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« on: February 04, 2010, 06:00:15 am »

Hey everyone. Iam doing what I said I was going to do. Iam going to start writing my fanfics on here.

But first Iam going to introduce the families of the Pizza Cats. To be honest the reason Iam doing this because I havent quite started on my fics Roll Eyes

The Cerviches:  Speedy Cerviche
Speedy-lead singer in The Matches and The Barenaked Ladies, Lead singer and bassist in Blink-182
Relationship Status-None at the moment Sad

Scott Cerviche-also singer in The Barenaked Ladies, Bassist for My Chemical Romance
Relationship Status-None

Ceaser Cerviche-Youngest Cerviche. Lead singer in Killswitch Engage, and My Chemical Romance, singer and Guitarist in Blink-182
Relationship Status-Maybe something with Polly Roll Eyes

John and Kagome Cerviche-The Parents, Well known for their 80s band The Human League.

Well thats all for now, but I will come back on and do Guidos family and Pollys family. Personally I think Pollys is the most interesting family Smiley

Bring on me getting made fun of Wink
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« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2010, 01:03:52 pm »

You forgot Huburt Cerviche.
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« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2010, 08:17:00 pm »

You forgot Huburt Cerviche.

Who?
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« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2010, 09:16:56 pm »

Don't worry about it. It's not anything you won't understand. Just a random but chosenly misfitting name for a Cerviche.

I can see Ceaser Cerviche.

But Scott Cerviche??? Why would Speedy name his son Scott?
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« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2010, 09:27:36 pm »

Don't worry about it. It's not anything you won't understand. Just a random but chosenly misfitting name for a Cerviche.

I can see Ceaser Cerviche.

But Scott Cerviche??? Why would Speedy name his son Scott?

Ceaser and Scott are Speedys younger brothers. Scott is from another fanfic Ive read.
Their parents are John and Kagome.

By the way how would I add Guidos and Pollys family? Should I add them in the same post as Speedys family or add another post?
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« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2010, 09:46:15 pm »

Give each family their own post. Then you can have a higher post count.  Polly Wink That's how we judge you here.
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« Reply #6 on: February 05, 2010, 02:15:14 am »

All right Thanks Smiley

another post would be good, especially for Guidos Family. hes got a big family Guido Smirk
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« Reply #7 on: February 05, 2010, 06:08:58 am »

All right, time for the Esther family. Polly Esther

The Esthers:

Axel and Michelle-The Parents, by his name, Axel is the lead singer of Guns N' Roses.

Derek-The oldest Esther, lead singer of the German metal group Rammstein, also the singer for Simple Plan. Yeah I know quite the change Roll Eyes
Relationship Status-Princess Vi  Smiley

Polly-Lead Guitarist of My Chemical Romance, Rhythm Guitarist and Keyboardist of Smash Mouth, also Occasionally does stuff with the Pointless Sisters.
Relationship Status-Maybe something with Ceaser Smiley

Ruth-The Youngest Esther, Lead singer of Paramore (now you all can get a idea of her hair color), Lead Guitarist of Smash Mouth, Lead Guitarist for Dethklok Cool
Realtionship Status-None for the time being.

Well thats it for the Esthers, Ill see ya all later when we see Guidos family, and trust me his family is BIG Guido Smirk
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« Reply #8 on: February 07, 2010, 06:10:14 am »

Well, I haven't gotten any comments on Pollys family. But either way Ill show you Guidos Family now. Guido Anchovy

The Anchovies:

Tony and Maria-The Parents, Tony is the lead singer of the group The Outlaws.

Angela-The Oldest.
Relationship Status-Married to another Italian named Michael.

Romeo-Lead singer of Bad Religion, and Lead Singer of Smash Mouth
Relationship Status-Married to Connie, who is the lead singer of Arch Enemy

Guido-Lead singer of Linkin Park, and Lead singer of Atreyu
Relationship Status-Something with Francine Smiley Guido Smirk

Anthony-the Youngest,The Rapping Vocals in Linkin Park, Has own band called Fort Minor, Lead Guitarist and backing vocals for Killswitch Engage.
Relationship Status-None at the moment.

Well thats all of them, like I said he has a big family. You can tell there Italian Guido Smirk.

Keep on the lookout for the start of my stories, and more of the families of some of the other characters.

Question-how many siblings did Bad Bird have? I know in one episode when they flashed back to his dad, they showed a few other baby crows.
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« Reply #9 on: February 07, 2010, 08:34:07 am »

Holy bat, Spam-man!

What Guido Confused Huh?
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« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2010, 01:49:15 pm »

So you've taken out beloved main characters, extended their families, and pretty much given all these characters musical talent?

I totally haven't seen THAT before.

#Invalid YouTube Link#

Question-how many siblings did Bad Bird have?

Well, Speedy is his brother.
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« Reply #11 on: February 07, 2010, 02:08:35 pm »

So you've taken out beloved main characters, extended their families, and pretty much given all these characters musical talent?

I totally haven't seen THAT before.

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I was thinking the same...
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« Reply #12 on: February 07, 2010, 04:27:47 pm »

So you've taken out beloved main characters, extended their families, and pretty much given all these characters musical talent?

I totally haven't seen THAT before.

#Invalid YouTube Link#

Question-how many siblings did Bad Bird have?

Well, Speedy is his brother.

That's disturbingly appropriate. As if the knot in my gut wasn't tight enough, rofl. Does that mean the SPC summon their instruments from magical pendents on their necks?  Grin
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Cum historia mutat valde Razgriz
Revelat ipsum primum daemon scelestus est
Cum potentia caenum daemon fundet mortem in terram
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« Reply #13 on: February 08, 2010, 06:10:59 am »

So you've taken out beloved main characters, extended their families, and pretty much given all these characters musical talent?

I totally haven't seen THAT before.

#Invalid YouTube Link#

Question-how many siblings did Bad Bird have?

Well, Speedy is his brother.

That's disturbingly appropriate. As if the knot in my gut wasn't tight enough, rofl. Does that mean the SPC summon their instruments from magical pendents on their necks?  Grin

No thats what I had in mind at all. They go on stage and peform just like the bands do.

What do you mean taken the main characters out? Their still there aren't they?
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« Reply #14 on: February 08, 2010, 12:48:17 pm »

He means that it seems you intend to make the stories focus about non-canon characters.  People often don't like that, and you have to really sell it if you're going to get away with it.

The best thing to do is to stop explaining your story before you write it.  You need to get a story out there (or a piece), see how the fans respond to it, then start explaining little details.  Then write some more while keeping the criticisms in mind.  This will keep sticklers off your back, and hopefully make you a good writer at the same time.

Peace.

You do have a point, besides some of the other characters arent in at the beginning anyway.
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« Reply #15 on: November 04, 2011, 07:47:47 am »

Hi eveyone I know Ive been gone a while but I will start these stories, I know it seems like alot of characters but Ive gotten it figured out.
Any suggestions would be helpful
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« Reply #16 on: November 04, 2011, 04:38:40 pm »

Hi eveyone I know Ive been gone a while but I will start these stories, I know it seems like alot of characters but Ive gotten it figured out.
Any suggestions would be helpful


Welcome back!

Tigerd, could you be a little more descriptive about what suggestions you're looking for?
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« Reply #17 on: November 04, 2011, 08:20:40 pm »

Cat and Bird as brothers.

Damn, their mother must have gotten freaky with many a species.

Just a thought.

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« Reply #18 on: November 05, 2011, 09:58:08 am »

Hi eveyone I know Ive been gone a while but I will start these stories, I know it seems like alot of characters but Ive gotten it figured out.
Any suggestions would be helpful


Welcome back!

Tigerd, could you be a little more descriptive about what suggestions you're looking for?



What I mean is like whats a good way to start this story and how characters should be brought into the story I have some ideas but I am not sure. Nice Picture by the way  Smiley       I love Phineas and Ferb, Doofenshmirtz as well.
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« Reply #19 on: November 06, 2011, 01:36:04 am »

What I mean is like whats a good way to start this story and how characters should be brought into the story I have some ideas but I am not sure. Nice Picture by the way  Smiley       I love Phineas and Ferb, Doofenshmirtz as well.

Well, there's a tough pair of questions.  Yikes!
These answers are just my point of view. If you feel the need to do something different, I'd say try it. If it doesn't work, try something else.

For your first story you need to sit back and decide what you want it to be about. You need an overall theme that will navigate your story in a general direction.
Know your characters. You don't have to have each character's biography immediately present, but you should know their personalities, their mannerisms, and feelings.

As far as character introductions, I think you should try to to pace them out.
When bringing in new characters, you need to think of who that character is, then you need to imagine what they would do.

Finally you need to sit down, write, and keep writing until it feels right.


Now... A final few words of the wise. Before you post your Fan Fiction, be sure to do the following...
-- 1) Spell Check your story.
-- 2) Grammar Check your story.
-- 3) Read through it at least once to look for errors you may have made while typing.

A few mistakes here and there won't kill a story. However if there are too many it'll hurt the story, and may hurt your chances as a Fan Fiction writer.
Others may be less likely to read your story if you produce something that's hard to understand.


That's all I've got for now. Again, most of this is just my opinion.  Speedy Wink
I didn't go to school for writing, I went to school for computer hardware. More professional writers may have better suggestions than I.

Good luck!
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