Not too bad.
Reminds me of Children by Robert Miles, only easier to listen to.
Cheers. I have acctualy Finished it today (Suprisingly, i somehow maneged to make it over 6 minutes long!) I shall re-record it and Replace the link above with a link to the complete version later tonight maybe.
EDIT: Here we go, its done.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/224730586119a2/