Little Tokyo Online

[Truro]

Autobots, this is our new city; Metroplex...oh wait, wrong anouncement.

Here's Little Tokyo Online's newest article; Big Al Dente

http://truro359.tripod.com/characters/id9.html

And BTW here's the main portal- http://truro359.tripod.com/littletokyoonline/

[TGLucario475]

looks brilliant

that should be added to the links section on the main site

[Mechadon]

I just noticed your page has it's own forum. What's up with that?

Let me guess: NO MECHADONS CLUB (they're allowed to have ONE) [Curse you, mechadon_937!!!]

[Husky]

Not bad. Way better than the Wiki

One little complaint though- You might want to do a spell check on your site's Bad Bird page.
One more suggestion: Would you considerer making a Walkthrough for the KNT video game?

[Truro]

Not bad. Way better than the Wiki

Thanks for the compliment, but I'm not really trying to compete with anyone 

One little complaint though- You might want to do a spell check on your site's Bad Bird page.

Yeah I had been meaning to do so for a while, but with studying for my driving theory test, this e-course I'm on, working on the script for my next SPC radio play and Lucile's character page I didn't actually get round to it, but I'm now doing so as we speak.

One more suggestion: Would you considerer making a Walkthrough for the KNT video game?

Well the game's pretty easy, but I guess something like a boss guide would come in handy. I do have a bit of trouble with Bad Bird in the last level.

EDIT: While I was fixing the Bad Bird page, I added one for Lucile- http://truro359.tripod.com/characters/id10.html

[Husky]

Not bad. Way better than the Wiki

Thanks for the compliment, but I'm not really trying to compete with anyone 

Fair enough  I'm just glad this site gets the facts right. I mean, look at this piece of crap I had to remove from the wiki's Polly page-

She's known Speedy the longest of the cats, ever since he helped her fight bullies in 3rd grade and he helped her get into Samurai trianing.

Now who could have typed that, I wonder 

[TGLucario475]

Not bad. Way better than the Wiki

Thanks for the compliment, but I'm not really trying to compete with anyone 

Fair enough  I'm just glad this site gets the facts right. I mean, look at this piece of crap I had to remove from the wiki's Polly page-

She's known Speedy the longest of the cats, ever since he helped her fight bullies in 3rd grade and he helped her get into Samurai trianing.

Now who could have typed that, I wonder 

my guess is someone who likes the thought of speedy being a hero, as a kid o.o

[Husky]

And your next clue is what the suspect put on the Guido page.

He?s loyal to his duties as a Samurai, though less so than Speedy

He's not as reliable with getting a pizza delivered as Speedy is, if he sees a pretty girl, he?ll drop everything and follow her!  + However, he is not without his faults- the worst being he's rather vain, and a womanizer. His most favorite things in the entire world are girls! Francine even had to tell him in 'If You Know Sushi Like I Know Sushi' to put away a mirror and get a pizza delivered. 
- He claims to be Speedy's best friend, yet it?s obvious Speedy is much closer to Polly.

Okay, I have got to have a try at whatever this person was smoking at the time, cause it must be REALLY good stuff 

[TGLucario475]

wait, your editing stuff from the SPC wikia that Pollygirl is doing, well i'm hosting the site, well wikia is, but hmmm

[Truro]

Well, its been a while since updates were anounced.

New pages added: Big Al-

http://truro359.tripod.com/characters/id9.html

Lucile-

http://truro359.tripod.com/characters/id10.html

And an episode guide page for episode 2 (at long last)

http://truro359.tripod.com/episodeguide/id10.html

[Cloud-Boy]

Hey, sweet site. Just remeber to spell check it once in a while. Like in the main page, you wrote "Welcome to the one stop shop for everything you ever wanted to know about the world wide phenominon know as Samurai Pizza Cats."

Phenomenon was the word you were looking for. Still, besides the small, little mistakes, I like it. Keep it up, and hope you finish soon.

[Truro]

Princess Vi's character page-

http://truro359.tripod.com/characters/id11.html

[Tigriss]

On Princess Vi's page, you mispelled "Hime" as "Himi". Other than that, it looks pretty good.

[Truro]

Thanks for pointing that out. It's fixed now.

Also, Fred's page is complete.

http://truro359.tripod.com/characters/id12.html

[sans soul]

Fred's page looks good but on Princess Vi's page I found a couple little things. The bottom paragraph is in the same size font as the caption under the last image. Probably just a minor tweak in your code will fix that. Also, in the second to last paragraph "hypnotized" is spelled wrong and perhaps adjusting the sentence afterwards will help it read better. Maybe something like "In a couple episodes it seems that she likes Speedy too, but Bad Bird is her biggest crush."

[Truro]

Thanks go to Helios for all his help with this latest update. We now have our latest episode page.

http://truro359.tripod.com/episodeguide/id14.html

[sans soul]

Looks good but I'd fix this paragraph up a little.

Polly and Guido can't resist talking themselves up during in (i'd take out "in") their entrance. The cats give the ninja crows a good beating, but are shocked when the Golden Cluck splits open to reveal an octopus-like robot. Bad Bird gloats about the bad guys having "the neatest monsters".(, and our)Our heroes are quickly captured by its many arms.

Other than that it looks pretty good ^^

[Helios]

*snip*

That sounds a lot better.

Always good to have someone else go over your own writing for mistakes. Cheers.

[sans soul]

^_~