly cut into everyone Gently If being hurt in delirium Is how I say "I'm alive" Then you are the undisappearing truth Left behind, here Are radiant and fleeting vestiges of us’ Speedy took his bows, and then headed off the stage. He took his seat next to Polly, who immediately embraced him. She said, “Speedy…you’re wonderful! I didn’t know you could sing like that!” He blushed, and replied, “I’ll be honest, Polly…I didn’t know I had it in me either.” Guido said, “Hey buddy…that was really awesome, honest.” Speedy replied, “Thanks, Guido…by the way, I grabbed a water for the rest of ya. Here.” Guido smiled, and happily accepted the bottle of spring water, as did Polly, and Lucille. A short time later, the judge called out, “OUR NEXT CONTESTANT…GUIDO ANCHOVY, ANOTHER ONE OF OUR GALLANT SAMURAI PIZZA CATS!!! LET’S GIVE HIM A HAND!!!” Guido blushed, as he headed onto the stage. He took the mike, and said, “Thanks, to all of you…but I’d really like to thank my best friends, Speedy Cerviche, and Polly Esther, for allowing me to share this wonderful night with them. I’m not going to give a big speech, but I also want to thank my wonderful new girlfriend, Lucille Omitsu, who, as of tonight, has officially become my one and only sweetheart. In fact, I’m dedicating this song, ‘Loving You Is Paradise’, by Firehouse, to her.” Guido cleared his throat, and started singing, letting his love for Lucille flow out through the song. ‘I got lucky, I found heaven here on earth Oh, I can see it in your eyes When I look at you I see all my dreams come true Cause loving you is paradise I never knew before I met ya That angels could exist You are the one temptation, angel That I can't resist I believe forever, we can stay together Cause loving you is paradise Never say goodbye, our love will never die Cause loving you is paradise I wasn't lookin' for a miracle Oh, and then you came into me life You've opened my eyes, made me realize That lovin' you is paradise And now I know that angels do exist Cause your sweet loving baby Is what I can't resist I believe forever, we can stay together Cause loving you is paradise Never say goodbye, our love will never die Cause loving you is paradise I believe forever, we can stay together Cause loving you is paradise Never say goodbye, our love will never die Cause loving you is paradise Lovin' you is paradise Lovin' you is paradise Lovin' you is paradise!’ Guido bowed, as the crowd erupted in applause, and he then headed back to his seat. He saw Lucille unleash her missiles again, and they burst high overhead. The judge said, “OUR NEXT PERFORMER…MISS POLLY ESTHER, THE THIRD MEMBER OF THE SAMURAI PIZZA CATS…NOT TO MENTION THE TOUGHEST AND PRETTIEST FEMALE CAT IN LITTLE TOKYO!!! LET’S GIVE HER A ROUND OF APPLAUSE!!!” The crowd cheered her on, as she headed up to the stage, and she heard Speedy call out, “THAT’S MY KITTEN UP THERE!!!” Polly took the stage, and said, “I’d like to thank you all for your wonderful support, especially my wonderful boyfriend, Speedy, to whom I dedicate this song, called ‘Fields of Hope’, by Rie Tanaka.” Polly cleared her throat, and then she let her sweet voice flow out to touch Speedy’s heart through his ears. ‘Beneath a veil so cold, You deeply sleep, all alone The melody of prayer; on the lonely fields, a little light shined I watched as you dreamed You laughed like a child So dear, and yet so far - That is the promise of our future That one day, on a green morning, One day, we will make it there Because in this wintered sky We still believe Fields of Hope On the day we were born, we were embraced And now we search for those gentle hands again The melody of prayer; one vanishes, And all begins again; a powerless, painful continuation One day, to that green morning, We'll cross through all these nights Because that is the place each one of us searches for Now, within my own heart, I want to keep you warm So dear, and yet so far - In the name of peace Fields of Hope So dear, and yet so far - The fields of promise Fields of Hope Fields of Hope’ The audience burst into applause, especially Speedy, who pulled Polly into a passionate hug when she got back to her seat. After a few more performers went up, the judge said, “NOW…OUR FINAL CONTESTANT, MS. LUCILLE OMITSU!!!” The crowd cheered, and Lucille took the stage. She accepted the mike, and siad, “Thank you, all of you…especially you, Guido. This song, ‘Cloud 9’, by Maaya Sakamoto, is dedicated to you, with all my love.” She cleared her throat, and began singing. ‘I hear a voice calling. A voice, resounding through the sky that stopped crying. It has shot through the target of my heart. Chasing the summer I spent with you, I pass through the end of winter. The words I heard from you that day Are guiding me. The smell of a snow storm, High frequencies mixed in a harmony. There's more than enough memories, but If I turned around, I could lose just as much. So I recklessly went down that road, Praying for tomorrow. The wild sleeping within is driving us To the eternal, endless, irreplaceable dream. The aimless, simple, helpless days, We keep walking through them, Because we are the children of the journey. So you're guided? Do you keep running from something? (The endless world) Someday, when you've reached your destination, You'll be able to see the rest of your dream. Unchanging, fearless, our strength, We had it since the first time of despair. Unforgettable, inseparable, memories of the distant days, A tail with a small bone left. The wild sleeping within is driving us To the eternal, endless, irreplaceable dream. Like a climber ascending to the summit, I want to reach someday the place of beatitude. So let's keep on walking, Because we are the children of the journey. I hear a voice, From beyond the sky that stopped crying. I am waiting for you.’ The audience cheered, and Lucille’s missiles went off again. Once he’d conferred with his assistant, the Judge grabbed the microphone, and said, “NOW, OUR TWO WINNERS FOR THE MALE VOCALISTS ARE…SPEEDY CERVICHE AND GUIDO ANCHOVY!!! FOR THE FEMALES…POLLY ESTHER AND LUCILLE OMITSU!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!” Speedy pulled Polly into a passionate embrace, and so did Guido with Lucille. They headed up to claim their prize, which was a new television set. Guido walked Lucille home, after they left the carnival, while Speedy and Polly headed on back to the Pizza Parlor. Prisoners’ Island… Cheese was munching on some potato chips, while Jerry supervised the Ninja Crows, who were currently working on the robot’s main systems. Four of them were pulling a raft in, which was carrying a heavy crate full of ammo for the weapons, namely the shotguns, the bazookas, and the head-mounted machine guns. Jerry said, “Be careful with that, you twits! If you mess this up, the boss will blast all of us clear across the ocean!” One of the Ninja Crows said, “Don’t worry, Mr. Atrick, we’ve got it under control…” Just as he said that, the raft carrying the crate hit some submerged rocks, broke apart, and sank, taking the crate with it. The Ninja Crows all said, “Uh-oh…” in unison. Jerry turned around, and asked, “What are you yo-yo’s doing…where’s the crate?” One Ninja Crow said, “Uhm…ha-ha…you see…it’s..uh..” Jerry saw bits of the raft floating on the surface of the water, and shouted, “NICE GOING, YOU DIMWITTED FEATHERDUSTERS!! WE'LL BE LUCKY IF WE GET OFF THIS ISLAND BEFORE I END UP IN THE RETIREMENT HOME!!!” Cheese heard the ruckus, and said, “Which one of you idiots messed up this time?!” The Ninja Crows all began pointing at one another, and saying, “HE DID IT!!!” Cheese screamed, “DO YOU IDIOTS KNOW HOW FAR THIS IS GONNA SET US BACK?!” One of the Ninja Crows muttered, “Not as far back as you are. If your brain was any more primitive, you’d still be in the Stone Age…oops…” Cheese shouted, “ARE YOU SAYING THAT I'M EVEN DUMBER THAN PRINCE CHARLES?!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” He exploded, and Jerry said, “You dimwitted worm-munchers! Everything was going perfectly, until you goofed up and sank the boss’s crate, not to mention that you HAD to make him blow up again. If you’re going to make jokes about him, do it when he’s out of earshot…even though…between you and me…he’s so stupid, he couldn’t lead ants to a picnic.” He turned around, and saw Cheese standing there, with his face starting to turn red again. Jerry stammered, “Uhm…Cheesy…I didn’t mean it…it slipped…please try and control yourself…” Cheese screamed, “DID YOU JUST SAY THAT I’M DUMBER THAN ANGELINA JOLIE?!” Jerry muttered, “Not to mention twice as ugly as Michael Jackson…oh no…”Cheese shouted, “JERRY…I’M GETTING ANGRY…VERY…VERY…ANGRY!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” He blew up again, and Jerry got blasted into a tree. He said, “Maybe I should think about finding another line of work, before he blasts me into an early grave…ugh…” Cheese tripped and fell over into the sand, and said, “Once the world stops spinning, I’ll be the absolute ruler of Little Tokyo…oh look…I see pretty birdies, stars, and rainbows…ugh…” Cheese was unconscious seconds later, and the Ninja Crows began to rig a crane together out of vines, so that they could raise the sunken ammo crate, along with the boxes of supplies. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 27, 2008, 01:03:25 pm Thanks for the apology, and there's no hard feelings.
Here's Chapter Seven: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters associated with the series. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Seven: Don’t Mess With Speedy! On Prisoners’ Island, it was a scene of utter chaos, as Cheese was currently going ballistic on the Ninja Crows for losing the crate full of weapons, ammunition, and other supplies for their robot. “WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU COULDN’T FETCH THE DAMN CRATE OUT OF THE OCEAN?!?! DO YOU IDIOTS HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT THAT MEANS?!?!” Cheese screamed at the top of his lungs to the Ninja Crows. “I SERIOUSLY HOPE THAT ALL OF YOU LIKE THIS PLACE, CAUSE WE’RE GONNA BE HERE FOR ANOTHER FEW MONTHS!!!! CAN’T YOU MORONS DO ANYTHING RIGHT?!?!” “We tried Cheese, we tried! But we couldn’t get the crate out of the water!” Jerry cleared his throat, and said, “Oh, ya couldn’t get the crate out of the water…oh, pardon me, gentlemen…but if I remember correctly…..WHO KNOCKED IT INTO THE WATER IN THE FIRST PLACE?!?! DO YOU THINK I’M AN IDIOT?!?! THANKS TO YOU WE’RE STUCK HERE FOR GOD KNOWS HOW LONG!!!” “Well this nitwit tripped me while I was holding the crate!” one of the Ninja Crows said, pointing to the Crow that was closest to him. “Me?! YOU got in my way when I was holding some guns!” he replied. “That’s right, blame someone else!” a third said. “If you both would keep your mind on what we’re doing..” “OH, really? Look who’s talking, you’re always drifting off, I bumped into you..” “Yeah, I bumped into you as well, I tripped over your foot..” “QUIET!!! YOU DIMWITS, YOU HORRID BRAIN DEAD JERKS!!” Jerry said. “All of you are to blame for this! No thanks to you, God knows how long we’re going to be here while we smuggle in more parts!” “Well, this jerk did this.. “Me? It was you..” “No way, it was you..” “ENOUGH, YOU IMBICILES!!! I’VE HAD IT!!! YOU’RE ALL GIVING ME A HEADACHE!!! I NEED ASPIRIN!!!! ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH!!!” “Look out!”, Jerry called out, as he and the Ninjas dove for cover…just in time for Cheese to blow. “Actually, for you to get your tantrum out of the way so early….I’m relieved…I really am.” “Arrgh…just wait until I get Tokyo in the palm of my hand….has anyone seen my hand?” He said, just before he fell over. Back in Little Tokyo… A few weeks later, Speedy was in his bedroom counting out the money he had saved up so far. For the past few weeks, he had been saving one third of his weekly pay in the false bottom of the top drawer of his dresser. The dresser had been a gift from his Dad when he left to be a Samurai, and the top drawer was specially designed with the false bottom to keep important things in…like this money he had stored. He counted it twice. OK, almost there. Hopefully just another few weeks and he should have just enough. He gathered up the money and put it back in the false bottom, and then he got ready for the new day. The restaurant was full to bursting that day, to the obvious delight of Francine, who liked nothing better than busy days! She ran over to pick up the ringing phone. “Samurai Pizza Cats, home of the hot and spicy. OK, will do. Polly, I need a jumbo sausage and pepperoni.” “Coming right up,” Polly said, starting to make it. “Hey there, Nephew!” a loud voice came just then from the front door. Speedy turned fast to see his Uncle Irving and Aunt Lydia come through the door. “Uncle Irving! Aunt Lydia!”, he cried, rushing over to hug them. “Hi, Speedy!” Irving said, hugging his nephew. Polly rushed over to hug them as well. “Hello, Mr. and Mrs. Cerviche!” “Oh, you’re a grown-up now Dear, you can call us Irving and Lydia,” Irving said, as Lydia hugged Polly. “I didn’t know you were coming!”, Polly said happily. “Well, we were doing some shopping downtown, and we thought we may as well pop in and say hi!” “Hi. Come in, have a seat, can we get you anything?”, Speedy asked. Irving and Lydia sat in a nearby booth. “Can we get a menu?” “Of course!” Speedy said, grabbing one and getting them both some sodas. “Hey, Speedy,” Francine said, “The pizza is ready to be delivered to the North end.” “OK, got it,” Speedy took the pizza and went over to Polly, kissing her gently. “Be right back. I love you, Kitten.” “I love you, Pussycat. Hurry back my Charming Samurai,” Polly kissed him again, to the shock of several nearby customers. “What the…”, one muttered. “I wouldn’t believe this if I didn’t just see it,” his friend said. “Correct me if I’m wrong, but isn’t this the same guy she used to argue with a lot?” “Yeah, and didn’t she even say she DIDN’T like him cause he’s too goofy? Now she’s all over him, making out with him, can‘t get enough of him?! Come ON, from what I saw, he’s still goofy…and he ain’t even all that handsome! Geez, what happened to not liking goofy guys?” His friend snickered. “If ya ask me this is all out of pity anyway. I mean, he DID just save all of us from this Comet, this is more than likely her way of thanking him. Why else would she go out with a goofy short clown like that?” He snickered, but he noticed his friend didn’t join in. In fact, he was looking over his shoulder with a pale white face. “What?” The first customer asked. His friend cleared his throat. “Oh…hi, Polly…” He said slowly he turned around and saw Polly staring at him, holding a frying pan against the palm of her hand. The look she was giving both of them would have melted glass. ”Do you have some sort of problem?”, She asked in a murderously calm voice. “Uh…” the customer stuttered. “Did you just insult my boyfriend?!”, she asked fiercely. “Uh..” “Listen,” Polly said, in a murderous tone that grew angrier and louder. I don’t know why you had to butt into something that’s none of your business!!! How dare you..” she began. “How DARE YOU?! Look, this isn’t even ABOUT you! It’s about ME and SPEEDY, and we have NOTHING to prove to any of you, got it?! You have to be lower than dirt, saying things like that about my Speedy..” “YOUR Speedy? You loved to fight with him before, and now all of a sudden he’s ’your Speedy‘?!” “YES!!! I happen to be in love with him, and he loves me! Now, you better concentrate on getting your own lives, and staying OUT of ours, so we can get on with our relationship!” “Hah, it’ll never last, those two are like night and day..” his friend couldn’t stop whispering. “Yeah, who wants a twit like him anyway?” “WHAT DID YOU SAY?!?!” Polly said, coming at them. “DID YOU JUST CALL MY BOYFRIEND A TWIT?!?! HOW DARE YOU, YOU DON’T KNOW HIM! WHERE DO YOU GET THE RIGHT TO SAY ANY OF THOSE THINGS?!?! I OUGHT TA GIVE YA SOMETHING RIGHT NOW JUST FOR THAT!!! YOU LISTEN YOU JERK..SPEEDY HAPPENS BE OF MORE WORTH THAN EITHER ONE OF YOU TWO RIGHT NOW!!! HE’S KIND, SWEET, DECENT AND CARING..IN OTHER WORDS…THE POLAR OPPOSITE OF BOTH OF YOU!!! YOU’D BETTER APOLOGIZE RIGHT NOW, OR I’LL MAKE YA!!” “For telling the truth? Hey, face it, Polly, he’s an idiot! I don’t know what you see in him….” That did it. Forgetting that she was in a restaurant, she grabbed the punk by his neck, threw him onto the floor, and pummled him mercilessly about the body. “He’s not a twit and I’ll make ya sorry you ever said that!!! You do NOT call my Speedy names!!!!” “But come on, he is kinda short..” “SO WHAT AND WHO CARES!!!! FROM HERE HE LOOKS JUST FINE! IN MY EYES HE’S THE MOST HANDSOME CAT IN ALL OF LITTLE TOKYO!! IF I EVER CATCH YOU MAKING FUN OF HIM AGAIN..” “Hey, I call them like I see them…” “SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!” She then flung him out of the restaurant with all her might as his friend ran out after him. She brushed her hands together satisfactorily….and her eyes fell upon the shocked faces of Irving and Lydia! Speedy had come back by then and was staring with shock as well. “OH my God! “Polly gasped. “Oh..I just made a fool of myself in front of Speedy’s Aunt and Uncle! OH..oh no! They must think I’m some sort of crazy loon!!” Her face turned as red as her hair, and she raced outside. Polly sat upon one of the outside tables with her arms folded, trying to hide, knowing it wouldn’t do any good anyway. God, she was so embarrassed! She knew her temper was bad, but to blow up in front of her boyfriend’s family?! They must think she was bipolar, or too hot, or cold-hearted! They might be afraid of her, which as the LAST thing she wanted! She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned to see the concerned face of her boyfriend. “Speedy, I’m sorry,” she said. “I didn’t mean to embarrass you in front of your Aunt and Uncle, and I don’t blame you if you are!” She felt as if her heart was shattered. This was it- it was all over. Her damn temper had destroyed the most magical relationship of her life! “I..I just couldn’t let that arrogant jerk talk about you like that! I completely forgot your family was here, and I know they’re probably embarrassed having to witness that….” “Polly,” Speedy said. “Hold it.” She looked up at Speedy’s face. He was…grinning? Speedy put his hands on her shoulders and gazed into her eyes. “Polly, I don’t want you to apologize. I’m not mad at you, and Uncle Irving and Aunt Lydia aren’t embarrassed at all. In fact, they’re proud of what you did. I was just shocked that that jerk could say things like that. He doesn’t know us! Who is he to say that what we have isn’t real?” “I just want you to hear me say this, Speedy. I’m NOT dating you out of pity. That’s the furthest thing from my mind.” “I know,” Speedy said softly. “Believe me, I’d never believe what anyone says over what my heart tells me about you.” Speedy pulled her into his arms.”I’m not embarrassed by what happened. Your temper is just part of you. I don’t mind it, I’m used to it. I’m honored you would defend what we have!” Polly sighed with happiness, thanking God she found the most caring, understanding Cat in all of Tokyo. “I love you, Polly,” he whispered. “Unconditionally.” Polly looked up. “I love you, too.” “Come here,” Speedy said, pulling Polly into his arms, his lips finding hers in a tender kiss that started soft and gradually built in passion. At that moment Polly’s heart was full to bursting and she wrapped her arms around Speedy’ s neck as the kisses got deeper and deeper, his arms circled her back, caressing her shoulders, running down her sides, until they lost all track of where they were. For one of the first times, Polly didn’t care that they were right outside the pizza parlor, making out in public. Customers shot them amused looks as they were going inside, but Polly didn’t care. She as with someone who truly, honestly, completely loved her. They were startled apart by the sound of clapping. They looked up to see Irving and Lydia happily smiling and clapping for them. “Hi, Dear,” Lydia smiled. “That was some speech you gave…” “I didn’t mean to be so harsh in front of you..” “Honey you don’t have to apologize for that, that little punk had it coming. If you hadn’t said something, I would’ve!” Irving said. “Ya know, Dear, I don’t think you ever cease to amaze me!” Lydia smiled. “In fact I was proud you did that! I wanted to tell everyone there what great taste my nephew has!” “Isn’t that the truth?” Speedy said, looking at Polly with pure love. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on January 28, 2008, 01:42:15 am As an apology to my earlier rude post, I thought I'd post some Speedy+Polly fan-favour. As we all know you love it. You were doing so good. But you had to wuss out and apologize for doing nothing wrong except making me laugh my tail feathers off. You can't give in to your words, no matter what people think of them. :D ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on January 28, 2008, 04:11:58 am As an apology to my earlier rude post, I thought I'd post some Speedy+Polly fan-favour. As we all know you love it. You were doing so good. But you had to wuss out and apologize for doing nothing wrong except making me laugh my tail feathers off. You can't give in to your words, no matter what people think of them. :D ~Burkey VVhat do you mean by that? He vvas being the bigger person by saying that! Razgriz27 told me you apologized to him for critisizing our story...are you gonna turn right around and critisize it again? Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on January 28, 2008, 07:42:12 pm I wasn't apologizing for the criticism, I was apologizing for being rude about it. Criticizing and being rude can coincide but are too very different things. Why should one be rude when giving criticism if there are nice ways to go about it? Burkey, don't make me lose my respect for you...your posts always make me laugh. I don't want to be one of those people that just attacks everyone for no reason, I want to actually be a contributing member to this thriving SPC community. Besides, I needed an excuse to upload that picture. :P (Woot, hit Nyanki status) He apologized, since he realized he was wrong, so let's not pick on him, Burkey. Like Pollygirl said, let's keep it friendly here. With that said, Here's the next chapter: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Songs for this chapter: Speedy’s song to Polly: ‘The Wonder of You’-Elvis Presley Polly’s song to Speedy: ‘I Turn To You’-Diane Warren Chapter Eight: Love is in the Air As Guido came back from his delivery run, he saw the punk that Polly had tossed out of the restaurant, and he asked, “What happened to you? You look like a truck ran you over…twice.” The idiot replied, “Your hellcat friend Polly’s the reason…just because I told her the truth about her shrimp of a boyfriend…” Guido grabbed him, and said, through gritted teeth, “DON’T YOU CALL MY FRIEND SPEEDY A SHRIMP, OR I’LL SQUASH YOU LIKE A BUG, GOT IT?!” The guy replied, “Hey…look who’s talking. You used to treat him like dirt, from what I’ve heard, and now, you say he’s your friend…HAH!!! I pity him, really. Not only is he short, and ugly, but he’s got a bipolar girlfriend, and a so-called ‘best’ friend that treats him like dirt…not to mention that dumb girl behind you, the one that packs the missiles in her hair. Why’d you choose her, anyway…do you pity her ‘cuz nobody else wants her, on account of her being almost too stupid to breath?” Lucille heard the last comment, and she started crying, causing a volley of her missiles to go flying everywhere. Guido shouted, “THAT’S IT, YOU ARROGANT PIECE OF GUTTER TRASH!!! NOT ONLY DID YOU INSULT MY TWO CO-WORKERS…BUT NOW YOU JUST INSULTED THE ONE I LOVE!!! WHEN I GET DONE WITH YOU, YOU’LL BE WISHING THAT POLLY HAD DRAGGED YOU DOWN TO SEE PRINCESS VI!!!” Guido slammed his fist into the punk’s stomach, before kicking him upside the head, and finally, he threw him head first into the dumpster in back of the restaurant. He stared into the other punk’s eyes, and said, “You wanna say something, or are you gonna actually be smart, unlike your buddy?” The kid replied, “You really need to learn to accept it…Speedy and Polly…those two just won’t last. He’ll either walk out on her for her temper, or she’ll end up killing him. Face it…Speedy’s a stupid little moron, and Polly’s a maniacal hothead, who thinks she’s the greatest thing since sliced bread. They’ll never…” Speedy grabbed the idiot, and said, “I see that my girlfriend didn’t knock enough sense into you…SO LET ME DO IT!!!” Speedy’s foot slammed into the idiot’s crotch, and Polly even joined in, whacking the idiot upside the head, before Speedy dropped him into the dumpster. Speedy said, “Thanks, Guido…honestly, I really do appreciate how you’ve been doing so much to help me out lately. You don’t have to go out of your way like that…I’ve already forgiven you, but thanks anyway.” Guido replied, “Speedy, after the way I treated you for so long, I’m gonna do whatever I can to help you out, as my way of saying that I’m sorry.” The two of them shook hands, and Polly then walked up and kissed Speedy, while Guido went to comfort Lucille. Once he’d taken Lucille a short distance from the Pizza Parlor, Guido said, “Lucille, none of the stuff that goon said about you is true. He’s the dumb one, for being too blind to see how sweet and wonderful you are.” She hugged him, and replied, “Guido…you’re wonderful, honestly. Thank you so much for cheering me up.” He replied, “Hey…anything for the girl I love. I was just thinking…I wanna do something really special for Speedy, as a way to show him just how much I’ve changed. In fact, I’m gonna go talk with him right now, and then I’ll take you out to see a movie.” Lucille replied, “Okay, Guido. I’ll wait right here for you.” Guido kissed her cheek, and then he headed inside to talk to Speedy. Speedy’s room… Speedy was in the process of getting ready to head out with Polly, when he heard a knock on his door. He said, “Come in…”. The door slid open, revealing Guido. Speedy said, “Hey buddy. What’s up?” Guido took a look around, and then he said, “Listen, Speedy…I really do feel as if I should do something special for you and Polly, so if you could think of anything at all, just let me know.” Speedy replied, “Honestly, Guido…you’ve stood up for the two of us, and you apologized, so we’re all set.” Guido shook his head, and replied, “I insist, Speedy. I really wanna do something special for you and Polly. I know she means a lot to you, so if I can help you out in any way, just tell me.” Speedy replied, “Well…I am tryin’ to save money for an engagement ring, and I figure that I’ll have enough for one in about two more weeks.” Guido replied, “Actually…I think I can help ya there, buddy.” Guido reached into his pocket, and pulled out an envelope. Speedy opened it, and inside, he found an additional twelve thousand yen, in addition to the eighteen thousand that he’d already saved up. Speedy said, “Guido…I-I can’t take this…it’s your money…I thought you were gonna take Lucille out for a date. How are you gonna do it, if you don’t have…” Guido replied, “Take it easy, Speedy…I’ve got plenty of money set aside for my date with Lucille. No more arguments…go find the nicest engagement ring that you can, since nothing but the best is good enough for a wonderful girl like Polly. Take care, and I’ll see you later.” Speedy shook Guido’s hand, and said, “Thanks, buddy. You have fun with Lucille!” Guido and Speedy hugged one another, as if they were brothers, before heading off on their separate ways. Little Tokyo Palace… Princess Vi was overjoyed…she’d just gotten a letter from her mother, Empress Frieda, which stated that she’d be coming home for an extended visit, and would be arriving within a week. She immediately ordered all of her servants to start cleaning the palace from top to bottom, and she commissioned the royal tailors to make her the finest dress possible. As she doled out the marching orders, one of her servants said, “Good lord…with as much hot air as she’s got, we could float a blimp.” Princess Vi heard him, and shouted, “WHAT WAS THAT?!!!” The servant frantically waved his hands in front of him, and stammered, “N-Nothing, Your Highness…honestly! I…” Vi screamed, “SILENCE!!! GUARDS, TAKE HIM TO PRISONERS’ ISLAND!!!” Her guards arrived, and dragged the poor servant off. After that, she summoned Al Dente, and ordered him to help get the city ready for her mother’s arrival. Little Tokyo Mall… Speedy was browsing through the engagement rings, looking for the perfect one for the pretty female Samurai that had completely captured his heart. After a half hour of searching, his eyes finally lit on one that he knew was meant for her, and her alone. It was a white-gold band, with a heart-shaped blue diamond in the center, surrounded by rubies. The diamond was in the exact same shade of blue as Polly’s eyes, and the rubies made him think of her soft, flowing hair. He waved for one of the salespeople, and the young woman walked over. She said, “Hello, young man. Is there a particular ring that strikes your fancy?” Speedy replied, “Yeah…that one right there. The one with the rubies surrounding the blue diamond.” The woman replied, “That one’s the best we’ve got in the store…I bet the young lady you have in mind means quite a bit to you, am I right?” Speedy smiled, and said, “Yeah, she does…I’ve known her ever since we were both kittens, and yet…I never realized just how much I loved her, until just before the comet was about to hit. After I destroyed it…I knew I had to tell her…she’s the only one that I’ll ever love.” The woman replied, “Wait a minute…you’re…the one that…You’re Speedy Cerviche, aren’t you?” Speedy replied, “Yeah…but please don’t announce it…I’m really not too fond of big crowds. How much for the ring?” The woman blushed, and replied, “I’m sorry if I embarrassed you…the ring comes to a total of twenty thousand. Speedy handed her the money, and she slid the ring into a small blue velvet box, which Speedy gratefully accepted from her, before heading out. He checked his remaining money, and saw to his relief, that he had plenty left over to take Polly out to dinner tonight. Over at Lucille’s Teahouse… Lucille was just getting done with the sweeping of her floor, when she heard someone knocking. Sliding her door open, she saw Guido standing there, a bouquet of roses in his hands, and a smile on his face. He said, “Pretty flowers, for the prettiest girl in the city.” Lucille smiled, and then she took the flowers from him, and set them into a vase on her table. Guido said, “Well…shall we head out?” Lucille replied, “Sure…just let me get my purse.” Lucille got herself ready to go, and then she and Guido headed for the movie theater. Once they arrived, Guido paid for both their tickets, and the refreshments, and they headed in to watch Hairspray. Back at the Pizza Parlor… Speedy walked in, humming a tune to himself. Good Bird said, “Hey buddy. Where’d ya go?” Speedy replied, “Can you keep a secret?” Good Bird replied, “Sure. My beak’s sealed tighter than Cheese’s wallet at a charity event.” Speedy replied, “I just bought Polly an engagement ring, but I don’t want her to know, until I ‘pop the question’ to her.” Good Bird replied, “You can count on me, buddy. I won’t tell anybody else.” Speedy replied, “Thanks, Good Bird…I knew I could count on ya. I’m gonna go hide this, and then I’ll get to work on makin’ dinner for Polly.” Good Bird smiled, and he then headed off to see Carla. Meanwhile, Speedy headed up to his room, stashed the ring, and then he went into the kitchen to get dinner ready. A few hours later, he placed dishes, cups, silverwear, and a candle, on one of the outdoor tables, along with some insect-repelling candles, and he then went to find Polly. He knocked on her door, and asked, “Can I come in, Kitten?” Polly replied, “Sure, Speedy. What’s up?” Speedy walked in, and replied, “I’ve got a special surprise for you, Pollyanna…let’s go outside.” Polly closed her eyes, and covered them with her hands, after which, Speedy picked her up, and carried her down the stairs, and out to the table. He said, “Okay, kitten…you can look now.” Polly opened her eyes, and what she saw before her, made her heart melt. Speedy had cooked all of her favorites…ramen, beef teriyaki, wonton soup, jiaozi, nikuman buns, and he’d even placed some bottles of Pepsi in a cooler filled with ice, right by the table. She said, “Speedy…this is just…my god…you truly are a wonderful cat, and I don’t care what anybody else says about you. I love you, Speedy Cerviche.” Speedy set her down on her feet, and replied, “I love you too, Polly Esther. You may have a hot temper, but you’ve also got a heart of gold, and you’re always there for anyone who needs you, you’re kind, generous, and there’s nobody else on Earth, that I could ever love as much as I love you. I’ll always be with you, Polly…forever.” Polly pulled Speedy into a long, deep kiss, and then they sat down to eat dinner. Once they finished dinner, Speedy said, “Polly, I’ve got a song I’d like to sing for you, called ‘The Wonder Of You’, by Elvis Preseley.” Polly replied, “Speedy, that sounds like the perfect song, for a night like this one.” Speedy hugged her, and then he cleared his throat, and started to serenade Polly. ‘When no-one else can understand me When everything I do is wrong You give me hope and consolation You give me strength to carry on And you’re always there to lend a hand In everything I do That’s the wonder The wonder of you And when you smile the world is brighter You touch my hand and I’m a king Your kiss to me is worth a fortune Your love for me is everything I guess I’ll never know the reason why You love me like you do That’s the wonder… The wonder of you!’ Once Speedy’s song finished, Polly threw her arms around him, and said, “Speedy, that was so beautiful!” He replied, “Not anywhere near as beautiful as you are, my sweet Pollyanna.” She blushed, and then she kissed him on the nose. After that, she said, “Speedy, I’ve got one for you too, called ‘I Turn To You’, by Diane Warren.” Polly cleared her throat, and let her love for Speedy flow out through the song. ‘When I'm lost, in the rain In your eyes I know I'll find the light To light my way When I'm scared, losing ground When my world is going crazy You can turn it all around, yes And when I'm down you're there Pushing me to the top You're always there giving me all you've got For a shield, from the storm For a friend, for a love to keep me safe and warm I turn to you For the strength, to be strong For the will to carry on For everything you do, for everything that's true I turn to you, yes When I lose, the will to win I just reach for you and I can reach The sky again, I can do, anything 'Cause your love is so amazing 'Cause your love inspires me And when I need a friend You're always on my side Giving me faith taking me through the night, yeah For a shield (for a shield), from the storm (from the storm) For a friend, for a love to keep me safe and warm (For a love to keep me safe and warm) I turn to you (I turn to you) For the strength (for the strength), to be strong For the will to carry on, oh For everything you do I turn to you, yeah, ohhh For the arms to be my shelter through all the rain For truth that will never change For someone to lean on For a heart I can rely on through anything For the one who, I can run to, ohh I... Turn to you...ohhh yeah For a shield , from the storm For a friend, for a love to keep me safe and warm (To keep me safe and warm, yeah) I turn to you (I turn to you) For the strength (for the strength), to be strong For the will to carry on, oh ohh For everything you do (everything you do) For everything that's true For everything you do, ohh For everything that's true I turn to you!’ As soon as she finished singing, Polly felt Speedy’s arms fold around her shoulders, and his lips met hers. After they kissed for a short time, Speedy walked Polly up to a nearby hill, where they spent the next few hours watching the stars, before finally heading home and going to bed for the night. Guido walked Lucille back to her teahouse, and said, “Goodnight, my lovely Lucille. I’ll see you tomorrow.” She gently kissed him on the cheek, and replied, “Thank you, Guido…for the movie, for dinner, and everything else. Goodnight.” Guido waited until Lucille was safely inside, and then he headed for home. Prisoners’ Island… Cheese was still fuming at the Ninja Crows for their clumsy antics, which had cost them a crate full of ammunition, building materials, and food. One of the Ninja Crows came up to him, and said, “Hey Seymour…we managed to get some ammo for at least one of the weapons…the machine guns in the head. That’s the only ammo we could salvage from the ocean. The replacement supplies will be here in three weeks.” Cheese screamed, “THREE WEEKS?!!! YOU CLUMSY, IDIOTIC WALKING FEATHERDUSTER…IF IT WEREN’T FOR YOU AND YOUR YO-YO FRIENDS PLAYING TIDDLEYWINKS, WHILE YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE BRINGING THAT AMMO IN, WE’D ALREADY BE RID OF THE PIZZA CATS, AND I’D BE THE NEW RULER OF LITTLE TOKYO!!!” The Ninja Crow stammered, “Uh, Boss…I know you’re angry, but don’t you at least wanna see the test-firing of the head-mounted machine guns?” Cheese replied, “I suppose I’ll come and look. It’ll be the first thing that you idiots have managed not to mess up since we got here.” The Ninja Crow led Cheese over to where Jerry was supervising five more of his idiot henchmen, as they loaded ammo into the robot’s head, the only fully assembled portion of their new weapon. The legs, arms, and body were all just metal framework, with no armor covering, and Cheese said, “This better work, or someone’s going to be in SERIOUS trouble, Jerry!” Jerry replied, “Don’t get your whiskers in a twist, Seymour…I personally made certain that this demonstration goes like clockwork.” Cheese said, “Well then…let’s see it.” Jerry handed Cheese a set of earplugs, and then he gave the signal to one of the Ninja Crows to fire the guns. The Ninja Crow pressed a button on the control panel in front of him, and the huge 60mm machine guns erupted with a massive roar. Cheese saw that a six-hundred foot stretch of palm trees had been turned into sawdust, and he smiled. He said, “Nicely done! Now all we have to do, is wait until the rest of the parts get here. After that, it’s all over for the Samurai Pizza Cats…HAHAHAHA!!!” One of the Ninja Crows muttered, “I’m surprised the palm trees didn’t keel over when he walked out here…when was the last time he bathed or brushed his teeth?” Jerry said, “Shut up, you idiot! Do you want him to hear…you…oh no…not again…” Cheese started going red, and screamed, “ARE YOU SAYING I SMELL WORSE THAN ROTTING CHEESE AND OLD GYM SOCKS COMBINED?!!! I DON’T SEE YOU WINNING ANY ‘BEST HYGIENE’ AWARDS ANY TIME SOON, YOU LAMEBRAINED IDIOTIC TURKEYS!!! I’VE GOT SUCH A NASTY HEADACHE…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Jerry shouted, “RUN!!!” He and the Ninja Crows tried to escape, but it was too late. Cheese exploded, and they all went flying. Jerry said, “One of these days, I’m going to become a doctor like my mother said, that is…if he doesn’t kill me first…” Jerry fell over backwards, and peace and quiet returned to Prisoners’ Island, at least for now. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 03, 2008, 09:00:34 pm Quote Razgriz27 told me you apologized to him for critisizing our story...are you gonna turn right around and critisize it again? Actually, I didn't apologize for critizing your story, as I said I wouldn't ever take back what I said, because WHAT I said was very validated and true. No. I apologized for a PM message I sent in a temporary moment of anger that occured when I was browsing these forums. That is which I apologized for. So what's done is done. :) My thoughts on your stories still stand, and this post just reaffirms those feelings. ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 03, 2008, 09:56:38 pm I'd just appreciate it if you could state your opinions in a way that doesn't make either Pollygirl or I feel as though our stories aren't worth reading. We spend a lot of time on these stories, and having someone do nothing but pick on us for every little thing, it makes us feel really bad. What you've read so far is how Pollygirl and I prefer to write our stories, and that's not going to change, so please, if you don't like it, don't read it.
That said, here's the next chapter. Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Nine: The Proposal Speedy came bounding down the stairs on another bright morning, and entered the brightly lit kitchen. As usual, Polly was beginning to prepare the ingredients for the morning rush, but she quickly lifted her head to meet the eyes of her handsome boyfriend, who she greeted with a kiss. “Morning, Speedy!” “Morning, Polly.” he smiled as he began to get the breakfast things together. “So…where do ya wanna go tonight, Kitten?” She smiled. “Well, I was thinking..we’ve been out almost every night this week, so what if we stay in tonight? I’ll cook the dinner myself, and it’ll be just you and me.” “That sounds perfect.” “Well, you made me dinner a few weeks ago, so now I’ll make you dinner. 8 tonight, Speedy?” “You bet!” Speedy gave her another peck on the lips. “Care to join me for breakfast?” “Of course. Meet ya out front in 20 minutes.” Prisoners’ Island… “OK, let’s go over the testing one more time,” Jerry said. The Ninja Crows groaned, since they all really wanted to take a break. “Do what he says,” Cheese said. “THIS time you morons are NOT gonna screw this up! Do it until you all get blisters, you hear me!!! For once, you morons are doing something right!” “Aw, but Cheese, have a heart! We’ve been practicing all night!”, one of the Ninja Crows complained. “Yeah! My back hurts!”, said another one. Cheese responded by hitting him on the top of his head with his fan. “Now your front hurts, too! GET BACK UP ON THAT ROBOT AND START AGAIN WITH THE TESTING!!!” Another Crow came running up to Cheese. “Sir, look what finally came! It’s the crate we’ve been waiting for!” “About time, too! Jerry, hurry up and get these things loaded in there!” “Yes, Sir, but before I do, the Crows want to know when we can have a lunch break?” “LUNCH break?! Are you kidding me?! DO YA WANNA GET OFF THIS DAMN ISLAND OR NOT?! WE’RE TRYING TO MAKE THIS PLAN FOOLPROOF, AND THEY WANNA EAT?!!! YOU ALL MAKE ME SO ANGRY!!!” “Cheesy, they didn’t mean it!!! They didn’t, they were just hungry!! It’s too soon to blow up, Cheesy, please!” Too late. Before Jerry knew it, he was covered in soot. Cheese picked himself up weakly. “Oooh…I changed my mind..let’s all take a little nap…” he muttered before collapsing in a heap. Back in Little Tokyo… Later that afternoon, Polly approached Francine. “Hey, Francine? I’d like to know if I can take my lunch early today. I’m gonna go meet Lucille, and pick up some things for tonight.” “OK, sure.”, Francine replied. “Thanks…and I also need a half hour off so I can start cooking the dinner tonight.” “A half hour?” “Please, Francine? I’ll punch in a half hour earlier to make up for it tomorrow! This dinner really means a lot to me, and I really want everything to be perfect tonight.” Francine shook her head. “You’re really going all out for this, aren’t ya?” Polly smiled. “Yeah…this is an important moment in our relationship. I’m cooking the whole dinner myself.” “I can give ya a hand if ya want.” “Thanks, Francine, but I really wanna do this myself.” Guido went into Speedy’s room after him, and waited for Speedy to close the door. “So…tonight’s the big night, eh Speedy?” “Yep,” Speedy said happily. He took out the box from the false bottom of the drawer and opened it, showing it to him. Guido looked at it and whistled. “That is beautiful!” “Yeah,” Speedy said, gazing upon it with love. “And I’m gonna give it to Polly tonight.” “Congratulations, Buddy!” “She didn’t say yes yet.” “She’s gonna, Speedy! You’re a great guy, and believe me, no one deserves this more than you.” “Thanks, Guido.” He sighed. “Thanks a lot for not telling Francine anything about this.” “Hey, Fran’s a sweetheart and all, but the girl can’t keep a secret if her life depended on it!” “Isn’t that the truth? So, where are ya taking Lucille tonight?” “I’m gonna take her to a late-night picnic in the park, and then walk around a bit and watch the stars. we’ll probably be back around ten-thirty tonight.” “OK, that ought ta give me enough time.” “Plenty of time,” Guido stuck out his hand. “And I wish you every bit of luck.” Polly entered the restaurant, lugging a couple of bags in her arms. She called out, “OK, I’m back.” She took out a bright purple dress and held it up to her. “Francine, what do you think of this dress? Do you think it’s nice enough?” “Oh, that’s a lovely dress Polly!” “Thanks, I really wanna look special tonight.” She looked through the other bags carefully. “Tablecloth, candle holders, white candles, matches, flowers, vase…” “Uh, Polly? Did you buy any actual FOOD?” “That’s later on tonight after work, speaking of which, Francine..” “Yeah?” “Do you have any..uh…plans tonight?” “Plans?” “Yeah...you know...plans to be OUT of the Pizza Parlor tonight? For a little while?” Francine gave her a smug look. “Subtlety isn’t your strong point, Polly. OK, I’ll find something to do tonight that’ll take me out for a few hours.” Polly gave her a hug. “Thanks, Fran, I appreciate this so much!” That afternoon, Speedy made his way over to the home of Polly’s parents. He had been over here so many times when he was a kitten, that he could have found his way here blindfolded. Taking a deep breath, he knocked on the door. Polly’s mother opened it, her eyes lighting up when she saw Speedy. “Why, hello, Speedy! what a pleasant surprise! How are you, Dear?” “I’m just fine, Mrs. Esther. How are you?” “We’re good. How are things at the restaurant?” “Can’t complain, and you?” “Fine, fine. Do come in, Dear. Make yourself at home. I’ll brew you up some tea.” “Thanks.” “So,” Mrs. Esther said, when Speedy had been served his tea, “What brings you to our neck of the woods, Speedy? Just passing through…or is my daughter driving you nuts?” Speedy laughed. “Nothing could be farther from the truth.” “How’s my daughter?” “She’s great.” “Tane, I’m home!” Came a familiar voice, as Polly’s father came into the room. “Who are you talking to…oh hello, Speedy! Isn’t this a nice surprise! How are ya, Son?” “I’m great. Never better.” “How’s Polly?” “Just fine.” “So, what brings you here, Speedy?” “Well, I’d like to talk to both of you about something, if I may, Sir.” Mr. Esther sat down next to his wife. “Did Polly blow up severely again? I’m sorry about that. If she did, than her mother and I will have a frank talk with her..” “Oh no, Sir!” Speedy said. “No, nothing like that. Not at all.” Mr. Esther relaxed. "That’s a relief. So, what’s going on?” Speedy took a deep breath. “Mr. and Mrs. Esther..I’m deeply in love with your daughter. Polly…she means the world to me, and I love her more than absolutely anything.” Mr. And Mrs. Esther‘s eyes lit up at that. “And so..I’d like to know, may I please have the honor of Polly’s hand in marriage?” Mr. Esther leaned forward. “Speedy, Son, would you mind repeating that?” “May I please have the honor of Polly’s hand in marriage?” Mr. Esther put his hands in the air and sank to his knees. “Marriage?! OHHH, finally, finally!!!” He stood up. “Of course, of course you may! Of course!” He shook Speedy’s hand. “I’ve always wanted this! I did!” He hugged Speedy. “Tane?” he looked at his wife. She beamed. “Welcome to the family!”, as she hugged him. “Thank you, Mr. And Mrs. Esther! Thank you both! I promise, I’ll be the most honest and faithful husband in the whole world, and I’ll take good care of her!” “We already know you will!”, Tane said happily. “I couldn’t be prouder than to have you marry my daughter!” Polly’s father said, hugging Speedy again. Later that day, the restaurant had closed up. Guido had already left for his date with Lucille, and Polly was behind the counter beginning to cook her special dinner for herself and Speedy. Francine was counting out the money they had earned that day. Polly nervously finished tossing the salad…then proceeded to put it in the oven! Francine raised her eyebrows at this but kept counting. “Oh, I hope this dinner goes well tonight.” “Polly, of course it will! NO reason why it shouldn’t. Don’t be so nervous.” “I’m not nervous, not at all!” POlly said. “Oh, really? Then why are you baking the salad?” Polly grabbed a pot holder and pulled the salad out, looking at it. “It’s done.” “You sure you don’t want my help?” “No thanks, Francine! I’m fine.” She put the rolls on a baking sheet, slid them in the oven and turned it on. “What are you making anyway?” “First, we’re having wonton soup, then the next course is chicken teriyaki and orange duck, with salad and dinner rolls, and for dessert, a rich chocolate mousse.” “Sounds yummy!” “Yeah..now are you..” “Yes, Polly. There’s an outdoor concert playing tonight, so I’ll be there. You’ll have this whole place to yourself.” Polly set a table with the brand new white tablecloth, set up the crystal candleholders and put the white candles into them. “You’ll also fix the jukebox to automatically play soft music, right?“ “Just before I leave.“ Polly put the flowers she brought into a new vase filled with water, and set it right in the middle. “Thanks, Francine.” she said. “what would I do without you?” “Float around ecstatically by yourself.” Polly laughed. “Can’t help lovin’ that man of mine!” she sang out, going back to the kitchen. “Can I borrow your curling iron?” “Go ahead!”, Francine giggled. That night, Speedy straightened the tie on his brand new suit he had purchased after talking with Polly’s parents. He ran a comb through his hair, sprayed on some cologne, picked up the velvet box, and slipped it into his pocket. It was all up to him now. He took a deep breath and went downstairs. Polly struck a match to light the candles. She turned the lights down to admire her work. Speedy came down just then, and he stood at the foot of the stairs, transfixed at how lovely Polly looked in the new dress, illuminated by soft candlelight…and nothing else. Polly turned and smiled. “Hi, Speedy.” “Hi…wow...Polly…you look beautiful!” Polly blushed. “Thank you.” She walked into his arms as he gazed into her eyes and brought his lips down on hers. For long, long moments they kissed, wrapping their arms tighter and tighter around each other. Speedy moved his lips to her forehead, kissing her again. Polly moved her arms up and down his own. “Did anyone ever tell you, you have the loveliest eyes in the entire world?” Polly smiled and stroked his whiskers. “Speedy, you’re so sweet.” she kissed him again. “Dinner is all ready.” “Mmm…it smells great, Kitten!” A short time later… “Polly, that dinner was delicious!” Speedy smiled. ”I can honestly say that was the best orange duck I’ve ever had!” Polly smiled. “Thank you, Speedy!” She got up. “I’ll get the dessert.” “What are we having?” “Homemade Chocolate mousse!” “That sounds great!”. Polly went to get it. Speedy took a deep breath, and gazed at the empty plate in front of him. Now, now the time had come. Taking a deep breath he took out the box, opened it, and set it down on the plate. Polly came back with the dishes. She set Speedy’s down in front of him…and gazed intently at hers. Her eyes grew so wide he could see the flames of the candles glowing in them. Polly sat down and picked up the ring, as her mouth dropped practically to her waist. “Wha…wha..” she gasped. Speedy took her hand and stroked it. “Polly Esther, I love you more than words can say. You’re without a doubt the most amazing Cat I’ve ever met in my entire life. You’re my true soul-mate. I can honestly say I can’t live without you near me. Polly, will you marry me?” Polly’s eyes filled with tears. “Speedy...I love you so much…” she took a deep breath. “Yes, I’ll marry you!” Speedy stared as if he couldn’t believe it. “You…you will?” “Yes!” Speedy jumped up. “She will!!!” he called, pulling Polly into an embrace and a passionate kiss, picking Polly up and twirling her around before getting down on one knee, and sliding the ring on. Polly gasped when she saw it. “Oh, Speedy..it’s gorgeous!! I‘m never taking it off! ” She pulled him into a deep, deep kiss. For a long while they were lost in each other’s arms…when suddenly they were startled by a loud crash...the door sung open…and Guido and Lucille fell right through the door. “Uh..hi, how’re ya doing? We…we were just testing the door..just testing the door!” Guido and Lucille swung the door back and forth. Speedy rolled his eyes at Polly, who giggled. “OK, Fran, if you’re hiding too you can stop it and come in now!” Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 04, 2008, 12:10:13 am I'd just appreciate it if you could state your opinions in a way that doesn't make either Pollygirl or I feel as though our stories aren't worth reading. We spend a lot of time on these stories, and having someone do nothing but pick on us for every little thing, it makes us feel really bad. What you've read so far is how Pollygirl and I prefer to write our stories, and that's not going to change, so please, if you don't like it, don't read it. I haven't been reading any of them, trust me. But when I DO review a story, I am both firm and fair. Go back and re-read what I wrote, you will find a mix of everything inside it. Honestly, if you can't take a little critisism, you're not meant to be a writer at all. Good night to you, sir or ma'am. ~BurkeWorld Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 12:23:21 am Please don't say that I'm not fit to be a writer. I just don't like being insulted. Please refrain from flaming me like this in the future.
Here's the next part: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Ten: Discussions and Explosions Guido and Lucille came into the kitchen, and Francine followed them in, after flipping on the light switch. Speedy looked over at the three of them, and asked, “How long have you three been hiding there?”, in a playful tone. Guido replied, “Long enough to hear you propose, buddy. Congratulations!”, and then he clapped Speedy on the shoulder. Lucille and Francine hugged Speedy, and then they repeated the process with Polly. Francine asked, “So Polly…how’d dinner go?” Polly beamed with excitement, and she replied, “Oh Francine…it was perfect! I’ve never been so happy in my entire life…Speedy truly is the best friend I’ve ever had…and soon, we’ll be together forever, since I’m now officially engaged to become Mrs. Polly Esther Cerviche!” Polly proudly held up her ring in the light, and Francine’s eyes went wide, while Lucille smiled from ear to ear, as she said, “Oh Polly…I’m so happy for you…Speedy is a wonderful cat, and he deserves someone like you. Take care of him!” Polly hugged her longtime friend, and replied, “I will, Lucille…and I’d like to ask you an important question, if you don’t mind.” Lucille sat down at one of the outdoor tables next to Polly, and replied, “Go ahead, Polly…as long as we’ve been friends, you can ask me anything.” Polly smiled, and then she asked, “Lucille…would you please be my maid-of-honor at my wedding? It’d mean a lot to me, since I’ve known you the longest, aside from Speedy.” Lucille’s eyes teared up, and Polly quickly moved her away from the Pizza Parlor, as her missiles blasted up into the air. Once she’d calmed herself down, Lucille replied, “Polly…I’d be delighted to be your maid-of-honor.” Polly hugged her friend, and replied, “Thank you so much, Lucille…you truly are a wonderful friend.” Polly then headed back to the restaurant, eager to spend some more time with her wonderful fiancé. In the meantime, Speedy was having a similar conversation with Guido, while Francine wiped down the counter. Speedy said, “Guido, I’d like to ask you…will you do me the honor of being my Best Man? I’m asking you, since I wanna show you that I truly do forgive you, and because I’ve always thought of you as a friend, despite all the rotten pranks you’ve played on me in the past.” Guido replied, “Speedy, are ya sure ya want me to do the honors? I mean…I’ve really done some pretty mean stuff to you, and…” Speedy replied, “Guido, that’s all in the past now, and I’m willing to put it behind us. Please Guido…this means a lot to me, so will ya do it?” Guido smiled, and replied, “Sure thing, pal…in fact, I’m gonna go have a chat with Fran and Lucille right now about something, so I’ll see ya later.” Speedy replied, “Catch ya later, buddy!” Right after Guido and Francine walked out, Speedy heard Polly come in, and he pulled her into a deep, passion-filled kiss, which lasted until they both had to come up for air. Polly said, “Speedy…Lucille’s agreed to be my Maid-Of-Honor…she’s such a wonderful friend!” Speedy smiled, and replied, “That’s great, Kitten…Guido said that he’d be my Best Man. He and Francine went outside to talk to Lucille about something, so we’ll have a little while by ourselves. Do ya wanna watch a movie with me?” Polly replied, “Sure, Speedy! You can pick it out, and I’ll get the drinks and the popcorn.” Speedy replied, “Sounds good to me, Pollyanna. I’ll see ya in a few minutes.” Polly went into the kitchen, popped a bowlful of popcorn, and then she grabbed a couple of twenty-ounce bottles of Pepsi, before heading back into the living room. She set the bowl on the table in front of the sofa, and then she and Speedy got themselves comfortable, and enjoyed the movie that Speedy had chosen, the 1974 release of Zorro, starring Alain Delon. Outside, with Guido, Lucille, and Francine… Guido sat down on one of the benches outside, Lucille sat next to him, and Francine sat down next to Lucille. Guido said, “Well, it’s official…Speedy’s asked me to be his Best Man, and I’ve accepted.” Lucille replied, “Guido…that’s wonderful! Polly asked me to be her Maid-Of-Honor, and I couldn’t say no…I mean…we’ve been friends forever.” Francine added, “I really am proud of you, Guido. You’ve changed for the better, and I’m glad that you and Speedy were able to put the past behind you.” Guido replied, “Yeah, I know, Fran….but still…I wish there was something I could do for them…ya know…to show them just how much their friendship means to me.” Francine replied, “Well…you could help set up the wedding, once you find out when they plan on having it.” Guido smiled, and replied, “Ya know what, Francine…I’m gonna do better than that…I’m gonna GIVE them their wedding! After all, if there’s any two cats that deserve to be together, especially after all they’ve gone through, it’s Speedy and Polly…so I’m gonna do anything I can, to give them the best wedding possible!” Lucille replied, “Oh Guido…that’s so sweet…” Lucille’s eyes teared up again, and while Francine dove for cover, Guido moved Lucille away from the buildings, and her missiles went off just a few seconds later. Once they’d all gotten together again, Guido said, “I’m gonna go with Lucille to meet Al Dente, and give him the news. You’re welcome to come with us, Fran…” Smiling, Francine replied, “I’ve gotta keep an eye on the restaurant…but I’ll see you later.” Guido and Lucille waved goodbye, and then they headed off towards the Palace. Imperial Palace of Little Tokyo… Upon their arrival at the palace, Guido and Lucille were immediately allowed to enter, once they’d stated their intention to meet with Al Dente. The guard in charge of the shift called Al down, and he said, “Well…Guido and Lucille…what can I do for you today?” Guido replied, “Well, Al…uh, can we go somewhere quiet, so that we can discuss a rather important matter?” Al replied, “Sure. We’ll head to my quarters.” Al took the lead, with Guido and Lucille close behind him. Main Lobby of the Palace… Princess Vi was pacing around impatiently, waiting for her mother to arrive, since her last letter had indicated that she’d be arriving today. Vi was decked out in her favorite dress, which was a deep royal blue, with gold trim. After a half-hour, Princess Vi heard the trumpets outside, and then the doors flew open, revealing her mother, Empress Frieda. Overjoyed to see her mother at long last, Vi ran forward, and jumped into her mother’s outstretched arms. “WELCOME HOME, MAMA!!!”, she cried out. Empress Frieda hugged her daughter, and replied, “Hello, Violet…I’m so happy to be home, and I love that dress…is it new?” Vi replied, “Yes, Mama. I had it made just for this special day, so I could look my best when you came home.” Frieda said, “Well then…why don’t you and I head into the den, and you can tell me all about what’s been happening around here during the last few months. I heard about Cheese’s exile in your letters, but I’d like to hear it from you.” Vi replied, “Of course, Mama. Servants…make some tea and cookies for my mother and I, and be quick about it!” One of them muttered, “Oh great…just what we need…another one of those hot-tempered crazies…” Vi heard him, and shouted, “I HEARD THAT, YOU IDIOT!!! HOW DARE YOU INSULT MY MOTHER?!!! GUARDS…TAKE HIM TO PRISONERS’ ISLAND!!!” Once the poor soul was dragged away, the rest of the servants ran off, and began making the refreshments that Vi had ordered. Al Dente’s room… Guido, Lucille, and Al Dente sat in a circle, around the small table that Al had in his room. Al said, “Alright then…now, what brings you two here today?” Guido replied, “Well…it’s like this, Al…Speedy and Polly…they started dating officially a little while back, and just recently, Speedy asked Polly to marry him, and she accepted. I’m gonna PERSONALLY give them this wedding, as my thanks for their friendship, and Lucille and I were wondering if you’d be able to help us out?” Al replied, “Guido…of course! Those two deserve nothing but the best, after everything that they’ve done for this city.” Lucille replied, “Just one thing, Al…please don’t tell Princess Vi…she’ll just insist on a HUGE, fancy party, which Speedy and Polly won’t want any part of. Neither one of them is really fond of large crowds, and they only want to have their family and close friends in attendance, not the whole city. I’ll be Polly’s Maid-Of-Honor, and Guido’s going to be the Best Man.” Guido replied, “Yeah, that’s right. So Al…will ya help us?” Al smiled, and said, “You can count on me, Guido. Now then…I’ve got to get back to work, but I’ll talk to you later. Take care." Guido and Lucille smiled, and then they headed back to the Pizza Parlor. Prisoners Island… Now that they’d finally completed the robot, Cheese was eager to test it out. The Ninja Crows finished loading the massive 45mm shotgun, Cheese climbed up into the cockpit, and Jerry then sealed the hatch. Centering the gunsights on the target dummies of Speedy, Guido, Polly, and Good Bird, Cheese pulled the trigger on the control stick, and the huge gun spat out a massive barrage of paintballs. Cheese saw this, and screamed, “WHICH ONE OF YOU IDIOTS DID THIS?!!!” The Ninja Crows all started pointing fingers, and shouting, “HE DID IT!!!” Jerry shouted, “CAN’T YOU DIMWITS DO ANYTHING RIGHT?!!! AT THIS RATE, GREY’S ANATOMY WILL GET CANCELLED BEFORE WE GET OFF THIS ISLAND!!!” Cheese was incensed, and he screamed, “HOW MANY TIMES DO YOU IDIOTS PLAN ON MESSING UP?! I’D LIKE TO GET OUT OF HERE, WHILE I STILL HAVE MY GOOD LOOKS!!!” Jerry muttered, “In that case, you’re a little late…and when was the last time you brushed, when dinosaurs roamed the earth…oops…” Cheese shouted, “WHO ARE YOU CALLING UGLY?!!” One of the Ninja Crows said, “I knew you were dumb, but even YOU should have picked up on that…then again, I’ve met rocks with more sense than you…uh-oh…” Cheese screamed, “I’M GETTING SUCH A NASTY HEADACHE…I NEED SOME ASPIRIN…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and blew himself and Jerry right out of the robot’s cockpit. Cheese hit a tree, and Jerry flew into the water. One of the Ninja Crows finally located the real shotgun shells, and loaded them up. Later, when Cheese and Jerry had recovered from the effects of Cheese’s latest tantrum, they’d run another test, but for now, silence descended once again over Prisoners’ Island. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 04, 2008, 12:39:23 am Please don't say that I'm not fit to be a writer. I just don't like being insulted. Please refrain from flaming me like this in the future. I said I was sorry for what I wrote in my PM, but that was it. I'm sorry you don't seem to understand that I am NOT insulting you, but if you cannot simply take some constructive critisim, then I said "perhaps writing isn't for you." Never did I say, "You shouldn't write anymore." So please... Enough. ~Burkey Edit by D-Mac: No insults please. I'm currently re-assessing this situation. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 01:14:12 am Alright. Let's just let this disagreement die, before it gets really ugly.
Here's the next part of the story: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. The songs are ‘Her Eyes’, by Pat Monahan, and ‘When I Fall In Love’, by Celine Dion. Chapter Eleven: Mountain of Love A few days later, Polly and Speedy had made plans for another date, and while they were gone, Guido had planned to call his brother Cosmo, and his sister-in-law, Myoshi, who ran a catering business in the north end of Tokyo, to see if they’d help with the catering for the wedding. All throughout the day, as they were serving and delivering pizzas, both Speedy and Polly were happier than they had ever been in their lives. Speedy himself couldn’t stop singing through the streets, as he made his way to another delivery. “Her eyes, that's where hope lies. That's where blue skies Meet the sunrise. Her eyes, that's where I go When I go home.” He called out a cheerful ‘Good Morning’ to everyone he saw. “Good morning, Speedy!” a vender called out. “It certainly is! It‘s a fantastic day! This is a great MONTH to be alive!“ Speedy made his way down the street, stopping at the home of Ruby. She opened the door and Speedy was thankful she was wearing her glasses. “Hi, Speedy.” “Hi, Ruby, I got your pizza.” “Thanks. Lovely day, isn’t it?” “It’s a wonderful day, Ruby…it’s a wonderful MONTH! This is the greatest month of my entire life!!!” “My goodness, Speedy..the best month?!” “Yeah, Ruby! Nothing can top this month!” “Wow, Speedy, what’s happened?” “I’m getting married!!” “You are? Congratulations!!!” “I am the luckiest Cat in all of Tokyo..in the whole world!” “So…who’s the lucky girl?” “Oh, you know!” “Polly?” “Polly.” “Wow, that’s so wonderful! I’m so happy for the both of you!” She pulled out some yen. “Here ya go, Speedy. Keep the change. Small wedding gift.” Back at the Pizza Cats’ Pizza Restaurant… Meanwhile in the restaurant, two young women came into the pizza place and ran up to Polly. “Oh, Polly, we just heard the news!” Polly looked up. “You did?” “Yeah! Francine told us! Speedy proposed to you a few days ago! Congratulations!” she hugged her. “I just want to see the ring! Come on, Pol. Show us!” “Yeah, I wanna see it too!” Polly smiled and held it out, causing both the women to gasp. “Oh my God, that is gorgeous!!” “You’re a lucky woman!” Polly gazed at the gorgeous band as the diamond sparkled under the restaurant light. “I know,” she said softly. After they had closed up, Francine came upstairs as Polly was finishing getting dressed for her date. Francine knocked on the door and entered. Polly was dressed in a casual dark pink shirt, a light purple vest, light blue shorts, white socks and sneakers. “Hey Polly, you look great. So, are you and Speedy going someplace different tonight?” Polly spun around happily. “Speedy is taking me mountain climbing tonight!” “You’re going mountain climbing?” “And then we’re having a picnic dinner right on the top!” “Wow, that’s different…mountain climbing! I would have never thought of that.” “Speedy and I both love to climb mountains. It’s a lot of fun…and right on top you can see for miles and miles.” She took her perfume and spritzed some behind her ears…and a bit on her tail.Speedy’s bedroom… Speedy was putting on a white jacket over his light grey shirt. He stopped to put something very special in his light blue jeans and tied his red and white sneakers. He ran a comb through his hair, and then he picked up his helmet to go mountain climbing in. He reached into his pocket. This was something very special, something that had been in his family for years…and now he would give it to the one true love of his life! He could hardly wait. To think, he had chased after the wrong girl all this time, and had not even noticed real, honest love right in front of him! But that was the past. Now, as he looked at his favorite picture of Polly, this was the beginning of the future. Smiling to himself, he went downstairs to prepare the basket. Once they both left, Guido got on the phone to call his brother. Soon, Cosmo and Myoshi entered the restaurant. Guido went to greet them. “Hey, brother. Hi, Myoshi, how’re ya doing?” “All right, brother,” Cosmo said. “Hiya, Guido,” Myoshi hugged him. “So, how’s my favorite George Clooney wannabe doing today?” Guido put his arms up. “Just fine, Myoshi, good to see you too. So, how’s Cosmo treating ya?” “He’s treating me fine. Then again, he believes in commitment. Oh, perhaps I shouldn’t have said that. I know you’re allergic to the word!” She laughed and punched him lightly on the arm. “Hey, hey, hey..I’m not like that anymore!” Guido said. “Oh, I bet!” Lucille’s voice was heard from outside just then. “Guido? Is that your brother?” “Oh,” Cosmo said. “Well, don’t worry…Myoshi and I will just wait right here while you go say hi to number thirty-six.” Francine bit her lip to keep from laughing. “Yeah, he is, Lucille,” Guido called out. “Lucille now, is it?” Myoshi asked. “Yeah, I guess he’s batted around and he’s back at the top of the order!” Cosmo cracked. “You and him have the same Mother?” Myoshi whispered to her husband. “What can I do? He’s my brother,” Cosmo said, just as Guido came back with Lucille. “Hey Lucy, how are ya?” “Just great, Cosmo. Hello, Myoshi.”: “Hi, Lucy. So, you’re dating my brother-in-law, I hear. Hope he’s being good to ya!” “Oh, yes. He’s such a gentleman. He really is!” “Yeah, until the next pretty girl-next-door comes on by!” Myoshi muttered to herself. Out loud, though she put on a smile. “It’s great that you guys are dating now, I hope he IS taking care of ya!” “You bet,” Guido said, putting his arm around Lucille. “In fact..I’d like to formally announce that Guido Anchovy and Lucille Omitsu are officially going steady!” Lucille smiled and showed off her pin. Myoshi looked at it carefully…and couldn’t help but grin. She stood up and folded her arms across her chest, holding in a giggle. “You’re going steady?! O….K….you’re going steady?! YOU…OK, so basically,” she pointed to the sky. “It’s raining up there,” she pointed to the ground. “It’s snowing down there. Big Cheese is gonna come back and become a Priest, Jerry Attrick will become a Professor, the Ninja Crows are going to law school, frogs are going to come pouring out of the sky any minute, and rocks are now something you can put on pizza!” She snickered. “Uh..Guido..you DO know that going steady means you only date one girl, right?! As in one? Uno? Only?” “I know, and I’m aware of that, Myoshi!” He hugged Lucille before she could tear up. “And I happen to know that Lucille is the only one I want. As of this moment I’m done with all others. This girl is the one I love with all my heart and soul.” “Wow…” Cosmo said. “Lucy, ya might wanna get that in writing..” “OK, come on, that’s enough of that now,” Francine said. “He didn’t call you guys here just to listen to you tease him!” “Aw, we’re just playing around!” Cosmo said. “Yeah, Guido’s got a great sense of humor. Don’t ya, Guido?” “Yeah, she kills me,” Guido said. “See, Lucille, THIS is what you have to look forward to…if the time should come!” Myoshi said. Lucille blushed at that and Guido tightened his arm on her shoulders, kissing the top of her head. “She’s only kidding..ya know, only teasing..” Lucille nodded. “Anyway, you guys wanna know the real reason you guys are here?” “Pray tell, brother!” Cosmo said, as he and Myoshi sat down in a booth. “You guys know Speedy and Polly, right?” “Of course we know them! Ya mean Speedy is alright? Ya havn’t knocked his block off yet?” Guido put his hands up. “OK, that one I deserved!” “You actually admit that?” “I admit a lot more. Let’s just say after a long talk with Francine, I realized that as far as friends go, I’ve been one of the worst possible.” “No,” Cosmo and Myoshi both said. “Yeah, and I know I’ve been absolutely terrible at a lot of points..” “YOU?!” “Yeah…but I want you to know I reformed. I apologized profusely to them from the bottom of my heart..” “You did?” “Meant every word of it, too.” Myoshi whispered to her husband, “I’ll believe THAT when I see it!” “But anyway, I called you guys over, cause I wanted to share some special news with ya.“ “What?” “I wanted you guys to know this, because I’m gonna need your help. Speedy just asked Polly to marry him.” Myoshi sat straight up. “Get out of here!” “It’s true! I saw him do it!” “For real?!” “You’re looking at the Best Man and Maid-of-Honor!” “He chose YOU as Best Man? YOU?!” “I know, I can’t believe it myself! But in order to thank them both for forgiving me and for giving me this honor, I wanted to do something special for them. That’s why I, along with Fran and Lucille, am gonna give them their wedding.” “Give them their wedding?!” “Yeah! “ “Ya mean..YOU….actually give them a wedding…as in throw it and pay for it?” “Exactly.” Cosmo raised his eyes. “Myoshi, is it possible my brother was abducted last night and replaced by a Guido robotic look-alike?” “Ha-ha. But seriously, will ya help provide the food for the ceremony?” “Well, where’s the reception gonna be?” “Here, of course!” Francine said. “Oh, of course! Well, we’ll be glad to provide the catering for this!” “Can ya also help us with the planning?” “Of course!” Cosmo said. “I’ll give ya a hand,” Myoshi said. “How would they feel about chicken teriaki and long noodles for a start?” “My brother is providing a sushi platter,” Lucille said. “and I’m bringing the tea.” “How about a chocolate three-tiered wedding cake with vanilla frosting?” “How many people are ya expecting?” “We don’t know yet. We’ll let ya know.” Up on the mountain, with Speedy and Polly… “What exactly does fondue mean anyway?” Speedy asked, popping another piece of bread and cheese into Polly’s mouth. “I’m not sure, but I think it’s French for ‘yummy’,” Polly patted her stomach. “I’m stuffed, and I still wanna keep eating.” They were sitting on cushions on the top of the mountain. A pot of fondue, a half-eaten baguette, and a bottle of wine rested between them on a blue blanket. They had taken off their helmets when they got to the top and sat them next to the basket. Polly sighed happily, looking at the lovely view of Little Tokyo that seemed to rest right at their feet. The sun was beginning to set, turning the sky above them from a light blue to bright pink. She felt like she was floating on cloud nine. Speedy smiled at her, and took her hand tenderly. “I’ve always loved mountain climbing with ya, Kitten…but I think this is the most perfect mountain we’ve ever climbed together!” He reached over to give her a playful kiss on the nose. Polly instantly flew to clouds ten, eleven, and twelve. Speedy moved the dinner things and slid across to sit next to Polly, tenderly putting his arm around her. She leaned against him happily, and they gazed upon the view. “This view is pretty spectacular, isn’t it Kitten?” “It sure is,” Polly said. She turned to look at Speedy. He might not be that tall, but he was athletic and well-built, and the most hansome Cat she’d ever seen. “Ya know, the view from here is pretty spectacular too,” she smiled. Speedy looked at her, surprised. “Why, Ms. Esther, are you…coming on to me?” Polly giggled and took a sip of her wine. “I think the wine is going to my head!” Speedy grinned and stared at her. Her lovely profile was illuminated in the glowing pink light as the sun made it’s way down over the hills, causing her blue eyes to sparkle and her hair to turn an even brighter shade of red. He kissed her cheek and reached over to turn the radio on. A soft romantic song was playing. “Kitten?” “Hmm?” she turned toward him. Speedy reached into his pocket. “I have something for you..” he handed her the long, thin, black velvet box. “For me, Speedy?” “Open it.” Polly did so, and she gasped when she saw what was in it. A beautiful gold necklace with a diamond crane that sparkled in the glow. “Speedy…this is gorgeous!” “It was my Mom’s.” “Oh yeah….I remember her always wearing this! I used to think it was the prettiest thing I’d ever seen!” Speedy’s eyes temporarily filled with tears as he remembered the warm, loving face of his mother, and how the necklace looked on her. “It was my Mom’s favorite thing she’d ever owned. Polly…I want you to have it!” Polly turned toward him. “Oh, Speedy!” “I think Mom would want you to have it, Polly. She loved you, and I think she’d want you to wear it. I think she’d be proud to see you with it on our wedding.” Polly’s heart melted. “Speedy…thank you.” Speedy put it on her, and the crane rested against her throat. “It’s so beautiful!” she kissed him deeply. Speedy stood up. “Shall we dance?” “Right here?” Polly laughed as Speedy swept her into his arms and lead her in small circles around the area to the romantic love song. ‘When I fall in love it will be forever Or I’ll never fall in love In a restless world like this is Love is ended before its begun And too many moonlight kisses Seem to cool in the warmth of the sun When I give my heart it will be completely Or I’ll never give my heart And the moment I can feel that you feel that way too Is when I fall in love with you. And the moment I can feel that you feel that way too Is when I fall in love with you.’ “Okay, I’m gonna attempt a dangerous move,” Speedy warned. “Make sure your seatbelt is completely fastened." He let go of her waist and spun her out along his arm. He whirled her back in, her back fitting snugly against his chest. “Not bad, Speedy…Not bad at all!” Polly smiled. He took her in his arms again, and gave her a deep kiss. “So..when do ya wanna have the wedding, Kitten?” “As soon as possible, Pussycat.” Polly thought. “Well, June is just around the corner…but everyone’s a June bride! Hmm…how about July!” Speedy’s eyes had a faraway look to them. “How about July 14th?” “Your Mom’s birthday!” Polly smiled softly. “Speedy…it’s perfect. I think that's a wonderful way we can honor her! I love you.” “I love you, too,” and he pulled her into another kiss. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on February 04, 2008, 03:43:43 am Quote Razgriz27 told me you apologized to him for critisizing our story...are you gonna turn right around and critisize it again? Actually, I didn't apologize for critizing your story, as I said I wouldn't ever take back what I said, because WHAT I said was very validated and true. Uh...no, cause vvhat you said vvas your opinion, and opinions are not facts and are not 100% true. FYI- several people have already said they liked this story! Are you gonna say something to them, too? And if you dont like it, don't read any more of it! Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 04, 2008, 07:35:44 pm Quote Uh...no, cause vvhat you said vvas your opinion, and opinions are not facts and are not 100% true. FYI- several people have already said they liked this story! Are you gonna say something to them, too? And if you dont like it, don't read any more of it! 1) Perhaps not 100% true, more like 98% true, how about that. 2) Good for those people, they are entitled to their opinion same as I am. Why would I waste time talking with other people about this? Please. 3) I stopped reading your stories after the 2nd part was posted, so I have taken this statement to heart. My eyes can relax. :) ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 08:10:47 pm Say what you will, this story is still going up here, regardless of whether it gets positive or negative responses.
Here's the next part: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Songs for this chapter: Speedy’s song to Polly: ‘Longer’-Dan Fogelberg Polly’s Song to Speedy: ‘Into The Quiet Night’-Rie Tanaka Chapter Twelve: A Truly Magical Night Speedy woke up the next morning, as the sun graced the skies of Little Tokyo with its warmth. Last night, his mountain-climbing date with Polly had been absolutely spectacular, and now that they’d finally decided upon a date to unite their hearts, along with their souls, in eternal love, he knew that nothing could possibly make him happier. Checking his calendar, he saw that there were only two months left until the big day, and he then remembered his mother’s old wedding ring. She had told him once, that when he finally found the one special woman that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with, that she wanted him to have her ring. His mother had cherished it, and Speedy knew that it would be just perfect for Polly. He’d stop by his Aunt and Uncle’s house after breakfast, not only to pick up the ring, but also, to give them the news of their wedding date. He called up his aunt and uncle, and said, "Good morning, Uncle Irving." Speedy's uncle replied, "Hey nephew. What's the big occasion...you sound like you've got some important news for us." Speedy said, "I sure do, Uncle Irving. Polly and I, we've finally decided on our wedding date. It's gonna be July 14th, to honor my mom's memory. I'm gonna swing by after breakfast, so I can pick up my mom's old wedding ring. I think it'll be perfect for Polly, since my mom wanted me to give it to my future wife." Uncle Irving replied, "Speedy...you truly are an honor to the family. Lydia and I will be waiting for you." Smiling and humming a joyful song to himself, he went into the shower, cleaned up, donned a fresh set of clothes, and then he combed his hair, made his bed, and finally headed downstairs. Polly was up as well, and she couldn’t wait until the next two months went by, because she’d finally be married to her one and only true love, Speedy Cerviche. He was always there for her, he’d been her best friend since third grade, and in two months, he would be her husband…which was enough to make Polly’s heart skip a beat. Ever since she had been just a little kitten, after she’d met Speedy, her parents had considered him to be like a son to them, especially after the deaths of his parents. His aunt and uncle were the only family he had left in the world, but soon, that would all change. She intended to stop at her parents’ home today, since Francine had decided to let them all have a day off, to tell them the happy news. She jumped into the shower, put some shampoo into her hair, lathered it up, and then rinsed it out, before washing herself off with her favorite soap. Once she was nice and clean, she dried herself off, grabbed her favorite casual outfit, and then headed downstairs. Once Polly made her way into the kitchen, she smelled bacon and sausages cooking, along with eggs. Speedy was also whipping up her favorite kind of pancakes, apple cinnamon. She sat down, and he carried her breakfast over to her, and then he set his own food down, before dashing over to the refrigerator and grabbing some orange juice. He poured a glass for Polly, and then for himself, put the juice away, and then he sat down next to her. “Good Morning, Kitten.”, Speedy said, leaning over and kissing her on the nose. She blushed, and replied, “Good Morning to you too, Pussycat.” Speedy said, “I was just thinking of heading over to see my Aunt Lydia and Uncle Irving after breakfast, so that I could give them the news of our wedding date. How’s that sound?” Polly replied, “Speedy…I was planning on going to see my parents and my sister, but since we’re both going out, why don’t we go together. That way, we can spend some time together, not just tonight, but for the whole day!” Speedy replied, “Oh wow…that’s a great idea, Kitten! I’m such a lucky cat, to be engaged to marry a wonderful girl like you…I love you, Polly…and I always will.” Polly pulled Speedy closer to her, and said, “I love you too, Speedy…forever.” They both finished eating, and had just finished cleaning up the dishes, when Guido came down, followed by Francine. Guido said, “Hey there, Speedy…and Polly. How’s everything this morning?” Speedy replied, “Just great, Guido. Polly and I have decided on a date for our wedding.” Guido smiled, and Francine replied, “Oh…when do you two plan to tie the knot?” Speedy replied, “On July 14th, at 8:30pm. We chose that date, because it was my mother’s birthday, and I figured that it’d be the perfect way to remember her, since she was always so kind and thoughtful…not to mention the fact that Polly was like a daughter to her.” Guido replied, “Wow…that really is a nice way to remember her, buddy. I’m sure that when the big night comes, she’ll look down from heaven, and smile down at you.” Speedy hugged Guido in a brotherly way, and Polly did likewise, before they both headed out. Once the two of them had left, Guido said, “Now then…what can I do for them, to surprise them, to show them that I really am grateful for their friendship?” Lucille came in just then, along with Good Bird and Carla. Guido hugged Lucille, and then he shook hands with Good Bird, before they all sat down. Lucille said, “Guido, where are Speedy and Polly? I wanted to talk to Polly about a few things.” Guido replied, “They just left, Lucille. They wanted to go and let their families know about their planned wedding date, which is July 14th.” Good Bird said, “July 14th? Why not sooner?” Guido replied, “Well…Speedy told me that it was his mom’s birthday, so he wants to honor her memory by marrying Polly on that date, since his mother considered Polly to be a member of the family, right from the day that she and Speedy became friends. Carla teared up at that, and she said, “Oh Birdie…this is so wonderful…Polly’s such a lucky girl to have someone like Speedy.” Good Bird replied, “She certainly is, Carla…just like I am to have found you.” They hugged each other, until Francine said, “Uh, Guido…unless you want this place to have a sunroof, I think you should get Lucille outside…FAST!!!” Guido saw that Lucille was about to launch her missiles, and he quickly moved her to a safe distance. Just after they got clear of the nearby buildings, Lucille’s missiles went off, and Guido rubbed her shoulders to calm her down, before they both headed back. Once Guido returned with Lucille, he said, “Now, I need to think…how can I make their night even more special?” Francine replied, “Hey Guido…I’ve got an idea, how about if you give them their wedding, and as an added surprise, you can do it two hours early. A 6:30 wedding, the reception at 8:30, and then they can leave for their honeymoon around 10:30. I’ll even give you all that day off, so you can prepare everything for the ceremony.” Guido replied, “Francine…that’s a great idea! You really are a great friend, Francine…honestly…you helped me see the error of my ways, and now, you’ve given me a plan of action for making Speedy and Polly’s wedding an occasion that they’ll never forget.” Guido hugged Francine, and then he and Lucille went to go and inform their other friends, while Francine got on the phone with the Rescue Team, so that they’d all be ready for the big night as well. Cerviche household… Speedy and Polly arrived at the home of his Aunt Lydia and Uncle Irving just after 9:45am, and Polly asked, “Speedy, is there something else that you wanted to bring me here for?” Speedy replied, “Actually Polly…there is. Before my mother died, she told me that she wanted me to give her wedding ring to the lucky lady that eventually captured my heart, and that happens to be you, Kitten. She always told me that she hoped you and I would end up together one day, and I’m glad that she was right, because I couldn’t possibly be this happy with anyone other than you, Polly. You are my one and only true soulmate, and I promise that I’ll never leave your side.” Polly’s eyes teared up, and she said, “Oh Speedy…your mother was such a wonderful lady…I’m really glad that I’ll have the honor of wearing her ring…since she was the one that brought you into this world, and soon, I’ll be spending the rest of my life at your side…just like she hoped for.” Polly looked up to the sky, and said to the spirits of Speedy’s mother and father, ‘Mr and Mrs. Cerviche…I promise you both, that I will always love your son, and that he won’t ever have to worry about having his heart broken. I could never love anyone other than him…and thank you both…for helping him grow up to be the wonderful, caring cat that I love. God bless you both.’ Speedy knocked on the door, and his aunt opened up. She said, “Speedy…come inside, dear…and hello to you as well, Polly.” Polly hugged Aunt Lydia, and Uncle Irving came into the kitchen just then. He smiled, as he spotted his nephew, along with the pretty redhaired cat that would soon be the newest member of their family. He said, “Hello Speedy, and I see you’ve brought Polly with you. This truly is a special occasion, so why don’t we sit down and talk over some tea.” While Lydia went to brew up some of her homemade tea, Speedy and Polly following Uncle Irving into the dining room, and Uncle Irving said, “So, what can we do for you today, nephew?” Speedy replied, “Uncle Irving, I was wondering…does Aunt Lydia still have my mom’s wedding ring up in your room?” Aunt Lydia overheard this, as she came in with the tray full of tea and cups. She sat down, and replied, “Of course I do, Speedy. It was your mother’s last wish, that I hold on to it for you, until you found your future wife. Now that you and Polly are about to marry, I think it’s time that we let her try it on for size.” Polly finished her tea, as did Speedy, and once the two older members of the Cerviche family had finished theirs, they all headed up into the main bedroom. Aunt Lydia took the key to the cedar chest off the wall, and popped open the old, yet still perfectly-polished chest that sat at the foot of her bed. She pulled the small, blue velvet box out, the one that held her late sister-in-law’s wedding ring. Polly carefully accepted the box from her, and opened it, revealing the ring inside. She gasped at the sheer beauty of this most cherished treasure. It was a lovely white-gold ring, with a lovely flower pattern designed into the band, and a small, but perfectly cut blue diamond in the center. The inside of the band had the engraving, ‘For my one true love’, which made Polly’s heart melt, and her eyes fill with tears of joy. She said, “Oh my…Speedy, it’s beautiful!” He gently pulled the ring out, and took her hand into his. He said, “A beautiful ring, for the world’s most beautiful kitten.” She held out her left ring finger, and he gently slid the ring on. It fit her perfectly, as if the spirit of Speedy’s mother was saying, ‘Welcome to the family, sweetheart. Even though I can’t be here to see it, the fact that my ring fits you, is proof of what I knew from the day you met my son…you were always destined to be his soulmate, and I want you and him to know…I’ll always be watching out for you from above. Take care of him, Polly…as I know that he’ll always take care of you.’ Speedy looked into her eyes, and said, “Polly…I swear that…I could almost hear my mother talking just now…like she was right here.” Polly replied, “She is here, Speedy…in your heart”, she pointed gently to his chest, and then she said, “She’s also in my heart, Speedy…along with your aunt and uncle. She was right, Speedy…we really were destined to be together…oh my…I’ve never been so happy, Speedy…I love you so much!” Speedy hugged her, and replied, “I love you too, my sweet kitten.” Aunt Lydia cleared her throat, which startled them out of their embrace. She asked, “So, when do you two plan to officially unite your hearts and souls?” Speedy replied, “On July 14th, Aunt Lydia.” Uncle Irving replied, “That’s…your mother’s birthday! Speedy…that’s a wonderful way to thank her for all that she’s done for you, and to honor her memory…she’d be so proud of you…and I know that I am.” Aunt Lydia added, “So am I dear…I’m proud to have such a wonderful, caring nephew…and to officially welcome Polly to our little family.” They all embraced one another for a short time, and then Speedy carefully removed his mother’s ring, which, in two months, would forever belong to the lovely woman at his side. They waved goodbye to Uncle Irving and Aunt Lydia, before setting off for the Esther Household. Prisoners’ Island… Cheese and Jerry made their way out to where the Ninja Crows were working to put the finishing touches on their robot. It was nearly complete now, with only the leg-mounted hover engines, and the back-mounted booster pods left to install. The blue-armored ‘mech was truly a sight to behold…weapons visible just about everywhere, sleek, polished cobalt blue armor, with gold highlights, and in the head, a single, red monoeye, which served as the machine’s main camera. Cheese smiled, and said, “Nicely done, my Ninja Crows. I love this new weapon…in fact, you’ve done such a nice job, I’m gonna let you have a lunch break now.” The Ninja Crows shouted, “YAY…LUNCH BREAK!!!” They all grabbed their lunches, and began chowing down. Cheese sat with Jerry under an umbrella, and they both starting stuffing their faces with sushi. Cheese said, “I don’t know how ya did it Jerry…but ya finally got the Ninja Crows whipped into shape. How’d you persuade them to get their act straight?” Jerry replied, “Easy…I told them if they messed up again, I’d make them listen to Britney Spears music until they got it right.” Cheese replied, “I’m proud of you, Jerry…you’re almost as rotten as me.” The Ninja Crows came over, and said, “Hey boss…we were wondering…how would ya like to pose for a picture in front of our new robot? That way, we can stick it in our photo album, to look back on it after we take over Little Tokyo.” Cheese replied, “I like that idea…remind me to give you an extra ration of birdseed after we take out the Pizza Cats.” The Ninja Crows all cheered, and then they went to get the camera. While they set it up, Cheese and Jerry posed in front of the robot. The Ninja Crow holding the camera said, “Ready…say ‘Emperor Seymour!’” “EMPEROR SEYMOUR!”, came the response from both Cheese and Jerry, and then the Ninja Crow pushed the flash button, only to realize that he’d REALLY goofed up. He said, “Uh-oh…” Cheese said, “What do you mean uh-oh? What did you do this time?” The Ninja Crow replied, “Uhm…I uh…kinda forgot to put film in the camera…sorry…” Cheese screamed, “YOU IDIOTIC TWO-LEGGED FEATHERDUSTER!!! CAN YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT, BESIDES MAKING ME ANGRY?!!!” Jerry replied, “Cheesy…calm down. After all, we’re almost done with the robot, so we can just take another picture when it’s finished.” Cheese calmed down, and replied, “You’re right…thanks Jerry…I don’t know what I’d do without you.” Jerry muttered, “As dumb as you are, you’d probably forget your head if it wasn’t attached to your neck…oops…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY…I HEARD THAT!!! WHAT KIND OF AN IDIOT DO YOU THINK I AM?!!” Jerry replied, “I don’t know…what kinds are there…uh-oh…I’m a dead bird…” Cheese shouted, “JERRY ATRICK…YOU’RE NOT GONNA LIVE TO SEE ANY MORE GREY FEATHERS…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and then calm once again settled over Prisoners’ Island. Little Tokyo, Esther Household… Speedy and Polly had just arrived at Polly’s home, and they met Polly’s younger sister, Sayaka, as she came in from practicing her martial-arts forms outside. Sayaka turned, and said, “Oh wow…Polly! Welcome home, sis” She hugged her sister, and then she noticed that her beloved older sibling wasn’t alone. She said, “Hey Speedy. How are ya?” Speedy replied, “Just fine, Sayaka. Are your mom and dad home?” Sayaka replied, “Yeah, they are. I’ll go in and get them.” Sayaka headed back inside, and came back out within minutes, followed by her parents. Tane said, “Hello Polly. How’s Speedy treating you, dear?” Polly hugged her mother, and replied, “Like a dream, mom. We just came from his Aunt and Uncle’s house, and I tried on his mother’s wedding ring…it fit me perfectly, as if his mother’s spirit was blessing me, and saying that I was meant to be with him, which I know that I am…in fact, ever since we met…I’ve been dreaming of this day ever since I was just a little kitten.” Polly’s father replied, “Well then…I can see that he truly does love you, dear…that’s a lovely engagement ring that he bought for you.” Polly hugged her father, and replied, “It is…honestly, Speedy’s the only cat that I could ever love…and nobody else will ever take his place in my heart.” Polly’s mother, Tane, asked, “So dear…when will you and Speedy be getting married?” Polly replied, “On July 14th, mom. It was the birthday of Speedy’s mother, and he wanted to celebrate her memory by getting married to me on that very day, since Mrs. Cerviche and her husband always thought of me as the daughter that they never had.” Sayaka replied, “Oh sis…I’m so happy for you! I just know that you and Speedy will never part…I mean…even when you were younger, I could tell by the way you’d look at him, that you were destined to be together one day. Speedy, take care of her. She’s a wonderful cat, and deserves nothing but the best.” Speedy looked over at his fiancée’s sister, and replied, “Don’t worry, Sayaka…I love your sister more than words could ever express…in fact, I’ll prove that right now, with this song, called ‘Longer’, by Dan Fogelberg.” Speedy had been rehearsing the song for this moment, and he started to let his love for Polly flow out through the song’s lyrics. ‘Longer than there’ve been fishes in the ocean Higher than any bird ever flew Longer than there’ve been stars up in the heavens I’ve been in love with you. Stronger than any mountain cathedral Truer than any tree ever grew Deeper than any forest primeval I am in love with you. I’ll bring fires in the winters You’ll send showers in the springs We’ll fly through the falls and summers With love on our wings. Through the years, as the fire starts to mellow Burning lines in the book of our lives Though the binding cracks, and the pages start to yellow I’ll be in love with you. Longer than there’ve been fishes in the ocean Higher than any bird ever flew Longer than there’ve been stars up in the heavens Ive been in love with you I am in love with you..’ Polly had tears in her eyes when Speedy finished, and she hugged him, while her parents and sister applauded. She said, “Speedy, that was so beautiful! I’ve got one for you too. It’s called ‘Into The Quiet Night’, by Rie Tanaka.” Polly cleared her throat, and started singing for her one true love. ‘In this quiet night, I'm waiting for you During that time, your smile has faded away Now that a little time has passed, Fond memories start to resurface. At the place where stars fall, I'm always wishing for your laughter. Even though we're apart now We can meet again, right? From when has my smile faded this much Since it was shattered by one mistake Change only the precious things into light and Go beyond the sky with fortitude we are in the quiet night dreaming in the night To the place where stars fall, I want my thoughts to reach you. I am always by your side We are in the quiet night Dreaming in the night At the place where stars fall, I'm always wishing for your laughter. Even though we're apart now We can meet again, right? we are in the quiet night dreaming in the night To the place where stars fall, I want my thoughts to reach you. I am always by your side We are in the quiet night Dreaming in the night’ Speedy pulled Polly close, and kissed her, while her family once again applauded. Polly’s father walked up, and said, “Speedy, thank you again, for all you’ve done for my daughter. You’ve been a wonderful friend to her, and now, you’ll be giving her the best thing she could ever receive, love in its purest form. Welcome to the family, Speedy.” Speedy gratefully took his future father-in-law’s hand in his, and replied, “Thank you, Mr Esther…I promise that I’ll never leave Polly’s side, and that I’ll love her until the end of time.” They all shared a warm hug, and then wished each other well, before Speedy and Polly left, so that they could take a walk, before they went out to dinner. Rikugien Park… Once Speedy and Polly arrived at the park, Speedy found a nice spot by the lake, and unfolded the picnic blanket. Polly set down the basket of food that her mother had made for them, and she and Speedy spent the next few hours enjoying the beauty of nature, and the joy of being together. Once they’d finished taking a bus tour of the city’s historical sights, capping it off with a kiss on the observation deck at the top of Tokyo Tower, Speedy said, “Hey Polly…it’s time to head to the restaurant.” Polly smiled, and slipped her hand into Speedy’s. She said, “Let’s go, Pussycat.” Speedy kissed her cheek, and said, “Here we go, Kitten.” Together, the two happy felines made their way to the restaurant. Tokyo Star Restaurant… Speedy walked into the lobby of the city’s best casual dining establishment, the Tokyo Star. They were quickly led to their window-view table for two, and handed a menu. Polly said, “Speedy…I never thought I’d find myself here…having dinner with such a wonderful cat. I’m so happy when I’m with you, even if you’re not a movie star, you truly are a star in my eyes…and in my heart.” Speedy smiled, and replied, “Polly, thank you…I don’t think I’ve ever been happier than I am right now…tonight truly has been a night of magic…and I know that every night will have it’s own magic, after we’re married.” Their waiter came by, and Polly ordered a plate of Jiaozi, with some Nikuman buns on the side. Speedy ordered the same, and then they both ordered Pepsi to drink. After they finished their dinner, they ordered a dessert of peanut-butter fudge ice cream, and Speedy paid for it himself, being the gentleman that he was. He then helped Polly up, kissed her, and then they both headed back to the Pizza Emporium, so that they could turn in for the night. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on February 04, 2008, 09:26:03 pm Quote Uh...no, cause vvhat you said vvas your opinion, and opinions are not facts and are not 100% true. FYI- several people have already said they liked this story! Are you gonna say something to them, too? And if you dont like it, don't read any more of it! 1) Perhaps not 100% true, more like 98% true, how about that. 2) Good for those people, they are entitled to their opinion same as I am. Why would I waste time talking with other people about this? Please. 3) I stopped reading your stories after the 2nd part was posted, so I have taken this statement to heart. My eyes can relax. :) ~Burkey 98% true ONLY according to YOU! Also, if you stopped reading our stories, vvhy the heck are you still posting on this part of the fan vvorks section? Go somevvhere else. ONLY post to revievv, capisce? Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 09:31:26 pm That, or offer CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not pure insults. Let's just let the issue drop, before it gets ugly.
Here's chapter 13: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Thirteen: Two Families United By Love A few weeks later, Lydia was finishing getting ready in her room. She and Irving were going to go over to the Esther family home for a special family dinner to celebrate the impending union of both of their families. Lydia smiled, as she reached into her closet and pulled out a large white box, which was tied with black string. She sat down on the armchair, laying the box on her lap. This box was something that Speedy’s mother, Kagome, had left to her, to keep with her until Speedy had gotten engaged. Running her hand along the box, she recalled her sweet, warm sister-in-law. Flashback to Speedy and Polly’s childhood… Lydia and Kagome were sitting at her table, having some tea and waiting for 8 year old Speedy to come back from Samurai Training. “I tell ya, Lydia, that son of mine has so much potential…he’s gonna be great!! Takes after his father through and through..” “Doesn’t surprise me, he looks exactly like Jon, I could tell that from the moment he was born.” “Yeah,” Kagome said, looking down. “Wasn’t he the cutest kitten? So rambunctious and active even as a baby!” Lydia giggled. “I really wish Irving and I could have children ourselves…but it’s not possible.” “So you’ll just have to settle for indulging mine,” Kagome teased. Both women giggled, as Lydia threw a napkin at her sister-in-law. “I hope you’ll have some more.” “I might not be able to myself. The doctor…the last time he saw me…he said that there was something he didn’t like…and I might not be able to have any more kids.” “Oh, Kagome, I’m so sorry to hear that. I know how much you wanted to give Speedy a little sister.” “Yeah..I hope that whatever he finds isn’t too serious. I want to live long enough to see my son graduate from the Samurai Academy…and I also want to see him marry a decent girl.” “Hey, Kagome? He’s only 8. Let’s not rush it, huh?” “I know…I just want him to have the best, and I wanna live long enough to see he does.” “Yeah, this wouldn’t have anything to do with your best friend, Tane Esther, and her own little girl, would it?” Kagome looked down. “Now why would you say that?” “Come on, Kagome. I suppose it’s a coincidence that this woman who moved in and became YOUR best friend just happens to have a daughter Speedy’s age who happens to be HIS best friend, and now you’re talking about how you wish he’ll marry a nice girl…” “Polly’s a good girl..” “I know she is…and you indulge her like crazy like she was already your own little girl.” “She may be the only thing I have left for a daughter of my own. And yes, I do hope that when they grow up, they do get married! I’d want to see that before I die.” “The 1600’s have come and gone, and she’s still talking about arranged marriages!” Lydia laughed. “I am not talking arranged marriage. I just hope that happens, but I won’t pressure him. The way I didn’t pressure him to be a Samurai. He decided that on his own. All I’ll do is offer him encouragement. So,” she changed the subject. “How’s Irving?” But before Lydia could answer, the door swung open, and 2 tiny pairs of feet scampered on the floor. Two tiny little kittens, a black-haired little boy, and a redhead with her hair in pigtails, both came into the kitchen. Kagome stood up. “Speedy, it’s after three, and is that the way we walk into a house?” “Hi, Mom,” Speedy said. “That won’t do, I’ll have a kiss from my boy!” She crouched down as Speedy walked into her outstretched arms for a hug and kiss. “The Lady over there is your aunt, young man!” she said as Speedy turned to go. Speedy went over and hugged Lydia too. “Hi, Polly, sweetheart,” she said, going over and hugging her tightly. “Hi, Mrs. Cerviche,” Polly said. “So, how was Samurai Training you two?” “It was great! Aunt Lydia, wanna see what we learned today?” “Indeed I do!” she smiled heartedly, as both Speedy and Polly moved to the center of the kitchen, took out their practice swords, and simultaneously began to perform a very slow and complicated routine. When they were done both Kagome and Lydia applauded wildly. “Good job, Honey!” Kagome said, hugging Speedy. “I’m so proud of you!” She hugged Polly as well. ”And you too! Now, are you gonna start your homework together?” “Yeah, Mom.” “OK, I’ll bring you both a snack. Polly, Sweetheart, would you like to stay for dinner?” “Yes, please!” ‘OK, you can call your Mom right here, Love.” she took Polly’s arm and lead her to the phone. She came back to Lydia. “She’s a good girl. I really hope she and my son do get married someday..” Lydia lifted her glass. “To the future, no matter what it holds!” “I’ll drink to that!” Both women clinked their glasses. End Flashback… Lydia looked up to Heaven “Well, Kagome, you lived long enough to see one half of your dream..but you were so right about the other part. I swear, you must be psychic. You got what you wanted, Dear. He’s marrying the one you wanted him to! I know you and Jon are both smiling up there!” “Lydia! Come on, it’s time to go.”, Irving called from downstairs. Lydia smiled and got to her feet. “I’m coming!” she took the box and left the room. Esther Household… Speedy struck a match to light the candles upon the table, and stood back to admire his work. Ever since the Comet incident, he had come to appreciate his surroundings more. He looked around at some of his favorite people in the world, most of whom were engaged in last minute tasks of putting the meal on the table. He had eaten at Polly’s house plenty of times, and Mr. and Mrs. Esther had always treated him like a son. But this time it was different, because he was different. The Esther sisters came in from the other room then, and Speedy was unable to take his eyes off the lovely eldest one. Her beautiful blue eyes sparkled in the light of the candles and her hair was an even deeper red. She reached across the table for a serving spoon just out of her reach. Speedy picked it up and handed it to her. Their fingers touched for a moment, and their eyes met. Polly smiled. “She’s so beautiful!” Speedy thought, wondering again why it had taken him so long to see it. He pulled the chair out for Polly and gave her a small kiss. As soon as everyone had been seated, Uncle Irving stood up then and tapped his wine glass. “I’d like to make a toast,” he said. He paused while everyone raised his or her glasses. “First off, I just want to thank Tane and Akira, for throwing this wonderful dinner. Tane, I know you were my sister-in-law’s- and Speedy’s mother- Kagome’s best friend…and I know both her and Jon are watching all of us here right now. I know that Kagome loved Polly like she was her own child, and to both her and Jon, this is a true dream come true! To have our families- Esther and Cerviche- united as one, is the most wonderful gift any of us could ask for. I can honestly say- and I’m NOT just saying this because he’s my brother’s son-that Speedy is an honest, caring nurturing, and brave Cat who never puts himself first and always thinks of others. Polly, you’re getting a wonderful, loving, and trusting husband, who will never let you down and will never leave you, my brother lived long enough to see that! Polly, Dear, it’s my honor to say this- welcome to the family! We love you!” When everyone had taken a sip of their wine, Akira stood up. “Well, I’d like to make a toast too. To families,” he tilted his glass toward Speedy and Polly. “God bless us, and our two families, who will be united as one in just two months. This is an absolute honor, for as long as we’ve known Speedy, we’ve known him to be a kind, polite, and caring Cat, and we can guarantee that Polly…in spite of her she-knows-what-” (Polly blushed) “is a lovely, honest, caring, hard working young woman with a heart of gold, and she will be the most wonderful wife to you. Take care of each other and be good to each other always. We love you both. Speedy, welcome to our family, and congratulations!” A little while later, everyone had gathered in the living room. “OK, Lydia,” Tane said. “Now, I think it’s time you let us know what’s in that big box you brought in here?” Lydia smiled, and hoisted it up on the coffee table. “Well, it’s something special…and it’s for the newest member of our family. Polly, Honey, I’d like it if you joined me up here.” Polly glanced at Speedy curiously, then jumped up and joined her. Lydia cut open the string. “This is something very special, it’s been in our family for years!” She took out a rainbow colored cloth, and unfolded it to show a gorgeous multi-colored quilt. “This quilt is very special. It’s been in our family for years. It was started by the Cerviche’s great-great-great-great grandmother, Noni Lynn. She wanted a record kept of the family, something she could share that was filled with memories and would be passed down from generation to generation. Every female member of the Cerviche family gets to add her own special row to the quilt. The row of patches she picks are special cause it says something of her and her family.” Irving touched a row. “This was our grandmother’s row. This patch was a Christmas dress she made herself. This one was Speedy’s father’s baptismal gown.” There was a gasp, and Tane held her hand over her mouth. Speedy moved to look closely at the next to last row. “This is Mom’s row, isn’t it?” he asked, fingering it. “That’s right. This was a piece of Kagome’s wedding dress…and this one was the tuxedo Jon wore when you graduated from Samurai School, Speedy. Speedy nodded, choked up. Lydia fingered the last row. “This row is mine. This shirt I wore on my first date with Irving. This patch was made from the kimono I wore on our first Christmas as a married couple.” she brushed tears away and stood up. “And now, Polly, as the newest member of the Cerviche’s, it’s my honor to pass the quilt down to you. You can now add your own patches to the quilt. Polly was too overcome to speak. She held it close to her. “T…thank you..” she said. “What should I add to it?” “Anything you want. I can come over tomorrow and help you. The secret is to pick the patches from materials that mean something to you and are of a special significance in your life. It’s an honor…now that you’re gonna be a Cerviche… to add your legacy to our family record.” Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Mechadon on February 04, 2008, 09:46:41 pm Say what you will, this story is still going up here, regardless of whether it gets positive or negative responses. Burke isn't trying to stop you from writings these stories. Nobody has the right to tell you how to celebrate your SPC fandom. If writing sub-par romance fanfics makes you happy, then so be it. But if you want a professional opinion on what you are writing, you have to accept all criticism; good or bad. If you don't want to hear anything negative, then take your time to write something decent. Or don't seek any criticism at all. Stay inside your bubble, and you'll stay happy. The only downside is; if you do write something exceptionally good that all SPC fans will enjoy, you won't have any professional opinion to back it up. And for you, Burke. Don't waste your time with this. Let them stay in their bubble. They obviously don't see any value in your opinion. Let them deny themselves of your service. I'd argue that consequently, they would suffer from this. If all they get is constant praise with nobody saying otherwise, the quality of their writing will continue to degrade. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 10:17:42 pm I don't think it's sub-par, and neither do alot of other people...just check Fanfiction.net. This story has gotten positive reviews all around on there, so other people DO appreciate our work. With that said, here's the next chapter:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Fourteen: Polly Makes Her Mark of Love One week later, Speedy got up at 8:00am sharp, since he would be going out with Good Bird, Carla, and Wally, so that they could get their wedding attire. The other girls would be heading out in a couple days, to pick up their own dresses. As he combed his hair into place, he thought about how lucky he was, to have met such a sweet, beautiful girl like Polly. She was not only a very lovely girl, but she was also strong, brave, loyal, and she had never turned her back on someone in need…which was why Speedy had fallen in love with her. True, she had a vicious temper, but she was also sweet, charming, kind, and generous. Anyone that called her a hotheaded bully, Speedy would make sure that they got a five-fingered dental treatment, or a Ginzu Sword haircut. He put on a fresh shirt, a pair of blue jeans, sneakers, and then he headed downstairs for breakfast. Polly had just come out of the shower, and sat down in front of her dresser. Looking into the mirror, she picked up her brush, and started to run it through her fiery red hair. She reflected on everything that had happened to her over the past year, and how she had almost lost the only cat she’d ever loved, when the comet had threatened the city. She would never take life for granted again, and she would certainly be eternally thankful to God, for allowing her and Speedy to finally be together. Ever since he had rescued her from the bullies all those years ago, the two of them had been inseperable. He had been her date to the High School Prom, he’d sponsored her entry into Samurai Academy, and now, he’d given her the most precious gift of all, his love. She would forever give him every ounce of her love, and she knew in her heart, that they would always be together. Once she’d finished getting her hair brushed, she put on a little bit of her favorite perfume, and then she put on the lovely sundress that Speedy loved so much. She would stop off at her home after breakfast, to pick up the dress that she’d worn on the day she’d met Speedy, along with her high school prom dress. She’d also get a piece from one of her old Pizza uniforms, and a piece of the dress that she’d worn, on the night that Speedy had confessed his love for her. Once she had those, she would head over to see Speedy’s Aunt Lydia, who had agreed to help her sew the patches onto the Cerviche family quilt, which would be passed on to her, after she married Speedy. Once she was ready, she grabbed her flute, and headed downstairs. Speedy and Guido entered the kitchen at the exact same time, and Speedy said, “Morning, Guido. How’s Lucille?” Guido replied, “She’s doing great, Speedy. How’s Polly and her family?” Speedy smiled, and said, “Polly’s just fine, buddy. Her younger sister, Sayaka, she’s just started taking martial arts classes, so chances are…she’s gonna follow in Polly’s footsteps.” Guido replied, “Yeah…from what you and Polly both say, Sayaka really does idolize her sister…which I’m not surprised, seeing as Polly really is a great girl. You picked a real winner, Speedy.” Smiling, Speedy clapped his friend on the shoulder, and Polly then came down the stairs, a smile on her beautiful face, as she set her eyes on her one true love. Polly snuggled up against Speedy, and said, “How’s my Pussycat this morning…did you have a good sleep?” Speedy hugged her, and replied, “I sure did, Kitten. So…what’s on the agenda for today?” Polly replied, “Well…I’m gonna go pick up the stuff I need for the patches that I’ll be putting on your family quilt, and then I’m going to see your Aunt Lydia, so that she can help me sew the patches into place. How about you, Speedy?” He replied, “I’m gonna head out with Good Bird, Carla, and Wally, so we can pick up our wedding attire.” Polly looked over at Guido, and asked, “Any reason you’re not going, Guido?” He replied, “Yeah, actually. I’m gonna take Lucille out to the park for a bit, and then I’ll be meeting my brother and sister-in-law back here, to discuss a few things.” Polly replied, “I see. There’s still plenty of time for the rest of us to get our stuff, so it’ll all work out.” Francine brought over the trays carrying the sausage, egg, and cheese breakfast calzones, along with a tall glass of orange juice for everyone. As she set them down, Good Bird and Carla came in, followed shortly afterwards by Lucille, and her brother Wally. Guido hugged Lucille, and he then said good morning to Wally. After they’d all greeted one another, they sat down for breakfast, cleaned up, and headed out along their separate ways. Polly stopped off at her house first, to pick up her old school dress, and her prom dress. As she and her mother looked through the various boxes of clothes, which were all filled with insulated bags, to keep the clothes in good condition, Polly said, “I can’t believe it, Mom…it seems like only yesterday, that Speedy and I were running around playing hide-and-seek in the backyard, tag on the school playground, and using practice swords in Samurai Training. Now, I’m only a couple months away from becoming his wife…I’ve never been so happy…” Tane replied, “I know how you feel, honey. When I met your father, I went through the same thing. You’ve given your sister a great role model…I mean…Sayaka’s jumping at the bit to enter Samurai Training, so that she can fight alongside you someday.” Polly replied, “I’m honored, Mom…I’m sure that she’ll be a great Samurai someday, once she gets the right training.” Tane replied, “She certainly will, dear…she’s got the best possible example to go by. Now…on another note…how’s Speedy?” Polly blushed, and replied, “He’s fine, Mom. He’s out with Good Bird, Carla, and Wally right now, picking up his wedding attire. Guido’s out with Lucille at the park, and he’s gonna be meeting back at the parlor with his brother, his sister-in-law, and Francine, to discuss some important matters.” Tane said, “That’s wonderful, dear…ah, here it is…your old dress, the one you wore when you first met Speedy.” Polly accepted the dress from her mother, and fingered the material, letting the memories come back to her. Flashback… It was the end of Polly’s first day at Little Tokyo Primary School, and she was the new girl in the neighborhood, having just moved here from Kyoto. She had started to walk home, when she’d felt someone grab her arm, and yank her back onto the playground. Before she knew it, three tough male cats were teasing her, calling her names, and shoving her around, until one of them tore her clothes, and knocked her into the mud. Polly looked herself over, and saw that she was absolutely filthy. Her new dress was ruined, as it had a huge rip in the front, starting under her right arm, and ending above her stomach. Just as she was about to try and run to safety, one of the bullies, obviously the leader, jumped out in front of her, and said, “I don’t think so, little kitty. If you wanna get past us, you gotta pay the toll.” Polly’s voice was shaking with fear, as she responded, “Wh-what do you want from me?” The bully replied, “Your lunch money every day, from now on…and that nice looking hairclip of yours.” Polly said, “NO! That was a present from my mother last year for Christmas! I’m not taking it off, ever!” The bully smirked, and said, “Oh yeah…we’ll just have to punish you for that, you little brat!” The boy advanced on her, about to start cutting her hair off with a pair of scissors. One of his friends grabbed her and held her down on her knees, and the scissors were just a few inches from her fiery red locks, when another voice rang out across the schoolyard. “LEAVE HER ALONE!!!”, her rescuer, and soon-to-be best friend, and future husband, called out. Polly turned, and saw another male cat, around her age, readying himself to take the bullies on. The leader rushed him, but Speedy sidestepped, and dropped him with a powerful axe kick. The second assailant, the one that had torn Polly’s dress, went after him with a tree branch, but Speedy simply caught his wrists, and tossed him over his shoulder. Scared beyond all belief, the other attacker ran off, and Speedy helped Polly up. She said, while still sobbing quietly, “Thank you so much, whoever you are!” Speedy brushed her off as best he could, and said, “I’m Speedy Cerviche, Samurai-in-training. Who are you?” Polly looked herself over, noticing the mud that matted her fur, and her torn clothes. She said, “I’m Polly. Polly Esther. Thanks for saving me, Speedy.” Speedy said, “Why don’t I take you to my place, since the school day’s over. You can clean up, and I’ll have my mom fix your dress, then you can call home and tell them what happened, and I’ll walk you home.” Polly smiled, and the two new friends headed off to Speedy’s house. End Flashback… Polly wiped away tears, as she recalled how close she and Speedy had become, ever since that day. When they’d arrived at his house, his mother, Kagome Cerviche, had been so sweet to her. Once Speedy had told her the story of how he’d saved her, she’d hugged her brave little son, and then she provided Polly with a spare set of clothes to wear, while she repaired the damage to Polly’s dress. In the meantime, Polly had gone upstairs to take a shower, and once she’d washed all the mud out of her hair and fur, she and Speedy were treated to some homemade cookies and milk, and Speedy had given Polly a walk home. Once they’d arrived, Polly told her parents about how Speedy had saved her, and how kind his mother had been to her. Tane remembered it too, as she’d immediately pulled the young boy into a hug, while her husband, Akira, had told Speedy that from that moment on, he’d always be welcome at their house. Polly and Speedy’s parents had met one another the next day, after their children got out of school for the weekend, and while Speedy and Polly were outside playing, they traded stories for a few hours, until Speedy asked their permission to bring Polly into Samurai Training, so that she’d be able to protect herself. The rest, was history. Tane said, “Speedy truly is a remarkable young cat, Polly…I just know that he’ll never hurt you, or break your heart.” Polly replied, “I know, Mom…I’ve known him for so long…I couldn’t imagine ever loving anyone other than him.” Tane soon found her daughter’s prom dress, and Polly added that to her bundle as well. She already had one of her old delivery uniforms, as well as the dress that she’d worn on the night Speedy had confessed his feelings for her. She hugged her mother, and said, “Thanks, Mom. I’m going over to see Speedy’s Aunt now. I’ll talk to you later.” Tane replied, “Take care, honey. Tell Lydia that I said hello.” Polly smiled, and headed out. Little Tokyo Mall… After they arrived at the shopping center, Speedy and the others headed into a nice-looking establishment, which sold wedding attire for reasonable prices. Speedy’s eyes lit on a white jacket, and matching pants. The suit had blue trim, with gold highlights, just like his armor. He found one in his size, and pulled it off the rack. Good Bird and Wally both decided on a standard tuxedo. Good Bird’s was black, while Wally went for a dark blue one. Carla found a lovely red dress, with gold floral patterns woven into it. She said, “Birdie…isn’t this dress lovely?” He replied, “It is, Carla…the perfect dress, for a lovely girl like you.” Carla smiled, and she kissed Good Bird on the cheek. Wally saw Speedy’s suit, and said, “I like it, Speedy. Polly’s gonna love it, I can tell.” Speedy replied, “Thanks, Wally…I like your suit too.” They all met up, paid for their suits, and headed for the Food Court for lunch. Rikugien Park… Guido and Lucille were strolling through the gardens, and Lucille was absolutely awe-struck at the intense beauty of all the flowers around her. Guido said, “Hold on, Lucille…I’ll be right back.” Guido walked off, and came back five minutes later, with a bouquet of roses in his hands. Lucille said, “Oh Guido…they’re lovely!” Her eyes teared up, and Guido started to rub her shoulders, to keep her missiles from firing off. After a few more hours, they headed back to the Pizza Parlor, so that they could meet up with Cosmo and Myoshi. Back at the Pizza Parlor… Francine was wiping down the counter, when Guido’s brother Cosmo came in, along with his wife, Myoshi. Cosmo said, “Hey Fran. Where’s my little brother at?” Francine replied, “He’s out with Lucille right now, but they’ll be back shortly.” Myoshi said, “Oh…he’s still with Lucille? Anybody wanna place bets on how long that’s gonna last?” Guido came in just then, and said, “It’s gonna last forever, Myoshi. I told you, I’m a changed cat. My days of chasing after every pretty girl in the city are over, because I’ve found the only pretty girl that I’ll ever want, right here.” Guido pulled Lucille close, and hugged her. Cosmo said, “Hey, little bro…how’ve ya been?” Guido replied, “Just fine. How’s everything with you and Myoshi?” Smiling, Cosmo replied, “Great. Her and I are getting along perfectly, and I’m still waiting to see proof that you’ve changed.” Lucille stepped up to her boyfriend’s defense, and said, “Guido HAS changed, Cosmo. He’s promised his heart to me, and ME alone, and he’s also planning to GIVE Speedy and Polly their wedding.” Cosmo and Myoshi both went wide-eyed, and Myoshi said, “Why, Guido…I never thought I’d hear myself say this, but…LET ME HUG YOU!” She and Guido embraced, and Cosmo said, “I’m proud of ya, bro. You’ve really become a more mature cat, and I’m happy that you proved me wrong.” Francine said, “Well then…now that all of the friendly banter is done, let’s get down to the business of setting up this wedding.” Myoshi nodded, and pulled out a book of wedding cakes, which they all began going over. Myoshi said, “Here…how about this one?” It was a huge, seven-tiered cake, with flowers and hearts all over it. Guido replied, “No…we’re only gonna have a small wedding, just close friends and family. Let’s see…The Rescue Team, Al Dente and his wife, Good Bird, Carla, some of Speedy’s old friends from Samurai Training, and of course, Speedy’s aunt and uncle, along with Polly’s mother, her father, and her sister, and any other family members that she might have.” Cosmo flipped the page to a picture of a lovely, yet simple three-tiered cake, and said, “Hey bro, how does this one look?” Guido took a peek, and said, “Now THAT’s more like it! Let’s have an ‘S’ for Speedy, and a ‘P’ for Polly, intertwined on the top of the cake, in red frosting. The cake itself…make it chocolate, with vanilla frosting. Also, a little creative touch I just thought of…make some little figures of Speedy and Polly out of white chocolate molds, and fill them with a peanut butter fudge center. That’ll really spruce it up.” Myoshi said, “Sounds good…and since you’re family…we’ll do it for half off!” Francine was in such a cheery mood, that she said, “I’ll even pay for it all.” Guido’s eyes went wide, and Myoshi nearly fainted. Guido said, “Wow Fran…you’re in quite the mood. Let me know when Cheese grows a brain.” Francine replied, “DON’T push it, Guido. I’m doing this out of the kindness of my heart for Speedy and Polly. They both deserve this, and so do you, for planning all this out for them.” Guido walked over and hugged Francine. Myoshi said, “So…where’s the reception gonna be, Fran?” Francine replied, “Right here. Like I said, Speedy and Polly don’t like large crowds, and we DON’T want Princess Vi finding out about this, and turning it into a celebrity wedding ball.” Cosmo replied, “Yeah, no kidding…just don’t let her hear that. Myoshi and I heard her send three servants to Prisoners’ Island this morning alone, while we were walking over here. Still…are you sure you wanna have it HERE, in a Pizza Place?” Francine replied, “Yes, I’m sure. What’s wrong with it?” Myoshi replied, “Nothing, Fran…honest. It’s a nice, clean place and all, but seriously…a wedding reception in a Pizza Parlor?” Lucille stepped in, and said, “Yes. First off, my teahouse isn’t big enough, and Princess Vi won’t be as likely to think of looking here.” Cosmo replied, “Yeah…you’re right, Lucille. Let’s get this show on the road.” With that, they began making lists of supplies, and figuring out what food would be served at the big day. Little Tokyo Palace… Princess Vi was getting ready to head out, along with her mother, so that she could give her a tour of the city. Three guards were going along for the walk, and Vi intended to stop over at Pizza Cats’ Pizza for lunch. Frieda called out, “Al Dente, we’re leaving now. Take care of things until we get back!” Al replied, “Of course, Your Highness. Have a nice walk!” Emperor Fred called out, “Fah-Red!” As they made their rounds of the city, Vi pointed out all the new buildings that had gone up, since the destruction of the comet, especially the statue of the Pizza Cats and Good Bird, which sat right in the city square. It was solid gold, and showed all four of them, clad in full armor, in their victory poses. The plaque read, ‘This Statue is dedicated by the grateful citizens of Little Tokyo to our brave heroes…and heroine, The Samurai Pizza Cats…Speedy Cerviche, Guido Anchovy, Polly Esther, and Good Bird. Statue Dedicated by: Princess Violet.’ Empress Frieda snapped a photo of it, and said, “It’s lovely, dear.” Princess Vi said, “Thanks, Mama. The Pizza Place isn’t too far from here, so let’s go get some lunch.” Smiling, Frieda and her daughter headed off to the Pizza Parlor. When they came into view, Cosmo said, “It’s Princess Vi…and her mom! Hide the cookbooks, and act like business as usual!” They all hid the cookbooks, and Francine jumped over the counter. Empress Frieda came in, and said, “So…this is the great Pizza Cats’ Pizza Emporium. Where is everyone?” Francine replied, “Speedy’s out shopping, Polly’s visiting her family, and Good Bird’s out with Speedy. Guido’s here, though, and this is his brother Cosmo, and Cosmo’s wife, Myoshi. Empress Frieda, this is Lucille, Guido’s girlfriend.” Once introductions were out of the way, Frieda ordered a couple of slices of cheese pizza to go, and Princess Vi ordered two slices of Pepperoni, along with a drink for herself, as well as her mother. The guards each ordered a small pizza, and a salad, along with a soda. Once they’d paid for their food and left, everyone breathed a sigh of relief, before continuing with their wedding plans. Cerviche Household… Polly arrived at the home of Speedy’s aunt and uncle shortly after 1:30pm, and knocked on the door. Lydia opened up, and said, “Polly! Come in, dear. Can I make you some tea?” Polly replied, “Yes, please.” Once the tea was served up, Lydia got out the quilt, and Polly set down her materials. Lydia picked up the first dress, which was the one she’d worn after she’d met Speedy. Lydia said, “Polly…you wore this when you met Speedy, right?” Polly replied, “Yes, I did. That was the day my friendship with him started, so it’s perfect to start my row with.” Lydia replied, “I agree. Now then, you cut a patch out, and then sew it on." Polly replied, “Well uh…actually, Lydia…I don’t know how to sew. I never learned how. I’m a pizza maker, and a Samurai, but I never was a seamstress.” Lydia replied, “That’s okay, dear…don’t be upset. You just cut the patches off of the dresses, and then I can sew it on for you, and you can just watch.” Polly replied, “Thank you, Lydia. How’s Irving?” Lydia replied, “He’s just fine. He’s out right now, doing some grocery shopping. He’ll be back in a couple of hours. How’s your family?” Polly replied, “My mom’s doing great, and so’s my dad. Sayaka’s jumping at the gun to enter Samurai training like me, so she can fight crime at my side. Ever since she was a kitten, she’s looked up to me. Whenever Speedy and I would play together, we’d always let her join in, I’d help her with homework, household chores, I’d read to her at night, and when the thunderstorms would come, or the lights went out, I’d let her sleep in my room. If anyone picked on her, if Speedy didn’t deal with them, I would, or even both of us. She’s the best little sister I could ask for, and I love her.” Lydia replied, “I can imagine, dear. Even though I never had children of my own, Irving and I loved Speedy as if he WERE our son, after his parents died. He never went without something, and we supported him, in whatever he chose to do. His parents raised him well, and he’s turned into the kind, charming cat, that’s now only about seven weeks away, from being your husband.” Polly replied, “I know…I can’t wait…Gods, I love Speedy so much!” Lydia smiled, and she and Polly then went back to sewing the quilt. After a few hours, the final patch was in place, and Lydia said, “Well Polly… I think it looks perfect. How about you?” Polly replied, “I-I love it! This is NEVER going to leave my possession, and I’ll treasure it, just like I will your wonderful nephew. I’ve got to be going now, Lydia, but thank you for the tea, and tell Irving I said hello!” Lydia replied, “Take care, Polly. I’ll talk to you soon.” Polly and Lydia hugged, and then Polly headed for home. Prisoners’ Island… Cheese was once again stuffing his face with sushi, while Jerry kept the Ninja Crows in line. Cheese wanted to launch as soon as possible, and the Ninja Crows were working nonstop, to get the hover jets and booster pods installed. After five hours of back-breaking work, one Ninja Crow walked up, and said, “Boss, we’re done.” Cheese replied, “Well, it’s about time.” Jerry muttered, “Time for what…for you to take a bath…oops…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY, I HEARD THAT!!! ARE YOU SAYING I SMELL BAD?!!! YOU’RE NOT EXACTLY A BABE-MAGNET EITHER, YOU DIMWIT!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and Jerry went flying into a tree. The Ninja Crows then put the robot through it’s paces, and at the end, they concluded the test, by firing the huge shotgun right into a model of the Pizza Cats’ Pizza Emporium, blasting it to bits. Cheese smiled, and said, “Nicely done, fellas…nicely done indeed. Now then, I need to think…where am I going to put my statue, after I take over Little Tokyo?” Jerry muttered, “Don’t think too hard, you might hurt yourself…uh-oh…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY ATRICK…THAT DOES IT!!! GET OVER HERE!!!” Cheese grabbed Jerry, and began whacking him repeatedly with his fan, all the while, his face began to go red, until he eventually exploded. Once his latest tantrum quieted down, the Ninja Crows started getting the robot ready to take off back to confront the Pizza Cats. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: SCerviche on February 04, 2008, 10:46:21 pm They probly like it because they have no idea, or very little, of what SPC is about or how the characters normaly act.
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on February 04, 2008, 11:35:36 pm They probly like it because they have no idea, or very little, of what SPC is about or how the characters normaly act. Speedy and Polly CAN act like that! If YOU don't knovv that, go back and revvatch some eps! You call yourself SCerviche, but you don't vvant him to be happy and get the girl? Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 11:42:55 pm It's our story, and it's about SPEEDY and POLLY being happy with one another.
Here's the next part: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Fifteen: Discussions and Memories “All right, Cheesy, I think this is it,” Jerry said. “All systems have been tested and we are all ready to go!” “Excellent, Jerry, excellent!” Cheese said happily. “Finally I will have my revenge against those horrid felines! The throne of Tokyo will be mine!! All mine!!” He turned to Jerry. “That’s gonna make you Prime Minister, Jerry!” “Ah, thank you, Seymour!” Jerry said, beginning to climb into the robot. Cheese followed immediately afterward and sat beside him at the controls. “Fare thee well, oh Prisoner’s Island. Can’t say it was a pleasant stay….cause it wasn’t! Ninja’s, crawl up here, we are gone!” With a loud cheer, the Ninja Crows all crawled on top of the robot as Jerry started the engines. Soon, the booster pods ignited with a loud roar, and the machine began to lift off to the delight of the Ninja Crows, who cheered as loudly as they could. “HA, HA, HA, HA!!!! Oh, Jerry, I gotta admit you outdid yourself! wIth this robot, taking down those kitties is gonna be no problem at all!” “Yes, Seymour…and the first thing we’ll do once we have the throne is to blow up a certain Pizza establishment. Little Tokyo won’t have any use of THAT anymore!” “Oh, Jerry, I’m so happy, this is so thrilling I’m overwhelmed!!” He took several deep breaths to calm himself….and his eyes spotted the Royal Guards making their appointed rounds. “Hey, Jerry…what say we have ourselves one more little test run of the weapons? Say a real life target practice?” Jerry followed his gaze…and grinned slyly. “I read you loud and clear, Cheesy!” He steered the robot back toward the island…..and right toward the guards. The guards blinked, unable to believe what they were seeing. But before they could do anything, the head mounted 60mm machine guns went off…and they found themselves face down in the sand, which was the only way they could avoid the deadly armor-shredding bullets. “HA, HA, HA!!!” Cheese laughed. “One little, two little, three little chestnuts. Four little, five little, six little chestnuts. Seven little, eight little, nine little chestnuts..” “Ten chestnuts on the ground, oh!!” Jerry and the Ninja Crows all exclaimed, laughing. With that done, Jerry pivoted the robot around by using the vernier thrusters, located under the armor on various parts of the robot’s body. Once he’d gotten the course set for Little Tokyo, he said, “Look out Pizza Cats…HERE WE COME!!!” Minutes later, they were off, ready to begin their plan for revenge. Back in Little Tokyo… Meanwhile, Cosmo and Myoshi had just finished going over the wedding food with Guido, Lucille, and Francine. “So, we start out with a hearty wonton soup and rice pilaf balls. Then we move on to the main course. Jiaozi, stuffed with meat AND cheese, Wally’s sushi platter, steamed orange duck, grilled chicken and beef teriaki, with Nikuman buns.” “You’re making me hungry!” Lucille said. “Tell us more!” “Well…along with that, there’s gonna be Japanese ramen noodles, some spaghetti and meatballs for some added flavor…and Guido says he’ll prepare the sauce.” Lucille smiled. “Oh, you will, Guido?” “It’s an old family recipe,” Guido said. “I can only give it to my first born son.” “And seeing as how my brother never plans on getting married, that means he’s going to his grave with the recipe!” Cosmo joked. “Hey, hey,” Guido said, hugging Lucille tightly. “Never say never,” he grinned slightly. “Well, maybe not never…maybe when you’re 40!” Cosmo cracked. “Which means…Lucy, Honey, you can take your sweet time picking out a dress!” Myoshi said. Guido put up his hands in mock surrender. His eyes fell upon the karaoke machine near the corner. “Hey, Francine..does that karaoke machine still work?” “I think so, Guido. Why?” “Cause I just thought of something else we can do,” Guido said eagerly. “We can lug in that machine, each of us pick a song, then we can sing them to Speedy and Polly at the reception!” “Guido…I can’t believe I’m saying this…but that is a great idea!” Myoshi said. “Wow, I’m seeing a real life miracle!” she laughed a bit, punched Guido lightly on the arm, and then she smiled and hugged him gently. “Oh, ya know I’m just kidding ya!” “I know, and ya kill me,” Guido said. Lucille kissed his cheek, causing him to smile. Francine peaked out the curtain just then. “Polly’s coming back!” She flung open the door and smiled. “Hey, Polly.” “Hi, Francine. Hi, Guido, Cosmo, Myoshi. Hi, Lucille.” “Hi, Polly,” Lucille said happily. “What’s going on, guys?” “Cosmo and I just put together the menu for your wedding.” she handed her the list. “How does this sound?” “Delicious!” Polly said. “I’m getting hungry just looking at this!” she smiled. “It’s perfect.” she sat down happily next to Lucille. “And here’s a copy of the wedding invitation,” Myoshi said, handing it to Polly. The invitation was on a pure, silky white piece of paper. In black fancy print was typed the words: Mr. And Mrs. Akira Esther Request The Honor Of Your Presence At The Marriage Of Their Daughter Polly To Mr. Speedy Cerviche At The Holy Name Church Friday, July 14th eight-thirty PM Reception to be held at the Pizza Cats Pizza Emporium immediately following the ceremony. Around the words were painted beautiful pictures of trees and brightly colored flowers. Polly gasped. “I love it, this is so beautiful!” “OK, we’ll use this!” Myoshi said, winking at Guido. Once they took back the invitations, she would change the time to six-thirty. “It’s amazing! Thank you so much for all of this! How much is this gonna be?” “It won’t matter. I’m paying!” “YOU, Fran?” “Uh huh!” “God, are you alright?” Polly joked. “Just fine. Call this a present!” Polly grinned and hugged her. “So, Polly, I’ve meaning to ask you, when do you wanna go shopping for our wedding dresses?” “I think we can do it this Saturday. I’ll pick up Sayaka, you meet us here at night, and we can all go together!” “Wow…you’re actually getting married. It’s unreal.” Cosmo said. “I know…I can’t believe it either,” Polly said, stretching out her hand and gazing at her ring. “Every time I see this ring, I feel like I’m dreaming, and I don’t wanna wake up!” “You must really love him.” “Yeah, more than anything in the world.“ She touched the Samurai pin she had worn ever since she had begun going steady with Speedy. She always wore it in the same place, right over her heart. “I just can’t believe he still wants to marry me after all I’ve put him through! This horrible temper of mine…I don’t know why I just can’t control it. I know a lot of men wouldn’t be able to take it and would have run off for the hills long ago. Somehow…he stayed. We had our share of fights over the years…and we’ve made up after each one of them.” She looked down as the memories came back to her. “I mean, I’ve called him names like ‘imbecile’, ‘a scrolls idea of Heaven’, I’ve even denied liking him…I was in such denial, until it was almost too late…and after all that he loves me anyway!” “He loves the real you, that’s why,” Cosmo said, putting his arm around Myoshi. “And that’s a kind of love that’s definitely meant to last forever! Like Myoshi and me.” “And we know you two are gonna be as happy as we still are,” Myoshi said. “Cause you two have so much chemistry between you…its so obvious to everyone! I mean, you guys grew up together. You’ve seen him at his best and worst. He’s seen ya at your best and worst…” “He has the patience of a saint for putting up with my worst!” Polly said. “Face it, sometimes I am just impossible to live with…don’t act like ya don’t know…but he lives with it anyway…and tolerates it, and loves me anyway. He’s so incredible…” She sighed. “I should really do something for him…I should cook him a special dinner tonight to make up for all I’ve put him through..” She stood up. “I’m gonna do that!” Cerviche household… Lydia put away the quilt carefully, knowing how proud Speedy’s parents would definitely be to see their son marry the lovely red-haired Cat his whole family loved. His parents were the kindest, most supportive people, and Lydia was glad that they had both lived long enough to see Speedy was like that as well. As she fingered Kagome’s row, her mind drifted back to the night before Speedy was to gradutate from Samurai Training and be initated as a full-fledged Samurai like his father… The entire Cerviche family was gathered in the dining room for a special family dinner to celebrate Speedy’s initiation the next day as a full-fledged Samurai. Lydia couldn’t help but notice that Speedy, now a grown adult in a handsome looking suit and tie and sitting next to his father, looked exactly like a younger version of his Dad. Kagome watched this with a hint of sadness in her eyes. She had just discovered that she had cancer, but she had asked Lydia and Jon not to say anything this week. Speedy had worked and trained long and hard for this day, and this was HIS! She did NOT want a cloud hanging over it, not at all on her dear son’s special day. Jon stood up and clinked his glass for attention. “A toast,” he said “ Listen up. I would like all of us here to raise our glasses in honor of my son, of whom I am extremely proud! It means a lot to me to have my own boy follow in my footsteps, and when he takes the vows at the ceremony tomorrow, and becomes a full-fledged Samurai, like his old man…I’ll be bursting with pride! So, at this time, I would like to say to my son, Speedy, now full grown to manhood and taking his position as head of the household…in one of my old suits and ties I might add….(everyone laughed at that) that I do plan to retire from the Imperial Guards soon, and when I do, I will present my own sword to my boy, with all the pride in my heart!” Everyone clapped, and Speedy hugged his Dad. Lydia couldn’t help but notice the tears in Kagome’s eyes, and reached out to take her hand. Lydia fingered the quilt again. “Kagome, Jon, even though you’re in Heaven now, I’m at least thankful you lived to see Speedy take his vows as a Samurai…and I know you’ll have the best wedding seats in the house!” Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 04, 2008, 11:50:20 pm Quote 98% true ONLY according to YOU! Also, if you stopped reading our stories, vvhy the heck are you still posting on this part of the fan vvorks section? Go somevvhere else. ONLY post to revievv, capisce? I can post where ever and whenever I want, hahaha. That's the purpose of forums, right? Indeed. :) And... Did you just say... "ONLY post to revievv, capisce?" Great spelling first of all. Secondly.... WHAT DO YOU THINK I DID FOR YOU IN THE OTHER 2 THREADS? I reviewed your stories and you obviously didn't like it and here we are now! I cannot comprehend this stupidity... I need a drink. Quote I don't think it's sub-par, and neither do alot of other people...just check Fanfiction.net. This story has gotten positive reviews all around on there, so other people DO appreciate our work. Lots of people like my works on FF.net too, I get good and bad reviews. If I do see a bad review, I recheck and go back to see where I went wrong, not get hurt and defensive and whine to people. Yes, I think this is rather sub-par, regardless of what anyone has said. I told you how to improve, but you chose to insult me and argue with me. Thanks a lot, see if I help you ever again. And.. I do have a question for you; why are you chopping this up into chapters when you could just post one link to FF.net where people can read the whole thing at once. Little help for ya there, but of course, you'll berate me about it too. :) ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on February 05, 2008, 12:04:00 am And.. I do have a question for you; why are you chopping this up into chapters when you could just post one link to FF.net where people can read the whole thing at once. Little help for ya there, but of course, you'll berate me about it too. :) ~Burkey Because it's not finished yet, vve don't knovv if people vvill read it then, and vve don't vvant to!! Ya knovv, it is possible to post negative revievvs VVITHOUT hurting other people's feelings. The moderators should post a vvarning at the top of this forum: All Speedy and Polly lovers vvill immidiately get stoned to death on this board!! Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 05, 2008, 12:20:20 am Please, can we STOP the bickering? The next chapter will be coming soon.
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 05, 2008, 01:21:03 am Quote The moderators should post a vvarning at the top of this forum: All Speedy and Polly lovers vvill immidiately get stoned to death on this board!! We have plenty of people here who share all 'ships between characters. I'm not writing against that fact, nor am I writing against ANYTHING. All I did was write a review. Grow up. I want you to please high-light the supposed "mean" and "hurtful" things I wrote in my review. I'm curious to know, as obviously you know my writing better than I do, so teach me. ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 05, 2008, 01:35:32 am I'm sorry if I misunderstood you, I've just been under a lot of stress at work lately. Let's just let this go, before it really gets into a massive flame-war, which I really don't want.
Here's the new chapter. Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Songs for this chapter: Speedy: ‘I Don’t Wanna Miss A Thing’-Aerosmith Polly: ‘My Guy’-Mary Wells Chapter Sixteen: A Special Dinner…For A Very Special Cat Polly got herself up at 8:45am, and when she checked the calendar on her wall, her heart skipped a beat…there were only seven days left until she and Speedy would finally be married. Polly had never been happier, than when she was with Speedy. He was honest, kind, and honorable, not to mention funny, smart, and, as far as she was concerned…he was the most handsome cat in all of Little Tokyo. If anyone DARED to insult him in front of her, she’d have their guts for garters before they could blink. She remembered that she would be heading out with Francine and the other girls today, so that they could pick up their wedding dresses. Polly had already decided on what she wanted. It was a light blue dress, with silver highlights, and a gold floral pattern woven into it. She’d seen it in a store a couple days ago, and she’d asked the shop’s owner to hold it for her, which they’d been happy to oblige. She went in for a shower, got herself dressed, and then she headed downstairs. Once she made her way into the kitchen, she saw Francine making one of her favorite breakfasts, a cheese omelet, with bacon and hashbrowns on the side. She said, “Francine…you don’t have to make breakfast for me…I can cook for myself…but thank you anyway.” Francine smiled, and replied, “Well…since you’ll be doing a lot of running around today, I wanted you to have plenty of energy for when we all head out after breakfast.” Polly replied, “Thanks, Fran…you really are a wonderful friend, honestly.” Francine slid the omelet onto Polly’s plate, along with the bacon and hashbrowns, and then she said, “I already called up Lucille, and she should be over here soon, along with her brother Wally. Cosmo and Myoshi are coming too, and they’ll be heading out with Speedy, Guido, and Good Bird, so that they can pick up their clothes. We’ll pick up your sister, and then head out.” Polly replied, “Sounds good to me, Fran…oh look…here’s Lucille now.” Francine said, “Hi there, Lucille, Wally. How’s it going?” Lucille replied, “Wonderful, Francine…I can’t believe this…my two dearest friends are only a week away from getting married…” Wally rubbed her shoulders to calm her down, and Guido then came down the stairs, followed shortly afterwards by Speedy. Polly’s eyes lit up at the sight of her beloved fiancé, and she ran up to him, pulling him into a hug. Speedy wrapped his arms around her, and said, “Good morning, Kitten…how’s my lovely Pollyanna today?” Polly replied, “Never better, Pussycat.” Speedy said, “So…what’s up for today, Polly?” She replied, “Well…the girls and I are gonna head out to pick up our wedding dresses, and you guys can watch the TV until we get back…and make sure the Pizza’s get there hot!” Speedy replied, “Hey…you know me, Kitten…I don’t goof around like that anymore…I’ve got you to come back to, so nothing’s gonna hold me up.” Cosmo and Myoshi arrived, along with Good Bird and Carla. Once they all greeted one another, and got breakfast out of the way, they cleaned up, and while the girls headed out to shop, the guys all took care of the Pizza Parlor. Polly and her friends arrived at the Esther household shortly before noon, and she headed up to the door. She rang the bell, and her mother opened up. Tane said, “Polly! Hello, dear…I see you’re all ready to head out for your dress. Hold on, I’ll just get your sister. Tane headed into the main hallway, and called up the stairs, “SAYAKA…YOUR SISTER’S HERE!!!” Moments later, the younger Esther sister came down the stairs, and nearly tackled Polly when she went to hug her. Cosmo said, “Wow…she’s a feisty one, isn’t she?” Myoshi replied, “Yeah…Speedy’s really getting a winner with Polly…the chemistry between them…it’s so plain to see, you’d have to be as stupid as Big Cheese to miss it.” Polly and Sayaka came outside, and once Sayaka had greeted everyone, they headed off together, bound for the mall. Meanwhile, in a cave outside the city… After almost two months of being off course, due to the Ninja Crows’ horrible sense of direction, not to mention their unending stupidity, Cheese’s robot finally touched down, since Jerry had located a cave large enough for them to hide out in, until they were ready to strike. Cheese guided the robot down, using the hover thrusters, and then he walked it into the cave, crouched it down, and popped open the cockpit hatch. The Ninja Crows got out first, and Cheese followed, along with Jerry. Cheese looked around him, and said, “Well…well…we’re FINALLY home…NO THANKS TO YOU IDIOTS!!!” Jerry said, “Cheesy, we’ll need to refuel the robot, since there’s only about ten minutes worth of jet fuel left in the boosters. Also, the main power core’s going to need at least a week to recharge, since it’s nearly depleted. Most importantly…I think we could all use some sleep…it’s been a long flight.” Cheese shouted, “IF IT WEREN’T FOR THESE STUPID NINJA CROWS AND THEIR HORRIBLE FLYING SKILLS, WE’D HAVE GOTTEN HERE OVER A MONTH AGO!!!” He calmed himself down, and then he turned back to face the Ninja Crows. He said, “Now, my Ninja Crows…when did we leave Prisoners’ Island?” One of them replied, “Uhm…May 28th, boss.” Cheese replied, “That’s right. Now then…what’s TODAY’s date?” Another Ninja Crow replied, “It’s July 7th, boss.” Cheese replied, “Very good…now then, for the one million yen question…WHY DID IT TAKE US SO LONG TO GET BACK HERE?!” Jerry replied, “Uhm…because the Ninja Crows were flying the robot, and they kept getting lost.” Cheese replied, “Correct. Jerry, the NEXT time you let those idiots man the controls of a robot, I’m going to tie you to a chair, and make you watch Michael Jackson music videos, and Hillary Clinton political speeches, IS THAT UNDERSTOOD?!” Jerry replied, “Y-yes…Cheesy…I promise you, it’ll NEVER happen again.” He then muttered, “It’s a good thing we didn’t let YOU fly, or we’d all be at the bottom of the ocean by now…oops…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY…DO YOU HAVE A DEATH WISH?!” Jerry frantically began waving his hands in front of him, and said, “N-no, Cheesy…I meant to say that…uhm…we didn’t want to let you fly, because we could see that you needed some rest, and I didn’t want you to fall asleep at the controls.” Cheese calmed down, and said, “Ahh…well, when ya put it that way, Jerry…I’m touched, that you’re so concerned about me. Thank you, for not disturbing my beauty sleep.” Jerry muttered, “I’m glad I didn’t, since you’re still a few million years shy of having enough beauty sleep, that you wouldn’t make Medusa jealous…oh no…why do I keep doing this…” Cheese screamed, “WHO ARE YOU CALLING UGLY, YOU HIDEOUS TROLL?! I’M SURPRISED THAT YOUR REFLECTION DOESN’T RUN AWAY WHEN YOU LOOK IN A MIRROR…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and Jerry went sailing into the wall of the cave. Once he’d recovered from his tantrum, Cheese said, “Listen up, my Ninja Crows…I want you to head out to Little Tokyo, snoop around, and find out what’s going on, then report back here. No sidetrips, and NO GOOFING OFF!” The Ninja Crows started tripping over each other for a few minutes, until they finally got their act in gear, and headed out. Cheese said, “Those stupid Pizza Cats…they don’t suspect a thing, Jerry. Soon, they’ll be out of our way, and I’ll be on the throne as the new Emperor!” Jerry muttered, “If you want to see stupid, go look in a mirror…uh-oh…” Cheese shouted, “DID YOU JUST SAY THAT I’M DUMB ENOUGH TO MAKE THE PRODUCERS OF GREY’S ANATOMY LOOK LIKE ROCKET SCIENTISTS?!! AAARRRGGHHH!!!” Cheese went off again, and Jerry was blasted clean out of the cave. He said, “One of these days, I’m gonna learn to keep my big mouth shut…that is…if he doesn’t kill me first…but right now…I need a nap…ugh…” Jerry fell over, and everything was quiet. Mall of Little Tokyo… Polly and the others arrived at the mall just after 1:30pm, and they made their first stop in the dress shop. While the girls were in looking for dresses, Cosmo went into the men’s formal wear shop, and purchased a cobalt blue tuxedo, with silver trim on the shirtcuffs. Meanwhile, Polly had picked up her dress, and Lucille found a lovely yellow dress, with a picture of a Sakura tree sewn into the back. Francine found herself a pretty white dress, with green and gold highlights, Myoshi got herself a pink dress, with white trim, and then Sayaka came over, with a dress in her arms that made Polly’s face light up with joy. It was a bright, fiery red, with pink and gold highlights, just like her armor. Polly said, “Sayaka…that dress…it’s lovely!” She replied, “Thanks, sis…I wanted to pick out a dress that reminded me of you, and since this one’s in the same colors as your armor, I knew it’d be perfect. You’ve done so much for me…and I just want you to know this, Polly…I know that your life with Speedy is going to be wonderful…I’ve seen how much he loves you.” Polly hugged her sister, and replied, “I know, Sayaka…the two of us…we truly are meant to be together, and I’ll love him until the end of time.” The other girls, along with Cosmo, caught up with the Esther sisters, and together, they went and paid for their clothing, before heading for home. Pizza Cat Pizza Emporium… Speedy and Guido were watching a baseball game on the television, and Good Bird was just getting in from running a pair of large meatball subs over to the North End of Little Tokyo. He put the delivery pack down, slid the money into the register, and then logged the delivery on the clipboard, so that Francine would have a record of their activities. Once he was done with that, he grabbed a soda from the cooler, and walked into the living room. He said, “How’s the game going, guys?” Speedy replied, “The home team’s up six to nothing, top of the seventh.” Good Bird replied, “Great. Did the girls call yet?” Guido replied, “No, not yet…” Just then, Speedy’s cell phone rang, and he picked up, after moving into the kitchen, where he could have some privacy. A few minutes later, he closed his phone, walked back into the living room, and smiled. Good Bird asked, “What’s got you so happy, Speedy?” He replied, “That was Polly. She said that she and the others are on their way home, and I told her that we’ve been taking turns running deliveries. Francine said that she’s PERSONALLY going to give us all a raise.” Guido and Good Bird both smiled at the news, and then they went back to watching the game, until they heard the door open. The girls all said their good-byes, and headed for home, while Polly and Francine headed upstairs to hide their dresses. Once they’d done so, Francine and Polly came downstairs, and while Francine did a cash count, and checked the delivery log, Polly went in and hugged Speedy, and then she sat down to watch the rest of the game with him. A few hours later… Polly and Francine were sitting at one of the tables, having a friendly chat with one another. Guido had gone to speak with his brother and Myoshi, while Speedy and Good Bird were outside, doing some sparring with their swords, so that they could keep their skills sharp. Francine said, “So, Polly…have you got plans for tonight? Are you and Speedy doing anything?” Polly replied, “No, Fran…I just wish there was some way that I could thank him for putting up with my explosive temper for so long, and for loving me for who I am, despite my faults.” Francine put a hand on her friend’s shoulder, and said, “Polly…he loves you, because he’s known you long enough to see BOTH sides of you, good and bad…and he knows that your GOOD qualities MORE than make up for your few faults. You’re kind, sweet, brave, and loyal. You’ve got a great personality, and you never, ever abandon your friends when they need you. You see…Speedy sees through your few quirks, and he knows that you’ve got a heart of gold, and a pure soul, capable of love.” Polly smiled, and replied, “Thanks, Francine…you’re a true friend, ya know that…in fact, I just thought of something…I’ll cook a special dinner for him tonight, to show him how much I appreciate him.” Francine said, “Polly…that sounds great! What are you gonna cook?” Polly thought about it for a few minutes, and then she replied, “I think I’ll make a teriyaki-flavored chicken stir fry, with some peppers, soy sauce, and some Lo-Mein noodles on the side. For dessert, I’ll make some homemade cherry/watermelon ice cream, using a recipe that my mom taught me.” Francine replied, “Wow…sounds yummy! Make sure to save some of the ice cream for me…I might want a snack later.” Polly said, “Sure thing, Fran…can you make sure to clear out by around 6:30 or so, since that’s when I plan to start cooking?” Francine said, “Sure. I’ll go over to the art museum, since they’ve got a new exhibit that I want to see, Guido said that he’s gonna take Lucille out for a walk, and Good Bird said that he was gonna take Carla to a movie.” Polly replied, “Great! I’ll go get the ingredients I need, after we close up for the night.” Francine smiled at her friend, and then they both went back to work. Over at Cosmo and Myoshi’s house… Guido walked into his brother’s house, after Cosmo opened the door for him, and he said, “Hey bro. How’s Myoshi?” Cosmo replied, “Just dandy, buddy. How’s things between you and Lucille?” Guido replied, “Great. I’m gonna take her out to the park tonight. Now then…as soon as Myoshi comes down…” Myoshi said, “Hello, Guido. How’s our favorite Casanova Samurai?” Guido replied, “Haha…Myoshi. My days of chasing every pretty girl in town are done…since there’s only ONE that I have my heart set on now.” Myoshi replied, “Hey, I was just kidding…you know we love ya!” She hugged him, and Cosmo playfully elbowed him. Guido said, “Now then…before I forget what I came here for, let’s finalize our plans. Next week, we pick up everybody at their homes, and head over to the Holy Name Church. Fran, Sayaka, and Lucille are gonna help Polly with her preparations, and I’ll be helping Speedy, along with Good Bird. You two, work with Wally on getting the food over there, and the Rescue Team’s gonna be in charge of passing out the invitations. As for the guest list, here goes…Al Dente and his wife, Polly’s mother, father, sister, her grandmother, her cousins from Kyoto, Speedy’s aunt, his uncle, and some of his old friends out of Samurai Academy. Also, we’ll have Sylvia, her son, and a few other friends that the bride and groom-to-be have made over the years. The wedding starts off at 6:30, then we hold the reception at the Pizza Parlor from 8:30 to 9:30. Finally, Speedy and Polly head off for their honeymoon in the Caribbean.” Meanwhile, A Ninja Crow fluttered down outside, and listened in on the conversation. His eyes went wide when he heard about Speedy and Polly getting married, and he said to himself, ‘Oh man…the boss is gonna want to know about this. I better head back and tell him right away!” He turned to leave, but stepped on a twig, and then he tripped over a rock. Guido turned around, but the Ninja Crow was already gone. Cosmo said, “What’s up, Guido?” He replied, “Nothing…just my imagination…I could’ve sworn that I heard a noise, but I guess it was just the wind.” The three of them went over their choices for music, and then Guido headed back home, so that he could get ready for his date with Lucille. Two hours later… As the restaurant closed up for the evening, Francine said, “Okay, Polly. You can head out now. Speedy’s out delivering the last pizza of the day, and he won’t be back until at least after you get home, since he had to run it clear across the city. I’m heading out now, and Guido’s already gone with Lucille. Have fun, Polly!” Smiling, Polly replied, “Thanks…you too, Francine!” Polly watched her friend leave, and then she walked out, locking the shop up and taking her key with her. As she made her way down towards the grocery store, Polly heard a rustle in the alleyway off to her left, and she said, “Who’s in there?” She heard nothing, so she kept walking. A few minutes later, she heard, “Well…well…if it isn’t little miss Polly Esther…all alone and vulnerable…what’s the matter, little kitty…did you have another fight with the shrimp and the showoff?” Polly growled, and said, “You lousy little idiot…GET OUT HERE!!!” The Ninja Crow came out, and said, “Hiya, kitty…I see that you’re by yourself…and the other two aren’t around to save your pretty little hide this time. Why don’t you surrender now, before I have to get rough with ya?” Polly replied, “Hah…that’s a laugh…you think YOU can beat ME…maybe when Cheese grows half a brain cell!” The Ninja Crow replied, “Oh yeah…come over here and say that…no wait…stay where you are…I don’t wanna pass out and die…OLD HALIBUT BREATH!!!!” Polly unsheathed her claws, and shouted, “NOBODY CALLS ME OLD HALIBUT BREATH AND LIVES, YOU WALKING FEATHERDUSTER!!! YOU’RE DEAD!!!” Polly pounced on the Ninja Crow, and beat him to a pulp. Once she was done with him, she pulled out her flute and her sword, and said, “Time for a flight back home, you turkey…HEARTBREAKER!!!” The powerful blast hit the Ninja Crow, and sent him flying back to the cave that he and his fellow goons were hiding in. After Polly sent the dumb bird packing, she resumed her trek to the grocery store. One hour later… Polly arrived back home, and began to chop up her ingredients. She roasted chicken, poured some teriyaki seasoning and soy sauce on it, chopped up some peppers, and then she threw into the wok. Before long, she had dinner ready, and just in time. Speedy came in, placed the money into the register, and logged his delivery, before punching out. He plopped down, and said, “Whew…oh man, I’m tired…hey, Kitten…what’s that I smell?” Polly smiled, and replied, “It’s dinner, Speedy…a dinner I made, just for you. Teriyaki-flavored chicken stir-fry, with peppers and soy sauce, rice, and some Lo-Mein noodles on the side.” Speedy replied, “Wow…Polly, you…you didn’t have to go through all this trouble to make dinner for me…” Polly put her hands on his shoulders, and said, “Speedy…I wanted to. I made this dinner, as my way of thanking you for all the years of friendship and love you’ve given me…and for putting up with my temper…even though I must’ve seemed impossible at times.” Speedy replied, “Polly…I’ve been your friend ever since third grade, and we’ve been together long enough, that I can see through the few little faults you’ve got. Yeah…your temper’s pretty hot, but you’re also a brave, compassionate, beautiful, and wonderful female cat…the one that I’m lucky enough to be able to call my best friend, and my bride-to-be. Polly Esther…I love you, and I always will.” She teared up, and replied, “Oh Speedy…I-I love you too.” Speedy pulled her into a kiss, and then she dished up dinner. Speedy took a bite, and said, “Wow…Polly, this is…it’s great! Where’d you get the recipe?” She smiled, and replied, “It’s my mom’s recipe, Speedy.” He replied, “Well…I’m gonna tell her the next time I see her…she’s got a wonderful recipe…and a VERY special, wonderful daughter.” Polly smiled, and then she and Speedy went back to their meal. Once they finished, Speedy said, “Polly, thanks so much. I’ve got a song I’d like to sing for you, called ‘I Don’t Wanna Miss A Thing’, by Aerosmith.” Polly smiled, and said, “Sounds great, Pussycat…let the good times roll!” Speedy smiled, and then he began singing. ‘I could stay awake just to hear you breathing Watch you smile while you are sleeping Far away and dreaming I could spend my life in this sweet surrender I could stay lost in this moment forever Well, every moment spent with you Is a moment I treasure I don't wanna close my eyes I don't wanna fall asleep 'Cause I'd miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing 'Cause even when I dream of you The sweetest dream will never do I'd still miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing Lying close to you Feeling your heart beating And I'm wondering what you're dreaming Wondering if it's me you're seeing Then I kiss your eyes and thank God we're together And I just wanna stay with you In this moment forever, forever and ever I don't wanna close my eyes I don't wanna fall asleep 'Cause I'd miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing 'Cause even when I dream of you The sweetest dream will never do I'd still miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing I don't wanna miss one smile I don't wanna miss one kiss Well, I just wanna be with you Right here with you, just like this I just wanna hold you close Feel your heart so close to mine And stay here in this moment For all the rest of time Don't wanna close my eyes Don't wanna fall asleep 'Cause I'd miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing 'Cause even when I dream of you The sweetest dream will never do 'Cause I'd still miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing I don't wanna close my eyes I don't wanna fall asleep 'Cause I'd miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing 'Cause even when I dream of you The sweetest dream will never do I'd still miss you, babe And I don't wanna miss a thing Don't wanna close my eyes Don't wanna fall asleep, yeah I don't wanna miss a thing.’ Polly hugged Speedy, and said, “That was such a fitting song for us, Speedy…and I think that this one here really sums up my feelings for you. It’s called ‘My Guy’, by Mary Wells.” Speedy said, “Wow…I know that song, and it’ll be great to hear it from you, my lovely Pollyanna.” With a smile, Polly began singing, letting Speedy know that she’d always be at his side. ‘Nothing you can say, Can take me away, From my guy. Nothing you could do, 'cause I'm stuck like glue, To my guy. I'm sticking to my guy, Like a stamp to a letter, Like birds of a feather, We, stick together, I can tell you from the start, I can't be torn apart from my guy. Nothing you could do, Could make me be untrue, To my guy. (My Guy) Nothing you could buy, Could make me tell a lie, To my guy (My Guy) I gave my guy, My word of honour, To be faithful, And I'm gonna, You'd better be believing, I won't be deceiving, My guy. As a matter of opinion, I think he's tops, My opinion is, He's the cream of the crop, As a matter of taste, To be exact, He's my ideal, As a matter of fact. No muscle bound man, Could take my hand, From my guy. (My guy) No handsome face, Could ever take the place, Of my guy, (My guy) He may not be a movie star, But when it comes to being happy, We are, There's not a man today, Who can take me away, From my guy. No muscle bound man, Could take my hand, From my guy. (My guy) No handsome face, Could ever take the place, Of my guy, (My guy) He may not be a movie star, But when it comes to being happy, We are, There's not a man today, Who can take me away, From my guy. (what'cha say?) There's not a man today, Who could take me away, From my guy. (Tell me more!) There's not a man today, Who could take me away, From my guy.’ Speedy said, “Oh wow…Polly, every time I hear you sing, it just gets better and better!” Polly kissed him on the nose, and said, “Hang on, Speedy…I’m gonna go get dessert.” Polly went out back, and grabbed a couple of spoons, two dishes, and then she dished her homemade cherry/watermelon ice cream into the dishes, and carried them out. Speedy asked, “Hey kitten, what’s in the bowls?” She replied, “It’s another recipe of my mom’s, Speedy. Cherry/watermelon ice cream.” Speedy tried some, and said, “Oh wow…it’s great!” They ate their desserts, and then they headed in to watch a movie together, before heading up to bed for the night. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 05, 2008, 01:52:08 am Quote I'm sorry if I misunderstood you, I've just been under a lot of stress at work lately. Finally! There we go! Now we're getting somewhere. I've been having a hell of time lately and being online is one of my outlets for said stress. Now perhaps I have a reason behind the thick-headedness of the past... 15 replies or more in this thread. Thank you for sharing that, makes me understand now. As for you, Pollygirl, if that is your real name, it's time for you to straighten your head out and understand that I am NOT insulting you. I am not presenting anything in an insulting manner or negative way. It's called a critique for a reason; both the good and bad points are brought to our attention. What the usual response should be: "Oh, thanks for your kind words and that you took the time to read my story! I'll try to work on the points you mentioned, or I'll have someone edit it for me." Instead: "zomg my feelings are hirt!!!1 your insulting meeeee! everyone says they liek my story, why won't you??? its a great story!!!" Obviously over-exaggerating, but still, that's how it feels whenever I read a response in this thread from you. Read again that I am not insulting you, and if you can't take constructive-critisim... Tough. Get over it, move on. Grow up. ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Methid Man on February 05, 2008, 02:54:02 pm Burke, I would've actually sided with you on this if you had given an actual critical review of this fanfic, because then it would've just been a matter of Pollygirl and Razgriz getting all pissy that someone didn't like their story, which I can agree IS very newbish.
All you gave, however, was a bickering that it was a cliched concept. The purpose of a review, whether positive or negative, is to give the writer feedback on how they can improve their writing ability. Seriously, Burke, if you really think it's as crappy as you make it out to be, couldn't you have said anything more than just "I've seen this a million times already"? Besides, it's not their fault so many other people have written Speedy+Polly fanfics before them. The fact that they intend to write something of their own that just happens to be a popular story concept shouldn't automatically make them bad writers, and I can see why they would be defending themselves the way they are. Also, the fact you resort to throwing insults to defend your position makes you look even worse. Next time you give an opinion on someone's writing, it better be constructive criticism rather than just a one-line whining. Quality replies are something I expect to see in this forum anyway. Pollygirl and Razgriz: Whatever you two write, just be prepared for any kind of review, be it positive or negative. Try not to take negative feedback too personally just because it doesn't agree with the content. Take it as advice on how to improve your writing and work from there. Good luck. -- Sam the Methid Man Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 05, 2008, 08:31:18 pm Thank you for sticking up for us, Methid Man. I'll take your advice about reviews to heart, and learn to improve my writing, if I see someone point out a problem, as long as they don't launch into a negative rant about the concept of the story itself. Once again, I really appreciate your assistance.
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on February 05, 2008, 11:02:58 pm I agree, and thank you so much for standing up for us. It's not that vve can't take negative critisim, it's the vvay he critisized us. I mean, on another of my stories he did say I vvrote like a 12-year-old girl! (that vvas on my Speedy and Polly Christmas story) and personally I like my vvriting the vvay it is.
But thank you so much! VVe fully appreciate this vvholeheartedly! Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 05, 2008, 11:44:45 pm My thoughts exactly. Hopefully, the next chapter will be coming up either tomorrow or the next day.
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 06, 2008, 12:35:35 am Quote Burke, I would've actually sided with you on this if you had given an actual critical review of this fanfic, because then it would've just been a matter of Pollygirl and Razgriz getting all pissy that someone didn't like their story, which I can agree IS very newbish. All you gave, however, was a bickering that it was a cliched concept. The purpose of a review, whether positive or negative, is to give the writer feedback on how they can improve their writing ability. Seriously, Burke, if you really think it's as crappy as you make it out to be, couldn't you have said anything more than just "I've seen this a million times already"? Besides, it's not their fault so many other people have written Speedy+Polly fanfics before them. The fact that they intend to write something of their own that just happens to be a popular story concept shouldn't automatically make them bad writers, and I can see why they would be defending themselves the way they are. Also, the fact you resort to throwing insults to defend your position makes you look even worse. Next time you give an opinion on someone's writing, it better be constructive criticism rather than just a one-line whining. Quality replies are something I expect to see in this forum anyway. Pollygirl and Razgriz: Whatever you two write, just be prepared for any kind of review, be it positive or negative. Try not to take negative feedback too personally just because it doesn't agree with the content. Take it as advice on how to improve your writing and work from there. Good luck. -- Sam the Methid Man First off: Edited for stupid color, size and boldness so it's actually easy on the eyes. Secondly: Methid Man, I don't think you quite have the full story here. Let me explain. Our esteemed writers here showed up and posted their story, about Christmas no less, right around the Christmas season. Cool. I read it and decided to shed some light and help out our new writers. I wrote a massive review (which you can please read RIGHT HERE. (http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=1548.msg18355#msg18355)) As you can see, it's filled with both positive remarks and not so positive remarks aimed at helping point out the trouble spots. Herein lies the problem. Our two writers here seemed to think I was just merely insulting them for the sake of lulz and giggles. Shame, if I were in my BurkeWorld mode instead of my StreetSlyde mode, I probably would have. But no, I spent more than 30 minutes writing that review out at 4:30 AM because I thought it was worth it to say something. Instead, I get whiny responses and cries of hurt feelings and other such BS that quickly made me feel as though all the time and energy I spent writing my review was for nothing. Raz + PollyGirl: Let me point out something to you that may be the honest, sucky truth; your fictions are indeed sub-par. I tried to tell you how to fix them up, but you simply wouldn't listen. Now, before you say "But lots of people like them!!11" let me say the following. I did a little reasearch last night and checked all your stories on FF.net and I learned a few things. There have only been FOUR people to review yours stories, 2 of them are yourselves. The other one who I recognize is PizzaCatDiv and if you look at his history, he gives great reviews to EVERY SPC fiction on there, because he's a really nice guy or on drugs or something. So he doesn't count. The only other name I saw was someone named "acosta perez jose ramiro." So... One person does not count for a lot, sorry to say. Now back to you Methid Man, read my review again, then understand this; why would I write a second review for a different story if I'm going to get the same response? Why waste all that time and energy and get nothing for it but BS answers and moronic insights to "hurt feelings" and epic whining? Screw that. When I read these respones, I literally lost my appetite just now. I no longer want to finish my Shrove Tuesday meal, and that makes me mad. For the record, PollyGirl should learn to read, as I never called her 12 years old. I called her 16 or 15 years old at that. Maybe I should go back and edit to say she was 12 years old, it would be more accurate. Go somewhere else and spread your slander, it's not welcome here. As I said last night: grow up and good night. :) ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Razgriz27 on February 06, 2008, 09:42:46 pm Here's the newest chapter:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban. Chapter Seventeen: When Friends Come to Visit “Yeah, that’s right,” Guido said on the phone the next afternoon in the back room. “Best room you’ve got for July 14th. Around ten-thirty, or eleven. Yeah, that’s right. Put it under Cerviche. C-e-r-v-i-c-h-e. That’s right. Yeah, and anything they might ring up from room service...put it on my tab. Anchovy. A-n-c-h-o-v-y. Right.” Guido pulled out his wallet and took out his credit card. “OK, my number is..” Myoshi came in just then and stood behind Guido as he finished. “OK so it’s all confirmed? OK, thanks a lot.” He hung up the phone and turned to see Myoshi there with her arms folded and a sly look on her face. “Hey, Myoshi, when did you get in?” “Just a few minutes ago. Soooooo….what was that all about?” she winked at him. “You bad boy, you…you gonna go take Lucille out for a weekend of fun? You ought ta be ashamed of yourself.” Guido lightly punched her on the arm. “Oh yeah, that’s right Myoshi, I’m gonna sneak out early and run away to go be frisky with Lucille all day long…come ON, I respect my Samurai vows, ya know!” “So, what are ya doing then?” “I just finished booking the best hotel room for Speedy and Polly at The Rising Sun.” “Whoa, whoa, whoa…The Rising Sun? Guido, that’s the fanciest, most expensive hotel in all of Tokyo.” “I know, and it’s also the best, and my two best friends deserve nothing but the best. I booked the boat too. At ten-thirty the morning after their wedding, the boat will escort them to the Caribbean for two weeks of love and enjoyment.” Myoshi stared at this Cat in front of her like she’d never seen him before. “Who are you?” she finally asked, before hugging him to let him know she was only kidding. Later that day, Polly was doing her usual thing, cutting up ingredients to use for the pizzas. Speedy slowly came up from behind and wrapped his arms around her waist. “Hey, beautiful Kitten,” he whispered, kissing her cheek tenderly. Polly smiled and leaned back against his chest. “Hey, Pussycat,” she greeted, putting her hand on his as he tightened his grip around her waist. Speedy gently kissed the back of her neck as he moved one hand up until it was on her shoulder. Polly moved her head a bit and kissed it. With a happy sigh she closed her eyes as Speedy and Polly just relished in being together. For the longest time they stayed like that, not saying a word, they didn’t have to. Simply enjoying the feel of each other’s hands on their waists and shoulders spoke of their love for one another, better than any mere words could. Speedy gently ran his hand in small circles up Polly’s back, while trailing tiny kisses down her neck. “Mmm…that feels so nice.” “”Anything for you, Pumpkin,” Speedy said honestly. He wrapped his arm completely around her shoulders and kissed her through her helmet, causing her to giggle and blush. She leaned even further back against him until she was as far back as she could get while still chopping ingredients. He kissed her neck, and she moved her head enough to receive a kiss on her lips. It was just a peck, but the energy between them was so powerful, so amazing. He had never felt this attracted, this energized, this incredible feeling ever before, with anyone! He massaged her shoulders and kissed her again, letting his deep, passionate love all out, all for her and no one else. Who knew even a peck had that much power? “Ahem!” Francine said, looking into the kitchen. “Romeo? Can you take your hands off Juliet for a few minutes to run this pizza to the Bulldogs? Make sure it gets there HOT!” “Yes, Ma’am,” Speedy said,. “I can assure ya it’s gonna be! After all, I can’t fool around anymore…not when I got this incredibly lovely dreamcake to come back to!” He pecked Polly and left. “Please come out here, Polly, we got a long line of customers!“ Francine slowly walked back to the gathering crowd. “Sorry about the wait…I’ll be so glad when they’re finally married!” A little while later, Speedy had returned, and he, along with Polly, Guido, and Francine, as well as Good Bird and Carla, were conducting business as usual, when the door opened and voices familiar to him and Polly came. “Hey, good morning, all!!! Where’s our Speedy, huh? Where’s our big guy?!” Suddenly, a number of Cats came through the door. One was a tall, strong-looking blond haired cat, another was a smaller girl with long black hair. A third was a curly haired-brunette. Next came a skinny brown haired guy, and finally, in strolled a blond haired guy that was almost as tall as the strong looking blond was. “Hey, Speedy!!’ “Uncle Ben!! Aunt Vanessa! Mallory, Ji Lin! Heroshi!!” Speedy cried, jumping from his chair to hug them. “I didn’t know you guys were coming!” Polly cried happily. “Surprise!!” the long haired brunette cried. “Hey, I thought Speedy only had one Aunt and Uncle!”, Guido whispered. “He does,” Polly explained. “These guys were his parent’s best friends! We both have known them since we were Kittens, and we just call them Aunt and Uncle….wHOOOOOOOAAA!!” Before she could say anything more, the big muscular Cat had picked her up and was twirling her around and around. “Is this our little girl?!” He said out loud, holding her up over his head. “Is THIS our Little Polly?! Look at her!!!” “For Heaven’s sake, Ben, put her down! I think she’d like to be able to breathe long enough to say her vows!” The long haired brunette said. “Oh, right Mallory,” he put her down. “Sorry, Cherry.” He patted her shoulder. The curly haired girl hugged Speedy. “Oh, wow!! Look at you, look at how handsome you’ve become!! Look at him, all! Oh, if only your parents could see you now!!” “Aw, Vanessa!” “No, I mean it. Jon, may he rest in peace, always said he had the best looking son, and I can see it so clearly now!” She stood back a bit with tears in her eyes. “You’re the living picture of your Dad!” She went to hug Polly. “Oh…wow..Polly!! This is our little Polly?! Pretty little Polly, I can’t believe it! What happened to that cute little kitten with the red pigtails and the sailor suit who was always running around with Speedy?” Polly laughed. “She grew up!” “She sure did…and look at how beautiful she became! If I didn’t consider you both to be like family, I’d be jealous! Look at you! Look at our Cherry!” “Cherry?!” Guido asked. “Cherry,” Vanessa said. “We all called her Cherry, cause….well you must know! Unfortunately, they’re making her wear…what? What is this you guys are wearing?” “It’s our pizza uniform,” Speedy explained. “Remember, I told you?” “Oh yeah.” “I know we kinda came without calling first,” Heroshi said. “Someone is Mr. Procrastinator..” he looked at Ji Lin knowingly. “But we hope you guys can fit in a few extra wedding guests..” “Sure, sure! Anything for my Dad’s closest friends!” Speedy said. “When our late best friend’s son gets married, you can bet we’ll be there!” Mallory said. “Come over here, meet everyone!” Speedy said. “This is my best guy friend, Guido Anchovy. This is his brother, Cosmo and his wife, Myoshi. This is Lucille Omitsu, Guido’s girlfriend, and Polly’s best girl friend. This is the Captain of the Royal Guard and our boss, Al Dente. The male crow over there is Good Bird, and the red-haired female crow is his girlfriend, Carla. Good Bird used to be Bad Bird, the leader of Seymour Cheese’s Ninja Crows, but he reformed and became Good Bird, just before the comet would’ve wiped the whole city out. Good Bird helped him to destroy it, and from then on, he’s been pardoned by Princess Vi, and he and Carla have been dating ever since. this is Francine Manx, the owner of this restaurant. This is Ben, his wife Mallory, Vanessa, and her brothers Ji Lin and Heroshi. My Dad’s best friends!” “A pleasure,” Al said, shaking hands with them. “You should be extremely proud of him.” “Oh we are, we are!” Vanessa said. “After the Comet Caper we heard what Speedy did…and we spent a few months bragging that we knew his father and watched this fine, strong, brave Cat grow up!” “Very nice to meet you all, please have a seat near the wall,” Francine said. “Have a seat, take a load off,” Polly said. “We’ll bring you some of our best pizza!” “Anything they order, it’s on me, Fran!” Speedy said. “Where are you guys staying until the wedding?” Polly asked. “Oh, don’t worry about us, we all got rooms at a nearby hotel. We’re fine. Now sit you two, sit. We all have a lot of catching up to do!!” Vanessa said. A while later, Guido was walking with Lucille in a nearby garden, so that Speedy and Polly could have some time to catch up with their old family friends. They were taking the opportunity to talk about the wedding. “So, I ordered the flowers for the wedding,” Lucille said. “Lots of rainbow orchids, some of Polly’s favorites. Also some bright red roses, white lilies and gardenias. I spoke to the florist, and he assured me they would be delivered the day before the wedding. I’ll keep them in my teahouse and take them to the Church early in the afternoon, and the Rescue Team is gonna help set them up. Guido pulled her toward him, sharing a warm embrace with the love of his life. “What would I do without you, Lucille? You’re not only beautiful, but intelligent and organized too.” Lucille blushed. “Oh, Guido..” “I would do absolutely anything for you my sweet one. I’d even climb up to the sky, take down a star, and give it to you if I could. But no star on earth can match your radiant beauty.” “Oh, you’re just so sweet, Guido. I love you!” “I love you my darling Lucille. With every beat of my heart.” He drew her near and kissed her lips. She slid her arms around his neck, and he rubbed her back with one hand while running his fingers through her hair with the other. He stroked her hair, ran his hand down her horn, and stroked her cheek. God, was THIS all there was to going steady? It wasn’t so hard. It wasn’t hard at all to do! He could have done this a long time ago! Out of the corner of his eye he spotted two lovely little cats on the other side of the bridge…but surprisingly…he didn’t have any urge to go over there at all and start talking to them!! None at all! He glanced at them…but then looked away…cause he realized…all he wanted to do was keep kissing Lucille!! No one and nothing else mattered, cause what he kept saying was true…he was in love with Lucille!! For the first time since he started dating girls, he wanted to make a commitment to only one! Lucille! Just the thought of that made him kiss her again with so much love it took their breath away. Lucille smiled, and she then asked, “Would you like to come back to my house for some tea?” Guido smiled back at her, and then he folded his hand around Lucille's, before he replied, “Sure. I’d love to.” Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Some1Else on February 06, 2008, 11:11:39 pm Raz 'n Pollygirl. . .
If you think Burke is bad, then you truly have never been flamed. His comments are relatively tame compared to some of the more disgruntled people I've come across on ff.net. It's not that big of a deal. I would encourage you to continue only so that you may hopefully grow and that's probably saying far too much. Just take what Burke says at face value and try to incorporate it into your stuff. While you can't please everyone, you can strengthen your style through the suggestions of others as I have done. And no, I didn't read your story. I can't stand romance for more than five pages and the minute you insert a song into a story to buff up the moment you're just getting silly. I merely threw in my opinion to hopefully get you to see this situation more clearly. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 06, 2008, 11:17:58 pm Quote Raz 'n Pollygirl. . . If you think Burke is bad, then you truly have never been flamed. His comments are relatively tame compared to some of the more disgruntled people I've come across on ff.net. It's not that big of a deal. I would encourage you to continue only so that you may hopefully grow and that's probably saying far too much. Just take what Burke says at face value and try to incorporate it into your stuff. While you can't please everyone, you can strengthen your style through the suggestions of others as I have done. And no, I didn't read your story. I can't stand romance for more than five pages and the minute you insert a song into a story to buff up the moment you're just getting silly. I merely threw in my opinion to hopefully get you to see this situation more clearly. You are right, I could be SO much worse than what I've been saying. I was told, however, by certain powers that be, to word my posts in a way that is tough and dirty, but also in a way to show that I have done nothing wrong. I could get really nasty (and I mean REALLY nasty) but I have more self control than that. "Flame Wars" can get dirty and mean, but this is just a mere.. debate/argument, that's all. Flaming someone is just insulting them for the sake of insulting. What I've done has been to ATTEMPT to review and help along, but alas, here we are as it seems over-sensitive people take the slightest word of help and take it so personally that they feel they'll never recover form it. I'm quite enjoying it, actually, as this whole situation has helped me sharpen my wits and reviewing skills (plus dealing with blokes who don't seem to know their tails from their shoulders is also fun). All is good! ^_^ *Is happy and will continue to post my way until I die, as it is the correct way.* ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: KyoZaber on February 07, 2008, 02:04:22 am Ugg.... Raggle fraggle...
Prior to the good review Burke made on the Christmas Fanfic, there are only 2 moments where I can see any potential brush up against Pollygirl... 1)http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=74.msg18297#msg18297 (http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=74.msg18297#msg18297) -This one doesn't seem too huge. I can see if Pollygirl may have started developing a “Do not like Burke” attitude at this point in time. 2)http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=69.msg18354#msg18354 (http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=69.msg18354#msg18354) -This one is pretty much a zap. Again probably not helping relationships. Below are 2 following posts where the crap begins to hit the fan. 3)http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=1548.msg18355#msg18355 (http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=1548.msg18355#msg18355) -The quoted review. This review is critical, yet uplifting. He states that Pollygirl has talent, yet she has a few key issues that she needs to work on. He overall gave the fan fiction a 7 out of 10. Far from hating it, he somewhat enjoyed it. From then on it seems to slowly keep going down hill. Any replies get nowhere, and somehow a fire is started from embers or absolutely nothing. Here Burke writes another critique. 4)http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=1549.msg18363#msg18363 (http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=1549.msg18363#msg18363) -This go around he's positive, and uplifting. An appropriate quick review. -Also, his previous “wall of text” review was extensive, yet concise and I don't want to have to dive deeper into public posting records to see more fighting. So far it appears that a bee-bee gun fight has turned into a shootout with assault rifles. Every time someone tries to stop the fighting, shots break out someplace else. Polly & Raz, Burke seems genuine in his words of encouragement. I can't tell if things have been said Via Private Messages. However what has been presented out in public does not seem that bad. At least not that bad near the beginning where all this fighting seemed to start. Burke, I haven't had the time to read all the fan fictions these two have made. I do trust your judgment that Polly has potential, and thank you for your early posts of encouragement. Right now, the way things are going, no one here is headed for a happy ending. If that's the way you all want to play it, so be it. I've got better things to do than read over all this drama. I'll read the fictions, I'll write it as I see it. Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 07, 2008, 02:08:56 am Great input, foxman, but.. I think D-Mac is going to have a final say in this, I'm going to wait to see what he has to post. He is the Admin and said he'd comment on this situation.
BTW, nice to see you again, bestest buddy! It's been too long, get online once and a while, we gotta talk! :D ~Burkey Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: pollygirl on February 07, 2008, 09:48:04 am Polly & Raz, Burke seems genuine in his words of encouragement. Saying my vvriting looks like a 16 year olds isn't insulting?! THAT's helping? If that's helping, I don;t vvanna KNOVV hovv he insults! Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Sarahsuke on February 07, 2008, 12:42:51 pm ...I think I understand why I was told to stay away from the shippers before I joined up here... :O
Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Methid Man on February 07, 2008, 01:39:09 pm *sigh* Lemme try to sum this all up for everybody...
First, to Burke... - I don't care what happened in the other thread; that was already done and overwith and I just didn't happen to be there at the time. Nor do I care what happens in other sites like Fanfiction.net. What I'm concerned with is this thread. - Why would I write a second review for a different story if I'm going to get the same response? Why waste all that time and energy and get nothing for it but BS answers and moronic insights to "hurt feelings" and epic whining? If you don't want any backlash and if you don't intend to submit a serious review, then why even reply at all? I don't really mind you giving negative feedback as long as it's actually constructive. It's when someone adds a worthless reply that doesn't contribute to an (admittedly overused) idea where I start to raise a stink. What I expect to see are posts and replies with substance. Maybe you've contributed worthy reviews before, but here you're just busting people's chops just for the sake of busting their chops and I've seen you do this all too often in the past. - Speaking of your other reviews, it's not fair to label someone under a certain age group based on their writing ability. I've known quite a few people who were able to write novel-quality stories since their early teens. You can't determine someone's age just by the way they write. Now to Pollygirl and Razgriz. I appreciate your gratitude but I'm not exactly here to side with anyone. I'm merely stepping in to make things fair for both sides. And I'm sorry to burst your bubble, but I've found a few faults coming from your end as well... - I know it annoys you to be compared to children, but with every remark I've seen you make against Burke, you're only reinforcing that thought in everybody's mind, including mine. You gotta make others believe that you really are mature and so far you haven't been able to prove that. This brings me to my next point... - Please stop asking me to ban Burke. He may seem like a bully to you right now and he may have even farted in my direction, but what he's done doesn't even come close to warrant kicking him out permanently. He's a bit of a hot-head, yes, but certainly not a criminal. - Try to develop thicker skin. We mods are here for a reason, but in case we're too busy with RL situations or just plain AWOL, you need to do your part by trying to ignore any insults that slip through the cracks rather than returning them and make matters worse. I don't mean to sound harsh, but stop your own whining and just let the show go on. -- Sam the Methid Man Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Crow on February 07, 2008, 06:50:42 pm Quote *sigh* Lemme try to sum this all up for everybody... First, to Burke... I don't care what happened in the other thread; that was already done and overwith and I just didn't happen to be there at the time. Nor do I care what happens in other sites like Fanfiction.net. What I'm concerned with is this thread. I don't really mind you giving negative feedback as long as it's actually constructive. It's when someone adds a worthless reply that doesn't contribute to an (admittedly overused) idea where I start to raise a stink. What I expect to see are posts and replies with substance. Maybe you've contributed worthy reviews before, but here you're just busting people's chops just for the sake of busting their chops and I've seen you do this all too often in the past. Speaking of your other reviews, it's not fair to label someone under a certain age group based on their writing ability. I've known quite a few people who were able to write novel-quality stories since their early teens. You can't determine someone's age just by the way they write. Now to Pollygirl and Razgriz. I appreciate your gratitude but I'm not exactly here to side with anyone. I'm merely stepping in to make things fair for both sides. And I'm sorry to burst your bubble, but I've found a few faults coming from your end as well... I know it annoys you to be compared to children, but with every remark I've seen you make against Burke, you're only reinforcing that thought in everybody's mind, including mine. You gotta make others believe that you really are mature and so far you haven't been able to prove that. This brings me to my next point... Please stop asking me to ban Burke. He may seem like a bully to you right now and he may have even farted in my direction, but what he's done doesn't even come close to warrant kicking him out permanently. He's a bit of a hot-head, yes, but certainly not a criminal. Try to develop thicker skin. We mods are here for a reason, but in case we're too busy with RL situations or just plain AWOL, you need to do your part by trying to ignore any insults that slip through the cracks rather than returning them and make matters worse. I don't mean to sound harsh, but stop your own whining and just let the show go on. -- Sam the Methid Man Once again, edited for colour, size and boldness so it's easier on the eyes. (Seriously, for some reason it hurts my eyes >_<) OK, perhaps guessing ages is a tricky thing because the answers can REALLY surprise you. (As in this case, boy was I floored.) But I did it because the way it was written looked just like every other teen-fiction I've seen out there regarding pairings of characters. So I naturally assumed that the authors would be in their teens. Turns out, this isn't the case, and that makes me actually a bit sad... :'( (Won't go into why, but if you think about, it's not hard to guess the reason...) I'm not "busting people's chops" this whole time I was merely trying to get our two rather thickheaded authors to understand I was doing the exact opposite, but the resistance against me just kept getting bigger and bigger, so I was forced to stress my points in more and more blunt terms. And yes, Raz and PG, grow thicker skins (I've mentioned this like.. 3 times in this whole debate) because without that, you might as well not even publish anything publically. Having a thick skin allows you to just laugh off idiots like me who review your works in a not-always-positive manner, the comments just roll off your back. *Gives you Dr. Porkenheimer's Skin Toughener Cream.* There, use it or lose it. Haha, they were asking to ban me? That's just pure hilarity.. Yes, writing a well thought out review is definitely worthy of a ban, while morons like TGL can spam and be considered "funny" sorry, not in my books. :) Thanks for making my day though. (Just kidding TGL, I wub you! :-* ) Thank you, folks, I'll be here all night. I don't care what my fate will be, how many of you will yell, threaten and disagree with me, I don't care in the slightest. All I have to do is remember a quote from one of our Founding Fathers, "I may not agree with what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." Also remember, flames just keep me warm in the winter. Mmmmhh.. ~Burkey PS, Oh yeah, Sarasuke, I agree 100% with your statement, that's why I avoid the whole "ship" thing in the first place, all it does is cause BS like this. Thanks for reminding me of that! :) Title: Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven Post by: Sarahsuke on February 10, 2008, 04:50:26 pm Mmmph, time for me to throw in my two cents.
Personally, I think there's nothing bad about shipping. It's interesting to delve into the workings of the relationships between characters, even when love is out of the question. What is bad, however, is putting too much emphasis on such things; romance works best as a "side dish," not the "main course." Otherwise a fic just becomes schlock that only shippers will eat up, even if all the characters involved are dragged OOC to make it happen. If you want people to give your fics some respect, you're going to have to focus on more about the plot than just getting your OTP together. |