Fiction of Fate

[Razgrizblaze1]

Well, it's finally here...after a month of work. Sweat, blood, tears, and carpal tunnel...I finally managed to crap out three pages of eye bleeding material. So, from here on in, I'll be posting project updates in this topic and you guys can freely post your praise, criticism,praise, flames, praise, questions, praise, concerns, praise, and praise. (Did I mention praise? *shot*)

Okay, in all seriousness though, feel free to share your thoughts. Comments are what'll keep me going...next to working on the script and developing new plots for the story WAY ahead in the future somewhere. I'd say more but I think I've spoken enough in my DA journal, Forward page, and whatnot. So...here are the links. Enjoy...or not. That's entirely up to you!

*waits for impending death/lynching*

Cover

The Forward

Page 1

Page 2

Update: It updated for the very small few of you that care. (yes, all one of you!)

[Romero Anchovy]

Heh...and so it starts...

[Razgrizblaze1]

We've had a few more updates...Romero asked me to post for said updates. Don't know if anyone would care, but meh...we get about one page per week in, so if you do hold a slight interest, stay tuned. 

[Tigriss]

Some constructive criticism: On the third panel of the fifth page, Speedy looks like he's missing an eye. I know you meant for it to be closed, but it's hard to tell. I suggest fixing his eyelid.

[Razgrizblaze1]

Some constructive criticism: On the third panel of the fifth page, Speedy looks like he's missing an eye. I know you meant for it to be closed, but it's hard to tell. I suggest fixing his eyelid.

Done...thanks for reminding me. I didn't know whether to do anything else with that, I was like 'meeeeeh'. Anyway, thanks for the criticism.

That being said, come out of your holes people! Tell me what I'm doing wrong. Doesn't have to be pretty, just point to something you have a problem with and what you think should be done about it! I can't make a better comic if the community won't nitpick at what I do wrong!

[Mechadon]

Yo everyone. Don't know if most of you have been following on DA, but Raz has got a whole bunch of these pages completed.

Thought he would keep them all to himself.

Well then... here it is.

http://razgrizblaze.deviantart.com/gallery/#Fiction-of-Fate


 

[Iván el Terrible]

A Razgrizblaze's good work

[Razgrizblaze1]

Gah! No Mechadon, it's still not good enough! I still need to improve! Don't show...ah darn it, it's too late isn't it?

[sjonnoh]

if you don't want to show it and you still think you should improve, then why not practice 1st and when you think you're good enough THEN you should make all those pages? X3

[Razgrizblaze1]

big changes gais!

[Romero Anchovy]

because Edgier always equal a Goatee

[KyoZaber]

*Grunts.*
You forgot the obligatory hot springs episode.
What about the convoluted plot twists?
There's also no cute little mascot to say annoying things like "Shnarf" or advice.


Even without all that, I still find myself liking what you posted. ^_^
And you didn't forget the DOOM!  

Curse you and your great artwork.  

[Mr.NoName]

So... so... EDGY

[Blackcat]

Yeah it looks like that...