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pollygirl
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: BurkeWorld on January 28, 2008, 01:42:15 am
Quote from: Harmonex on January 27, 2008, 08:01:09 am
As an apology to my earlier rude post, I thought I'd post some Speedy+Polly fan-favour. As we all know you love it.
You were doing so good. But you had to wuss out and apologize for doing nothing wrong except making me laugh my tail feathers off. You can't give in to your words, no matter what people think of them.
~Burkey
VVhat do you mean by that? He vvas being the bigger person by saying that!
Razgriz27 told me you apologized to him for critisizing our story...are you gonna turn right around and critisize it again?
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Speedy + Polly= 4-ever!
Razgriz27
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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January 28, 2008, 07:42:12 pm »
Quote from: Harmonex on January 28, 2008, 01:13:12 pm
I wasn't apologizing for the criticism, I was apologizing for being rude about it. Criticizing and being rude can coincide but are too very different things. Why should one be rude when giving criticism if there are nice ways to go about it? Burkey, don't make me lose my respect for you...your posts always make me laugh.
I don't want to be one of those people that just attacks everyone for no reason, I want to actually be a contributing member to this thriving SPC community.
Besides, I needed an excuse to upload that picture.
(Woot, hit Nyanki status)
He apologized, since he realized he was wrong, so let's not pick on him, Burkey. Like Pollygirl said, let's keep it friendly here.
With that said, Here's the next chapter:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Songs for this chapter:
Speedy’s song to Polly: ‘The Wonder of You’-Elvis Presley
Polly’s song to Speedy: ‘I Turn To You’-Diane Warren
Chapter Eight: Love is in the Air
As Guido came back from his delivery run, he saw the punk that Polly had tossed out of the restaurant, and he asked, “What happened to you? You look like a truck ran you over…twice.” The idiot replied, “Your hellcat friend Polly’s the reason…just because I told her the truth about her shrimp of a boyfriend…” Guido grabbed him, and said, through gritted teeth, “DON’T YOU CALL MY FRIEND SPEEDY A SHRIMP, OR I’LL SQUASH YOU LIKE A BUG, GOT IT?!” The guy replied, “Hey…look who’s talking. You used to treat him like dirt, from what I’ve heard, and now, you say he’s your friend…HAH!!! I pity him, really. Not only is he short, and ugly, but he’s got a bipolar girlfriend, and a so-called ‘best’ friend that treats him like dirt…not to mention that dumb girl behind you, the one that packs the missiles in her hair. Why’d you choose her, anyway…do you pity her ‘cuz nobody else wants her, on account of her being almost too stupid to breath?” Lucille heard the last comment, and she started crying, causing a volley of her missiles to go flying everywhere. Guido shouted, “THAT’S IT, YOU ARROGANT PIECE OF GUTTER TRASH!!! NOT ONLY DID YOU INSULT MY TWO CO-WORKERS…BUT NOW YOU JUST INSULTED THE ONE I LOVE!!! WHEN I GET DONE WITH YOU, YOU’LL BE WISHING THAT POLLY HAD DRAGGED YOU DOWN TO SEE PRINCESS VI!!!” Guido slammed his fist into the punk’s stomach, before kicking him upside the head, and finally, he threw him head first into the dumpster in back of the restaurant. He stared into the other punk’s eyes, and said, “You wanna say something, or are you gonna actually be smart, unlike your buddy?” The kid replied, “You really need to learn to accept it…Speedy and Polly…those two just won’t last. He’ll either walk out on her for her temper, or she’ll end up killing him. Face it…Speedy’s a stupid little moron, and Polly’s a maniacal hothead, who thinks she’s the greatest thing since sliced bread. They’ll never…” Speedy grabbed the idiot, and said, “I see that my girlfriend didn’t knock enough sense into you…SO LET ME DO IT!!!” Speedy’s foot slammed into the idiot’s crotch, and Polly even joined in, whacking the idiot upside the head, before Speedy dropped him into the dumpster. Speedy said, “Thanks, Guido…honestly, I really do appreciate how you’ve been doing so much to help me out lately. You don’t have to go out of your way like that…I’ve already forgiven you, but thanks anyway.” Guido replied, “Speedy, after the way I treated you for so long, I’m gonna do whatever I can to help you out, as my way of saying that I’m sorry.” The two of them shook hands, and Polly then walked up and kissed Speedy, while Guido went to comfort Lucille.
Once he’d taken Lucille a short distance from the Pizza Parlor, Guido said, “Lucille, none of the stuff that goon said about you is true. He’s the dumb one, for being too blind to see how sweet and wonderful you are.” She hugged him, and replied, “Guido…you’re wonderful, honestly. Thank you so much for cheering me up.” He replied, “Hey…anything for the girl I love. I was just thinking…I wanna do something really special for Speedy, as a way to show him just how much I’ve changed. In fact, I’m gonna go talk with him right now, and then I’ll take you out to see a movie.” Lucille replied, “Okay, Guido. I’ll wait right here for you.” Guido kissed her cheek, and then he headed inside to talk to Speedy.
Speedy’s room…
Speedy was in the process of getting ready to head out with Polly, when he heard a knock on his door. He said, “Come in…”. The door slid open, revealing Guido. Speedy said, “Hey buddy. What’s up?” Guido took a look around, and then he said, “Listen, Speedy…I really do feel as if I should do something special for you and Polly, so if you could think of anything at all, just let me know.” Speedy replied, “Honestly, Guido…you’ve stood up for the two of us, and you apologized, so we’re all set.” Guido shook his head, and replied, “I insist, Speedy. I really wanna do something special for you and Polly. I know she means a lot to you, so if I can help you out in any way, just tell me.” Speedy replied, “Well…I am tryin’ to save money for an engagement ring, and I figure that I’ll have enough for one in about two more weeks.” Guido replied, “Actually…I think I can help ya there, buddy.” Guido reached into his pocket, and pulled out an envelope. Speedy opened it, and inside, he found an additional twelve thousand yen, in addition to the eighteen thousand that he’d already saved up. Speedy said, “Guido…I-I can’t take this…it’s your money…I thought you were gonna take Lucille out for a date. How are you gonna do it, if you don’t have…” Guido replied, “Take it easy, Speedy…I’ve got plenty of money set aside for my date with Lucille. No more arguments…go find the nicest engagement ring that you can, since nothing but the best is good enough for a wonderful girl like Polly. Take care, and I’ll see you later.” Speedy shook Guido’s hand, and said, “Thanks, buddy. You have fun with Lucille!” Guido and Speedy hugged one another, as if they were brothers, before heading off on their separate ways.
Little Tokyo Palace…
Princess Vi was overjoyed…she’d just gotten a letter from her mother, Empress Frieda, which stated that she’d be coming home for an extended visit, and would be arriving within a week. She immediately ordered all of her servants to start cleaning the palace from top to bottom, and she commissioned the royal tailors to make her the finest dress possible. As she doled out the marching orders, one of her servants said, “Good lord…with as much hot air as she’s got, we could float a blimp.” Princess Vi heard him, and shouted, “WHAT WAS THAT?!!!” The servant frantically waved his hands in front of him, and stammered, “N-Nothing, Your Highness…honestly! I…” Vi screamed, “SILENCE!!! GUARDS, TAKE HIM TO PRISONERS’ ISLAND!!!” Her guards arrived, and dragged the poor servant off. After that, she summoned Al Dente, and ordered him to help get the city ready for her mother’s arrival.
Little Tokyo Mall…
Speedy was browsing through the engagement rings, looking for the perfect one for the pretty female Samurai that had completely captured his heart. After a half hour of searching, his eyes finally lit on one that he knew was meant for her, and her alone. It was a white-gold band, with a heart-shaped blue diamond in the center, surrounded by rubies. The diamond was in the exact same shade of blue as Polly’s eyes, and the rubies made him think of her soft, flowing hair. He waved for one of the salespeople, and the young woman walked over. She said, “Hello, young man. Is there a particular ring that strikes your fancy?” Speedy replied, “Yeah…that one right there. The one with the rubies surrounding the blue diamond.” The woman replied, “That one’s the best we’ve got in the store…I bet the young lady you have in mind means quite a bit to you, am I right?” Speedy smiled, and said, “Yeah, she does…I’ve known her ever since we were both kittens, and yet…I never realized just how much I loved her, until just before the comet was about to hit. After I destroyed it…I knew I had to tell her…she’s the only one that I’ll ever love.” The woman replied, “Wait a minute…you’re…the one that…You’re Speedy Cerviche, aren’t you?” Speedy replied, “Yeah…but please don’t announce it…I’m really not too fond of big crowds. How much for the ring?” The woman blushed, and replied, “I’m sorry if I embarrassed you…the ring comes to a total of twenty thousand. Speedy handed her the money, and she slid the ring into a small blue velvet box, which Speedy gratefully accepted from her, before heading out. He checked his remaining money, and saw to his relief, that he had plenty left over to take Polly out to dinner tonight.
Over at Lucille’s Teahouse…
Lucille was just getting done with the sweeping of her floor, when she heard someone knocking. Sliding her door open, she saw Guido standing there, a bouquet of roses in his hands, and a smile on his face. He said, “Pretty flowers, for the prettiest girl in the city.” Lucille smiled, and then she took the flowers from him, and set them into a vase on her table. Guido said, “Well…shall we head out?” Lucille replied, “Sure…just let me get my purse.” Lucille got herself ready to go, and then she and Guido headed for the movie theater. Once they arrived, Guido paid for both their tickets, and the refreshments, and they headed in to watch Hairspray.
Back at the Pizza Parlor…
Speedy walked in, humming a tune to himself. Good Bird said, “Hey buddy. Where’d ya go?” Speedy replied, “Can you keep a secret?” Good Bird replied, “Sure. My beak’s sealed tighter than Cheese’s wallet at a charity event.” Speedy replied, “I just bought Polly an engagement ring, but I don’t want her to know, until I ‘pop the question’ to her.” Good Bird replied, “You can count on me, buddy. I won’t tell anybody else.” Speedy replied, “Thanks, Good Bird…I knew I could count on ya. I’m gonna go hide this, and then I’ll get to work on makin’ dinner for Polly.” Good Bird smiled, and he then headed off to see Carla.
Meanwhile, Speedy headed up to his room, stashed the ring, and then he went into the kitchen to get dinner ready. A few hours later, he placed dishes, cups, silverwear, and a candle, on one of the outdoor tables, along with some insect-repelling candles, and he then went to find Polly. He knocked on her door, and asked, “Can I come in, Kitten?” Polly replied, “Sure, Speedy. What’s up?” Speedy walked in, and replied, “I’ve got a special surprise for you, Pollyanna…let’s go outside.” Polly closed her eyes, and covered them with her hands, after which, Speedy picked her up, and carried her down the stairs, and out to the table. He said, “Okay, kitten…you can look now.” Polly opened her eyes, and what she saw before her, made her heart melt. Speedy had cooked all of her favorites…ramen, beef teriyaki, wonton soup, jiaozi, nikuman buns, and he’d even placed some bottles of Pepsi in a cooler filled with ice, right by the table. She said, “Speedy…this is just…my god…you truly are a wonderful cat, and I don’t care what anybody else says about you. I love you, Speedy Cerviche.” Speedy set her down on her feet, and replied, “I love you too, Polly Esther. You may have a hot temper, but you’ve also got a heart of gold, and you’re always there for anyone who needs you, you’re kind, generous, and there’s nobody else on Earth, that I could ever love as much as I love you. I’ll always be with you, Polly…forever.” Polly pulled Speedy into a long, deep kiss, and then they sat down to eat dinner. Once they finished dinner, Speedy said, “Polly, I’ve got a song I’d like to sing for you, called ‘The Wonder Of You’, by Elvis Preseley.” Polly replied, “Speedy, that sounds like the perfect song, for a night like this one.” Speedy hugged her, and then he cleared his throat, and started to serenade Polly.
‘When no-one else can understand me
When everything I do is wrong
You give me hope and consolation
You give me strength to carry on
And you’re always there to lend a hand
In everything I do
That’s the wonder
The wonder of you
And when you smile the world is brighter
You touch my hand and I’m a king
Your kiss to me is worth a fortune
Your love for me is everything
I guess I’ll never know the reason why
You love me like you do
That’s the wonder…
The wonder of you!’
Once Speedy’s song finished, Polly threw her arms around him, and said, “Speedy, that was so beautiful!” He replied, “Not anywhere near as beautiful as you are, my sweet Pollyanna.” She blushed, and then she kissed him on the nose. After that, she said, “Speedy, I’ve got one for you too, called ‘I Turn To You’, by Diane Warren.” Polly cleared her throat, and let her love for Speedy flow out through the song.
‘When I'm lost, in the rain
In your eyes I know I'll find the light
To light my way
When I'm scared, losing ground
When my world is going crazy
You can turn it all around, yes
And when I'm down you're there
Pushing me to the top
You're always there giving me all you've got
For a shield, from the storm
For a friend, for a love to keep me safe and warm
I turn to you
For the strength, to be strong
For the will to carry on
For everything you do, for everything that's true
I turn to you, yes
When I lose, the will to win
I just reach for you and I can reach
The sky again,
I can do, anything
'Cause your love is so amazing
'Cause your love inspires me
And when I need a friend
You're always on my side
Giving me faith taking me through the night, yeah
For a shield (for a shield), from the storm (from the storm)
For a friend, for a love to keep me safe and warm
(For a love to keep me safe and warm)
I turn to you (I turn to you)
For the strength (for the strength), to be strong
For the will to carry on, oh
For everything you do I turn to you, yeah, ohhh
For the arms to be my shelter through all the rain
For truth that will never change
For someone to lean on
For a heart I can rely on through anything
For the one who, I can run to, ohh I...
Turn to you...ohhh yeah
For a shield , from the storm
For a friend, for a love to keep me safe and warm
(To keep me safe and warm, yeah)
I turn to you (I turn to you)
For the strength (for the strength), to be strong
For the will to carry on, oh ohh
For everything you do (everything you do)
For everything that's true
For everything you do, ohh
For everything that's true
I turn to you!’
As soon as she finished singing, Polly felt Speedy’s arms fold around her shoulders, and his lips met hers. After they kissed for a short time, Speedy walked Polly up to a nearby hill, where they spent the next few hours watching the stars, before finally heading home and going to bed for the night.
Guido walked Lucille back to her teahouse, and said, “Goodnight, my lovely Lucille. I’ll see you tomorrow.” She gently kissed him on the cheek, and replied, “Thank you, Guido…for the movie, for dinner, and everything else. Goodnight.” Guido waited until Lucille was safely inside, and then he headed for home.
Prisoners’ Island…
Cheese was still fuming at the Ninja Crows for their clumsy antics, which had cost them a crate full of ammunition, building materials, and food. One of the Ninja Crows came up to him, and said, “Hey Seymour…we managed to get some ammo for at least one of the weapons…the machine guns in the head. That’s the only ammo we could salvage from the ocean. The replacement supplies will be here in three weeks.” Cheese screamed, “THREE WEEKS?!!! YOU CLUMSY, IDIOTIC WALKING FEATHERDUSTER…IF IT WEREN’T FOR YOU AND YOUR YO-YO FRIENDS PLAYING TIDDLEYWINKS, WHILE YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE BRINGING THAT AMMO IN, WE’D ALREADY BE RID OF THE PIZZA CATS, AND I’D BE THE NEW RULER OF LITTLE TOKYO!!!” The Ninja Crow stammered, “Uh, Boss…I know you’re angry, but don’t you at least wanna see the test-firing of the head-mounted machine guns?” Cheese replied, “I suppose I’ll come and look. It’ll be the first thing that you idiots have managed not to mess up since we got here.” The Ninja Crow led Cheese over to where Jerry was supervising five more of his idiot henchmen, as they loaded ammo into the robot’s head, the only fully assembled portion of their new weapon. The legs, arms, and body were all just metal framework, with no armor covering, and Cheese said, “This better work, or someone’s going to be in SERIOUS trouble, Jerry!” Jerry replied, “Don’t get your whiskers in a twist, Seymour…I personally made certain that this demonstration goes like clockwork.” Cheese said, “Well then…let’s see it.” Jerry handed Cheese a set of earplugs, and then he gave the signal to one of the Ninja Crows to fire the guns. The Ninja Crow pressed a button on the control panel in front of him, and the huge 60mm machine guns erupted with a massive roar. Cheese saw that a six-hundred foot stretch of palm trees had been turned into sawdust, and he smiled. He said, “Nicely done! Now all we have to do, is wait until the rest of the parts get here. After that, it’s all over for the Samurai Pizza Cats…HAHAHAHA!!!” One of the Ninja Crows muttered, “I’m surprised the palm trees didn’t keel over when he walked out here…when was the last time he bathed or brushed his teeth?” Jerry said, “Shut up, you idiot! Do you want him to hear…you…oh no…not again…” Cheese started going red, and screamed, “ARE YOU SAYING I SMELL WORSE THAN ROTTING CHEESE AND OLD GYM SOCKS COMBINED?!!! I DON’T SEE YOU WINNING ANY ‘BEST HYGIENE’ AWARDS ANY TIME SOON, YOU LAMEBRAINED IDIOTIC TURKEYS!!! I’VE GOT SUCH A NASTY HEADACHE…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Jerry shouted, “RUN!!!” He and the Ninja Crows tried to escape, but it was too late. Cheese exploded, and they all went flying. Jerry said, “One of these days, I’m going to become a doctor like my mother said, that is…if he doesn’t kill me first…” Jerry fell over backwards, and peace and quiet returned to Prisoners’ Island, at least for now.
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When history witnesses a great change, Razgriz reveals itself. First, as a dark demon. As a demon, it uses it's power to rain death upon the land, and then it dies. However, after a period of slumber, Razgriz returns....this time, as a great hero.-Ace Combat 5: The Unsung War.
Crow
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Reply #22 on:
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Razgriz27 told me you apologized to him for critisizing our story...are you gonna turn right around and critisize it again?
Actually, I didn't apologize for critizing your story, as I said I wouldn't ever take back what I said, because WHAT I said was very validated and true.
No.
I apologized for a PM message I sent in a temporary moment of anger that occured when I was browsing these forums. That is which I apologized for. So what's done is done.
My thoughts on your stories still stand, and this post just reaffirms those feelings.
~Burkey
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Razgriz27
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Posts: 114
Pizza Cats Forever!
Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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February 03, 2008, 09:56:38 pm »
I'd just appreciate it if you could state your opinions in a way that doesn't make either Pollygirl or I feel as though our stories aren't worth reading. We spend a lot of time on these stories, and having someone do nothing but pick on us for every little thing, it makes us feel really bad. What you've read so far is how Pollygirl and I prefer to write our stories, and that's not going to change, so please, if you don't like it, don't read it.
That said, here's the next chapter.
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Chapter Nine: The Proposal
Speedy came bounding down the stairs on another bright morning, and entered the brightly lit kitchen. As usual, Polly was beginning to prepare the ingredients for the morning rush, but she quickly lifted her head to meet the eyes of her handsome boyfriend, who she greeted with a kiss. “Morning, Speedy!”
“Morning, Polly.” he smiled as he began to get the breakfast things together. “So…where do ya wanna go tonight, Kitten?”
She smiled. “Well, I was thinking..we’ve been out almost every night this week, so what if we stay in tonight? I’ll cook the dinner myself, and it’ll be just you and me.”
“That sounds perfect.”
“Well, you made me dinner a few weeks ago, so now I’ll make you dinner. 8 tonight, Speedy?”
“You bet!” Speedy gave her another peck on the lips. “Care to join me for breakfast?”
“Of course. Meet ya out front in 20 minutes.”
Prisoners’ Island…
“OK, let’s go over the testing one more time,” Jerry said. The Ninja Crows groaned, since they all really wanted to take a break.
“Do what he says,” Cheese said. “THIS time you morons are NOT gonna screw this up! Do it until you all get blisters, you hear me!!! For once, you morons are doing something right!”
“Aw, but Cheese, have a heart! We’ve been practicing all night!”, one of the Ninja Crows complained.
“Yeah! My back hurts!”, said another one.
Cheese responded by hitting him on the top of his head with his fan. “Now your front hurts, too! GET BACK UP ON THAT ROBOT AND START AGAIN WITH THE TESTING!!!”
Another Crow came running up to Cheese. “Sir, look what finally came! It’s the crate we’ve been waiting for!”
“About time, too! Jerry, hurry up and get these things loaded in there!”
“Yes, Sir, but before I do, the Crows want to know when we can have a lunch break?”
“LUNCH break?! Are you kidding me?! DO YA WANNA GET OFF THIS DAMN ISLAND OR NOT?! WE’RE TRYING TO MAKE THIS PLAN FOOLPROOF, AND THEY WANNA EAT?!!! YOU ALL MAKE ME SO ANGRY!!!”
“Cheesy, they didn’t mean it!!! They didn’t, they were just hungry!! It’s too soon to blow up, Cheesy, please!”
Too late.
Before Jerry knew it, he was covered in soot. Cheese picked himself up weakly. “Oooh…I changed my mind..let’s all take a little nap…” he muttered before collapsing in a heap.
Back in Little Tokyo…
Later that afternoon, Polly approached Francine. “Hey, Francine? I’d like to know if I can take my lunch early today. I’m gonna go meet Lucille, and pick up some things for tonight.”
“OK, sure.”, Francine replied.
“Thanks…and I also need a half hour off so I can start cooking the dinner tonight.”
“A half hour?”
“Please, Francine? I’ll punch in a half hour earlier to make up for it tomorrow! This dinner really means a lot to me, and I really want everything to be perfect tonight.”
Francine shook her head. “You’re really going all out for this, aren’t ya?”
Polly smiled. “Yeah…this is an important moment in our relationship. I’m cooking the whole dinner myself.”
“I can give ya a hand if ya want.”
“Thanks, Francine, but I really wanna do this myself.”
Guido went into Speedy’s room after him, and waited for Speedy to close the door. “So…tonight’s the big night, eh Speedy?”
“Yep,” Speedy said happily. He took out the box from the false bottom of the drawer and opened it, showing it to him. Guido looked at it and whistled.
“That is beautiful!”
“Yeah,” Speedy said, gazing upon it with love. “And I’m gonna give it to Polly tonight.”
“Congratulations, Buddy!”
“She didn’t say yes yet.”
“She’s gonna, Speedy! You’re a great guy, and believe me, no one deserves this more than you.”
“Thanks, Guido.” He sighed. “Thanks a lot for not telling Francine anything about this.”
“Hey, Fran’s a sweetheart and all, but the girl can’t keep a secret if her life depended on it!”
“Isn’t that the truth? So, where are ya taking Lucille tonight?”
“I’m gonna take her to a late-night picnic in the park, and then walk around a bit and watch the stars. we’ll probably be back around ten-thirty tonight.”
“OK, that ought ta give me enough time.”
“Plenty of time,” Guido stuck out his hand. “And I wish you every bit of luck.”
Polly entered the restaurant, lugging a couple of bags in her arms. She called out, “OK, I’m back.” She took out a bright purple dress and held it up to her. “Francine, what do you think of this dress? Do you think it’s nice enough?”
“Oh, that’s a lovely dress Polly!”
“Thanks, I really wanna look special tonight.” She looked through the other bags carefully. “Tablecloth, candle holders, white candles, matches, flowers, vase…”
“Uh, Polly? Did you buy any actual FOOD?”
“That’s later on tonight after work, speaking of which, Francine..”
“Yeah?”
“Do you have any..uh…plans tonight?”
“Plans?”
“Yeah...you know...plans to be OUT of the Pizza Parlor tonight? For a little while?”
Francine gave her a smug look. “Subtlety isn’t your strong point, Polly. OK, I’ll find something to do tonight that’ll take me out for a few hours.”
Polly gave her a hug. “Thanks, Fran, I appreciate this so much!”
That afternoon, Speedy made his way over to the home of Polly’s parents. He had been over here so many times when he was a kitten, that he could have found his way here blindfolded. Taking a deep breath, he knocked on the door. Polly’s mother opened it, her eyes lighting up when she saw Speedy. “Why, hello, Speedy! what a pleasant surprise! How are you, Dear?”
“I’m just fine, Mrs. Esther. How are you?”
“We’re good. How are things at the restaurant?”
“Can’t complain, and you?”
“Fine, fine. Do come in, Dear. Make yourself at home. I’ll brew you up some tea.”
“Thanks.”
“So,” Mrs. Esther said, when Speedy had been served his tea, “What brings you to our neck of the woods, Speedy? Just passing through…or is my daughter driving you nuts?”
Speedy laughed. “Nothing could be farther from the truth.”
“How’s my daughter?”
“She’s great.”
“Tane, I’m home!” Came a familiar voice, as Polly’s father came into the room. “Who are you talking to…oh hello, Speedy! Isn’t this a nice surprise! How are ya, Son?”
“I’m great. Never better.”
“How’s Polly?”
“Just fine.”
“So, what brings you here, Speedy?”
“Well, I’d like to talk to both of you about something, if I may, Sir.”
Mr. Esther sat down next to his wife. “Did Polly blow up severely again? I’m sorry about that. If she did, than her mother and I will have a frank talk with her..”
“Oh no, Sir!” Speedy said. “No, nothing like that. Not at all.”
Mr. Esther relaxed. "That’s a relief. So, what’s going on?”
Speedy took a deep breath. “Mr. and Mrs. Esther..I’m deeply in love with your daughter. Polly…she means the world to me, and I love her more than absolutely anything.” Mr. And Mrs. Esther‘s eyes lit up at that. “And so..I’d like to know, may I please have the honor of Polly’s hand in marriage?”
Mr. Esther leaned forward. “Speedy, Son, would you mind repeating that?”
“May I please have the honor of Polly’s hand in marriage?”
Mr. Esther put his hands in the air and sank to his knees. “Marriage?! OHHH, finally, finally!!!” He stood up. “Of course, of course you may! Of course!” He shook Speedy’s hand. “I’ve always wanted this! I did!” He hugged Speedy. “Tane?” he looked at his wife.
She beamed. “Welcome to the family!”, as she hugged him.
“Thank you, Mr. And Mrs. Esther! Thank you both! I promise, I’ll be the most honest and faithful husband in the whole world, and I’ll take good care of her!”
“We already know you will!”, Tane said happily.
“I couldn’t be prouder than to have you marry my daughter!” Polly’s father said, hugging Speedy again.
Later that day, the restaurant had closed up. Guido had already left for his date with Lucille, and Polly was behind the counter beginning to cook her special dinner for herself and Speedy. Francine was counting out the money they had earned that day. Polly nervously finished tossing the salad…then proceeded to put it in the oven! Francine raised her eyebrows at this but kept counting. “Oh, I hope this dinner goes well tonight.”
“Polly, of course it will! NO reason why it shouldn’t. Don’t be so nervous.”
“I’m not nervous, not at all!” POlly said.
“Oh, really? Then why are you baking the salad?”
Polly grabbed a pot holder and pulled the salad out, looking at it. “It’s done.”
“You sure you don’t want my help?”
“No thanks, Francine! I’m fine.” She put the rolls on a baking sheet, slid them in the oven and turned it on.
“What are you making anyway?”
“First, we’re having wonton soup, then the next course is chicken teriyaki and orange duck, with salad and dinner rolls, and for dessert, a rich chocolate mousse.”
“Sounds yummy!”
“Yeah..now are you..”
“Yes, Polly. There’s an outdoor concert playing tonight, so I’ll be there. You’ll have this whole place to yourself.”
Polly set a table with the brand new white tablecloth, set up the crystal candleholders and put the white candles into them. “You’ll also fix the jukebox to automatically play soft music, right?“
“Just before I leave.“
Polly put the flowers she brought into a new vase filled with water, and set it right in the middle. “Thanks, Francine.” she said. “what would I do without you?”
“Float around ecstatically by yourself.”
Polly laughed. “Can’t help lovin’ that man of mine!” she sang out, going back to the kitchen. “Can I borrow your curling iron?”
“Go ahead!”, Francine giggled.
That night, Speedy straightened the tie on his brand new suit he had purchased after talking with Polly’s parents. He ran a comb through his hair, sprayed on some cologne, picked up the velvet box, and slipped it into his pocket. It was all up to him now. He took a deep breath and went downstairs.
Polly struck a match to light the candles. She turned the lights down to admire her work. Speedy came down just then, and he stood at the foot of the stairs, transfixed at how lovely Polly looked in the new dress, illuminated by soft candlelight…and nothing else. Polly turned and smiled. “Hi, Speedy.”
“Hi…wow...Polly…you look beautiful!”
Polly blushed. “Thank you.” She walked into his arms as he gazed into her eyes and brought his lips down on hers. For long, long moments they kissed, wrapping their arms tighter and tighter around each other. Speedy moved his lips to her forehead, kissing her again. Polly moved her arms up and down his own.
“Did anyone ever tell you, you have the loveliest eyes in the entire world?”
Polly smiled and stroked his whiskers. “Speedy, you’re so sweet.” she kissed him again. “Dinner is all ready.”
“Mmm…it smells great, Kitten!”
A short time later…
“Polly, that dinner was delicious!” Speedy smiled. ”I can honestly say that was the best orange duck I’ve ever had!”
Polly smiled. “Thank you, Speedy!” She got up. “I’ll get the dessert.”
“What are we having?”
“Homemade Chocolate mousse!”
“That sounds great!”. Polly went to get it. Speedy took a deep breath, and gazed at the empty plate in front of him. Now, now the time had come. Taking a deep breath he took out the box, opened it, and set it down on the plate. Polly came back with the dishes. She set Speedy’s down in front of him…and gazed intently at hers. Her eyes grew so wide he could see the flames of the candles glowing in them.
Polly sat down and picked up the ring, as her mouth dropped practically to her waist. “Wha…wha..” she gasped.
Speedy took her hand and stroked it. “Polly Esther, I love you more than words can say. You’re without a doubt the most amazing Cat I’ve ever met in my entire life. You’re my true soul-mate. I can honestly say I can’t live without you near me. Polly, will you marry me?”
Polly’s eyes filled with tears. “Speedy...I love you so much…” she took a deep breath. “Yes, I’ll marry you!”
Speedy stared as if he couldn’t believe it. “You…you will?”
“Yes!”
Speedy jumped up. “She will!!!” he called, pulling Polly into an embrace and a passionate kiss, picking Polly up and twirling her around before getting down on one knee, and sliding the ring on.
Polly gasped when she saw it. “Oh, Speedy..it’s gorgeous!! I‘m never taking it off! ” She pulled him into a deep, deep kiss. For a long while they were lost in each other’s arms…when suddenly they were startled by a loud crash...the door sung open…and Guido and Lucille fell right through the door.
“Uh..hi, how’re ya doing? We…we were just testing the door..just testing the door!” Guido and Lucille swung the door back and forth. Speedy rolled his eyes at Polly, who giggled.
“OK, Fran, if you’re hiding too you can stop it and come in now!”
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: Razgriz27 on February 03, 2008, 09:56:38 pm
I'd just appreciate it if you could state your opinions in a way that doesn't make either Pollygirl or I feel as though our stories aren't worth reading. We spend a lot of time on these stories, and having someone do nothing but pick on us for every little thing, it makes us feel really bad. What you've read so far is how Pollygirl and I prefer to write our stories, and that's not going to change, so please, if you don't like it, don't read it.
I haven't been reading any of them, trust me. But when I DO review a story, I am both firm and fair. Go back and re-read what I wrote, you will find a mix of everything inside it. Honestly, if you can't take a little critisism, you're not meant to be a writer at all. Good night to you, sir or ma'am.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Please don't say that I'm not fit to be a writer. I just don't like being insulted. Please refrain from flaming me like this in the future.
Here's the next part:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Chapter Ten: Discussions and Explosions
Guido and Lucille came into the kitchen, and Francine followed them in, after flipping on the light switch. Speedy looked over at the three of them, and asked, “How long have you three been hiding there?”, in a playful tone. Guido replied, “Long enough to hear you propose, buddy. Congratulations!”, and then he clapped Speedy on the shoulder. Lucille and Francine hugged Speedy, and then they repeated the process with Polly. Francine asked, “So Polly…how’d dinner go?” Polly beamed with excitement, and she replied, “Oh Francine…it was perfect! I’ve never been so happy in my entire life…Speedy truly is the best friend I’ve ever had…and soon, we’ll be together forever, since I’m now officially engaged to become Mrs. Polly Esther Cerviche!” Polly proudly held up her ring in the light, and Francine’s eyes went wide, while Lucille smiled from ear to ear, as she said, “Oh Polly…I’m so happy for you…Speedy is a wonderful cat, and he deserves someone like you. Take care of him!” Polly hugged her longtime friend, and replied, “I will, Lucille…and I’d like to ask you an important question, if you don’t mind.” Lucille sat down at one of the outdoor tables next to Polly, and replied, “Go ahead, Polly…as long as we’ve been friends, you can ask me anything.” Polly smiled, and then she asked, “Lucille…would you please be my maid-of-honor at my wedding? It’d mean a lot to me, since I’ve known you the longest, aside from Speedy.” Lucille’s eyes teared up, and Polly quickly moved her away from the Pizza Parlor, as her missiles blasted up into the air. Once she’d calmed herself down, Lucille replied, “Polly…I’d be delighted to be your maid-of-honor.” Polly hugged her friend, and replied, “Thank you so much, Lucille…you truly are a wonderful friend.” Polly then headed back to the restaurant, eager to spend some more time with her wonderful fiancé.
In the meantime, Speedy was having a similar conversation with Guido, while Francine wiped down the counter. Speedy said, “Guido, I’d like to ask you…will you do me the honor of being my Best Man? I’m asking you, since I wanna show you that I truly do forgive you, and because I’ve always thought of you as a friend, despite all the rotten pranks you’ve played on me in the past.” Guido replied, “Speedy, are ya sure ya want me to do the honors? I mean…I’ve really done some pretty mean stuff to you, and…” Speedy replied, “Guido, that’s all in the past now, and I’m willing to put it behind us. Please Guido…this means a lot to me, so will ya do it?” Guido smiled, and replied, “Sure thing, pal…in fact, I’m gonna go have a chat with Fran and Lucille right now about something, so I’ll see ya later.” Speedy replied, “Catch ya later, buddy!” Right after Guido and Francine walked out, Speedy heard Polly come in, and he pulled her into a deep, passion-filled kiss, which lasted until they both had to come up for air. Polly said, “Speedy…Lucille’s agreed to be my Maid-Of-Honor…she’s such a wonderful friend!” Speedy smiled, and replied, “That’s great, Kitten…Guido said that he’d be my Best Man. He and Francine went outside to talk to Lucille about something, so we’ll have a little while by ourselves. Do ya wanna watch a movie with me?” Polly replied, “Sure, Speedy! You can pick it out, and I’ll get the drinks and the popcorn.” Speedy replied, “Sounds good to me, Pollyanna. I’ll see ya in a few minutes.” Polly went into the kitchen, popped a bowlful of popcorn, and then she grabbed a couple of twenty-ounce bottles of Pepsi, before heading back into the living room. She set the bowl on the table in front of the sofa, and then she and Speedy got themselves comfortable, and enjoyed the movie that Speedy had chosen, the 1974 release of Zorro, starring Alain Delon.
Outside, with Guido, Lucille, and Francine…
Guido sat down on one of the benches outside, Lucille sat next to him, and Francine sat down next to Lucille. Guido said, “Well, it’s official…Speedy’s asked me to be his Best Man, and I’ve accepted.” Lucille replied, “Guido…that’s wonderful! Polly asked me to be her Maid-Of-Honor, and I couldn’t say no…I mean…we’ve been friends forever.” Francine added, “I really am proud of you, Guido. You’ve changed for the better, and I’m glad that you and Speedy were able to put the past behind you.” Guido replied, “Yeah, I know, Fran….but still…I wish there was something I could do for them…ya know…to show them just how much their friendship means to me.” Francine replied, “Well…you could help set up the wedding, once you find out when they plan on having it.” Guido smiled, and replied, “Ya know what, Francine…I’m gonna do better than that…I’m gonna GIVE them their wedding! After all, if there’s any two cats that deserve to be together, especially after all they’ve gone through, it’s Speedy and Polly…so I’m gonna do anything I can, to give them the best wedding possible!” Lucille replied, “Oh Guido…that’s so sweet…” Lucille’s eyes teared up again, and while Francine dove for cover, Guido moved Lucille away from the buildings, and her missiles went off just a few seconds later. Once they’d all gotten together again, Guido said, “I’m gonna go with Lucille to meet Al Dente, and give him the news. You’re welcome to come with us, Fran…” Smiling, Francine replied, “I’ve gotta keep an eye on the restaurant…but I’ll see you later.” Guido and Lucille waved goodbye, and then they headed off towards the Palace.
Imperial Palace of Little Tokyo…
Upon their arrival at the palace, Guido and Lucille were immediately allowed to enter, once they’d stated their intention to meet with Al Dente. The guard in charge of the shift called Al down, and he said, “Well…Guido and Lucille…what can I do for you today?” Guido replied, “Well, Al…uh, can we go somewhere quiet, so that we can discuss a rather important matter?” Al replied, “Sure. We’ll head to my quarters.” Al took the lead, with Guido and Lucille close behind him.
Main Lobby of the Palace…
Princess Vi was pacing around impatiently, waiting for her mother to arrive, since her last letter had indicated that she’d be arriving today. Vi was decked out in her favorite dress, which was a deep royal blue, with gold trim. After a half-hour, Princess Vi heard the trumpets outside, and then the doors flew open, revealing her mother, Empress Frieda. Overjoyed to see her mother at long last, Vi ran forward, and jumped into her mother’s outstretched arms. “WELCOME HOME, MAMA!!!”, she cried out. Empress Frieda hugged her daughter, and replied, “Hello, Violet…I’m so happy to be home, and I love that dress…is it new?” Vi replied, “Yes, Mama. I had it made just for this special day, so I could look my best when you came home.” Frieda said, “Well then…why don’t you and I head into the den, and you can tell me all about what’s been happening around here during the last few months. I heard about Cheese’s exile in your letters, but I’d like to hear it from you.” Vi replied, “Of course, Mama. Servants…make some tea and cookies for my mother and I, and be quick about it!” One of them muttered, “Oh great…just what we need…another one of those hot-tempered crazies…” Vi heard him, and shouted, “I HEARD THAT, YOU IDIOT!!! HOW DARE YOU INSULT MY MOTHER?!!! GUARDS…TAKE HIM TO PRISONERS’ ISLAND!!!” Once the poor soul was dragged away, the rest of the servants ran off, and began making the refreshments that Vi had ordered.
Al Dente’s room…
Guido, Lucille, and Al Dente sat in a circle, around the small table that Al had in his room. Al said, “Alright then…now, what brings you two here today?” Guido replied, “Well…it’s like this, Al…Speedy and Polly…they started dating officially a little while back, and just recently, Speedy asked Polly to marry him, and she accepted. I’m gonna PERSONALLY give them this wedding, as my thanks for their friendship, and Lucille and I were wondering if you’d be able to help us out?” Al replied, “Guido…of course! Those two deserve nothing but the best, after everything that they’ve done for this city.” Lucille replied, “Just one thing, Al…please don’t tell Princess Vi…she’ll just insist on a HUGE, fancy party, which Speedy and Polly won’t want any part of. Neither one of them is really fond of large crowds, and they only want to have their family and close friends in attendance, not the whole city. I’ll be Polly’s Maid-Of-Honor, and Guido’s going to be the Best Man.” Guido replied, “Yeah, that’s right. So Al…will ya help us?” Al smiled, and said, “You can count on me, Guido. Now then…I’ve got to get back to work, but I’ll talk to you later. Take care." Guido and Lucille smiled, and then they headed back to the Pizza Parlor.
Prisoners Island…
Now that they’d finally completed the robot, Cheese was eager to test it out. The Ninja Crows finished loading the massive 45mm shotgun, Cheese climbed up into the cockpit, and Jerry then sealed the hatch. Centering the gunsights on the target dummies of Speedy, Guido, Polly, and Good Bird, Cheese pulled the trigger on the control stick, and the huge gun spat out a massive barrage of paintballs. Cheese saw this, and screamed, “WHICH ONE OF YOU IDIOTS DID THIS?!!!” The Ninja Crows all started pointing fingers, and shouting, “HE DID IT!!!” Jerry shouted, “CAN’T YOU DIMWITS DO ANYTHING RIGHT?!!! AT THIS RATE, GREY’S ANATOMY WILL GET CANCELLED BEFORE WE GET OFF THIS ISLAND!!!” Cheese was incensed, and he screamed, “HOW MANY TIMES DO YOU IDIOTS PLAN ON MESSING UP?! I’D LIKE TO GET OUT OF HERE, WHILE I STILL HAVE MY GOOD LOOKS!!!” Jerry muttered, “In that case, you’re a little late…and when was the last time you brushed, when dinosaurs roamed the earth…oops…” Cheese shouted, “WHO ARE YOU CALLING UGLY?!!” One of the Ninja Crows said, “I knew you were dumb, but even YOU should have picked up on that…then again, I’ve met rocks with more sense than you…uh-oh…” Cheese screamed, “I’M GETTING SUCH A NASTY HEADACHE…I NEED SOME ASPIRIN…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and blew himself and Jerry right out of the robot’s cockpit. Cheese hit a tree, and Jerry flew into the water. One of the Ninja Crows finally located the real shotgun shells, and loaded them up. Later, when Cheese and Jerry had recovered from the effects of Cheese’s latest tantrum, they’d run another test, but for now, silence descended once again over Prisoners’ Island.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 12:23:21 am
Please don't say that I'm not fit to be a writer. I just don't like being insulted. Please refrain from flaming me like this in the future.
I said I was sorry for what I wrote in my PM, but that was it. I'm sorry you don't seem to understand that I am NOT insulting you, but if you cannot simply take some constructive critisim, then I said "perhaps writing isn't for you." Never did I say, "You shouldn't write anymore."
So please... Enough.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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February 04, 2008, 01:14:12 am »
Alright. Let's just let this disagreement die, before it gets really ugly.
Here's the next part of the story:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
The songs are ‘Her Eyes’, by Pat Monahan, and ‘When I Fall In Love’, by Celine Dion.
Chapter Eleven: Mountain of Love
A few days later, Polly and Speedy had made plans for another date, and while they were gone, Guido had planned to call his brother Cosmo, and his sister-in-law, Myoshi, who ran a catering business in the north end of Tokyo, to see if they’d help with the catering for the wedding. All throughout the day, as they were serving and delivering pizzas, both Speedy and Polly were happier than they had ever been in their lives. Speedy himself couldn’t stop singing through the streets, as he made his way to another delivery.
“Her eyes, that's where hope lies.
That's where blue skies
Meet the sunrise.
Her eyes, that's where I go
When I go home.”
He called out a cheerful ‘Good Morning’ to everyone he saw.
“Good morning, Speedy!” a vender called out.
“It certainly is! It‘s a fantastic day! This is a great MONTH to be alive!“
Speedy made his way down the street, stopping at the home of Ruby. She opened the door and Speedy was thankful she was wearing her glasses. “Hi, Speedy.”
“Hi, Ruby, I got your pizza.”
“Thanks. Lovely day, isn’t it?”
“It’s a wonderful day, Ruby…it’s a wonderful MONTH! This is the greatest month of my entire life!!!”
“My goodness, Speedy..the best month?!”
“Yeah, Ruby! Nothing can top this month!”
“Wow, Speedy, what’s happened?”
“I’m getting married!!”
“You are? Congratulations!!!”
“I am the luckiest Cat in all of Tokyo..in the whole world!”
“So…who’s the lucky girl?”
“Oh, you know!”
“Polly?”
“Polly.”
“Wow, that’s so wonderful! I’m so happy for the both of you!” She pulled out some yen. “Here ya go, Speedy. Keep the change. Small wedding gift.”
Back at the Pizza Cats’ Pizza Restaurant…
Meanwhile in the restaurant, two young women came into the pizza place and ran up to Polly. “Oh, Polly, we just heard the news!”
Polly looked up. “You did?”
“Yeah! Francine told us! Speedy proposed to you a few days ago! Congratulations!” she hugged her.
“I just want to see the ring! Come on, Pol. Show us!”
“Yeah, I wanna see it too!” Polly smiled and held it out, causing both the women to gasp. “Oh my God, that is gorgeous!!”
“You’re a lucky woman!”
Polly gazed at the gorgeous band as the diamond sparkled under the restaurant light. “I know,” she said softly.
After they had closed up, Francine came upstairs as Polly was finishing getting dressed for her date. Francine knocked on the door and entered. Polly was dressed in a casual dark pink shirt, a light purple vest, light blue shorts, white socks and sneakers. “Hey Polly, you look great. So, are you and Speedy going someplace different tonight?”
Polly spun around happily. “Speedy is taking me mountain climbing tonight!”
“You’re going mountain climbing?”
“And then we’re having a picnic dinner right on the top!”
“Wow, that’s different…mountain climbing! I would have never thought of that.”
“Speedy and I both love to climb mountains. It’s a lot of fun…and right on top you can see for miles and miles.” She took her perfume and spritzed some behind her ears…and a bit on her tail.Speedy’s bedroom…
Speedy was putting on a white jacket over his light grey shirt. He stopped to put something very special in his light blue jeans and tied his red and white sneakers. He ran a comb through his hair, and then he picked up his helmet to go mountain climbing in. He reached into his pocket. This was something very special, something that had been in his family for years…and now he would give it to the one true love of his life! He could hardly wait. To think, he had chased after the wrong girl all this time, and had not even noticed real, honest love right in front of him! But that was the past. Now, as he looked at his favorite picture of Polly, this was the beginning of the future. Smiling to himself, he went downstairs to prepare the basket.
Once they both left, Guido got on the phone to call his brother. Soon, Cosmo and Myoshi entered the restaurant. Guido went to greet them. “Hey, brother. Hi, Myoshi, how’re ya doing?”
“All right, brother,” Cosmo said.
“Hiya, Guido,” Myoshi hugged him. “So, how’s my favorite George Clooney wannabe doing today?”
Guido put his arms up. “Just fine, Myoshi, good to see you too. So, how’s Cosmo treating ya?”
“He’s treating me fine. Then again, he believes in commitment. Oh, perhaps I shouldn’t have said that. I know you’re allergic to the word!” She laughed and punched him lightly on the arm.
“Hey, hey, hey..I’m not like that anymore!” Guido said.
“Oh, I bet!” Lucille’s voice was heard from outside just then.
“Guido? Is that your brother?”
“Oh,” Cosmo said. “Well, don’t worry…Myoshi and I will just wait right here while you go say hi to number thirty-six.” Francine bit her lip to keep from laughing.
“Yeah, he is, Lucille,” Guido called out.
“Lucille now, is it?” Myoshi asked.
“Yeah, I guess he’s batted around and he’s back at the top of the order!” Cosmo cracked.
“You and him have the same Mother?” Myoshi whispered to her husband.
“What can I do? He’s my brother,” Cosmo said, just as Guido came back with Lucille. “Hey Lucy, how are ya?”
“Just great, Cosmo. Hello, Myoshi.”:
“Hi, Lucy. So, you’re dating my brother-in-law, I hear. Hope he’s being good to ya!”
“Oh, yes. He’s such a gentleman. He really is!”
“Yeah, until the next pretty girl-next-door comes on by!” Myoshi muttered to herself. Out loud, though she put on a smile. “It’s great that you guys are dating now, I hope he IS taking care of ya!”
“You bet,” Guido said, putting his arm around Lucille. “In fact..I’d like to formally announce that Guido Anchovy and Lucille Omitsu are officially going steady!” Lucille smiled and showed off her pin. Myoshi looked at it carefully…and couldn’t help but grin.
She stood up and folded her arms across her chest, holding in a giggle. “You’re going steady?! O….K….you’re going steady?! YOU…OK, so basically,” she pointed to the sky. “It’s raining up there,” she pointed to the ground. “It’s snowing down there. Big Cheese is gonna come back and become a Priest, Jerry Attrick will become a Professor, the Ninja Crows are going to law school, frogs are going to come pouring out of the sky any minute, and rocks are now something you can put on pizza!” She snickered. “Uh..Guido..you DO know that going steady means you only date one girl, right?! As in one? Uno? Only?”
“I know, and I’m aware of that, Myoshi!” He hugged Lucille before she could tear up. “And I happen to know that Lucille is the only one I want. As of this moment I’m done with all others. This girl is the one I love with all my heart and soul.”
“Wow…” Cosmo said. “Lucy, ya might wanna get that in writing..”
“OK, come on, that’s enough of that now,” Francine said. “He didn’t call you guys here just to listen to you tease him!”
“Aw, we’re just playing around!” Cosmo said.
“Yeah, Guido’s got a great sense of humor. Don’t ya, Guido?”
“Yeah, she kills me,” Guido said.
“See, Lucille, THIS is what you have to look forward to…if the time should come!” Myoshi said. Lucille blushed at that and Guido tightened his arm on her shoulders, kissing the top of her head.
“She’s only kidding..ya know, only teasing..” Lucille nodded. “Anyway, you guys wanna know the real reason you guys are here?”
“Pray tell, brother!” Cosmo said, as he and Myoshi sat down in a booth.
“You guys know Speedy and Polly, right?”
“Of course we know them! Ya mean Speedy is alright? Ya havn’t knocked his block off yet?”
Guido put his hands up. “OK, that one I deserved!”
“You actually admit that?”
“I admit a lot more. Let’s just say after a long talk with Francine, I realized that as far as friends go, I’ve been one of the worst possible.”
“No,” Cosmo and Myoshi both said.
“Yeah, and I know I’ve been absolutely terrible at a lot of points..”
“YOU?!”
“Yeah…but I want you to know I reformed. I apologized profusely to them from the bottom of my heart..”
“You did?”
“Meant every word of it, too.”
Myoshi whispered to her husband, “I’ll believe THAT when I see it!”
“But anyway, I called you guys over, cause I wanted to share some special news with ya.“
“What?”
“I wanted you guys to know this, because I’m gonna need your help. Speedy just asked Polly to marry him.”
Myoshi sat straight up. “Get out of here!”
“It’s true! I saw him do it!”
“For real?!”
“You’re looking at the Best Man and Maid-of-Honor!”
“He chose YOU as Best Man? YOU?!”
“I know, I can’t believe it myself! But in order to thank them both for forgiving me and for giving me this honor, I wanted to do something special for them. That’s why I, along with Fran and Lucille, am gonna give them their wedding.”
“Give them their wedding?!”
“Yeah! “
“Ya mean..YOU….actually give them a wedding…as in throw it and pay for it?”
“Exactly.”
Cosmo raised his eyes. “Myoshi, is it possible my brother was abducted last night and replaced by a Guido robotic look-alike?”
“Ha-ha. But seriously, will ya help provide the food for the ceremony?”
“Well, where’s the reception gonna be?”
“Here, of course!” Francine said.
“Oh, of course! Well, we’ll be glad to provide the catering for this!”
“Can ya also help us with the planning?”
“Of course!” Cosmo said.
“I’ll give ya a hand,” Myoshi said.
“How would they feel about chicken teriaki and long noodles for a start?”
“My brother is providing a sushi platter,” Lucille said. “and I’m bringing the tea.”
“How about a chocolate three-tiered wedding cake with vanilla frosting?”
“How many people are ya expecting?”
“We don’t know yet. We’ll let ya know.”
Up on the mountain, with Speedy and Polly…
“What exactly does fondue mean anyway?” Speedy asked, popping another piece of bread and cheese into Polly’s mouth.
“I’m not sure, but I think it’s French for ‘yummy’,” Polly patted her stomach. “I’m stuffed, and I still wanna keep eating.” They were sitting on cushions on the top of the mountain. A pot of fondue, a half-eaten baguette, and a bottle of wine rested between them on a blue blanket. They had taken off their helmets when they got to the top and sat them next to the basket. Polly sighed happily, looking at the lovely view of Little Tokyo that seemed to rest right at their feet. The sun was beginning to set, turning the sky above them from a light blue to bright pink. She felt like she was floating on cloud nine.
Speedy smiled at her, and took her hand tenderly. “I’ve always loved mountain climbing with ya, Kitten…but I think this is the most perfect mountain we’ve ever climbed together!” He reached over to give her a playful kiss on the nose. Polly instantly flew to clouds ten, eleven, and twelve. Speedy moved the dinner things and slid across to sit next to Polly, tenderly putting his arm around her. She leaned against him happily, and they gazed upon the view. “This view is pretty spectacular, isn’t it Kitten?”
“It sure is,” Polly said. She turned to look at Speedy. He might not be that tall, but he was athletic and well-built, and the most hansome Cat she’d ever seen. “Ya know, the view from here is pretty spectacular too,” she smiled.
Speedy looked at her, surprised. “Why, Ms. Esther, are you…coming on to me?”
Polly giggled and took a sip of her wine. “I think the wine is going to my head!”
Speedy grinned and stared at her. Her lovely profile was illuminated in the glowing pink light as the sun made it’s way down over the hills, causing her blue eyes to sparkle and her hair to turn an even brighter shade of red. He kissed her cheek and reached over to turn the radio on. A soft romantic song was playing. “Kitten?”
“Hmm?” she turned toward him. Speedy reached into his pocket.
“I have something for you..” he handed her the long, thin, black velvet box.
“For me, Speedy?”
“Open it.” Polly did so, and she gasped when she saw what was in it. A beautiful gold necklace with a diamond crane that sparkled in the glow.
“Speedy…this is gorgeous!”
“It was my Mom’s.”
“Oh yeah….I remember her always wearing this! I used to think it was the prettiest thing I’d ever seen!”
Speedy’s eyes temporarily filled with tears as he remembered the warm, loving face of his mother, and how the necklace looked on her. “It was my Mom’s favorite thing she’d ever owned. Polly…I want you to have it!”
Polly turned toward him. “Oh, Speedy!”
“I think Mom would want you to have it, Polly. She loved you, and I think she’d want you to wear it. I think she’d be proud to see you with it on our wedding.”
Polly’s heart melted. “Speedy…thank you.” Speedy put it on her, and the crane rested against her throat. “It’s so beautiful!” she kissed him deeply.
Speedy stood up. “Shall we dance?”
“Right here?” Polly laughed as Speedy swept her into his arms and lead her in small circles around the area to the romantic love song.
‘When I fall in love it will be forever
Or I’ll never fall in love
In a restless world like this is
Love is ended before its begun
And too many moonlight kisses
Seem to cool in the warmth of the sun
When I give my heart it will be completely
Or I’ll never give my heart
And the moment I can feel that you feel that way too
Is when I fall in love with you.
And the moment I can feel that you feel that way too
Is when I fall in love with you.’
“Okay, I’m gonna attempt a dangerous move,” Speedy warned. “Make sure your seatbelt is completely fastened." He let go of her waist and spun her out along his arm. He whirled her back in, her back fitting snugly against his chest.
“Not bad, Speedy…Not bad at all!” Polly smiled. He took her in his arms again, and gave her a deep kiss.
“So..when do ya wanna have the wedding, Kitten?”
“As soon as possible, Pussycat.” Polly thought. “Well, June is just around the corner…but everyone’s a June bride! Hmm…how about July!”
Speedy’s eyes had a faraway look to them. “How about July 14th?”
“Your Mom’s birthday!” Polly smiled softly. “Speedy…it’s perfect. I think that's a wonderful way we can honor her! I love you.”
“I love you, too,” and he pulled her into another kiss.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: BurkeWorld on February 03, 2008, 09:00:34 pm
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Razgriz27 told me you apologized to him for critisizing our story...are you gonna turn right around and critisize it again?
Actually, I didn't apologize for critizing your story, as I said I wouldn't ever take back what I said, because WHAT I said was very validated and true.
Uh...no, cause vvhat you said vvas your opinion, and opinions are not facts and are not 100% true.
FYI- several people have already said they liked this story! Are you gonna say something to them, too?
And if you dont like it, don't read any more of it!
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Uh...no, cause vvhat you said vvas your opinion, and opinions are not facts and are not 100% true.
FYI- several people have already said they liked this story! Are you gonna say something to them, too?
And if you dont like it, don't read any more of it!
1) Perhaps not 100% true, more like 98% true, how about that.
2) Good for those people, they are entitled to their opinion same as I am. Why would I waste time talking with other people about this? Please.
3) I stopped reading your stories after the 2nd part was posted, so I have taken this statement to heart. My eyes can relax.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Say what you will, this story is still going up here, regardless of whether it gets positive or negative responses.
Here's the next part:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Songs for this chapter:
Speedy’s song to Polly: ‘Longer’-Dan Fogelberg
Polly’s Song to Speedy: ‘Into The Quiet Night’-Rie Tanaka
Chapter Twelve: A Truly Magical Night
Speedy woke up the next morning, as the sun graced the skies of Little Tokyo with its warmth. Last night, his mountain-climbing date with Polly had been absolutely spectacular, and now that they’d finally decided upon a date to unite their hearts, along with their souls, in eternal love, he knew that nothing could possibly make him happier. Checking his calendar, he saw that there were only two months left until the big day, and he then remembered his mother’s old wedding ring. She had told him once, that when he finally found the one special woman that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with, that she wanted him to have her ring. His mother had cherished it, and Speedy knew that it would be just perfect for Polly. He’d stop by his Aunt and Uncle’s house after breakfast, not only to pick up the ring, but also, to give them the news of their wedding date. He called up his aunt and uncle, and said, "Good morning, Uncle Irving." Speedy's uncle replied, "Hey nephew. What's the big occasion...you sound like you've got some important news for us." Speedy said, "I sure do, Uncle Irving. Polly and I, we've finally decided on our wedding date. It's gonna be July 14th, to honor my mom's memory. I'm gonna swing by after breakfast, so I can pick up my mom's old wedding ring. I think it'll be perfect for Polly, since my mom wanted me to give it to my future wife." Uncle Irving replied, "Speedy...you truly are an honor to the family. Lydia and I will be waiting for you." Smiling and humming a joyful song to himself, he went into the shower, cleaned up, donned a fresh set of clothes, and then he combed his hair, made his bed, and finally headed downstairs.
Polly was up as well, and she couldn’t wait until the next two months went by, because she’d finally be married to her one and only true love, Speedy Cerviche. He was always there for her, he’d been her best friend since third grade, and in two months, he would be her husband…which was enough to make Polly’s heart skip a beat. Ever since she had been just a little kitten, after she’d met Speedy, her parents had considered him to be like a son to them, especially after the deaths of his parents. His aunt and uncle were the only family he had left in the world, but soon, that would all change. She intended to stop at her parents’ home today, since Francine had decided to let them all have a day off, to tell them the happy news. She jumped into the shower, put some shampoo into her hair, lathered it up, and then rinsed it out, before washing herself off with her favorite soap. Once she was nice and clean, she dried herself off, grabbed her favorite casual outfit, and then headed downstairs.
Once Polly made her way into the kitchen, she smelled bacon and sausages cooking, along with eggs. Speedy was also whipping up her favorite kind of pancakes, apple cinnamon. She sat down, and he carried her breakfast over to her, and then he set his own food down, before dashing over to the refrigerator and grabbing some orange juice. He poured a glass for Polly, and then for himself, put the juice away, and then he sat down next to her. “Good Morning, Kitten.”, Speedy said, leaning over and kissing her on the nose. She blushed, and replied, “Good Morning to you too, Pussycat.” Speedy said, “I was just thinking of heading over to see my Aunt Lydia and Uncle Irving after breakfast, so that I could give them the news of our wedding date. How’s that sound?” Polly replied, “Speedy…I was planning on going to see my parents and my sister, but since we’re both going out, why don’t we go together. That way, we can spend some time together, not just tonight, but for the whole day!” Speedy replied, “Oh wow…that’s a great idea, Kitten! I’m such a lucky cat, to be engaged to marry a wonderful girl like you…I love you, Polly…and I always will.” Polly pulled Speedy closer to her, and said, “I love you too, Speedy…forever.” They both finished eating, and had just finished cleaning up the dishes, when Guido came down, followed by Francine. Guido said, “Hey there, Speedy…and Polly. How’s everything this morning?” Speedy replied, “Just great, Guido. Polly and I have decided on a date for our wedding.” Guido smiled, and Francine replied, “Oh…when do you two plan to tie the knot?” Speedy replied, “On July 14th, at 8:30pm. We chose that date, because it was my mother’s birthday, and I figured that it’d be the perfect way to remember her, since she was always so kind and thoughtful…not to mention the fact that Polly was like a daughter to her.” Guido replied, “Wow…that really is a nice way to remember her, buddy. I’m sure that when the big night comes, she’ll look down from heaven, and smile down at you.” Speedy hugged Guido in a brotherly way, and Polly did likewise, before they both headed out.
Once the two of them had left, Guido said, “Now then…what can I do for them, to surprise them, to show them that I really am grateful for their friendship?” Lucille came in just then, along with Good Bird and Carla. Guido hugged Lucille, and then he shook hands with Good Bird, before they all sat down. Lucille said, “Guido, where are Speedy and Polly? I wanted to talk to Polly about a few things.” Guido replied, “They just left, Lucille. They wanted to go and let their families know about their planned wedding date, which is July 14th.” Good Bird said, “July 14th? Why not sooner?” Guido replied, “Well…Speedy told me that it was his mom’s birthday, so he wants to honor her memory by marrying Polly on that date, since his mother considered Polly to be a member of the family, right from the day that she and Speedy became friends. Carla teared up at that, and she said, “Oh Birdie…this is so wonderful…Polly’s such a lucky girl to have someone like Speedy.” Good Bird replied, “She certainly is, Carla…just like I am to have found you.” They hugged each other, until Francine said, “Uh, Guido…unless you want this place to have a sunroof, I think you should get Lucille outside…FAST!!!” Guido saw that Lucille was about to launch her missiles, and he quickly moved her to a safe distance. Just after they got clear of the nearby buildings, Lucille’s missiles went off, and Guido rubbed her shoulders to calm her down, before they both headed back. Once Guido returned with Lucille, he said, “Now, I need to think…how can I make their night even more special?” Francine replied, “Hey Guido…I’ve got an idea, how about if you give them their wedding, and as an added surprise, you can do it two hours early. A 6:30 wedding, the reception at 8:30, and then they can leave for their honeymoon around 10:30. I’ll even give you all that day off, so you can prepare everything for the ceremony.” Guido replied, “Francine…that’s a great idea! You really are a great friend, Francine…honestly…you helped me see the error of my ways, and now, you’ve given me a plan of action for making Speedy and Polly’s wedding an occasion that they’ll never forget.” Guido hugged Francine, and then he and Lucille went to go and inform their other friends, while Francine got on the phone with the Rescue Team, so that they’d all be ready for the big night as well.
Cerviche household…
Speedy and Polly arrived at the home of his Aunt Lydia and Uncle Irving just after 9:45am, and Polly asked, “Speedy, is there something else that you wanted to bring me here for?” Speedy replied, “Actually Polly…there is. Before my mother died, she told me that she wanted me to give her wedding ring to the lucky lady that eventually captured my heart, and that happens to be you, Kitten. She always told me that she hoped you and I would end up together one day, and I’m glad that she was right, because I couldn’t possibly be this happy with anyone other than you, Polly. You are my one and only true soulmate, and I promise that I’ll never leave your side.” Polly’s eyes teared up, and she said, “Oh Speedy…your mother was such a wonderful lady…I’m really glad that I’ll have the honor of wearing her ring…since she was the one that brought you into this world, and soon, I’ll be spending the rest of my life at your side…just like she hoped for.” Polly looked up to the sky, and said to the spirits of Speedy’s mother and father, ‘Mr and Mrs. Cerviche…I promise you both, that I will always love your son, and that he won’t ever have to worry about having his heart broken. I could never love anyone other than him…and thank you both…for helping him grow up to be the wonderful, caring cat that I love. God bless you both.’ Speedy knocked on the door, and his aunt opened up. She said, “Speedy…come inside, dear…and hello to you as well, Polly.” Polly hugged Aunt Lydia, and Uncle Irving came into the kitchen just then. He smiled, as he spotted his nephew, along with the pretty redhaired cat that would soon be the newest member of their family. He said, “Hello Speedy, and I see you’ve brought Polly with you. This truly is a special occasion, so why don’t we sit down and talk over some tea.” While Lydia went to brew up some of her homemade tea, Speedy and Polly following Uncle Irving into the dining room, and Uncle Irving said, “So, what can we do for you today, nephew?” Speedy replied, “Uncle Irving, I was wondering…does Aunt Lydia still have my mom’s wedding ring up in your room?” Aunt Lydia overheard this, as she came in with the tray full of tea and cups. She sat down, and replied, “Of course I do, Speedy. It was your mother’s last wish, that I hold on to it for you, until you found your future wife. Now that you and Polly are about to marry, I think it’s time that we let her try it on for size.” Polly finished her tea, as did Speedy, and once the two older members of the Cerviche family had finished theirs, they all headed up into the main bedroom. Aunt Lydia took the key to the cedar chest off the wall, and popped open the old, yet still perfectly-polished chest that sat at the foot of her bed. She pulled the small, blue velvet box out, the one that held her late sister-in-law’s wedding ring. Polly carefully accepted the box from her, and opened it, revealing the ring inside. She gasped at the sheer beauty of this most cherished treasure. It was a lovely white-gold ring, with a lovely flower pattern designed into the band, and a small, but perfectly cut blue diamond in the center. The inside of the band had the engraving, ‘For my one true love’, which made Polly’s heart melt, and her eyes fill with tears of joy. She said, “Oh my…Speedy, it’s beautiful!” He gently pulled the ring out, and took her hand into his. He said, “A beautiful ring, for the world’s most beautiful kitten.” She held out her left ring finger, and he gently slid the ring on. It fit her perfectly, as if the spirit of Speedy’s mother was saying, ‘Welcome to the family, sweetheart. Even though I can’t be here to see it, the fact that my ring fits you, is proof of what I knew from the day you met my son…you were always destined to be his soulmate, and I want you and him to know…I’ll always be watching out for you from above. Take care of him, Polly…as I know that he’ll always take care of you.’ Speedy looked into her eyes, and said, “Polly…I swear that…I could almost hear my mother talking just now…like she was right here.” Polly replied, “She is here, Speedy…in your heart”, she pointed gently to his chest, and then she said, “She’s also in my heart, Speedy…along with your aunt and uncle. She was right, Speedy…we really were destined to be together…oh my…I’ve never been so happy, Speedy…I love you so much!” Speedy hugged her, and replied, “I love you too, my sweet kitten.” Aunt Lydia cleared her throat, which startled them out of their embrace. She asked, “So, when do you two plan to officially unite your hearts and souls?” Speedy replied, “On July 14th, Aunt Lydia.” Uncle Irving replied, “That’s…your mother’s birthday! Speedy…that’s a wonderful way to thank her for all that she’s done for you, and to honor her memory…she’d be so proud of you…and I know that I am.” Aunt Lydia added, “So am I dear…I’m proud to have such a wonderful, caring nephew…and to officially welcome Polly to our little family.” They all embraced one another for a short time, and then Speedy carefully removed his mother’s ring, which, in two months, would forever belong to the lovely woman at his side. They waved goodbye to Uncle Irving and Aunt Lydia, before setting off for the Esther Household.
Prisoners’ Island…
Cheese and Jerry made their way out to where the Ninja Crows were working to put the finishing touches on their robot. It was nearly complete now, with only the leg-mounted hover engines, and the back-mounted booster pods left to install. The blue-armored ‘mech was truly a sight to behold…weapons visible just about everywhere, sleek, polished cobalt blue armor, with gold highlights, and in the head, a single, red monoeye, which served as the machine’s main camera. Cheese smiled, and said, “Nicely done, my Ninja Crows. I love this new weapon…in fact, you’ve done such a nice job, I’m gonna let you have a lunch break now.” The Ninja Crows shouted, “YAY…LUNCH BREAK!!!” They all grabbed their lunches, and began chowing down. Cheese sat with Jerry under an umbrella, and they both starting stuffing their faces with sushi. Cheese said, “I don’t know how ya did it Jerry…but ya finally got the Ninja Crows whipped into shape. How’d you persuade them to get their act straight?” Jerry replied, “Easy…I told them if they messed up again, I’d make them listen to Britney Spears music until they got it right.” Cheese replied, “I’m proud of you, Jerry…you’re almost as rotten as me.” The Ninja Crows came over, and said, “Hey boss…we were wondering…how would ya like to pose for a picture in front of our new robot? That way, we can stick it in our photo album, to look back on it after we take over Little Tokyo.” Cheese replied, “I like that idea…remind me to give you an extra ration of birdseed after we take out the Pizza Cats.” The Ninja Crows all cheered, and then they went to get the camera. While they set it up, Cheese and Jerry posed in front of the robot. The Ninja Crow holding the camera said, “Ready…say ‘Emperor Seymour!’” “EMPEROR SEYMOUR!”, came the response from both Cheese and Jerry, and then the Ninja Crow pushed the flash button, only to realize that he’d REALLY goofed up. He said, “Uh-oh…” Cheese said, “What do you mean uh-oh? What did you do this time?” The Ninja Crow replied, “Uhm…I uh…kinda forgot to put film in the camera…sorry…” Cheese screamed, “YOU IDIOTIC TWO-LEGGED FEATHERDUSTER!!! CAN YOU DO ANYTHING RIGHT, BESIDES MAKING ME ANGRY?!!!” Jerry replied, “Cheesy…calm down. After all, we’re almost done with the robot, so we can just take another picture when it’s finished.” Cheese calmed down, and replied, “You’re right…thanks Jerry…I don’t know what I’d do without you.” Jerry muttered, “As dumb as you are, you’d probably forget your head if it wasn’t attached to your neck…oops…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY…I HEARD THAT!!! WHAT KIND OF AN IDIOT DO YOU THINK I AM?!!” Jerry replied, “I don’t know…what kinds are there…uh-oh…I’m a dead bird…” Cheese shouted, “JERRY ATRICK…YOU’RE NOT GONNA LIVE TO SEE ANY MORE GREY FEATHERS…AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and then calm once again settled over Prisoners’ Island.
Little Tokyo, Esther Household…
Speedy and Polly had just arrived at Polly’s home, and they met Polly’s younger sister, Sayaka, as she came in from practicing her martial-arts forms outside. Sayaka turned, and said, “Oh wow…Polly! Welcome home, sis” She hugged her sister, and then she noticed that her beloved older sibling wasn’t alone. She said, “Hey Speedy. How are ya?” Speedy replied, “Just fine, Sayaka. Are your mom and dad home?” Sayaka replied, “Yeah, they are. I’ll go in and get them.” Sayaka headed back inside, and came back out within minutes, followed by her parents. Tane said, “Hello Polly. How’s Speedy treating you, dear?” Polly hugged her mother, and replied, “Like a dream, mom. We just came from his Aunt and Uncle’s house, and I tried on his mother’s wedding ring…it fit me perfectly, as if his mother’s spirit was blessing me, and saying that I was meant to be with him, which I know that I am…in fact, ever since we met…I’ve been dreaming of this day ever since I was just a little kitten.” Polly’s father replied, “Well then…I can see that he truly does love you, dear…that’s a lovely engagement ring that he bought for you.” Polly hugged her father, and replied, “It is…honestly, Speedy’s the only cat that I could ever love…and nobody else will ever take his place in my heart.” Polly’s mother, Tane, asked, “So dear…when will you and Speedy be getting married?” Polly replied, “On July 14th, mom. It was the birthday of Speedy’s mother, and he wanted to celebrate her memory by getting married to me on that very day, since Mrs. Cerviche and her husband always thought of me as the daughter that they never had.” Sayaka replied, “Oh sis…I’m so happy for you! I just know that you and Speedy will never part…I mean…even when you were younger, I could tell by the way you’d look at him, that you were destined to be together one day. Speedy, take care of her. She’s a wonderful cat, and deserves nothing but the best.” Speedy looked over at his fiancée’s sister, and replied, “Don’t worry, Sayaka…I love your sister more than words could ever express…in fact, I’ll prove that right now, with this song, called ‘Longer’, by Dan Fogelberg.” Speedy had been rehearsing the song for this moment, and he started to let his love for Polly flow out through the song’s lyrics.
‘Longer than there’ve been fishes in the ocean
Higher than any bird ever flew
Longer than there’ve been stars up in the heavens
I’ve been in love with you.
Stronger than any mountain cathedral
Truer than any tree ever grew
Deeper than any forest primeval
I am in love with you.
I’ll bring fires in the winters
You’ll send showers in the springs
We’ll fly through the falls and summers
With love on our wings.
Through the years, as the fire starts to mellow
Burning lines in the book of our lives
Though the binding cracks, and the pages start to yellow
I’ll be in love with you.
Longer than there’ve been fishes in the ocean
Higher than any bird ever flew
Longer than there’ve been stars up in the heavens
Ive been in love with you
I am in love with you..’
Polly had tears in her eyes when Speedy finished, and she hugged him, while her parents and sister applauded. She said, “Speedy, that was so beautiful! I’ve got one for you too. It’s called ‘Into The Quiet Night’, by Rie Tanaka.” Polly cleared her throat, and started singing for her one true love.
‘In this quiet night, I'm waiting for you
During that time, your smile has faded away
Now that a little time has passed,
Fond memories start to resurface.
At the place where stars fall,
I'm always wishing for your laughter.
Even though we're apart now
We can meet again, right?
From when has my smile faded this much
Since it was shattered by one mistake
Change only the precious things into light and
Go beyond the sky with fortitude
we are in the quiet night
dreaming in the night
To the place where stars fall,
I want my thoughts to reach you.
I am always by your side
We are in the quiet night
Dreaming in the night
At the place where stars fall,
I'm always wishing for your laughter.
Even though we're apart now
We can meet again, right?
we are in the quiet night
dreaming in the night
To the place where stars fall,
I want my thoughts to reach you.
I am always by your side
We are in the quiet night
Dreaming in the night’
Speedy pulled Polly close, and kissed her, while her family once again applauded. Polly’s father walked up, and said, “Speedy, thank you again, for all you’ve done for my daughter. You’ve been a wonderful friend to her, and now, you’ll be giving her the best thing she could ever receive, love in its purest form. Welcome to the family, Speedy.” Speedy gratefully took his future father-in-law’s hand in his, and replied, “Thank you, Mr Esther…I promise that I’ll never leave Polly’s side, and that I’ll love her until the end of time.” They all shared a warm hug, and then wished each other well, before Speedy and Polly left, so that they could take a walk, before they went out to dinner.
Rikugien Park…
Once Speedy and Polly arrived at the park, Speedy found a nice spot by the lake, and unfolded the picnic blanket. Polly set down the basket of food that her mother had made for them, and she and Speedy spent the next few hours enjoying the beauty of nature, and the joy of being together. Once they’d finished taking a bus tour of the city’s historical sights, capping it off with a kiss on the observation deck at the top of Tokyo Tower, Speedy said, “Hey Polly…it’s time to head to the restaurant.” Polly smiled, and slipped her hand into Speedy’s. She said, “Let’s go, Pussycat.” Speedy kissed her cheek, and said, “Here we go, Kitten.” Together, the two happy felines made their way to the restaurant.
Tokyo Star Restaurant…
Speedy walked into the lobby of the city’s best casual dining establishment, the Tokyo Star. They were quickly led to their window-view table for two, and handed a menu. Polly said, “Speedy…I never thought I’d find myself here…having dinner with such a wonderful cat. I’m so happy when I’m with you, even if you’re not a movie star, you truly are a star in my eyes…and in my heart.” Speedy smiled, and replied, “Polly, thank you…I don’t think I’ve ever been happier than I am right now…tonight truly has been a night of magic…and I know that every night will have it’s own magic, after we’re married.” Their waiter came by, and Polly ordered a plate of Jiaozi, with some Nikuman buns on the side. Speedy ordered the same, and then they both ordered Pepsi to drink. After they finished their dinner, they ordered a dessert of peanut-butter fudge ice cream, and Speedy paid for it himself, being the gentleman that he was. He then helped Polly up, kissed her, and then they both headed back to the Pizza Emporium, so that they could turn in for the night.
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When history witnesses a great change, Razgriz reveals itself. First, as a dark demon. As a demon, it uses it's power to rain death upon the land, and then it dies. However, after a period of slumber, Razgriz returns....this time, as a great hero.-Ace Combat 5: The Unsung War.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: BurkeWorld on February 04, 2008, 07:35:44 pm
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Uh...no, cause vvhat you said vvas your opinion, and opinions are not facts and are not 100% true.
FYI- several people have already said they liked this story! Are you gonna say something to them, too?
And if you dont like it, don't read any more of it!
1) Perhaps not 100% true, more like 98% true, how about that.
2) Good for those people, they are entitled to their opinion same as I am. Why would I waste time talking with other people about this? Please.
3) I stopped reading your stories after the 2nd part was posted, so I have taken this statement to heart. My eyes can relax.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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That, or offer CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not pure insults. Let's just let the issue drop, before it gets ugly.
Here's chapter 13:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Chapter Thirteen: Two Families United By Love
A few weeks later, Lydia was finishing getting ready in her room. She and Irving were going to go over to the Esther family home for a special family dinner to celebrate the impending union of both of their families. Lydia smiled, as she reached into her closet and pulled out a large white box, which was tied with black string. She sat down on the armchair, laying the box on her lap. This box was something that Speedy’s mother, Kagome, had left to her, to keep with her until Speedy had gotten engaged. Running her hand along the box, she recalled her sweet, warm sister-in-law.
Flashback to Speedy and Polly’s childhood…
Lydia and Kagome were sitting at her table, having some tea and waiting for 8 year old Speedy to come back from Samurai Training. “I tell ya, Lydia, that son of mine has so much potential…he’s gonna be great!! Takes after his father through and through..”
“Doesn’t surprise me, he looks exactly like Jon, I could tell that from the moment he was born.”
“Yeah,” Kagome said, looking down.
“Wasn’t he the cutest kitten? So rambunctious and active even as a baby!” Lydia giggled. “I really wish Irving and I could have children ourselves…but it’s not possible.”
“So you’ll just have to settle for indulging mine,” Kagome teased. Both women giggled, as Lydia threw a napkin at her sister-in-law.
“I hope you’ll have some more.”
“I might not be able to myself. The doctor…the last time he saw me…he said that there was something he didn’t like…and I might not be able to have any more kids.”
“Oh, Kagome, I’m so sorry to hear that. I know how much you wanted to give Speedy a little sister.”
“Yeah..I hope that whatever he finds isn’t too serious. I want to live long enough to see my son graduate from the Samurai Academy…and I also want to see him marry a decent girl.”
“Hey, Kagome? He’s only 8. Let’s not rush it, huh?”
“I know…I just want him to have the best, and I wanna live long enough to see he does.”
“Yeah, this wouldn’t have anything to do with your best friend, Tane Esther, and her own little girl, would it?”
Kagome looked down. “Now why would you say that?”
“Come on, Kagome. I suppose it’s a coincidence that this woman who moved in and became YOUR best friend just happens to have a daughter Speedy’s age who happens to be HIS best friend, and now you’re talking about how you wish he’ll marry a nice girl…”
“Polly’s a good girl..”
“I know she is…and you indulge her like crazy like she was already your own little girl.”
“She may be the only thing I have left for a daughter of my own. And yes, I do hope that when they grow up, they do get married! I’d want to see that before I die.”
“The 1600’s have come and gone, and she’s still talking about arranged marriages!” Lydia laughed.
“I am not talking arranged marriage. I just hope that happens, but I won’t pressure him. The way I didn’t pressure him to be a Samurai. He decided that on his own. All I’ll do is offer him encouragement. So,” she changed the subject. “How’s Irving?” But before Lydia could answer, the door swung open, and 2 tiny pairs of feet scampered on the floor. Two tiny little kittens, a black-haired little boy, and a redhead with her hair in pigtails, both came into the kitchen. Kagome stood up. “Speedy, it’s after three, and is that the way we walk into a house?”
“Hi, Mom,” Speedy said.
“That won’t do, I’ll have a kiss from my boy!” She crouched down as Speedy walked into her outstretched arms for a hug and kiss. “The Lady over there is your aunt, young man!” she said as Speedy turned to go. Speedy went over and hugged Lydia too. “Hi, Polly, sweetheart,” she said, going over and hugging her tightly.
“Hi, Mrs. Cerviche,” Polly said.
“So, how was Samurai Training you two?”
“It was great! Aunt Lydia, wanna see what we learned today?”
“Indeed I do!” she smiled heartedly, as both Speedy and Polly moved to the center of the kitchen, took out their practice swords, and simultaneously began to perform a very slow and complicated routine. When they were done both Kagome and Lydia applauded wildly.
“Good job, Honey!” Kagome said, hugging Speedy. “I’m so proud of you!” She hugged Polly as well. ”And you too! Now, are you gonna start your homework together?”
“Yeah, Mom.”
“OK, I’ll bring you both a snack. Polly, Sweetheart, would you like to stay for dinner?”
“Yes, please!”
‘OK, you can call your Mom right here, Love.” she took Polly’s arm and lead her to the phone. She came back to Lydia. “She’s a good girl. I really hope she and my son do get married someday..”
Lydia lifted her glass. “To the future, no matter what it holds!”
“I’ll drink to that!” Both women clinked their glasses.
End Flashback…
Lydia looked up to Heaven “Well, Kagome, you lived long enough to see one half of your dream..but you were so right about the other part. I swear, you must be psychic. You got what you wanted, Dear. He’s marrying the one you wanted him to! I know you and Jon are both smiling up there!”
“Lydia! Come on, it’s time to go.”, Irving called from downstairs.
Lydia smiled and got to her feet. “I’m coming!” she took the box and left the room.
Esther Household…
Speedy struck a match to light the candles upon the table, and stood back to admire his work. Ever since the Comet incident, he had come to appreciate his surroundings more. He looked around at some of his favorite people in the world, most of whom were engaged in last minute tasks of putting the meal on the table. He had eaten at Polly’s house plenty of times, and Mr. and Mrs. Esther had always treated him like a son. But this time it was different, because he was different.
The Esther sisters came in from the other room then, and Speedy was unable to take his eyes off the lovely eldest one. Her beautiful blue eyes sparkled in the light of the candles and her hair was an even deeper red. She reached across the table for a serving spoon just out of her reach. Speedy picked it up and handed it to her. Their fingers touched for a moment, and their eyes met. Polly smiled. “She’s so beautiful!” Speedy thought, wondering again why it had taken him so long to see it. He pulled the chair out for Polly and gave her a small kiss.
As soon as everyone had been seated, Uncle Irving stood up then and tapped his wine glass. “I’d like to make a toast,” he said. He paused while everyone raised his or her glasses. “First off, I just want to thank Tane and Akira, for throwing this wonderful dinner. Tane, I know you were my sister-in-law’s- and Speedy’s mother- Kagome’s best friend…and I know both her and Jon are watching all of us here right now. I know that Kagome loved Polly like she was her own child, and to both her and Jon, this is a true dream come true! To have our families- Esther and Cerviche- united as one, is the most wonderful gift any of us could ask for. I can honestly say- and I’m NOT just saying this because he’s my brother’s son-that Speedy is an honest, caring nurturing, and brave Cat who never puts himself first and always thinks of others. Polly, you’re getting a wonderful, loving, and trusting husband, who will never let you down and will never leave you, my brother lived long enough to see that! Polly, Dear, it’s my honor to say this- welcome to the family! We love you!”
When everyone had taken a sip of their wine, Akira stood up. “Well, I’d like to make a toast too. To families,” he tilted his glass toward Speedy and Polly. “God bless us, and our two families, who will be united as one in just two months. This is an absolute honor, for as long as we’ve known Speedy, we’ve known him to be a kind, polite, and caring Cat, and we can guarantee that Polly…in spite of her she-knows-what-” (Polly blushed) “is a lovely, honest, caring, hard working young woman with a heart of gold, and she will be the most wonderful wife to you. Take care of each other and be good to each other always. We
love you both. Speedy, welcome to our family, and congratulations!”
A little while later, everyone had gathered in the living room. “OK, Lydia,” Tane said. “Now, I think it’s time you let us know what’s in that big box you brought in here?” Lydia smiled, and hoisted it up on the coffee table.
“Well, it’s something special…and it’s for the newest member of our family. Polly, Honey, I’d like it if you joined me up here.” Polly glanced at Speedy curiously, then jumped up and joined her. Lydia cut open the string. “This is something very special, it’s been in our family for years!” She took out a rainbow colored cloth, and unfolded it to show a gorgeous multi-colored quilt. “This quilt is very special. It’s been in our family for years. It was started by the Cerviche’s great-great-great-great grandmother, Noni Lynn. She wanted a record kept of the family, something she could share that was filled with memories and would be passed down from generation to generation. Every female member of the Cerviche family gets to add her own special row to the quilt. The row of patches she picks are special cause it says something of her and her family.”
Irving touched a row. “This was our grandmother’s row. This patch was a Christmas dress she made herself. This one was Speedy’s father’s baptismal gown.” There was a gasp, and Tane held her hand over her mouth. Speedy moved to look closely at the next to last row.
“This is Mom’s row, isn’t it?” he asked, fingering it.
“That’s right. This was a piece of Kagome’s wedding dress…and this one was the tuxedo Jon wore when you graduated from Samurai School, Speedy. Speedy nodded, choked up. Lydia fingered the last row. “This row is mine. This shirt I wore on my first date with Irving. This patch was made from the kimono I wore on our first Christmas as a married couple.” she brushed tears away and stood up. “And now, Polly, as the newest member of the Cerviche’s, it’s my honor to pass the quilt down to you. You can now add your own patches to the quilt.
Polly was too overcome to speak. She held it close to her. “T…thank you..” she said. “What should I add to it?”
“Anything you want. I can come over tomorrow and help you. The secret is to pick the patches from materials that mean something to you and are of a special significance in your life. It’s an honor…now that you’re gonna be a Cerviche… to add your legacy to our family record.”
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: Razgriz27 on February 04, 2008, 08:10:47 pm
Say what you will, this story is still going up here, regardless of whether it gets positive or negative responses.
Burke isn't trying to stop you from writings these stories. Nobody has the right to tell you how to celebrate your SPC fandom. If writing sub-par romance fanfics makes you happy, then so be it.
But if you want a professional opinion on what you are writing, you have to accept all criticism; good or bad.
If you don't want to hear anything negative, then take your time to write something decent.
Or don't seek any criticism at all. Stay inside your bubble, and you'll stay happy. The only downside is; if you do write something exceptionally good that all SPC fans will enjoy, you won't have any professional opinion to back it up.
And for you, Burke. Don't waste your time with this. Let them stay in their bubble. They obviously don't see any value in your opinion. Let them deny themselves of your service.
I'd argue that consequently, they would suffer from this. If all they get is constant praise with nobody saying otherwise, the quality of their writing will continue to degrade.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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February 04, 2008, 10:17:42 pm »
I don't think it's sub-par, and neither do alot of other people...just check Fanfiction.net. This story has gotten positive reviews all around on there, so other people DO appreciate our work. With that said, here's the next chapter:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Chapter Fourteen: Polly Makes Her Mark of Love
One week later, Speedy got up at 8:00am sharp, since he would be going out with Good Bird, Carla, and Wally, so that they could get their wedding attire. The other girls would be heading out in a couple days, to pick up their own dresses. As he combed his hair into place, he thought about how lucky he was, to have met such a sweet, beautiful girl like Polly. She was not only a very lovely girl, but she was also strong, brave, loyal, and she had never turned her back on someone in need…which was why Speedy had fallen in love with her. True, she had a vicious temper, but she was also sweet, charming, kind, and generous. Anyone that called her a hotheaded bully, Speedy would make sure that they got a five-fingered dental treatment, or a Ginzu Sword haircut. He put on a fresh shirt, a pair of blue jeans, sneakers, and then he headed downstairs for breakfast.
Polly had just come out of the shower, and sat down in front of her dresser. Looking into the mirror, she picked up her brush, and started to run it through her fiery red hair. She reflected on everything that had happened to her over the past year, and how she had almost lost the only cat she’d ever loved, when the comet had threatened the city. She would never take life for granted again, and she would certainly be eternally thankful to God, for allowing her and Speedy to finally be together. Ever since he had rescued her from the bullies all those years ago, the two of them had been inseperable. He had been her date to the High School Prom, he’d sponsored her entry into Samurai Academy, and now, he’d given her the most precious gift of all, his love. She would forever give him every ounce of her love, and she knew in her heart, that they would always be together. Once she’d finished getting her hair brushed, she put on a little bit of her favorite perfume, and then she put on the lovely sundress that Speedy loved so much. She would stop off at her home after breakfast, to pick up the dress that she’d worn on the day she’d met Speedy, along with her high school prom dress. She’d also get a piece from one of her old Pizza uniforms, and a piece of the dress that she’d worn, on the night that Speedy had confessed his love for her. Once she had those, she would head over to see Speedy’s Aunt Lydia, who had agreed to help her sew the patches onto the Cerviche family quilt, which would be passed on to her, after she married Speedy. Once she was ready, she grabbed her flute, and headed downstairs.
Speedy and Guido entered the kitchen at the exact same time, and Speedy said, “Morning, Guido. How’s Lucille?” Guido replied, “She’s doing great, Speedy. How’s Polly and her family?” Speedy smiled, and said, “Polly’s just fine, buddy. Her younger sister, Sayaka, she’s just started taking martial arts classes, so chances are…she’s gonna follow in Polly’s footsteps.” Guido replied, “Yeah…from what you and Polly both say, Sayaka really does idolize her sister…which I’m not surprised, seeing as Polly really is a great girl. You picked a real winner, Speedy.” Smiling, Speedy clapped his friend on the shoulder, and Polly then came down the stairs, a smile on her beautiful face, as she set her eyes on her one true love. Polly snuggled up against Speedy, and said, “How’s my Pussycat this morning…did you have a good sleep?” Speedy hugged her, and replied, “I sure did, Kitten. So…what’s on the agenda for today?” Polly replied, “Well…I’m gonna go pick up the stuff I need for the patches that I’ll be putting on your family quilt, and then I’m going to see your Aunt Lydia, so that she can help me sew the patches into place. How about you, Speedy?” He replied, “I’m gonna head out with Good Bird, Carla, and Wally, so we can pick up our wedding attire.” Polly looked over at Guido, and asked, “Any reason you’re not going, Guido?” He replied, “Yeah, actually. I’m gonna take Lucille out to the park for a bit, and then I’ll be meeting my brother and sister-in-law back here, to discuss a few things.” Polly replied, “I see. There’s still plenty of time for the rest of us to get our stuff, so it’ll all work out.” Francine brought over the trays carrying the sausage, egg, and cheese breakfast calzones, along with a tall glass of orange juice for everyone. As she set them down, Good Bird and Carla came in, followed shortly afterwards by Lucille, and her brother Wally. Guido hugged Lucille, and he then said good morning to Wally. After they’d all greeted one another, they sat down for breakfast, cleaned up, and headed out along their separate ways.
Polly stopped off at her house first, to pick up her old school dress, and her prom dress. As she and her mother looked through the various boxes of clothes, which were all filled with insulated bags, to keep the clothes in good condition, Polly said, “I can’t believe it, Mom…it seems like only yesterday, that Speedy and I were running around playing hide-and-seek in the backyard, tag on the school playground, and using practice swords in Samurai Training. Now, I’m only a couple months away from becoming his wife…I’ve never been so happy…” Tane replied, “I know how you feel, honey. When I met your father, I went through the same thing. You’ve given your sister a great role model…I mean…Sayaka’s jumping at the bit to enter Samurai Training, so that she can fight alongside you someday.” Polly replied, “I’m honored, Mom…I’m sure that she’ll be a great Samurai someday, once she gets the right training.” Tane replied, “She certainly will, dear…she’s got the best possible example to go by. Now…on another note…how’s Speedy?” Polly blushed, and replied, “He’s fine, Mom. He’s out with Good Bird, Carla, and Wally right now, picking up his wedding attire. Guido’s out with Lucille at the park, and he’s gonna be meeting back at the parlor with his brother, his sister-in-law, and Francine, to discuss some important matters.” Tane said, “That’s wonderful, dear…ah, here it is…your old dress, the one you wore when you first met Speedy.” Polly accepted the dress from her mother, and fingered the material, letting the memories come back to her.
Flashback…
It was the end of Polly’s first day at Little Tokyo Primary School, and she was the new girl in the neighborhood, having just moved here from Kyoto. She had started to walk home, when she’d felt someone grab her arm, and yank her back onto the playground. Before she knew it, three tough male cats were teasing her, calling her names, and shoving her around, until one of them tore her clothes, and knocked her into the mud. Polly looked herself over, and saw that she was absolutely filthy. Her new dress was ruined, as it had a huge rip in the front, starting under her right arm, and ending above her stomach. Just as she was about to try and run to safety, one of the bullies, obviously the leader, jumped out in front of her, and said, “I don’t think so, little kitty. If you wanna get past us, you gotta pay the toll.” Polly’s voice was shaking with fear, as she responded, “Wh-what do you want from me?” The bully replied, “Your lunch money every day, from now on…and that nice looking hairclip of yours.” Polly said, “NO! That was a present from my mother last year for Christmas! I’m not taking it off, ever!” The bully smirked, and said, “Oh yeah…we’ll just have to punish you for that, you little brat!” The boy advanced on her, about to start cutting her hair off with a pair of scissors. One of his friends grabbed her and held her down on her knees, and the scissors were just a few inches from her fiery red locks, when another voice rang out across the schoolyard. “LEAVE HER ALONE!!!”, her rescuer, and soon-to-be best friend, and future husband, called out. Polly turned, and saw another male cat, around her age, readying himself to take the bullies on. The leader rushed him, but Speedy sidestepped, and dropped him with a powerful axe kick. The second assailant, the one that had torn Polly’s dress, went after him with a tree branch, but Speedy simply caught his wrists, and tossed him over his shoulder. Scared beyond all belief, the other attacker ran off, and Speedy helped Polly up. She said, while still sobbing quietly, “Thank you so much, whoever you are!” Speedy brushed her off as best he could, and said, “I’m Speedy Cerviche, Samurai-in-training. Who are you?” Polly looked herself over, noticing the mud that matted her fur, and her torn clothes. She said, “I’m Polly. Polly Esther. Thanks for saving me, Speedy.” Speedy said, “Why don’t I take you to my place, since the school day’s over. You can clean up, and I’ll have my mom fix your dress, then you can call home and tell them what happened, and I’ll walk you home.” Polly smiled, and the two new friends headed off to Speedy’s house.
End Flashback…
Polly wiped away tears, as she recalled how close she and Speedy had become, ever since that day. When they’d arrived at his house, his mother, Kagome Cerviche, had been so sweet to her. Once Speedy had told her the story of how he’d saved her, she’d hugged her brave little son, and then she provided Polly with a spare set of clothes to wear, while she repaired the damage to Polly’s dress. In the meantime, Polly had gone upstairs to take a shower, and once she’d washed all the mud out of her hair and fur, she and Speedy were treated to some homemade cookies and milk, and Speedy had given Polly a walk home. Once they’d arrived, Polly told her parents about how Speedy had saved her, and how kind his mother had been to her. Tane remembered it too, as she’d immediately pulled the young boy into a hug, while her husband, Akira, had told Speedy that from that moment on, he’d always be welcome at their house. Polly and Speedy’s parents had met one another the next day, after their children got out of school for the weekend, and while Speedy and Polly were outside playing, they traded stories for a few hours, until Speedy asked their permission to bring Polly into Samurai Training, so that she’d be able to protect herself. The rest, was history. Tane said, “Speedy truly is a remarkable young cat, Polly…I just know that he’ll never hurt you, or break your heart.” Polly replied, “I know, Mom…I’ve known him for so long…I couldn’t imagine ever loving anyone other than him.” Tane soon found her daughter’s prom dress, and Polly added that to her bundle as well. She already had one of her old delivery uniforms, as well as the dress that she’d worn on the night Speedy had confessed his feelings for her. She hugged her mother, and said, “Thanks, Mom. I’m going over to see Speedy’s Aunt now. I’ll talk to you later.” Tane replied, “Take care, honey. Tell Lydia that I said hello.” Polly smiled, and headed out.
Little Tokyo Mall…
After they arrived at the shopping center, Speedy and the others headed into a nice-looking establishment, which sold wedding attire for reasonable prices. Speedy’s eyes lit on a white jacket, and matching pants. The suit had blue trim, with gold highlights, just like his armor. He found one in his size, and pulled it off the rack. Good Bird and Wally both decided on a standard tuxedo. Good Bird’s was black, while Wally went for a dark blue one. Carla found a lovely red dress, with gold floral patterns woven into it. She said, “Birdie…isn’t this dress lovely?” He replied, “It is, Carla…the perfect dress, for a lovely girl like you.” Carla smiled, and she kissed Good Bird on the cheek. Wally saw Speedy’s suit, and said, “I like it, Speedy. Polly’s gonna love it, I can tell.” Speedy replied, “Thanks, Wally…I like your suit too.” They all met up, paid for their suits, and headed for the Food Court for lunch.
Rikugien Park…
Guido and Lucille were strolling through the gardens, and Lucille was absolutely awe-struck at the intense beauty of all the flowers around her. Guido said, “Hold on, Lucille…I’ll be right back.” Guido walked off, and came back five minutes later, with a bouquet of roses in his hands. Lucille said, “Oh Guido…they’re lovely!” Her eyes teared up, and Guido started to rub her shoulders, to keep her missiles from firing off. After a few more hours, they headed back to the Pizza Parlor, so that they could meet up with Cosmo and Myoshi.
Back at the Pizza Parlor…
Francine was wiping down the counter, when Guido’s brother Cosmo came in, along with his wife, Myoshi. Cosmo said, “Hey Fran. Where’s my little brother at?” Francine replied, “He’s out with Lucille right now, but they’ll be back shortly.” Myoshi said, “Oh…he’s still with Lucille? Anybody wanna place bets on how long that’s gonna last?” Guido came in just then, and said, “It’s gonna last forever, Myoshi. I told you, I’m a changed cat. My days of chasing after every pretty girl in the city are over, because I’ve found the only pretty girl that I’ll ever want, right here.” Guido pulled Lucille close, and hugged her. Cosmo said, “Hey, little bro…how’ve ya been?” Guido replied, “Just fine. How’s everything with you and Myoshi?” Smiling, Cosmo replied, “Great. Her and I are getting along perfectly, and I’m still waiting to see proof that you’ve changed.” Lucille stepped up to her boyfriend’s defense, and said, “Guido HAS changed, Cosmo. He’s promised his heart to me, and ME alone, and he’s also planning to GIVE Speedy and Polly their wedding.” Cosmo and Myoshi both went wide-eyed, and Myoshi said, “Why, Guido…I never thought I’d hear myself say this, but…LET ME HUG YOU!” She and Guido embraced, and Cosmo said, “I’m proud of ya, bro. You’ve really become a more mature cat, and I’m happy that you proved me wrong.” Francine said, “Well then…now that all of the friendly banter is done, let’s get down to the business of setting up this wedding.” Myoshi nodded, and pulled out a book of wedding cakes, which they all began going over. Myoshi said, “Here…how about this one?” It was a huge, seven-tiered cake, with flowers and hearts all over it. Guido replied, “No…we’re only gonna have a small wedding, just close friends and family. Let’s see…The Rescue Team, Al Dente and his wife, Good Bird, Carla, some of Speedy’s old friends from Samurai Training, and of course, Speedy’s aunt and uncle, along with Polly’s mother, her father, and her sister, and any other family members that she might have.” Cosmo flipped the page to a picture of a lovely, yet simple three-tiered cake, and said, “Hey bro, how does this one look?” Guido took a peek, and said, “Now THAT’s more like it! Let’s have an ‘S’ for Speedy, and a ‘P’ for Polly, intertwined on the top of the cake, in red frosting. The cake itself…make it chocolate, with vanilla frosting. Also, a little creative touch I just thought of…make some little figures of Speedy and Polly out of white chocolate molds, and fill them with a peanut butter fudge center. That’ll really spruce it up.” Myoshi said, “Sounds good…and since you’re family…we’ll do it for half off!” Francine was in such a cheery mood, that she said, “I’ll even pay for it all.” Guido’s eyes went wide, and Myoshi nearly fainted. Guido said, “Wow Fran…you’re in quite the mood. Let me know when Cheese grows a brain.” Francine replied, “DON’T push it, Guido. I’m doing this out of the kindness of my heart for Speedy and Polly. They both deserve this, and so do you, for planning all this out for them.” Guido walked over and hugged Francine. Myoshi said, “So…where’s the reception gonna be, Fran?” Francine replied, “Right here. Like I said, Speedy and Polly don’t like large crowds, and we DON’T want Princess Vi finding out about this, and turning it into a celebrity wedding ball.” Cosmo replied, “Yeah, no kidding…just don’t let her hear that. Myoshi and I heard her send three servants to Prisoners’ Island this morning alone, while we were walking over here. Still…are you sure you wanna have it HERE, in a Pizza Place?” Francine replied, “Yes, I’m sure. What’s wrong with it?” Myoshi replied, “Nothing, Fran…honest. It’s a nice, clean place and all, but seriously…a wedding reception in a Pizza Parlor?” Lucille stepped in, and said, “Yes. First off, my teahouse isn’t big enough, and Princess Vi won’t be as likely to think of looking here.” Cosmo replied, “Yeah…you’re right, Lucille. Let’s get this show on the road.” With that, they began making lists of supplies, and figuring out what food would be served at the big day.
Little Tokyo Palace…
Princess Vi was getting ready to head out, along with her mother, so that she could give her a tour of the city. Three guards were going along for the walk, and Vi intended to stop over at Pizza Cats’ Pizza for lunch. Frieda called out, “Al Dente, we’re leaving now. Take care of things until we get back!” Al replied, “Of course, Your Highness. Have a nice walk!” Emperor Fred called out, “Fah-Red!” As they made their rounds of the city, Vi pointed out all the new buildings that had gone up, since the destruction of the comet, especially the statue of the Pizza Cats and Good Bird, which sat right in the city square. It was solid gold, and showed all four of them, clad in full armor, in their victory poses. The plaque read, ‘This Statue is dedicated by the grateful citizens of Little Tokyo to our brave heroes…and heroine, The Samurai Pizza Cats…Speedy Cerviche, Guido Anchovy, Polly Esther, and Good Bird. Statue Dedicated by: Princess Violet.’ Empress Frieda snapped a photo of it, and said, “It’s lovely, dear.” Princess Vi said, “Thanks, Mama. The Pizza Place isn’t too far from here, so let’s go get some lunch.” Smiling, Frieda and her daughter headed off to the Pizza Parlor. When they came into view, Cosmo said, “It’s Princess Vi…and her mom! Hide the cookbooks, and act like business as usual!” They all hid the cookbooks, and Francine jumped over the counter. Empress Frieda came in, and said, “So…this is the great Pizza Cats’ Pizza Emporium. Where is everyone?” Francine replied, “Speedy’s out shopping, Polly’s visiting her family, and Good Bird’s out with Speedy. Guido’s here, though, and this is his brother Cosmo, and Cosmo’s wife, Myoshi. Empress Frieda, this is Lucille, Guido’s girlfriend.” Once introductions were out of the way, Frieda ordered a couple of slices of cheese pizza to go, and Princess Vi ordered two slices of Pepperoni, along with a drink for herself, as well as her mother. The guards each ordered a small pizza, and a salad, along with a soda. Once they’d paid for their food and left, everyone breathed a sigh of relief, before continuing with their wedding plans.
Cerviche Household…
Polly arrived at the home of Speedy’s aunt and uncle shortly after 1:30pm, and knocked on the door. Lydia opened up, and said, “Polly! Come in, dear. Can I make you some tea?” Polly replied, “Yes, please.” Once the tea was served up, Lydia got out the quilt, and Polly set down her materials. Lydia picked up the first dress, which was the one she’d worn after she’d met Speedy. Lydia said, “Polly…you wore this when you met Speedy, right?” Polly replied, “Yes, I did. That was the day my friendship with him started, so it’s perfect to start my row with.” Lydia replied, “I agree. Now then, you cut a patch out, and then sew it on." Polly replied, “Well uh…actually, Lydia…I don’t know how to sew. I never learned how. I’m a pizza maker, and a Samurai, but I never was a seamstress.” Lydia replied, “That’s okay, dear…don’t be upset. You just cut the patches off of the dresses, and then I can sew it on for you, and you can just watch.” Polly replied, “Thank you, Lydia. How’s Irving?” Lydia replied, “He’s just fine. He’s out right now, doing some grocery shopping. He’ll be back in a couple of hours. How’s your family?” Polly replied, “My mom’s doing great, and so’s my dad. Sayaka’s jumping at the gun to enter Samurai training like me, so she can fight crime at my side. Ever since she was a kitten, she’s looked up to me. Whenever Speedy and I would play together, we’d always let her join in, I’d help her with homework, household chores, I’d read to her at night, and when the thunderstorms would come, or the lights went out, I’d let her sleep in my room. If anyone picked on her, if Speedy didn’t deal with them, I would, or even both of us. She’s the best little sister I could ask for, and I love her.” Lydia replied, “I can imagine, dear. Even though I never had children of my own, Irving and I loved Speedy as if he WERE our son, after his parents died. He never went without something, and we supported him, in whatever he chose to do. His parents raised him well, and he’s turned into the kind, charming cat, that’s now only about seven weeks away, from being your husband.” Polly replied, “I know…I can’t wait…Gods, I love Speedy so much!” Lydia smiled, and she and Polly then went back to sewing the quilt. After a few hours, the final patch was in place, and Lydia said, “Well Polly… I think it looks perfect. How about you?” Polly replied, “I-I love it! This is NEVER going to leave my possession, and I’ll treasure it, just like I will your wonderful nephew. I’ve got to be going now, Lydia, but thank you for the tea, and tell Irving I said hello!” Lydia replied, “Take care, Polly. I’ll talk to you soon.” Polly and Lydia hugged, and then Polly headed for home.
Prisoners’ Island…
Cheese was once again stuffing his face with sushi, while Jerry kept the Ninja Crows in line. Cheese wanted to launch as soon as possible, and the Ninja Crows were working nonstop, to get the hover jets and booster pods installed. After five hours of back-breaking work, one Ninja Crow walked up, and said, “Boss, we’re done.” Cheese replied, “Well, it’s about time.” Jerry muttered, “Time for what…for you to take a bath…oops…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY, I HEARD THAT!!! ARE YOU SAYING I SMELL BAD?!!! YOU’RE NOT EXACTLY A BABE-MAGNET EITHER, YOU DIMWIT!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!” Cheese exploded, and Jerry went flying into a tree. The Ninja Crows then put the robot through it’s paces, and at the end, they concluded the test, by firing the huge shotgun right into a model of the Pizza Cats’ Pizza Emporium, blasting it to bits. Cheese smiled, and said, “Nicely done, fellas…nicely done indeed. Now then, I need to think…where am I going to put my statue, after I take over Little Tokyo?” Jerry muttered, “Don’t think too hard, you might hurt yourself…uh-oh…” Cheese screamed, “JERRY ATRICK…THAT DOES IT!!! GET OVER HERE!!!” Cheese grabbed Jerry, and began whacking him repeatedly with his fan, all the while, his face began to go red, until he eventually exploded. Once his latest tantrum quieted down, the Ninja Crows started getting the robot ready to take off back to confront the Pizza Cats.
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SCerviche
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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They probly like it because they have no idea, or very little, of what SPC is about or how the characters normaly act.
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pollygirl
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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February 04, 2008, 11:35:36 pm »
Quote from: SCerviche on February 04, 2008, 10:46:21 pm
They probly like it because they have no idea, or very little, of what SPC is about or how the characters normaly act.
Speedy and Polly CAN act like that! If YOU don't knovv that, go back and revvatch some eps!
You call yourself SCerviche, but you don't vvant him to be happy and get the girl?
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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February 04, 2008, 11:42:55 pm »
It's our story, and it's about SPEEDY and POLLY being happy with one another.
Here's the next part:
Speedy and Polly: A Match Made In Heaven
Story by: Phoenix710&Merigirl
Disclaimer: Neither Merigirl nor I claim any rights whatsoever to Samurai Pizza Cats, or to any of the characters. Samurai Pizza Cats, and all associated characters, are registered trademarks of Saban.
Chapter Fifteen: Discussions and Memories
“All right, Cheesy, I think this is it,” Jerry said. “All systems have been tested and we are all ready to go!”
“Excellent, Jerry, excellent!” Cheese said happily. “Finally I will have my revenge against those horrid felines! The throne of Tokyo will be mine!! All mine!!” He turned to Jerry. “That’s gonna make you Prime Minister, Jerry!”
“Ah, thank you, Seymour!” Jerry said, beginning to climb into the robot. Cheese followed immediately afterward and sat beside him at the controls.
“Fare thee well, oh Prisoner’s Island. Can’t say it was a pleasant stay….cause it wasn’t! Ninja’s, crawl up here, we are gone!” With a loud cheer, the Ninja Crows all crawled on top of the robot as Jerry started the engines. Soon, the booster pods ignited with a loud roar, and the machine began to lift off to the delight of the Ninja Crows, who cheered as loudly as they could. “HA, HA, HA, HA!!!! Oh, Jerry, I gotta admit you outdid yourself! wIth this robot, taking down those kitties is gonna be no problem at all!”
“Yes, Seymour…and the first thing we’ll do once we have the throne is to blow up a certain Pizza establishment. Little Tokyo won’t have any use of THAT anymore!”
“Oh, Jerry, I’m so happy, this is so thrilling I’m overwhelmed!!” He took several deep breaths to calm himself….and his eyes spotted the Royal Guards making their appointed rounds. “Hey, Jerry…what say we have ourselves one more little test run of the weapons? Say a real life target practice?” Jerry followed his gaze…and grinned slyly.
“I read you loud and clear, Cheesy!” He steered the robot back toward the island…..and right toward the guards. The guards blinked, unable to believe what they were seeing. But before they could do anything, the head mounted 60mm machine guns went off…and they found themselves face down in the sand, which was the only way they could avoid the deadly armor-shredding bullets.
“HA, HA, HA!!!” Cheese laughed. “One little, two little, three little chestnuts. Four little, five little, six little chestnuts. Seven little, eight little, nine little chestnuts..”
“Ten chestnuts on the ground, oh!!” Jerry and the Ninja Crows all exclaimed, laughing. With that done, Jerry pivoted the robot around by using the vernier thrusters, located under the armor on various parts of the robot’s body. Once he’d gotten the course set for Little Tokyo, he said, “Look out Pizza Cats…HERE WE COME!!!” Minutes later, they were off, ready to begin their plan for revenge.
Back in Little Tokyo…
Meanwhile, Cosmo and Myoshi had just finished going over the wedding food with Guido, Lucille, and Francine. “So, we start out with a hearty wonton soup and rice pilaf balls. Then we move on to the main course. Jiaozi, stuffed with meat AND cheese, Wally’s sushi platter, steamed orange duck, grilled chicken and beef teriaki, with Nikuman buns.”
“You’re making me hungry!” Lucille said. “Tell us more!”
“Well…along with that, there’s gonna be Japanese ramen noodles, some spaghetti and meatballs for some added flavor…and Guido says he’ll prepare the sauce.”
Lucille smiled. “Oh, you will, Guido?”
“It’s an old family recipe,” Guido said. “I can only give it to my first born son.”
“And seeing as how my brother never plans on getting married, that means he’s going to his grave with the recipe!” Cosmo joked.
“Hey, hey,” Guido said, hugging Lucille tightly. “Never say never,” he grinned slightly.
“Well, maybe not never…maybe when you’re 40!” Cosmo cracked.
“Which means…Lucy, Honey, you can take your sweet time picking out a dress!” Myoshi said. Guido put up his hands in mock surrender. His eyes fell upon the karaoke machine near the corner. “Hey, Francine..does that karaoke machine still work?”
“I think so, Guido. Why?”
“Cause I just thought of something else we can do,” Guido said eagerly. “We can lug in that machine, each of us pick a song, then we can sing them to Speedy and Polly at the reception!”
“Guido…I can’t believe I’m saying this…but that is a great idea!” Myoshi said. “Wow, I’m seeing a real life miracle!” she laughed a bit, punched Guido lightly on the arm, and then she smiled and hugged him gently. “Oh, ya know I’m just kidding ya!”
“I know, and ya kill me,” Guido said. Lucille kissed his cheek, causing him to smile. Francine peaked out the curtain just then.
“Polly’s coming back!” She flung open the door and smiled. “Hey, Polly.”
“Hi, Francine. Hi, Guido, Cosmo, Myoshi. Hi, Lucille.”
“Hi, Polly,” Lucille said happily.
“What’s going on, guys?”
“Cosmo and I just put together the menu for your wedding.” she handed her the list. “How does this sound?”
“Delicious!” Polly said. “I’m getting hungry just looking at this!” she smiled. “It’s perfect.” she sat down happily next to Lucille.
“And here’s a copy of the wedding invitation,” Myoshi said, handing it to Polly. The invitation was on a pure, silky white piece of paper. In black fancy print was typed the words:
Mr. And Mrs. Akira Esther
Request The Honor Of Your Presence At The Marriage Of Their Daughter
Polly
To Mr. Speedy Cerviche
At
The Holy Name Church
Friday, July 14th
eight-thirty PM
Reception to be held at the Pizza Cats Pizza Emporium immediately following the ceremony.
Around the words were painted beautiful pictures of trees and brightly colored flowers. Polly gasped. “I love it, this is so beautiful!”
“OK, we’ll use this!” Myoshi said, winking at Guido. Once they took back the invitations, she would change the time to six-thirty.
“It’s amazing! Thank you so much for all of this! How much is this gonna be?”
“It won’t matter. I’m paying!”
“YOU, Fran?”
“Uh huh!”
“God, are you alright?” Polly joked.
“Just fine. Call this a present!” Polly grinned and hugged her.
“So, Polly, I’ve meaning to ask you, when do you wanna go shopping for our wedding dresses?”
“I think we can do it this Saturday. I’ll pick up Sayaka, you meet us here at night, and we can all go together!”
“Wow…you’re actually getting married. It’s unreal.” Cosmo said.
“I know…I can’t believe it either,” Polly said, stretching out her hand and gazing at her ring. “Every time I see this ring, I feel like I’m dreaming, and I don’t wanna wake up!”
“You must really love him.”
“Yeah, more than anything in the world.“ She touched the Samurai pin she had worn ever since she had begun going steady with Speedy. She always wore it in the same place, right over her heart. “I just can’t believe he still wants to marry me after all I’ve put him through! This horrible temper of mine…I don’t know why I just can’t control it. I know a lot of men wouldn’t be able to take it and would have run off for the hills long ago. Somehow…he stayed. We had our share of fights over the years…and we’ve made up after each one of them.” She looked down as the memories came back to her. “I mean, I’ve called him names like ‘imbecile’, ‘a scrolls idea of Heaven’, I’ve even denied liking him…I was in such denial, until it was almost too late…and after all that he loves me anyway!”
“He loves the real you, that’s why,” Cosmo said, putting his arm around Myoshi. “And that’s a kind of love that’s definitely meant to last forever! Like Myoshi and me.”
“And we know you two are gonna be as happy as we still are,” Myoshi said. “Cause you two have so much chemistry between you…its so obvious to everyone! I mean, you guys grew up together. You’ve seen him at his best and worst. He’s seen ya at your best and worst…”
“He has the patience of a saint for putting up with my worst!” Polly said. “Face it, sometimes I am just impossible to live with…don’t act like ya don’t know…but he lives with it anyway…and tolerates it, and loves me anyway. He’s so incredible…” She sighed. “I should really do something for him…I should cook him a special dinner tonight to make up for all I’ve put him through..” She stood up. “I’m gonna do that!”
Cerviche household…
Lydia put away the quilt carefully, knowing how proud Speedy’s parents would definitely be to see their son marry the lovely red-haired Cat his whole family loved. His parents were the kindest, most supportive people, and Lydia was glad that they had both lived long enough to see Speedy was like that as well. As she fingered Kagome’s row, her mind drifted back to the night before Speedy was to gradutate from Samurai Training and be initated as a full-fledged Samurai like his father…
The entire Cerviche family was gathered in the dining room for a special family dinner to celebrate Speedy’s initiation the next day as a full-fledged Samurai. Lydia couldn’t help but notice that Speedy, now a grown adult in a handsome looking suit and tie and sitting next to his father, looked exactly like a younger version of his Dad. Kagome watched this with a hint of sadness in her eyes. She had just discovered that she had cancer, but she had asked Lydia and Jon not to say anything this week. Speedy had worked and trained long and hard for this day, and this was HIS! She did NOT want a cloud hanging over it, not at all on her dear son’s special day.
Jon stood up and clinked his glass for attention. “A toast,” he said “ Listen up. I would like all of us here to raise our glasses in honor of my son, of whom I am extremely proud! It means a lot to me to have my own boy follow in my footsteps, and when he takes the vows at the ceremony tomorrow, and becomes a full-fledged Samurai, like his old man…I’ll be bursting with pride! So, at this time, I would like to say to my son, Speedy, now full grown to manhood and taking his position as head of the household…in one of my old suits and ties I might add….(everyone laughed at that) that I do plan to retire from the Imperial Guards soon, and when I do, I will present my own sword to my boy, with all the pride in my heart!” Everyone clapped, and Speedy hugged his Dad. Lydia couldn’t help but notice the tears in Kagome’s eyes, and reached out to take her hand.
Lydia fingered the quilt again. “Kagome, Jon, even though you’re in Heaven now, I’m at least thankful you lived to see Speedy take his vows as a Samurai…and I know you’ll have the best wedding seats in the house!”
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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98% true ONLY according to YOU!
Also, if you stopped reading our stories, vvhy the heck are you still posting on this part of the fan vvorks section? Go somevvhere else. ONLY post to revievv, capisce?
I can post where ever and whenever I want, hahaha. That's the purpose of forums, right? Indeed.
And... Did you just say... "ONLY post to revievv, capisce?" Great spelling first of all. Secondly.... WHAT DO YOU THINK I DID FOR YOU IN THE OTHER 2 THREADS? I reviewed your stories and you obviously didn't like it and here we are now! I cannot comprehend this stupidity... I need a drink.
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I don't think it's sub-par, and neither do alot of other people...just check Fanfiction.net. This story has gotten positive reviews all around on there, so other people DO appreciate our work.
Lots of people like my works on FF.net too, I get good and bad reviews. If I do see a bad review, I recheck and go back to see where I went wrong, not get hurt and defensive and whine to people. Yes, I think this is rather sub-par, regardless of what anyone has said. I told you how to improve, but you chose to insult me and argue with me. Thanks a lot, see if I help you ever again.
And.. I do have a question for you; why are you chopping this up into chapters when you could just post one link to FF.net where people can read the whole thing at once. Little help for ya there, but of course, you'll berate me about it too.
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Re: Speedy and Polly: A Match Made in Heaven
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Quote from: BurkeWorld on February 04, 2008, 11:50:20 pm
And.. I do have a question for you; why are you chopping this up into chapters when you could just post one link to FF.net where people can read the whole thing at once. Little help for ya there, but of course, you'll berate me about it too.
~Burkey
Because it's not finished yet, vve don't knovv if people vvill read it then, and vve don't vvant to!!
Ya knovv, it is possible to post negative revievvs VVITHOUT hurting other people's feelings.
The moderators should post a vvarning at the top of this forum:
All Speedy and Polly lovers vvill immidiately get stoned to death on this board!!
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