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Samurai Pizza Cats => Fan Works => Topic started by: Andy on February 19, 2006, 10:22:50 pm



Title: Andy's Fanfic Works
Post by: Andy on February 19, 2006, 10:22:50 pm
Hey all. I just want to share this first chapter of my fanfic work. It's not SPC, but I just want to share this one to all of you and see what you all think of it. It's the first of my fanfic works and it is the first time I'm gonna share this with the public. So, you all got the exclusive on seeing the first fics from Andy's Fanfic Works. I've been working on this project for quite some time. I got three chapters done so far and I'm continueing on others.

This fic is called The Underground and it is my first ever story I ever written. I hope you guys like the introduction of it. I'll post more once I got some fan base and support of this. Hope y'all like it.

So, without any further ado. Here it is. My very first story and possible series:

"The Underground"

Andy (The fic writer)


Title: Re: Andy's Fanfic Works
Post by: BurkeWorld on March 01, 2006, 03:11:47 am
Hey bud, I give ya credit for startin' your own writing project, but you got a lot of work ahead of you.

Structure and sentencing are far more important than character names and dialogue (keep in mind, those are important, but if everything is jumbled and unorganized, what's the point, huh?)

This is where you need the most work. I'm sure you've got a lot of ideas and such, but if you can't pull these ideas together into a mass of organized writing matter, it won't be a good fiction.

I've voted "Bad." at the moment, but we'll see how you can do after a little revision.

Keep writing.

Burkey