Two new fics- Confessions

[cartoonking10749]

I've done a sample of practicing fan fiction.
This is about the point of views of Speedy Cerviche. It is not yet finished, but it has some comedy in it, coming from Speedy.
Everyone is welcome to talk about this fanfic. Meantime, relax and most importantly, Enjoy!


CONFESSIONS OF PIZZA CATS

SPEEDY CERVICHE
A leader, a warrior and a hero. Three words associated with my role.
But me, I am the last person expected to be all three
I am known as Speedy Cerviche, but please just call me Speedy.
I am the main delivery pizza boy at the Pizza Cat Parlour.
Found in my hometown, Little Tokyo, Japan,
I’ll tell ya something, work and no play makes me a dull cat.
So I spend most of the time having fun in a goofy way (and I don’t mean that dog!)
Yep, I am really have an funny attitude compared to my fellow workers,
Guido Anchovy & Polly Ester  (what cheesy names, sheesh!).
I’m just a fun-loving feline with my own comedic jokes and goof offs.
However, my lifestyle can land me into trouble, especially at work (both of them).
Usually the object of ridicule (I’d make Clouseau cry), I tend to be accident prone.
Despite my confidence, I end up as the fall guy (writer’s fault),
But my other job, features more danger than the Pizza Parlour.
I am a Samurai (or is that a metal shinobi), whatever, and my other side is shown
In battle, when we fight those feather dusters called Ninja Crows.
It’s time to get serious, and make those crows turn chicken.
My handy-dandy weapon is the fabled Ginzu Sword, but I call it Binky.
How good is it? Well, it requires good photography for the big whammy.
(A energy-powered finishing move I call the Cat’s eye slash).
When that hits home, I like to pose for all folks at home. Ta-dah!
As for why I’m not seen removing my helmet,
Well let’s say I have a haircut that nobody would understand.

But enough bout me, I talk about my fellow pizza cats.
First, I’ll start with that feline femme fatale, Polly.
She now and again talks about love conquering evil.
Very ironic, considering she pounds me with anything she get ahold of,
Almost\ everything I do always upsets her.
Like when I sold her Flute, she went beserk and threw a table, square in my face.
She said she will not forgive as long as she lives,
But when we got the flute, she finally forgave me (not like it matters).
All this time, Me and Polly were like oil and water,
But I do secretly have a soft spot for her.
She may look after herself, way better than me anyway.

To be continued…


Coming soon.. 3 Girls on Guido Anchovy

[Polly SPC]

I like it! It was nicely done... can't say I cared much for the format it was in, for it sounded a bit fragmented to me... but other then that, I rather liked it. I've done PoV narratives before and they are always quite fun... but yea, as I said before you did a pretty good job and got Speedy's character down pretty good to IMO...

[cartoonking10749]

Thanks a lot Polly! 
The format was center btw, and it is a bit fragmented. Don't know why I did it that way, it seemed easy to write in center format for this sort of thing.
Anyway, This was my first shot at fanfiction and if I'm confident enough, I'll write another fic.
Don't know if I should continue this one, but anything is possible.

[BurkeWorld]

Sign up for my contest, bud, what have ya got to lose?

Burkey

[cartoonking10749]

Hmm an offer I see?
I don't really know how long this fiction will be and it will a new POV thing.

Alright Burkey!! I'm all yours!!

[cartoonking10749]

Hello everyone.
Just finished "Conessions", but finished Guido story a lot earlier.
Anyway here's is  "Confessions" part 2 , continued from last part.

"CONFESSIONSOF PIZZA CATS" part 2


Yet,  there are times where she is nice and frets about me.
With two personalities in one person, I would get confused now and again.
I would prefer flattery from her, rather than being flattened.
Now, I’ll talk about my best friend, Guido Anchovy.
Now, he is a delivery boy just like me and we share similarities
Like having a wild time, being heroes and beautiful girls.
But that’s where our comparisons end, like my hearts for mostly one girl,
But Guido, loves every pretty girl within reach and he goes for mine especially.
You see he and I love this cute lamb-whatever she is called Lucille
And just about every time, I try to flirt with her, he shows up and ridicules me,
Flirting Lucille with great ease (I hate it when he does this).
But despite this rivalry, we’re the best of buds.
And finally, that bossy, owner of Pizza cats Parlour, Francine.
She like Polly, can be a large party pooper and sometimes too money hungry.
Her hand in fire arms would have worked excellent if we had softer landings.
But when things look bleak, I give her a bell, literally.

Yeah, you could guess I have the roughest times of exactly everyone in Little Tokyo,
But being liked as a hero and saving the day is a consolation prize fine with me.
Always, remember we Pizza Cats are around when you need us, whether to rid your house of ninja crows or delivering a garlic with pepperoni topping pizza right to you.
Well, we’re only open from a.m. to p.m. (Sorry I keep forgetting the time, except for visits to Lucille of course).
I gotta be gone now or I’ll miss another delivery again.
*Speedy in thought while leaving*(Now what does “Teyandee” mean again?)


Well, since that's finished, I would soon show my Guido fic as it's difficult to keep as a user- saved file.

[BurkeWorld]

Remember bud, punctuation and spelling is your friend.

Burkey ^_^

[cartoonking10749]

Sorry for adding repeated replies.
But just in, I added some corrections to the stories, despite changing the format. Don't why I have like that, I thought it might be as a POV style as it is only one character's opinion.
Hope this clears it more.

[cartoonking10749]

OK folks, here's my second fan-fic and it's focus is another POV, but based on Guido.
Enjoy.

3 GIRLS ON GUIDO ANCHOVY by Cartoonking10749
Suave, conceited and 100% pure tomcat.
Guido Anchovy, Samurai Pizza Cat and self-proclaimed ladies feline has been on the prowl for the love of girls. But is all show, no serious or is there more to him?
These are the views & experiences of the girls that are closest to Guido, whether he knows it or not.

POLLY
Well, I know everyone in the Pizza Parlor ever since we were kittens. But of everyone, if not Speedy, Guido is one individual that is partially a mystery.
I only know him for his cool, level-headed attitude and his ultimate weakness, Pretty girls. It is that weakness that ticks me off, especially when he is supposed to be working; I mean we are paid to live in the Parlor!
, Speedy often competes with him when the feminine target is Lucille. But I admit that my fury against them is sometimes out of envy. I have feelings too! There’s me and Francine, two available girls that work with them and they chase after a girl across the street. But then again, at a mission on Prisoner Island, Guido was freely posing to cute girls on the beach without any intervention of me; well it is because he won’t be danger from these girls who don’t really pay attention to him.
Guido also happens to have an ego the size of Siberia, he is always sure of himself and he will be happy to show it off. Unfortunately, his sarcasm really gets to me, sometimes so much, I’ll likely to give him a sample of my wrath.
But that cat has proven to be dedicated to both of his works, as soon as his serious streak kicks in, of course.
Out of the boys, Guido is the one who usually helps the most in the parlor. He may be love-craving rivals with Speedy, but there is a possibility of deep respect for each other. Evidence of this happened when our impossible-to-describe leader left for no reason, Guido was the only one of us that was worried about him, which surprised me and Francine. As for why he has no cat bell, it is not clear yet, but Guido was possibly so certain of himself or cared more about his vanity, that a bell would not be necessary to him.
I usually witness Guido’s better characteristics when we’re in combat with the forces of evil. He and I usually fight together and we both even pilot the Supreme Catatonic. I feel close to Guido as a friend and partner and it offers more understanding between us, which clouds our differences back at the Parlor. We each are capable of taking care of ourselves, but there were when we were in danger when we worry for each other.
I may be concerned for Speedy mostly, but when Guido is in trouble, I do worry as well. I knew I forget to brush my teeth that day, but I do care about friends.
I may not romantic feelings about Guido, but I do share a close association with him as a close friend, with Speedy as a pal too, well sometimes.
How does Guido feel about me? I’m not sure but suspicions arose when he said “we should start a family”. Was he serious, I don’t think so; these script writers would put anything corny in our  dialogue. I noticed his caring side for me when that fateful night, brave Speedy went into to avert Doomsday (the comet that is) and when that happened, I was never so broken down by the fact that I have deep feelings for Speedy Cerviche.
Guido offered to look after me if Speedy’s gone and it was very comforting that blue boy cared about my welfare. Fortunately, Speedy was alive and played with my feelings to the point he was going to meet a knuckle sandwich, when out of nowhere, Guido kicked him for me and then they fight over me with words.
Yes, Guido and I usually agree on terms and there was that time he really saved our skins, all by himself.
He is an unusual cat, but maybe that’s the way I like him, but as long as he doesn’t tease me or get distracted by beautiful girls on delivery, he is cool with me.


FRANCINE
As the boss of our parlor, I have a low tolerance towards slackers. The two boys that me and Polly worked along side with, unfortunately play the slacking roles, well sometimes.
I have a thing for hiding true feelings under sarcasm for everyone and I can say that the boys and Polly are my closest friends, even through our toughest times.
(Sorry, If I am of topic, but I’ll get to talking about Guido now <giggles>)
If he’s not teaming with Speedy on some tomcat tomfoolery like racing to Lucille’s house with an extra pepperoni cheese pizza, Guido is found on good terms with me and Polly.
I know of his addiction to beautiful girls, but he has not yet made a move on Polly and Me. Why’s that? Does he prefer woman he is not close to or works with or does he like women with free spirit? I can’t tell, He is so complicated as a character.
Guido can be egotistical and independent, but it doesn’t hide the fact that I do worry about him, especially if he’s missing.
I personally discover a lot more about him like that one day, when Polly, Lucille and even Speedy had been selected for music single, I and Guido were the only cats in the Parlor and I’ve noticed a huge change in him. Instead of the suave, cool tomcat, a lonely, bitter cat sat in his place. This upset me greatly and I felt sorry for him, he even turns away from Big Al’s plea for help. This was not like him at all and I really sympathize with him. However later on, he pushes his doubt to one side and was willing to save Little Tokyo. I couldn’t be more proud of him and I made a promise to him before he went on his way. I do not know if I have strong feelings apart from friendship, for him or anyone else, but he does seek what I also secretly desire, affection from another person. I can say that Guido and I share several things in common and we each had our moment to shine.


  LUCILLE
Almost ever day, I had countless visits from Speedy and Guido Anchovy and each both sweetly express their interest in me. I do have a very explosive sense of sensitivity, but it didn’t discourage the both of them at trying. I was mostly accompanied by Speedy, but I have a soft spot for Guido. I can’t blame myself that blue cat has a way with words and he’s handsome as well. Tall, dark and handsome he is and he really was groovy when he destroyed that Rock n Roll Robot.
Because Speedy spends more time with me, I have grown attached to him, but I was heartbroken when both he and Guido were fighting over Polly instead of me. This caused an explosion, right of the scale. However, it was not long before the boys were over me again. Only this time, I’m more interested in Guido. Does he really love me? I think so, yes. But only time will tell I think.
 

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