Title: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: cutter on June 17, 2006, 12:25:16 am well it a crossover with the anime Juuni Senshi Bakuretsu Eto Rangers:
here are a few links of eto rangers with info,pics and clips: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Juuni_Senshi_Bakuretsu_Eto_Ranger\ http://www.youtube.com/results?search=eto+rangers&search_type=search_videos http://pantransit.reptiles.org/images/sorted/anime/eto/ http://etorangers.275mb.com/ hope those be enough links: well the plot of the story is that in the novel world, Bakumaru and monk is playing with a new device of Nyorori's and monk actvies it, sending bakumaru to an alt world{little toyko} when in little tokyo{time frame after the comet caper} bakumaru arrives, and woke up without his memory and founded by what left of the ninja crows, they took this as a sign, and bakumaru took the mantle of their new leader. He lead the crows to where big cheese was and BC convise baku that he is his son(apoted) and together plot to take over little tokyo what do you guys think so far? please respond ok Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: Alistair Erie on June 17, 2006, 01:51:01 am Well, although I know VERY little about Eto Rangers, the plot does sound pretty cool.
However, there's one confusing part to this story. How does Bakumaru meet up with the Big Cheese, if BC has fled Little Tokyo? Oh well, I guess I'll find out when you write it. ;) Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: Violet on June 17, 2006, 01:15:46 pm I think Adam808 might have something to say about this, he's become the Eto Rangers expert around here. He made the only current English Eto Rangers web page http://etorangers.275mb.com/
I don't think Bakumaru would be a good villian, it's against his nature, even without his memory. Maybe a story where the cats go to the Novel World? There are one or 2 Japanese doujin with Eto Ranger/KNT cross overs, which isn't too unusual, since both shows were made by the same team. Title: Well i need help writing this Post by: cutter on June 17, 2006, 01:24:34 pm also part of the plot is that while the memorless Bakumaru wanders around the world of the pizza cats, he was found by the banished BC and his ninja crows ok
well i am going to need a lot of help with this,please give me, a new pizza cats/eto ranger fan an hand Title: yeah i know about Adam808's eto rangers page Post by: cutter on June 17, 2006, 01:26:28 pm it is one of the links i posted for info,well i am going to need help with this please someone respond ok
Title: well bakumaru might make a ok villan,even it's against his nature Post by: cutter on June 17, 2006, 04:18:41 pm he just do as he is orded to do
also bakumaru might get a cool new outfit from big cheese, and maybe a squeal to this have the cats go to the novel world Title: well how about this for a rewrite idea Post by: cutter on June 19, 2006, 01:00:57 am well bakumaru did become evil, then remeber him being a hero and help the cats, the rest of the story having bakurmaru staying in little tokyo, tyring to remember his past and fighting the new forces of the big chesse?
how about that? just a thought, i needs lots of help with this Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: adam808 on June 19, 2006, 05:43:20 am Maybe the world of Edoropolis is a Novel World, and Bakumaru somehow gets left behind past the time limit of a day. He'd become trapped until the others can come rescue him. He could encounter both the silliness and seriousness of life in Edoropolis.
Title: here is a new outline idea for the story,please respond Post by: cutter on June 20, 2006, 12:54:36 am after reading and talking to other posters about this idea, here is a new outline.
(takes place after the comet caper in SPC) the plot is that while in Mugen,Bakumaru and monk where looking for Nyorori in his home. They found a new device and while playing with it, monk actvies it sending bakumaru to unknown. Nyorori explain to everyone it a way to travel to unknown novel worlds. Bakurmaru woke up in Edoropolis, and time limit has passed which means he lost his memory, while traviling he found that the ninja crows and BC were planning a comeback and while he defated a handful of crows by mistake,BC recuted him to lead his forces. When they attack, bakumaru begins to reailsed he not a villan and help the cats out, so afterwards he explan he has no memory of who he is or his home, the cats and GB offer to let him stay at the pizza cat what do you think of that so far? please respond i need help Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: BurkeWorld on June 20, 2006, 02:46:20 pm Cutter, I want you to do something for me.
Email or PM me a sample of your writing. (An SPC script, of course) Just something short, like a few paragraphs, but include dialogue, action etc etc. Before you get into cross-overs, you gotta make sure you know the main series first. I'll gladly help you, just send me a quick written sample and I shall analyze it and offer some suggestions for ya. Good luck! House, MD Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: NPC on June 21, 2006, 06:22:00 pm Crossovers will only end in tears... unless done right. >:1
I'd like to see another fanfic... there hasn't been as much activity in that department as there was in the old days. No, I wasn't here in the old days. I was too busy watching the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade. Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: BurkeWorld on June 21, 2006, 11:45:04 pm Crossovers will only end in tears... unless done right. >:1 I'd like to see another fanfic... there hasn't been as much activity in that department as there was in the old days. No, I wasn't here in the old days. I was too busy watching the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade. I've done my best to spike Fan Fic writing back up, but to no avail, so I've just stopped caring pretty much. House, MD Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: NPC on June 23, 2006, 06:05:07 pm I'd write one just so I could read it but-- I never find a presentable idea. :(
Title: that the thing, my writing skills are really bad Post by: cutter on June 23, 2006, 06:11:07 pm i know alot about SPC, and info about etoranger, but i always having trouble writing it out, i am an idea guy, so i need help from some spc writers ok
Title: well like i said before i need help with this please Post by: cutter on June 24, 2006, 12:20:04 am i am not a good writer, i am really poor at it, i am just an idea guy,please i need help with this ok?
more ideas to this story: while bakumaru switch sides and joined the cats, he still don't know who he is or where he is from so the cats and such took him in.(this takes place after the comet, so polly and speedy are dating or married, your call) also bakumaru wants to learn how to used ginzu power, and tried to asked speedy to tech him. another idea is that bakumaru used nyanoking once how is that Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: cartoonking10749 on June 24, 2006, 12:36:40 am I like the ideas. How about these to help you:
From what I heard, Bakamaru has a fear of cats- typical for a mouse. So meeting the SPC would not be a walk in the park for him. Also, how about Bakamaru meeting the other SPC cast members including the royals, especially Princess Vi, who looks just like Cream from Eto Rangers-There seemed to be a relationship between Bakamaru & Cream in Eto Rangers. So why not meet Little Tokyo's bunny princess, the exact opposite of Cream. Also figure a way for Bakamaru to return to his own universe. I'm a idea mastermind guy myself. But somethings must be done yourself. Never know, this story of yours might be a winner. Title: thanks for the ideas, i have some answers to those Post by: cutter on June 24, 2006, 04:17:30 am well i tried to write this, but i am going nowhere, i need help writing this, but thanks for the pep talk
some of the ideas which cartoonking10749 gave here are the answers: well maybe at frist he be scared(he lost his memories but still didn't like cats) so living with them is a little tough, till he saw speedy using his ginzu power and want to try it maybe seeing vi giving bakumaru a small memory of cream also the other etorangers will head for the 'lost' novel world to get bakumaru back, but time as passed at Edoropolis,two years have pass and bakumaru still doesn't have his full memory please i tried to work on this my own, i need help Title: Re: i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it Post by: adam808 on June 26, 2006, 08:03:46 pm Bakumaru was able to overcome his fear of cats in the show.
Title: yeah he does, but he still have some problems Post by: cutter on June 26, 2006, 10:45:29 pm bakumaru fought them and still doesn't fully trust them yet, but after seeing speedy's ginsu power, he wants to learn it.
well please i need help will anyone help me write this |