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Hey everyone. Iam doing what I said I was going to do. Iam going to start writing my fanfics on here.

But first Iam going to introduce the families of the Pizza Cats. To be honest the reason Iam doing this because I havent quite started on my fics ::)

The Cerviches:  :speedy:
Speedy-lead singer in The Matches and The Barenaked Ladies, Lead singer and bassist in Blink-182
Relationship Status-None at the moment :(

Scott Cerviche-also singer in The Barenaked Ladies, Bassist for My Chemical Romance
Relationship Status-None

Ceaser Cerviche-Youngest Cerviche. Lead singer in Killswitch Engage, and My Chemical Romance, singer and Guitarist in Blink-182
Relationship Status-Maybe something with Polly ::)

John and Kagome Cerviche-The Parents, Well known for their 80s band The Human League.

Well thats all for now, but I will come back on and do Guidos family and Pollys family. Personally I think Pollys is the most interesting family :)

Bring on me getting made fun of ;-)

You forgot Huburt Cerviche.

Who?

Don't worry about it. It's not anything you won't understand. Just a random but chosenly misfitting name for a Cerviche.

I can see Ceaser Cerviche.

But Scott Cerviche??? Why would Speedy name his son Scott?

Ceaser and Scott are Speedys younger brothers. Scott is from another fanfic Ive read.
Their parents are John and Kagome.

By the way how would I add Guidos and Pollys family? Should I add them in the same post as Speedys family or add another post?

Give each family their own post. Then you can have a higher post count.  ;] That's how we judge you here.

All right Thanks :)

another post would be good, especially for Guidos Family. hes got a big family =]

All right, time for the Esther family. :polly:

The Esthers:

Axel and Michelle-The Parents, by his name, Axel is the lead singer of Guns N' Roses.

Derek-The oldest Esther, lead singer of the German metal group Rammstein, also the singer for Simple Plan. Yeah I know quite the change ::)
Relationship Status-Princess Vi  :)

Polly-Lead Guitarist of My Chemical Romance, Rhythm Guitarist and Keyboardist of Smash Mouth, also Occasionally does stuff with the Pointless Sisters.
Relationship Status-Maybe something with Ceaser :)

Ruth-The Youngest Esther, Lead singer of Paramore (now you all can get a idea of her hair color), Lead Guitarist of Smash Mouth, Lead Guitarist for Dethklok 8)
Realtionship Status-None for the time being.

Well thats it for the Esthers, Ill see ya all later when we see Guidos family, and trust me his family is BIG =]

Well, I haven't gotten any comments on Pollys family. But either way Ill show you Guidos Family now. :guido:

The Anchovies:

Tony and Maria-The Parents, Tony is the lead singer of the group The Outlaws.

Angela-The Oldest.
Relationship Status-Married to another Italian named Michael.

Romeo-Lead singer of Bad Religion, and Lead Singer of Smash Mouth
Relationship Status-Married to Connie, who is the lead singer of Arch Enemy

Guido-Lead singer of Linkin Park, and Lead singer of Atreyu
Relationship Status-Something with Francine :) =]

Anthony-the Youngest,The Rapping Vocals in Linkin Park, Has own band called Fort Minor, Lead Guitarist and backing vocals for Killswitch Engage.
Relationship Status-None at the moment.

Well thats all of them, like I said he has a big family. You can tell there Italian =].

Keep on the lookout for the start of my stories, and more of the families of some of the other characters.

Question-how many siblings did Bad Bird have? I know in one episode when they flashed back to his dad, they showed a few other baby crows.

What ?:| :huh:

So you've taken out beloved main characters, extended their families, and pretty much given all these characters musical talent?

I totally haven't seen THAT before.

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Well, Speedy is his brother.

I was thinking the same...

That's disturbingly appropriate. As if the knot in my gut wasn't tight enough, rofl. Does that mean the SPC summon their instruments from magical pendents on their necks?  :D

No thats what I had in mind at all. They go on stage and peform just like the bands do.

What do you mean taken the main characters out? Their still there aren't they?

You do have a point, besides some of the other characters arent in at the beginning anyway.

Hi eveyone I know Ive been gone a while but I will start these stories, I know it seems like alot of characters but Ive gotten it figured out.
Any suggestions would be helpful

Welcome back!

Tigerd, could you be a little more descriptive about what suggestions you're looking for?

Cat and Bird as brothers.

Damn, their mother must have gotten freaky with many a species.

Just a thought.

~Burke

What I mean is like whats a good way to start this story and how characters should be brought into the story I have some ideas but I am not sure. Nice Picture by the way  :)       I love Phineas and Ferb, Doofenshmirtz as well.

Well, there's a tough pair of questions.  :O
These answers are just my point of view. If you feel the need to do something different, I'd say try it. If it doesn't work, try something else.

For your first story you need to sit back and decide what you want it to be about. You need an overall theme that will navigate your story in a general direction.
Know your characters. You don't have to have each character's biography immediately present, but you should know their personalities, their mannerisms, and feelings.

As far as character introductions, I think you should try to to pace them out.
When bringing in new characters, you need to think of who that character is, then you need to imagine what they would do.

Finally you need to sit down, write, and keep writing until it feels right.


Now... A final few words of the wise. Before you post your Fan Fiction, be sure to do the following...
-- 1) Spell Check your story.
-- 2) Grammar Check your story.
-- 3) Read through it at least once to look for errors you may have made while typing.

A few mistakes here and there won't kill a story. However if there are too many it'll hurt the story, and may hurt your chances as a Fan Fiction writer.
Others may be less likely to read your story if you produce something that's hard to understand.


That's all I've got for now. Again, most of this is just my opinion.  ;)
I didn't go to school for writing, I went to school for computer hardware. More professional writers may have better suggestions than I.

Good luck!

Excellent suggestions. You should make a fanfic advice thread. :7  "Dear Kyo..."

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