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« Reply #1 on: March 01, 2006, 03:11:47 am » |
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Hey bud, I give ya credit for startin' your own writing project, but you got a lot of work ahead of you.
Structure and sentencing are far more important than character names and dialogue (keep in mind, those are important, but if everything is jumbled and unorganized, what's the point, huh?)
This is where you need the most work. I'm sure you've got a lot of ideas and such, but if you can't pull these ideas together into a mass of organized writing matter, it won't be a good fiction.
I've voted "Bad." at the moment, but we'll see how you can do after a little revision.
Keep writing.
Burkey
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