i have idea for new pizza cats fic, need help with it

[cutter]

well it a crossover with the anime Juuni Senshi Bakuretsu Eto Rangers:

here are a few links of eto rangers with info,pics and clips:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Juuni_Senshi_Bakuretsu_Eto_Ranger\
http://www.youtube.com/results?search=eto+rangers&search_type=search_videos
http://pantransit.reptiles.org/images/sorted/anime/eto/
http://etorangers.275mb.com/


hope those be enough links:

well the plot of the story is that in the novel world, Bakumaru and monk is playing with a new device of Nyorori's and monk actvies it, sending bakumaru to an alt world{little toyko}

when in little tokyo{time frame after the comet caper} bakumaru arrives, and woke up without his memory and founded by what left of the ninja crows, they took this as a sign, and bakumaru took the mantle of their new leader. He lead the crows to where big cheese was and BC convise baku that he is his son(apoted) and together plot to take over little tokyo

what do you guys think so far? please respond ok

[Alistair Erie]

Well, although I know VERY little about Eto Rangers, the plot does sound pretty cool.
However, there's one confusing part to this story. How does Bakumaru meet up with the Big Cheese, if BC has fled Little Tokyo?
Oh well, I guess I'll find out when you write it. 

[Violet]

I think Adam808 might have something to say about this, he's become the Eto Rangers expert around here.  He made the only current English Eto Rangers web page http://etorangers.275mb.com/

I don't think Bakumaru would be a good villian, it's against his nature, even without his memory.  Maybe a story where the cats go to the Novel World?

There are one or 2 Japanese doujin with Eto Ranger/KNT cross overs, which isn't too unusual, since both shows were made by the same team.

[cutter]

also part of the plot is that while the memorless  Bakumaru  wanders around the world of the pizza cats, he was found by the banished BC and his ninja crows ok

well i am going to need a lot of help with this,please give me, a new pizza cats/eto ranger fan an hand

[cutter]

it is one of the links i posted for info,well i am going to need help with this please someone respond ok

[cutter]

he just do as he is orded to do

also bakumaru might get a cool new outfit from big cheese,

and maybe a squeal to this have the cats go to the novel world

[cutter]

well bakumaru did become evil, then remeber him being a hero and help the cats, the rest of the story having bakurmaru staying in little tokyo, tyring to remember his past and fighting the new forces of the big chesse?

how about that? just a thought, i needs lots of help with this

[adam808]

Maybe the world of Edoropolis is a Novel World, and Bakumaru somehow gets left behind past the time limit of a day. He'd become trapped until the others can come rescue him. He could encounter both the silliness and seriousness of life in Edoropolis.

[cutter]

after reading and talking to other posters about this idea, here is a new outline.

(takes place after the comet caper in SPC)

the plot is that while in Mugen,Bakumaru and monk where looking for Nyorori in his home. They found a new device and while playing with it, monk actvies it sending bakumaru to unknown. Nyorori explain to everyone it a way to travel to unknown novel worlds. Bakurmaru woke up in Edoropolis, and time limit has passed which means he lost his memory, while traviling he found that the ninja crows and BC were planning a comeback and while he defated a handful of crows by mistake,BC recuted him to lead his forces.

When they attack, bakumaru begins to reailsed he not a villan and help the cats out, so afterwards he explan he has no memory of who he is  or his home, the cats and GB offer to let him stay at the pizza cat

what do you think of that so far?

please respond i need help

[BurkeWorld]

Cutter, I want you to do something for me.

Email or PM me a sample of your writing. (An SPC script, of course) Just something short, like a few paragraphs, but include dialogue, action etc etc.

Before you get into cross-overs, you gotta make sure you know the main series first.

I'll gladly help you, just send me a quick written sample and I shall analyze it and offer some suggestions for ya.

Good luck!

House, MD

[NPC]

Crossovers will only end in tears... unless done right. >:1

I'd like to see another fanfic... there hasn't been as much activity in that department as there was in the old days.

No, I wasn't here in the old days. I was too busy watching the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade.

[BurkeWorld]

Crossovers will only end in tears... unless done right. >:1

I'd like to see another fanfic... there hasn't been as much activity in that department as there was in the old days.

No, I wasn't here in the old days. I was too busy watching the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade.

I've done my best to spike Fan Fic writing back up, but to no avail, so I've just stopped caring pretty much.

House, MD

[NPC]

I'd write one just so I could read it but-- I never find a presentable idea.

[cutter]

i know alot about SPC, and info about etoranger, but i always having trouble writing it out, i am an idea guy, so i need help from some spc writers ok

[cutter]

i am not a good writer, i am really poor at it, i am just an idea guy,please i need help with this ok?





more ideas to this story:
while bakumaru switch sides and joined the cats, he still don't know who he is or where he is from so the cats and such took him in.(this takes place after the comet, so polly and speedy are dating or married, your call) also bakumaru wants to learn how to used ginzu power, and tried to asked speedy to tech him.

another idea is that bakumaru used nyanoking once how is that

[cartoonking10749]

I like the ideas. How about these to help you:

From what I heard, Bakamaru has a fear of cats- typical for a mouse. So meeting the SPC would not be a walk in the park for him.

Also, how about Bakamaru meeting the other SPC cast members including the royals, especially Princess Vi, who looks just like Cream from Eto Rangers-There seemed to be a relationship between Bakamaru & Cream in Eto Rangers. So why not meet Little Tokyo's bunny princess, the exact opposite of Cream.

Also figure a way for Bakamaru to return to his own universe.

I'm a idea mastermind guy myself. But somethings must be done yourself. Never know, this story of yours might be a winner.

[cutter]

well i tried to write this, but i am going nowhere, i need help writing this, but thanks for the pep talk

some of the ideas which cartoonking10749  gave here are the answers:


well maybe at frist he be scared(he lost his memories but still didn't like cats) so living with them is a little tough, till he saw speedy using his ginzu power and want to try it

maybe seeing vi giving bakumaru a small memory of cream

also the other etorangers will head for the 'lost' novel world to get bakumaru back, but time as passed at Edoropolis,two years have pass and bakumaru still doesn't have his full memory

please i tried to work on this my own, i need help

[adam808]

Bakumaru was able to overcome his fear of cats in the show.

[cutter]

bakumaru fought them and still doesn't fully trust them yet, but after seeing speedy's ginsu power, he wants to learn it.

well please i need help will anyone help me write this