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i am bissy with my own fan comic
but a will take effort into doing this if am also allowed to add it on the SPC club DA
but i cant do it alone
i need help i want this project to be done with a team and make up a good story!
i promise i will draw at my best but i need help with idea`s ect ect ect

so?..

I might be able to help with dialogue editing a little bit, as English isn't your first language.

I could help with a couple stories, certain characters, and a script if ya want. I've always wanted to do some of those kind of things.

Yeah bud, I'll help ya out anyway I can.

^_^

Burkey

thanks alot and yes i need also help with english now i also want you guys to be serious for this
for all the SPC fans okay?

now first we need a story..

here comes my first quistion
should the comic be based up after the tv show or inbetween the anime?

alright story ideas?

Well, I was hoping we could do one after the Great Comet Caper, but since we're doing one in the middle of the anime series. How 'bout we have the SPCs dueling against an ancient, powerful Ninja Crow warrior that has been awakened by Big Cheese, Jerry, and BadBird. When they awakened the ancient warrior, they ordered him to destroy the SPCs and the SPCs will have a fight of their lives. How's that sound to ya guys? 

hhhmmmm not bad...

what is the other opnions?

How about this? A rogue robot ,which has the ability to enter and mess with dreams targets the SPC and enters their dreams. Each pizza cat has to fight and conquer the imaginary villains in the dreams and conquer their deepest fears to escape their nightmares and defeat the culprit.

How does that sound?  8)

The robot can even enter the dreams of the rest of the cast, even the bad guys.

That would be quite interesting...if done properly really good!

I'd be interested to see how this comic turns out.

*Cough* Nightmare On Elm Street (All parts) *Cough*

No thanks.

Burkey

Ironically enough, Nightmare on elm street didn't really cross my mind. :D
Still, I see what you mean.

I saw the connection, too. It seems to be more like A Nightmare On Elm Street 3: Dream Warriors. So, we either get onto my idea or we try something else.

i like both ideas but i got to say that dream thing inst realy something for SPC
i dont know why but it doesnt fit

now story ideas i still want to hear more

who likes Andy idea?

and should the comic be in collor or in black and white?

i'd say color. color's always better than b/w, imo.

i dont want to take any advice from you (no offencive)
but i prefer collor too so yeah :P

Seriously, what is your problem? You ask people for help, then say "I dont want to take any advice from you (no offencive)"

Wow... just... wow.

Burkey  ::)

D-Mac, do us the pleasure of also locking this thread for the time being, as Hikaritail seems to like to stir up trouble.

e,m that was a joke

cause i hoped people would say do it on black and white!!
(because it means less work for me)

and you people make me laugh you and the some here insulted me for liking Yaoi and Yuri
i`m being saracastic and i`m the bad sheep?
 :D :D :D

i dont mind the dream idea but its too dark for SPC

and i find it a bit weird that when i first came here i met alot only 3-4 friendly persons and you Buke world-orwhatever
and some others insulted me for being crazy for liking YaoI?

and another thing it isnt a private thing i can stand my opioN THAT WHAT FORUMS ARE FOR!!

and funny i unsult back and you guys go alll  8O


alright eyes on the topic (some people are not allowed to work on my comic project anymore why? because i cant feel to work with them)

now lets continu

does anyone mind cheesy lines like

Speedy: Holy Macrononi!(sorry if i spelled wrong)

Cheesy lines and bad puns are part of what make this show so great!

Sometimes nothing could be further from the truth ::)
As in this case.

But it's true!

If you actually sit down and carefully listen and only focus on the dialogue one SPC, you'd see how terrible (yet funny) it really is!

It's randomness at it's finest, and that's what makes it such a great series.

Burkey

okay cartoonking and pink puff(thanks for posting here(

now does anyone have details about the backrounds like Little Tokyo i need them

Well, as far as I can tell ya. Little Tokyo is a city that has an atmosphere of feudal Japan with a futuristic twist (with modern technology). And the characters are like robots with animal features. That's just the brief description of what the animation looks like in the SPC series. If that doesn't help then look at a couple of SPC episodes and just look at the background of those episodes. That should help. Hope that helps and works for you. Give us any updates on what has happened so far.

Im not sure if suggestions for story plots are used up here, but I was thinking if the BC had a tunneling bot or machine that causes buildings to collapse. Im not sure what he'll use it for, Id say that he knows the Pizza Parlors there base and he plans to level it to the ground.

well i`m working on some skecthes right now (i`m not the best artist remeber that)
i do think i will have some trouble making the backrounds and all


and Pizzacat ideas are still up and it would be a good idea to get some Fan-Charathers in
i still need a design of the vilain the black Ninja Cat or something like that

I thought we were doing my story idea.

And if you need help with fan characters just ask me, BurkeWorld, or D-Mac. We three have a ton of fan-characters we could gladly let you use in this project.

yes we are but there also have to be side stoyies and maybe more about the achient Ninja and he needs a backround ::)
and thanks but we need a design for the vilain

Oh, okay. Well, I'll gladly PM you the background of the ancient Ninja Crow warrior, if ya want? It's no big.

Hmm... If there's gonna be an ancient Ninja Crow warrior, perhaps he could use some ninja trick to make the cats face evil versions of themselves! Like... The Shadow Pizza Cats!! With black armor and a sinister look. That'd be so awesome!!  :D

Believe it or not, Dark Pizza Cats--brainwashed clones--were the villains for the aborted sequel to Crimson Dawn, "Mirror, Mirror".

How come I never heard of that episode? Did I missed one?

Crimson Dawn, an SPC episode?  Sorry, but that made me laugh.  =]  I'll try to explain this in a single post so we don't end up dragging this thread off-topic.

"Crimson Dawn" was a work of fanfiction I penned back in the summer of 1998.  It was the first of what was intended to be the three-part "Endgame" series, comprised of "Crimson Dawn", "Mirror, Mirror", and "Final Hunt" (working title).

Obviously, this was back when I was still a pretty big fan of the SPC, and I wanted to pick up the story of what happened after the Big Comet Caper.  I also wanted to approach the series from a more serious angle than most--the majority of fanfiction I read was written in the style of the show itself, with a narrator and over-the-top humor and whatnot.  These things turned me off to the show itself, so I eliminated them in favor of writing a story with a darker, more action-oriented tone.

Reaction to the fic was generally positive, and even garnered me a few fans who bordered on the fanatical.  At 200+ pages in length, it's easily the longest work of SPC-based fiction ever written, and being 14 the time, I was quite proud of the accomplishment.  However, being older and wiser, I can look back and say that the story is pretty awful; the main character is one of my own creation, whom I named "Jonas Miles" after the psuedonym I was writing under at the time (I don't remember where the "Jonas" part came from--possibly the movie "Twister"--but I do remember that "Miles" was taken from Miles Prower, the real name of "Tails", Sonic the Hedgehog's sidekick).  Jonas was tremendously overpowered as a character, and so he ended up really stealing the thunder from the SPC themselves.  He was intended to be a human, but a final draft of the story written after its publication (which was only shown to one fan, and then lost in a hard drive reformat) revealed "him" to really be a version of Polly from a future that had been devastated by the Big Cheese.

There are other flaws; it was written in a script format, so it's hard to read, and there are various comments strewn throughout that really make it sound pompous and pretentious.  And it is.  But that's okay; it was the first full-length story I'd ever written, so I'm not surprised it turned out to be crappy.  I've gotten a lot better, as I hope to illustrate once "Star-Crossed" is completed and published, hopefully before the end of this month.

For those who never read it, here's (http://www.edoropolis.org/ninja_crow/dawn/dawnindex.htm) a mirror of Crimson Dawn on the now-defunct Ninja Crow's Dojo.  That character on the icon in the upper left is none other than Jonas himself (lovingly crafted by way of some very poor Paintshop Pro skills and a scan of Dr. Doom from a cover of Wizard magazine).

And that's all I have to say.  We now return you to your regularly scheduled thread.

I know this is kinda wordy, so if Burkey or another mod wants to move it to Fan Works or something, that's fine by me.

Meh, no worries, we all gotta vent at one time or another ;)

Burkey

Okay. I get it now. Thanks. Boy to I feel stupid.  :-[

Naw, don't worry about it Andy, we all mess up one time or another.

And now you know. And knowing is half the battle! O_O

[/GI Joe]

Burkey

I think a more accurate description of the atmosphere is closer near the end of the Samurai age, around the same time that "The Last Samurai" was set. And it kind of fits. There were firearms (primitive) and yet there was still an empire in place. The only real difference between the actual era and the SPC/KNT version of the era is the presence of semi-automatic firearms (as evidenced in Francine's Colt Revolver, which functioned as the trigger system for the launch cannon), the presence of modern conveniences such as a sewer system, electricity (not to mention the electric devices), and a telephone network being the most prominent example. Oh, and ginormous robots. Can't forget that.

yes that would help alot Thanks btw and it will help me with other backrounds

and Puutaro-kun Black Shadow Cats?....hhhmm not bad i know we can put im in the comic somewhere

Now to think of the sort of characters to make, we need to know is this going to be a more serious and dark story (like Crimson Dawn)...which mean we can create really nasty fellons, or is it going to be closer to the original, meaning we would have to make ones based similarly apon existing ones, I myself have created many characters who border these two lines and yet fit into SPCs style.

I'd say keep it like the original series, since drawing fan-chars is going to take a ton of extra time.

Burkey

Well, I'd like a story funny but serious; like Kenshin in the chapters of Shisio or the Slayers series... We can have stupid heroes and really mean and cruel villains...

Its not going to be too dark i will keep it to the orginail but i dont mind a few Dark scenes like hard batttles
i`m still bussy with scectes (you can see in Scraps in my DA oage)
but my computer is acting (very anoying latelty) so it will take more time
i`m sorry

Wow. It's been a long time since anyone posted here. I was just wondering what the update on this thing. Has anyone know what has happened to the online comic project that she was doing? It's been a while since anyone has heard from her.

Andy (The one who would've like to see this project come through.)

I think Hikaritail is no longer amung us.

Burkey

HikariTail was Last Active:     July 11, 2005, 06:50:58 am :(

Man. Where is she right now? She's fun to talk to on the threads. She kind or reminds me of Swiftrat once. Y'all remember her? Man. It's been a long time since we've heard from her.

Andy (The one who misses Swiftrat and already misses Hikaritail)

Swiftrat is still online on Y!M and AIM, but I don't think she knows of these forums here.

I'll have to drop her a line.

Burkey

if you need help..I am extremely...extreeeemely experienced with comics... yay mine www.restoredgeneration.net be careful though its got slight nudity :0

yeah keep the thing to a humerous style..probably best to watch the show for about 20 hours straight so you can think of nothing but dodgy references and script discrepencies XD

hmm, I dont even know the people you are missing....I'm too new  :'(

I like your style Kitfox , it has a reckless disregard about throwing diffent styles and themes in one comic, but it's done in a very cool way.  I wish more artists could do that.

You should've seen his work on the stolen generation comics. They were really good. Even though extremely violent, have some sex scenes, and some gore, but all in all, it is really good. And I think we could use his help on this. Help revive this idea and have me help us on this project so that it can get it off the ground. Kitfox would be a major help on it. I wonder if Hikaritail is still up for it.

And Kitfox, don't worry about not having the chance to meet some of the people here. You'll have the chance. There are over 230 members here. Even though 80% didn't post anything or made even one post. But, out of everybody here. You can still have a chance to meet some interesting people here.  ;)

Andy (The one who likes Kitfox's comics very much)