Edoropolis Emporium

how about the storyline of "Bad Bird Uncaged" taken with a plot twist, instead of disappearing after the final blow the hero gets rushed to the hospital?
Story:
a Nice day in edoropolis, But Leinad is spoiling the day, Every pizza cat, plus Daniel and his friends are called into action, but leinad soon retaliates by crushing all of them using the anarchy beryl (Sonic archie comic item, Leinad's from Moebius, look it up on the sonic archie comic wikia), but Daniel Pushes Amy, Nicky and Aiko out of the way to take the final blow
(Cliffhanger)
Daniel Acorn is rushed to the hospital by the three, and is soon greeted by everyone, but does not hurt Daniel in any way, eventually Good bird explains that the only way to defeat leinad this time around is by using the "armor of worc" which was destroyed 15 years ago, the Ninja crows (the ones that are still with karamaru after the comet incident) rebuilds the armor, tailors it to daniel's size, and then the big battle ensues with the Hissatsu attacks
Daniel Acorn: Chaos Slash (10x amplified due to the Armor of Worc)
Aiko: Neko me slash
Amy: Hammer Bash
Nicky: Glass Shuriken
The anarchy beryl is destroyed and Dusknoir Begins His Temper Tantrum, With Sableye running for his life of course (The same way that Seymour cheese Throws His Temper tantrums in "Bad Bird Uncaged" the Dusk-copter is destroyed and They announce a job well done, Later they are seen eating at the pizza parlor, with Daniel eating 15 full pizza pie in a row and says "My power is not the only thing that was amplified", then everyone laughs, francine bashes daniel in the head, but is run out of Town by aiko
mean while two familiar people are plotting yet another escape from the island. end of storyline
here's the list
hero: Daniel Acorn
Supporting chars: Amy, Nicky, Good Bird, Speedy, Polly, Phoenix710's fan character Aiko (Asked permission to use her on my show), Carla
Villans: Leinad Nroca (Daniel Acorn Spelled Backwards), Dusknoir (Takes place of seymour cheese), Sableye (Takes place of Jerry)
Does anyone agree with that

Don't forget to submit your own ideas, As i will consider them
New Rule: Do Not Send Hate Comments Or Lock This Topic
BTW, Daniel Acorn is now an international name for the show, so stop the Johto dub controversy
In fact i am known as
Guildsadventures & guildnoboukenjpnsub on youtube
Daniel Acorn Here
And
Dinnerling on Fanfiction.net and deviant art
And nothing more

here are the 3 episodes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FHwxjoa6Aghttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5a1PzgS-MfEhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w2rb8AOGIUIhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gimsvzk-hHg
Plus the pilot episode
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QFTsK5KPU1Y
And the Japanese dubbed episode 2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-F7p8jlsEY

Okay. Daniel. Before the pack of wolves arrives I want to try something different.

I  see you're young. What I see here is someone experimenting with the media tools they have. There is nothing wrong with that. But this place is not where your audience lies. You have a bunch of friends that probably enjoy your work. Do this for them. Not for us. Because you won't find anyone like your friends here. The people here are losers, with a few exceptions I can count on one hand. Myself not included. Nobody here is going to help you. But you yourself seem to have ideas on how to make additions to your series. Not very good ideas, but I'm sure through trial and error you'll get something good from it. Maybe, you'll work on some animation, voice work, or even start writing your own stories.

My point is you are wasting you're time trying to get our approval or input. I'm not saying leave the forums. Just hold off on showing this project to us.

thanks,
I am NOT blazesonic, I am Daniel Price, i Just used the main Character's name, Daniel Acorn From My show the guild's adventures as my username on here

Sorry Vi, Deleted the old one
This is the new one, You can pitch ideas if you want though