Wedding Bells for Speedy and Polly (What would have happened after the final ep.

[pollygirl]

Thanks a lot. It's alvvays nice to knovv that someone is on my side in things. 

  +  = 4- ever!

[Razgriz27]

No problem. I think I'm gonna stay out of that other topic now, since no one else has seen it.

[Crow]

I'm not going to review anything until you stop gladhanding each other left, right and centre, it's annoying as hell. It's obvious you two know nothing on giving a proper critique on work, but would rather boost each other's ego's until your head is the size of Little Tokyo itself. Good day, lady and gentleman.

[Mechadon]

I'm not going to review anything until you stop gladhanding each other left, right and centre, it's annoying as hell. It's obvious you two know nothing on giving a proper critique on work, but would rather boost each other's ego's until your head is the size of Little Tokyo itself. Good day, lady and gentleman.

I hope you realize they are doing it in spite of you.

[Crow]

Good for them.

[pollygirl]

I'm not going to review anything until you stop gladhanding each other left, right and centre, it's annoying as hell. It's obvious you two know nothing on giving a proper critique on work, but would rather boost each other's ego's until your head is the size of Little Tokyo itself. Good day, lady and gentleman.

FYI, I am NOT doing this to stroke his ego, I honestly do like his story!
Ya vvant violence? Read 'Pretty Polly'.

[Tigerdbnb]

Razgriz27, your name is Phoenix710 on fanfiction right? I wanted to know have you heard of the writer on there named Guido Cerviche?
What happened to him?
Iam a big fan of your Pizza Cat and Road Rovers Stories
iam currently writing one where the cats are all in college

[Crow]

Razgriz27, your name is Phoenix710 on fanfiction right? I wanted to know have you heard of the writer on there named Guido Cerviche?
What happened to him?
Iam a big fan of your Pizza Cat and Road Rovers Stories
iam currently writing one where the cats are all in college

Unfortunately, Raz is no longer with us.

I destroyed him.

In his sleep.

~Rawr

[KageReneko]

I swear, I'm going to a write a random fiction filled with violence and explosions to counter-act all this cutesy love and fluffy kittens fictions that's going on here lately. 

Hahahahahah!! That's what I did once, then I got a job so I never wrote again... Then I had Blackcat jumping on my throat on msn...

[Spcgirl]

*Doesn't want to bumb, but must comment on this*

Let them have their cutesy loved filled love fest.

I think some major spacing, grammar fixing, and HUMOR. Would have helped tremendously.
While I read it, I kept inserting jokes and other things that the show had in it. those would have saved this from such bad reviews.

Polly and Speedy needed to quarrel at least once, Guido was actually the done the best.
Princess Violet should have had a tissy fit, and it needed... better love stuff then what you were dishing out. xD
Basically, you should have had them say things their characters would say, and not things they wouldn't. (that happened a lot in my opinion.)

But it wasn't really that bad, it just wasn't awesome enough for most. Good job anyway  Razgriz27.


  +  for ever. *shot*

[Crow]

Whyyyyyy... Bumping old threads is horrible (especially this story, god, you could have at least bumped a good one.)

And it's "bump" not "bumb."

How can you misplace the "b" with the "p" when they are...... 5 spaces away from each other on the keyboard.

English, please.

:7

~Rawr

[KyoZaber]

Whyyyyyy... Bumping old threads is horrible (especially this story, god, you could have at least bumped a good one.)

And it's "bump" not "bumb."

How can you misplace the "b" with the "p" when they are...... 5 spaces away from each other on the keyboard.

English, please.

:7

~Rawr

While bumping ancient threads is bad, this one has been active within the past month, so I think she has a little leeway there mon-captain. 
Also, can't complain too much about legitimate criticism. ... Well... We can complain... But... Yeah... Umm... Err... Yeah... I like cake.

In any case. Well done with the thread bumb. Thank you for your views on the subject SPCGirl.
Be sure to check out the other offerings we've got here when you've got time / if you've got the desire to. 

[Mechadon]

Be sure to check out the other offerings we've got here when you've got time / if you've got the desire to. 

What do you mean by "other offerings"? We're not making virgin sacrifices to newcomers, are we? 

[KyoZaber]

Be sure to check out the other offerings we've got here when you've got time / if you've got the desire to. 

What do you mean by "other offerings"? We're not making virgin sacrifices to newcomers, are we? 

Oh good heavens no! ... Those happen only on the Tuesday on the leap year when pumpkins turn into watermelons.
I'm talking about our other various fan fiction offerings.

http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=1329.0 :: Your basic premise of a StarFox / SPC Fanfiction
http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=2398.0 :: Turo's Speedy's Not So Wonderful Life
http://www.edoropolis.org/forums/index.php?topic=2413.0 :: Romero's Soggy Knight

And the other pieces of Fan fiction we have posted on this section of the forum. Not to mention some of the Fan Art posts here and there. 

[Mechadon]

Man, you people are making me feel guilty about my Starfox cross-over.

So, stop giving me those puppy-dog eyes. I'm not going to write it; it's pointless.

I guess I shouldn't be talking, since I'm still sitting on my Mechadon origin story that I actually plan on submitting. 

[Mechadon]

Where's the one MY fiction inspired?

プルルン

It's still on its way.