Not bad, in fact I like it.

If you continue it, I'd be pretty happy.

*Doesn't want to bumb, but must comment on this*

Let them have their cutesy loved filled love fest.

I think some major spacing, grammar fixing, and HUMOR. Would have helped tremendously.
While I read it, I kept inserting jokes and other things that the show had in it. those would have saved this from such bad reviews.

Polly and Speedy needed to quarrel at least once, Guido was actually the done the best.
Princess Violet should have had a tissy fit, and it needed... better love stuff then what you were dishing out. xD
Basically, you should have had them say things their characters would say, and not things they wouldn't. (that happened a lot in my opinion.)

But it wasn't really that bad, it just wasn't awesome enough for most. Good job anyway  Razgriz27.


  +  for ever. *shot*

I prefer the couples the show ends up with. 

Polly and Speedy, and Bad Bird and Carla. Those are the only ones that I can see as official.

I am very open to Guido/Fran and Guido/Lucille. in fact, I can't decided who I like him better with!

Am I the only one who, at the end of it all, thought Polly became Speedy and Guido's new Lucille?

VVell unlike Lucielle, though, Polly knovvs vvho she VVANTS. ( ) If Guido tried to fight Speedy for POLLY, he'd get his butt kicked by BOTH of them!

Seymore and Jerry are perfect for each other.  They even kissed.  It was when they first met, and I can't remember the name of the episode.

 

While I agree with Pollygirl, Guido isn't the kind of guy to do that to his friends. So no butt kicking would happen. *Loves Guido*

and I'm against Yaoi/Yuri. But Big Cheese/Jerry Kinda works for me.  as in; I like it, because I find it humorous.

sigs/avvys/pics

Is.. Is that a "vv" sighting?

I guess it's just an odd way of typing Avatars, but for a split second.. That looked awfully familiar...

~IC

I was saying Avatars.

I just want a Guido Avatar and Siggy set please.

Sure! I just want lots and lots of Guido pics. 

Could someone please post lots of Guido sigs/avvys/pics. I'm haveing a hard time finding pics.

you draw really well!
I don't really mind moe very much, I don't like fanmade characters most the time. Moe's ok. ^_^